Pretty good but the background parts are playing too loudly. Those trumpets and lower reeds shouldn’t be going *DUNH DUNH DUNH DUNH* during the mf sections with the clarinet and flute soli. They’re putting too much emphasis on a supporting part that overshadowed the melody in a pretty annoying way but that’s just my input lol. The most important part in this section was the run being done by the vibraphone and the high woodwinds and it was overshadowed by those quarter notes that are probably marked P or MP.
Pretty good but the background parts are playing too loudly. Those trumpets and lower reeds shouldn’t be going *DUNH DUNH DUNH DUNH* during the mf sections with the clarinet and flute soli. They’re putting too much emphasis on a supporting part that overshadowed the melody in a pretty annoying way but that’s just my input lol. The most important part in this section was the run being done by the vibraphone and the high woodwinds and it was overshadowed by those quarter notes that are probably marked P or MP.