A fortuitous stampede at just the right time? That's all you could come up with? What caused the stampede? Animals run away from noise. This story went from almost getting there to a fail with the contrived "out of nowhere" stampede. A sure sign that the author was stumped, stuck in the plot created, so why not, throw in a random stampede, that always works. Too bad, won't hang around to have bad story lines thrown out to salvage a dying story.
Story needs part 2.
A fortuitous stampede at just the right time? That's all you could come up with? What caused the stampede? Animals run away from noise. This story went from almost getting there to a fail with the contrived "out of nowhere" stampede. A sure sign that the author was stumped, stuck in the plot created, so why not, throw in a random stampede, that always works. Too bad, won't hang around to have bad story lines thrown out to salvage a dying story.
Cliff hanger, where is the rest of the story???