Not a bad concept but this is another AI generated story. That's why all the misspellings in the captioning and why it doesn't know the difference between soldier and sailor. It could be good but it needs a real human writer to clean it up.
Very poorly written. First, there's no way multiple military riflemen could possibly miss a grown man on foot at a range of a few yards. When they were spotted at the gas station, how did Colonel Hawkins know Zephyr was military? And the Seals are Navy -- the Navy doesn't refer to their personnel as "soldier," they call them "sailor."
Awe..... That was heartbreakingly sweet.
Love this!
Interesting, original enough to finish and actually enjoy it. Have fun
😢that beautiful ending with Zephyr dying for a child actually made me cry tears of overwhelmed emotion😢
Me too. 😢
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i loved this story, would gladly recommend this story
Although I'm glad Luna made it home, this had such a sad ending. I HATE sad endings! 😢😢
Why did he have to electrocute himself?
Is this a movie
Not a bad concept but this is another AI generated story. That's why all the misspellings in the captioning and why it doesn't know the difference between soldier and sailor. It could be good but it needs a real human writer to clean it up.
The spelling on the narration is really bad.
Yeah! “rarely” instead of “warily”. Really!!!
Halt this a public area and military have no legal right to do law enforcement ops against civilians unless you are stupid enough to get caught!
Sad ending, did not like it.
Killing off the main character? Bad! Shame!
Very poorly written. First, there's no way multiple military riflemen could possibly miss a grown man on foot at a range of a few yards. When they were spotted at the gas station, how did Colonel Hawkins know Zephyr was military? And the Seals are Navy -- the Navy doesn't refer to their personnel as "soldier," they call them "sailor."
And alien spaceships are also not real. relax it's a fairy tale.
More significant, they wouldn't have fired at all unless it was a tranquilizer dart to avoid hitting the alien.
I thought they would want the child alive so why were they even shooting.
A man on foot runs fast enough away from multiple men with vehicles to hide from them? Yeah, right, sure, pal.
depends on how close the hiding spot is.