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- Greetings, my comrades, and welcome back to Zanolith. The Pokemon anime's latest installment, Aim To Be A Pokemon Master, concludes the character arc of Ash Ketchum, the anime's protagonist for the last 25 years. However, this series has been disappointing to me and many other fans and hasn't delivered the conclusion fans have been waiting for. Therefore, today I set out to rewrite Ash's final journey; let's go!
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I already love how all of his companions are here. It’s not just Ash we’re saying goodbye to, but also all the friends and rivals he’s made.
Yeah. Ash wasn't the only character that we need to say bye to
@@alderlopezcastro4928 he may be the main character, but he’s not the only character leaving.
@Gus Peixoto I now that. It sucks we didn't get to see any other characters besides Brock, Misty, and Cilian return
@@alderlopezcastro4928 agreed. You’d think AT LEAST one of them would come by his house to congratulate him.
All had proper screentime and interaction with Ash outside Serena. We wanted Ash and Serena. 😭
How is it a youtuber can write the anime better than the actual writers seriously they need to hire him
They journeys writers just suck, that’s all
@legomagic007 It may be partially due to the writers not constructing the best story but… Under current times, the writers are given all these new restrictions and limitations during their writing, they do not deserve all the blame.
Your so right!
@@legomagic007_YTyou're right they ripped all our expectations at first in pokémon xyz last episode and through the whole series they made us see many Amourshipping moments and at last the kiss but in pokémon ultimate journeys ASH and Serena met for less than 2 min and no any major interactions man at first they increased expectations and then they all changed all our expectations into dust, the writers literally finished the last series😢..
Right off the bat, I like that you handled the Gary and Ash interaction at the beginning, because it really helps to set the stage for Ash's thinking, like his noticing of Cynthia's outside interests besides being a Champion. Foreshadowing for Team Rocket's operations also being in the second episode fit well, as it helps to build tension, instead of just having them appear randomly at the end.
Ash's companions getting closure, like Cilan who wants 'something more', and Serena coming to realize her dreams is also something MPM should've done, as it was the last time we would've been seeing them. If we know how Ash is going out, we should've at least learned how everyone else was doing.
And the ending where Ash and Gary stand on top of Mt. Silver is just the most ideal way to go out. Not only does it reference Red atop the mountain, but it's just Ash and Gary, the two people who started out as bitter rivals, but slowly became close friends.
Overall, this really is the most proper way to send Ash off, tying up all loose ends, and having Ash actually become a Pokemon Master.
Great job, I really liked it!
I think there were many issues though. the major being in that they made... the dumb decision to never age Ash. Seeing your protagonist age isn't new in anime or manga. We've seen Yugi, Ed, and Goku all physically age until they've reached their goal (Prior to spin-offs and a desire for a sequel to Dragon b all). Keeping Ash physically etc. "10" basically meant he completed his goal in less than a year when in reality it was at least six years.
It would've been entirely stupid and plenty of people would have complained how he completed his goal in... less than a year (Which is already proven false by the time Ash received his Earth badge in Kanto).
Part of it may be that they're backed in to the stupid corner they put themselves in, and the other. They're keeping Ash as a safety net.
It's no secret that despite some toxic fans, Ash and Pikachu are VERY popular in terms of anime, so shelving him off is their way of both 'ending' his journey while keeping it going, and putting it off temporarily incase the new anime doesn't do well.
Whether or not Horizons is going to be 'another' 25 year series is yet to be told, but It's possible. Chances are they're testing the waters, and if all else fails, they'll just drag Ash back into the spotlight for a movie or something. However, the pokemon team are 'experts' in dragging out a game for roughly 50 episodes, perhaps even more considering Hoenn had an extra season 9 where the entirety of it was the Battle Frontier. Hell, Kanto lasted 1.3 seasons, with both the Orange Islands AND the prologue to Johto filling up the rest of Season 2.
I really like how Gary asks Ash about being a Pokémon Master in the FIRST episode instead of it being the LAST episode.
While just going on a journey just to travel is alright, travelling for a purpose does help the story flow better and makes it feel less like the characters are just going wherever the heck they’re going.
I totally agree with you on how the travelling we saw in the final episodes is more of the same thing, and I feel like for Ash Ketchum’s final season, it shouldn’t be just that.
FINALLY! YOU DID SOMETHING THAT POKEMON JOURNEYS COULD NEVER DO, A REMATCH OF SATOSHI-GEKKOUGA VS MEGA CHARIZARD X!!!!
Your pseudo and pfp tell me that you're VERY biased about this, but honestly fair enough, I get it ^^'
@@Oceane1803 thanks!
💀 man said greninjafanboy14
The Ending was satisfying BUT This WHOLE Rewrite is WAAAY more satisfying than The Entire Mesaze Season. Thank U SOOO much for This!
😭😭😍🥰🥰
Finally, Peak Fiction. Ash Greninja wins against Mega Charizard X.
I wouldn’t say peak but it’s aight
This was absolutely GOATed. It puts my 25 episode rewrite in Pasio to shame.
Man I would do anything for something like this to have happened in the show. My rewrite of MPM is surprisingly similar to this, we had a lot of similar ideas! Great minds think alike! It's such a shame that none of it actually happened in the show 😭 Awesome video, awesome ideas, and awesome presentation! I'm happy this video got a lot of attention, because it really deserves it! 👊
I love your channel
To be honest, guys, I hope Ash will NOT return in Pokemon Horizons, neither as a kid nor as an adult. Why? Because I think the guy had enough screentime already, and because I think it's time for him to settle down. That's why I was actually dissapointed of the final episode of the series ,,The Rainbow and the Pokémon Master!'' because technically it WASN'T a final. He just set of on a new journey, which was a pretty unsatisfying finish to Ash's arc. Ash didn't stopped travelling, Team Rocket didn't got defeated for good, no things I would have expected from an ending were featured. Ash traveled for so long and left an unmissible mark in Pokemon History. So I say it's time for him to retire from traveling and lead a farely normal life. That's why I wrote my own finish story, which not only sees Ash retiring from traveling for good, but also solves one of the biggest mysteries surrounding Ash. You want to know it? Here it is:
Not long after Ash and Pikachu left Pallet Town after the final episode, they stop at a Pokemon Center. Among those present is a man seated at a table, staring out the window over a hot drink. After Ash entered the center, the man gave him a quick look and then seemed quite shocked. Not long after Ash left the Pokemon Center, he was ambushed by Team Rocket. When it looked like they might be able to escape with Pikachu, the man in the center intervened with a shiftry and Team Rocket blasted off. After Ash thanked the stranger, he asked his name. The man reluctantly replied that his name was Mark Ketchum. Ash reacts with shock. The man notices this and pulls a photo out of his pocket. It shows himself and Delia Ketchum, Ash's mother, happily in each other's arms. When Ash was about to cry out, Mark stopped him and said he would explain everything to him, but in a different place. Back at the Pokemon Center, the man confirms that he is Ash's father. Ash is still confused and burning with questions. Mark begins to explain: Like Ash after him, he went on a Pokemon journey before Ash was born. It didn't go well for him for a long time though. Still, he refused to give up. He was just as enthusiastic and stubborn as Ash. But that all changed when Delia told him she was pregnant. Mark hesitated for a long time about what to do, continue his journey, or return home. Finally, he explained to Delia that he would return as soon as possible. At that point, he still believed those words himself. But as with Ash, one journey followed another, and then another, and another, and so on. And so the weeks became months and the months became years. When Mark found out that Ash had traveled himself, it was a shock for him because it was only at that moment that he realized how much time had passed. He realized he had suffered the worst punishment a father could have suffered: not being there for his son, not seeing his own child grow up. But he was also reluctant to return to Pallet Town, thinking that Delia despised him for not keeping his promise, that she wanted nothing more to do with him, and that she would refuse him to see his son. So he traveled on. From then on, not a day went by that he didn't wish he could return to Pallet Town to finally see his son. And with each of Ash's fights he watched on TV, his sadness, guilt, and longing grew. He had hoped that he would meet Ash on his journey, but somehow they always missed each other. A while ago, when Mark saw Ash's victory at the Coronation World Championship, he realized that his son had made the dream come true that he had been chasing for years. From then on, Ash's father didn't care. He didn't care about the title of Pokemon Master, he didn't care how Delia would react to him, he just wanted to be back with his family. He told Ash that he didn't want to be a Pokemon Master anymore, he wanted to be a father, he wanted to have a son, a family that he could love and who loved him. He also said that he would have traded a thousand Pokemon-Master-Titles for every single day he could have spent with his son. He was almost to Pallet Town when he saw Ash in the Pokemon Center. Since he had followed all his fights, he recognized him immediately. And now they are sitting here. As he spoke, Mark Ketchum cried. Ash couldn't hold back his tears either. When Mark asks Ash if he could ever forgive him for not being with him for the first ten years of his life, he hugs his father and immediately forgives him. Afterwards, Ash is on his way back to Pallet Town with his father. Touched by his father's story, Ash realizes that he already left his mark on Pokemon history and that he's retiring from traveling to devote more time to his family, which he's neglected for far too long. Delia was surprised to see Ash back so early since he had only just left. But when she saw who he had brought, she dropped the plate she was holding in her shock. For a while Mr. and Mrs. Ketchum just stared at each other. But then Delia fell into Mark's arms in tears and cried with joy. After she calmed down a bit, Mark said that he and Ash would stay in Pallet Town as they had a lot of catching up to do.
This story solves many of the logic gaps in Pokemon: For example, even if Delia is acting encouraging of Ash's journey, I can't imagine, she is not depressed of how little time the two of them have to spend together since he started his journey. I know my mom would get a nervous breakdown. Besides, if you travel around your whole life, you miss time you could and should have spend with your beloved ones and not return to find out they all passed away. I know this would be a pretty dramatic and bitter thing, which could be the reason why the characters do not appear to age throughout the series, but from a realistic point of view, being on a Pokemon journey your whole life is not a realistic or good thing. As for Ash's father, even if he wasn't mentioned in the anime that often, I can't imagine Ash never wandered where he was or why he didn't met him. And I also can't imagine that Ash's father never had any pangs of conscience for not being their for his son. I mean, what kind of father would he be if he hadn't? Not a good one, that's for sure. And I wanted Ash to realize not doing the same thing. That he, if he will have children of his own one day, he will be there for them and see them grow up, like a good father. So this is my personal end for the Pokemon Anime. Tell me your opinion about it if you like, I would be very interested in it. Until the next video! See ya!
your channel is awesome
This is probably a major upgrade to the anime's final series.
Probably?! It is! The majority of those final 11 episodes felt like nothing but useless filler. Gave us no real closure on anything that this series built up over the past 25-26 years.
Thank you so much, this actualy felt like a conclusion to Ash's Story
I honestly wish the epilogue would’ve included all of his old companions. I get that we had them during Journeys, but it would’ve been nice to see them interact one last time. And also see interactions between Misty and Brock with other companions. All we got the return of Cilan
My favourite part about this whole rewrite is how open-ended everything is: Max’s own Journey, Cilan possibly going beyond an S-Class Connoisseur, May, Dawn, and Serena working toward their goals, Ash and Serena’s relationship and if they’ll be together or not, Iris realizing she’s not falling behind, Greninja might STILL not be done with those stupid vines, and what the Team Rocket trio will do now that they’re done with the organization.
These characters stories end with a sense of ambiguity. It doesn’t give a definitive ending to these characters, but it allows us as the audience to come to our own conclusion on everything. I do have some nitpicks(I wish Greninja rejoined Ash as in fully recaught, I would’ve kept Ash reuniting with Pidgeot, and I wish Dawn and Serena met and interacted slightly), but I am satisfied with what we got.
Best Wishes, Ash Ketchum.
This video was made a few weeks before the finale. So I didn’t know about pigeot while making this
@@Zanolith I see. I honestly don’t blame you given Pidgeot not being the most memorable character in the OS.
I’m just gonna pretend that it still happened regardless.
It’s interesting to think about how Pidgeot’s reunion went with Charizard given the fact he was very disobedient the last time he saw him.
@@Zanolith Could you compile XY vids into full story video probably get 50000 views or more
This is great but with how this is a serious vid posted on april fools kinda made me think this was a joke at first
that...was...AMAZING!! I LOVE HOW GARY AND ASH INTERACT AT THE BEGINNING
you took the words out of my mouth before i even thought of something like this! This is what the final series should have been more like - it wasn't bad, but it focuses more on the question of what it means to be a master
I love how everyone gets closure
Chills 😭😭😭😭
This is PERFECT!
Having Misty and Brock travel to all the regions with Ash.
Cameos/tying up any lose ends from characters we’ve met in other regions.
Having Giovanni and MewTwo be the final big bad.
Kanto Elite Four.
Jessie and James turning against Team Rocket.
Showcasing and spotlighting the relationship arc of Ash and Gary.
Mount Silver and Ho Oh
Ash FINALLY standing as Champion on Indigo Plateau.
The Pokémon Company needs to buy the rights to this and remake Ash’s final story.
The only way I see this happening is if they do this for the English dub.
Bro this is waaaaaaay better than I would've imagined
Overall I enjoyed it just think their should be some small changes to make it even better.
At the end credit Giovanni is recruiting allies to help take over the Region with each one taking a region. With them and the grunts wearing a modified outfit but in black with R with it. Making the anime version of Rainbow Rocket alongside making Team Rocket Strike Back a 4 parts. With the first episode being the surprise attack of villains. the second being the champions struggling the villains. The 3rd having Ash past rivals that we didn't meet during assisting the champions to defeat the villain, with the 4th part beating the villains and saving the day. I wanted it a 4 parts to have a better pace and have some dialogue between the characters. Doesn't need to show the full fight of the other champions, just show that they are having difficulty, then getting the assistance to defeat the villain.
Kanto- Giovanni vs Ash, Jessie, James and Moewth
Johto- Dr. Namba vs Lance, Ritchie and Drake (Orange Island)
Hoenn - Maxie and Archie vs Steven, Wallace, Harrison and Tyson
Sinnoh - Mars, Jupiter and Saturn vs Cynthia, Paul and Tobias
Unova - Ghetsis Vs Iris, Trip, and Virgil
Kalos - Lysandre vs Diantha, Sawyer, and Tierno
Alola - Viren, vs Kukui, Guzma, and Hau
Galar - Chairman Rose vs Leon, Bea, and Rinto
BRO! Zano! You continue to amaze me with the rewrite content! I like the addition of another Ep here and this was honestly better than what we got. I found it really odd that Cilan was the only companion to return in MPM, and I thought more woulda shown up. But the world journey you made here with all of Ash’s companions is truly a masterful ending for Ash! Well done!
I have 1 thing to say about this video:
That
Was
The
BEST Rewrite EVER of all time like no other rewrite ever was
Sorry had to throw in that last part it was too Tempting 😂
Thanks for making the true ending to Ash. You earned yourself a subscriber
This is definitely a heart-touching and simply an incredible video! Subscribed ☺
I'd have loved to see this ending in the anime.
Thank you for giving Team Rocket (both the organization and the TRio) the ending that they deserved. Also, Ash realizing that he was already a Pokémon Master is something I legitimately thought the miniseries was building up to, so I'm glad you did it in your rewrite.
Or maybe how about this instead Ash frees Mewtwo and Mewtwo uses his powers to help Ash escape and destroy the entire team rocket hq, and then Giovanni, and the entire team rocket include the trio get amnesia and can't remember what they're trying to do
@@Ben-kd7ug didn't mewtwo already do that once in mewtwo returns?
Zano, you single handedly create a better, more cohesive and entertaining ending for our boy and now man, Ash Ketchum. This was amazing, peak fiction if you will. I can't wait to see what else you come up with and I hope this video BLOWS UP because more needs to see this!
This is actually what I kinda imagined would happened the only difference is that I would have anyone travel with Ash it’s just Ash & Pikachu and they meet their companions and also make a few more captures
This is how Ash's journey was really supposed to end
Not true. Ash is not coming back. There won't be an movie like that. But I created an Ash and Misty in the Paldea Region as them as boyfriend and girlfriend with just the 2 of them. I can't post the picture though. But they wear new outfits there. So they'll be an cute couple like them and not Serena. Ash and Misty are the couple not Ash and Serena, it's too late. It's on deviantart. Also I'm making an story about it. It's so romantic. Ash and Misty will be going to the Paldea Region just the 2 of them on a date as they holds hands, make out, hug each other, make other blush and Ash does cute and romantic things for Misty. That's an comeback for Ash but with just bringing Misty.
@@andrewcroken7072 Ok, but thats not official
@@andrewcroken7072 shut up. Amourshipping is canon, while Pokeshipping is non canon.
I was expecting some half-baked fan fiction when I saw this in my recommended, but this is REALLY good! Cheers to you, mate!
I think the canon series and this one both have great elements and a mixture of both could have been nice. Your version is great because we get to see more companions one last time, something that was very lacking in the canon show. And the actual show was great in that we got to see a lot of Ash's Pokémon one last time, something I felt was rather lacking here (no offense). This one was also very action packed, while the other was a bit slower and down to earth. Again, both are nice. But I think what I liked about your version more is that you have Ash realize that he is and always had been a Pokémon Master. That was something I think the show should have done, rather than just having Ash continue on what is essentially an aimless goal. Overall, great video.
This is a perfect ending for Ash
I got chills from this. Thank you. That answer of what a Pokemon Master was perfect. Gives credit to all that came before.
I'm glad you left some things ambiguous like with the shipping stuff, but I wish you expanded on some of the meetings like detail Ash's training with May and Max, or meeting Mewtwo again. That dialogue with Team Rocket really got to me.
Small thing, I think it would've been awesome if Gary had a Rainbow Wing that led them to the top of Mt Silver.
I say this after every rewrite episode and unfortunately it stands here too. A random poketuber can do better than an entire team of writers can do whose job is to write stories for anime. It’s almost like the writers should quit and let the community take over.
I hate you because this is perfect 😭
I don't know what to say, this was incredible
I’m just going to watch this vid a few more times so that this rewrite would be cemented in my head as the proper conclusion to Ash’s story
I love this rewrite! I am working on my own rewrite too.
This is how Ash's journey should have ended. Getting to reunite with all of older companions, using his older Pokémon, and the epic Team Rocket arc gave me team Flare vibes. Really well done. Nice going.
This, I had a dream about this not too long ago. It wasn't exactly what you shared, but it was close. And I feel content now. Thank you
Now this is how the series should have ended, I wish you were a writer
I have bot watch Pokémon since Hoen times just started watching it again because of the final 10 episodes and I started watching Pokémon journeys after but dammm the way you set up the ending episodes is way better than what I watched from Pokémon it self! You got a new sub my bro!!! Hope you become a writer for Pokémon one day because you make sick stories! 💯
5:41❤❤❤❤❤ I love these two together😍😍😍😍
This was amazing!! I love how you did Ash’s journey to become a Pokémon Master. The explanation here is a lot better than the original, and I also love how you did Team Rocket here, having them make their final appearance before the trio quit and help Ash.
I also like how you handled Ash’s reunion with Serena, having him address her feelings about him. I also love how you ended the final episode, with Ash getting ready to battle someone. I also love how you made Cilan more interesting, and having Ash and greninja finally beat Alain.
Overall, this is a lot better than what we got in Aim to be a Pokémon Master. Although it has its moments, what you did here is more unique and interesting.
Not true. Ash is not coming back. There won't be an movie like that. But I created an Ash and Misty in the Paldea Region as them as boyfriend and girlfriend with just the 2 of them. I can't post the picture though. But they wear new outfits there. So they'll be an cute couple like them and not Serena. Ash and Misty are the couple not Ash and Serena, it's too late. It's on deviantart. Also I'm making an story about it. It's so romantic. Ash and Misty will be going to the Paldea Region just the 2 of them on a date as they holds hands, make out, hug each other, make other blush and Ash does cute and romantic things for Misty. That's an comeback for Ash but with just bringing Misty. A love story in the Paldea Region with Ash and Misty.
I love how for the final episode you included ash's dream team
I like to think Oak gave Ash that portable box system the player has in Lets Go onward. How else could he have his reserves at the ready?
"Hey are you a Pokemon master yet?"
"Idk, lemme check
Cilan is S Class? But he wants to go further? SSS Class confirmed BAYBEEEEEEEEEEE
I'm glad you handled Serena and her relationship with Ash the way you did. Tastefully ambiguous. Most others would have them start dating right there. They're 10.
"Screw being Champion, dead peoples drawings of Lord Llama's disciples is where it's at"
"Yas Queen"
Finally making that one opening come true with Cinderace v Lucario. Also love how Ash reminds Iris there's room to grow. Definitely got that from Leon.
"Hey Alain, why did the Ninja Frog come back to me? To see you croak."
Wait until Lei grows up and hears how his big brother Ash was blessed by every God in his religion because he made it look cool.
Leon may not be an undefeated challenger, but he's still technically an "undefeated" champion. I'd imagine if Ash was aged up, he'd act just like Leon. If anything, Leon is clearly designed to be if a Pokemon protagonist grew up.
I just realized Ash's last interaction with Brock and Misty us telling them to protect their homes. I'm sad now.
I don't know why disbanding Team Rocket never happened in canon. They really serve no purpose anymore.
"What makes me a Pokemon Master is the friends I made along the way" this is the only time I will accept this cliche. It's so perfectly in line with Pokemon.
An older Ash? I bet he has the best worn out shoes around. 😊
"Wait until lei grows up and hears how his big brother ash was blessed by every god in his religion because he made it look cool" bro that just got me laughing tf
This is the best rewrite you have done. Good work
WOW I loved this! Gave me goosebumps honestly!
Thanks so much!
This is a fantastic story, Zanolith!!! I wish that this was the format that the Pokemon anime chose.
Thanks for sharing this. Defiantly a nice rewrite.
This checked all my boxes, thank you
The rewrite of Aim to be Mid is really good! I like it a lot better than what we actually got lol, nice job! I only have a couple nitpicks but I won't get into them because honestly they aren't important lmao
Also, good luck rewriting Sun & Moon cause it's already got such good writing and change of pace from the previous shows
Perfect..perfect..perfect...this is exactly what I wanted to see in the end of Ash's journey..return of every Ash pokemon and his friends alongiwth the story that makes him realize what it really means to be a Pokemon Master...
Now this is WAY better than the official ending we got. Good job!
Not true. Ash is not coming back. There won't be an movie like that. But I created an Ash and Misty in the Paldea Region as them as boyfriend and girlfriend with just the 2 of them. I can't post the picture though. But they wear new outfits there. So they'll be an cute couple like them and not Serena. Ash and Misty are the couple not Ash and Serena, it's too late. It's on deviantart. Also I'm making an story about it. It's so romantic. Ash and Misty will be going to the Paldea Region just the 2 of them on a date as they holds hands, make out, hug each other, make other blush and Ash does cute and romantic things for Misty. That's an comeback for Ash but with just bringing Misty.
@@andrewcroken7072 Wait a minute, Did I ever say that Ash is coming back & there would be a film? If I ever say that, Where is the evidence that I ever said that? I don't think I said that, Did I?
I’m so glad you added Giovanni into the mix!
This would have been so much better than what we actually got in the Aim to be a Pokémon Master epilogue.
This would have satisfied so many people. All these epsiode sound so good
NOW THIS, is how you do a proper send-off for Ash Ketchum. Thank you, Zanolith.
Ash and Serena are so perfect for each other, because I know how much Serena ❤ Ash. 5:41
Of course, Ash and Serena are a perfect couple and I hope they both reunite once again, understand each other's feelings and in the future get married and have a family.
#Amourshipping4ever
@@DragonNinja20 indeed, the Ketchum family
@@maxtopia5733sorry but you're have to watch for the announcement on October 15th. I told Pokefan. I told him to do an Ash and Misty in the Paldea Region as boyfriend and girlfriend just the 2 of them traveling on an date. So he like my idea. So he thumbed up my idea and gave me hearts with his picture profile. Just have to wait and see on the October 15th announcement. It's going to be so romantic and cute. They'll be holding hands, making out, make each other blush, cuddle, Ash doing cute and romantic things for Misty and they hug. Ash and Misty will wear new outfits to the Paldea Region. It'll be an cute and romantic series with Ash and Misty. I can't wait for this moment. 😘❤💘
@@andrewcroken7072 Sorry, man, but you're completely mistaken. Amourshipping is canon, while Pokeshipping is non canon because there's no romantic relationship between Ash and Misty and the Pokémon company already confirmed that Ash's future lies with Serena, not Misty. What I'm saying is the truth, not a joke.
@@maxtopia5733 Amourshipping is canon, while Pokeshipping is non canon because there's no romantic relationship between Ash and Misty and the Pokémon company already confirmed that Ash's future lies with Serena, not Misty.
I prefer these episodes better over what we got lol great job!
The team rocket controlling Mew two seems unlikely with the current canon, but everything else was perfection. Marvelous job!
Awesome! May have to start a petition to make this the official canon! Lol.
Only thing I would've added was Ash vs Red on Mt. Silver as teased in Pokemon Masters and the identity of Ash's father.
Near FLAWLESS rewrite. Far better than what we Actually got in MPM
Only things I’d change, are having Greninja complete its mission in the fight with Alain, and going back with Ash(same way Pidgeot would in the actual show), throw in a little throwaway line about Nebby being caught at the party in Alola(adds the Kalos ace, and Ash’s first legendary to the fight with Giovanni. Yeah I know Nebby isn’t an Ace, but I feel that Nebby’s inclusion would be more climactic. Plus, there are still debates on whether Incineroar or Lycanroc are the Alola Ace), and Ash’s realization about what a Pokémon Master is, to correlate it with Leon’s episode, and the climax with Giovanni. Here’s a little thing I wrote of what I had in mind
“As Ash gazed into the near infinite horizon Mt. Silver had on display, he spoke to Gary, with a rather heartfelt tone to his voice. “I was never journeying to become a Pokémon Master. I was journeying to become More of a Pokémon Master. I’ve made so many friends on my journey, and it’s because of them that I became World Champion” he said before turning to Gary, who felt rather stunned at how profound his old rival’s words were. “That Giovanni guy, he was too focused on pure strength to accomplish anything. Real strength comes from the bonds you form” Ash continued, redirecting his gaze to the Pokémon that’s been sitting on his shoulder since the very beginning. Pikachu was living proof of Ash’s ideology, managing to defeat the World Champion, and the World’s most Powerful Pokemon without even evolving. “And I wanna get stronger and stronger, and make more friends along the way. I want to be someone that can give the opportunity to be champions, to Every Pokemon in the world, regardless of how strong or weak they are. That’s what I believe a Pokémon Master is” the boy finished, putting his fist to his heart. Gary could do nothing but nod softly, and smirk. “You did good kid, you did good” he said with a smug tone to his voice. “Hey, I’m no kid anymore” Ash replied playfully, revealing a Pokeball in his hands, accepting Gary’s challenge for a rematch”
Nice video i love it👏🏼
It feels weird to me how Giovanni has been a looming threat, but yet has only ever encountered Ash himself once, and it was in Unova of all regions. He's sent Team Rocket to different regions to capture Pikachu and other pokemon, but yet the series ends with no Endgame for him.
That was quite cool you did a great job fixing am to be a Pokémon master
Amazing video
i would love to get the link (if there is one) to the song that was used by SPEYERE & Cef Bonzo. it was to me at least a grate spin on an old clasic
Question: if Ash's old at the final episode does that mean he married to Serena❓
My head canon is yes
I guess Ash and Serena are married in the final episode, if Ash is actually older.
@@DragonNinja20 Who knows❓
@@maxtopia5733 I know that Ash and Serena are married and have a family in the final episode, as Ash is older now.
if that happened, will Serena catch a female Pikachu?
12:40 all of ash’s Pokémon should pop out pull up & jump all the team rockets members with professor oak & ashs mom leading the way
Hey Zano, are you ok if I write full on episodes based on these? With more dialogue and character moments and such. This is such a cool rewrite and I wanna do it more justice and get it out as far as possible
Sure! I’d love to see it!
Someone please turn these rewrite into a fanfic! It will be great to read some of these rewrite's dialogue!
I was just thinking about that & I was considering role playing with my friend who was still wanna remain faithful with canon.
I honestly think there are a couple of things that should have given him a proper send-off.
1. Make him a strong trainer who is difficult for other trainers to face him in battle, and continue training his Pokémon and evolving them like his Gible.
2. Get rid of Team Rocket. The Team Rocket Trio has been following Ash for years. You would think he is sick and tired of them chasing after him so they can capture his Pikachu, which there is nothing rare about him other than being trained. After all, Ash and his friends have destroyed every known evil organization in the franchise. So, why don't the writers get rid of Team Rocket? You would think if Team Rocket is gone, then the trio would stop following Ash.
3. Reunite with some of the Pokémon he released, like Greninja and Goodra, so they can rejoin him on his journey like his Pidgeot and capture some legendary Pokémon like Latios and Latias on his team. I mean, there are so many legendary Pokémon Ash has met on his journey that can be perfect to be a part of his team. If someone as horrible as Goh should have a legendary Pokémon in his collection. Then why can't Ash?
4. Ash should do something else in his life. He could be an Aura Guardian. After all, Ash now has a Lucario of his own, who is like a spiritual successor to Sir Aaron Lucario and that aura sphere Riolu. Not to mention, he is one of the only few people who can use Aura. Ash could also be a Pokémon Ranger. I mean, he loves rescuing Pokémon and always helping to protect nature, so this could be a perfect job for him. He could be a Battle Frontier. I mean, he was offered to become a Frontier Brain.
5. Marrying Serena or any other girls he had a relationship with. Another example of being a proper send-off is settling down with someone, and he could have his own family.
If Ash has to marry someone of the girls he met, it needs to be Serena.
This was great. I look forward to seeing an animated story. I think you have great writing ability and really enjoyed each episode. I think you could animate this with help from another TH-camr
This is way better than what we got
I love the idea of ash going to each region so we can have closure with all the characters
idk if its because im childish but ive been alive as long as pokemon has been and once i turned 3 all i did was watch pokemon from the good and the bad and i still am disappointed ash never caught a single legendary that is recognized ( i dont counter melmetal no one knows what it is and pokemon refuses to give us more information on it) i feel like aim to be a master could of been better if it followed ur lay out of going region to region meeting old friends and closing plots but i still like how the original started with ash meeting latias and say team rocket was capturing legendaries 1 by 1 and it lead to latias and in the end ash frees them and he catches latias or maybe even latios i would feel it would be a great ending i kinda wanna take a shot with writing my version but Zanolith ur version was amazing keep up the work and hope to keep watching ur zanoverse series
Your black and white rewrite is so good thank you
Zanolith I don't know what to say, all I know is that we need to see that in anime now
This is literally all I would have wished for aim to be a pokemon master but it was none of it and quite frankly Gave no justice to ashy boy, but especially to all of his companions who he met along the way.. I wish they could have hired you to write this final chapter of ash's journey 😞
The team rocket ending was perfect!
I'll give you this you did a bang-up job, even all meant as a person who grew up watching Pokemon since the first episode you did a better job then them, though I don't like how you handled the Team Rocket Trio but I guess it's just my bias because I really hate that team since the beginning of Hoenn.
Yeah, this *is* it, chief.
Absolutely beautiful in every sense of the word.
This rewrite is millions times better than what we got!
this 12 minute video was better than the entire series, i love the ending
I haven't even watched the show since Johto ended and I thought this was a really satisfying arc. Great stuff.
I always get nervous when Mount Silver is mentioned, that Red's ghost theroy still gives me chills
That was amazing
I love how Team Rocker switched sides! I personally really wanted something like that to happen and also had it in my fanseries.
If this was ash’s epilogue I would be excited to watch every second of it
Two things I would like is team rocket saying something like we're blasting off one last time and also them not knowing ash's name cause they always call him twerp
I’m pretty sure they’ve heard his name too many times to just not know it. I do agree with you on the “we’re blasting off one last time” though. Just for old times sake.
This is great I wish this is what we got
Because after 11 episodes from ash and misty there's nothing happening about saying having feelings each other but they really didn't look at ash and serena in Japan 105 they both really happy see each other again there more to say this but I save it when opening end decides making ash and serena as endgame.
Ye you are right bro I hope we will get ash get the ash future series means big ash in future.
Also he returns in future because his journey is not ended yet
Last episode you see next time will be a new beginning
Also the company confirmed that ash returned in future
I prefer this so much to the original ending. The ending just felt like there wasn't enough, but this had almost everything
Very good writing. Why do i have a feeling that some form of that is what i want to happen in pokemon masters?
I gotta compliment you for how good you are at this
But
If a youtuber can come up with an ACTUALLY good 12 ep series like this,which would have ended on March 31
Then why can't they
They are skilled writers,who have been doing this for quite some time
Yes,this isn't one piece or attack on Titan
BUT this is still one of the most popular series,why can't it be good
This is the end of 26 years of journey,but what did they end it off with,
9 episodes of filler and some bait to thinking that ash will finally catch a legend and then end it off with saying that this isn't actually Ash's ending
I just don't think that's good enough tbh,Pokemon was once my favourite anime,i just hoped it had a better ending
I plan to bring ash back sometime after gen 10 for a much better storyline.
I like how you decide to stay true to one of the anime director words that when the Anime ends with Ash finally becoming a Pokémon Master. It's so bizarre Ash's story ends with him not becoming a Pokémon Master.
Maybe my expectations were two high but when you’re a series that spans over a quarter of a century, I felt I was justified. This ending lives up to that expectation. (Though what if instead of Gary at the mountain it was Ash’s dad making his first appearance in 26 years of waiting XD)
This was WAY better than what we actually got as the epilouge 4 Ash. This 1 had a much better closure. This just goes to show that sometimes fanfics are better. 10/10
This is so much better than what we got in Aim To Be A Pokemon Master. Bravo! I was absolutely upset that they did a lot of random filler and a random Latias focus, instead of a regional travel focus to meet up with old traveling buddies, see satisfying endings to their journeys and then address the focus with Ash/Serena that we were left on at the end of X/Y. This video is what Aim To Be A Pokemon Master should have been!
One thing that annoyed me was that Team Rocket was in every single episode. They are so damn annoying. I wanted Ash to age and meet his father but nope we got other pointless bs
Great fanfic! 😃 The old friends returning and how they're doing, The big climactic battle against TR, Jessie James and Meowth reforming, Ash realizing he achieved his goal all along, an older Ash taking on a new challenger. Luv it 😊