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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 25 เม.ย. 2021
- It's been ~9 or so months since I started this as a joke with little to no intention of posting it. Annnnd here it is, in all its glory. Here we take the lovely cringe child of my 12-year-old brain and review/redesign it. I had so many more things to cover but I got lazy-
There may be a part 2 of this because I never got around to looking at the comic I made of her and all the old art in my sketchbooks.
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NEW LETS REVIEW IS UP!!! Come cringe with me over my old Cyborg Scene Wolf OC: Nariko!!
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Yo, what program do u use? Also, I watched it lol
@@giulianamoore123moore3 program for what specifically?
@@vixelzzz Like, wat u draw in
Bloodflame never had a backstory. Literally just existed to be pain
basically
F to pay respect
@@Warmishmalk F😔
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i like the fact that she’d only be a kit- because she’s only 4 moons old lmao
I'm so glad you caught that bc I didn't even notice
Old comment but she’s 52 moons I’m p sure, since it says 4 years + 4 moons
@@oliveclov373 yeah, i noticed that too
Hi
It said 4 YEARS 4 MOONS
unpopular opinion: having unrealistic colored warriors ocs is 100% valid
Honestly, I agree, it’s a FANTASY series about funky war cats who have religion and there was a LITERAL WAR WITH HELL once
I don’t understand why some people are so insistent on keeping the cats colors realistic
Let people have fun lmao
SO TRUE!!!! I have a warriors sona who is a neon sparklecat based on scourge :]]]
some people prefer realistic, but i prefer rainbow
There's litreally religious cats so yeha
I had this issue a ton as a kid. I loved the edgy colourful TH-cam cat sonas growing up (especially scourge and ashfur with the emo hair and red bangs 😂) and I got kicked out of a lot of warrior rps because I'd want a splash of colour unnatural colour on some of my oc's. I remember someone even telling me calicos can't be male once so my character wasn't realistic which is false 😅
They were all the same as any other warrior cat characters, but some people couldn't handle it. Ended up moving to a wolf rp and more into furries because of it and now even at 25 I love my unrealistic coloured oc's! So long as it's not hurting anyone let people have fun and do what they want lol
I can't believe I have to make this comment. Bloodflame is MY CHARACTER. 🤣🤣 I'm not "making fun of" or "being an ass" to anyone besides myself. I'm criticizing MYSELF. LMAO. If you watch like 2 mins of the dang video I state that it's MY CHARACTER. The stupidity of people oml
first reply 💃
Before I saw this comment I thought you were getting cancelled-
hey! just wondering, may I make some art, and/or possibly, if I have enough motivation, an animation of Braveflame?
@@coocoocritter Yes! That is always welcome 💙
Ok-
Okay can I just take a moment to say how much I love her redesign- I love what you did with it, the breed, tails, and markings being integrated so cleverly! I really love the burn scar idea, it could be interpreted as a little nudge back to Blood’ Flame while still giving Brave’ Flame more originality and a true meaning for her name. All in all I just really admire the new design, great job!
W o F
WoF pfp's :O
@@JaxAndJoy yes
My headcanon for Braveflame is that she is the deputy of her clan after a forest fire took place while a battle waged on between her and another rival clan. She saw the danger but was able to keep her head in a logical space and not panic, able to get her clan out of danger. But In the process also earning herself plenty of burns that the medicine cat had to look after for almost half a year. Her name was changed to Braveflame because of her brave spirit. And of course the flames she had to lead her clan out of. Her leader appointed her deputy also because of her great handle on the situation. And because while in the battle of the two clans their previous deputy had perished somehow ;Probably to a falling branch, is my guess. But sorry for the long essay.
I love the name braveflame! Flame for the markings and brave for the valiant spirit. I see it as someone who’s gone through a lot (hence the burn wounds) but instead of being afraid and ashamed she shows them off as battle scars, and despite what she’s gone through she’s always first to spring into action with a brave and positive outlook. Idk maybe I’m looking too far into this.
I agree
Fun fact: Cats can actually be born with two tails! It's extremely, _extremely_ rare, to the point its practically non-existent but it is possible. Cats with two tails are called Polycaudal :]
It’s also possible for narwhals to grow two tusks. Tusked females also occasionally happen; and although it’s rare to the point of only being recorded like twice in human history, female narwhals with two tusks are possible.
I have a polydactyl cat oc, he's got thumbs, and there's a little reference to it in an animation i'm working on where he gives the other cats thumbs up, and the thumbs give him big ol' paws (he has them on his hind legs too) I think it's kind of cool when people use stuff like this in their ocs, it makes them seem more unique.
As someone who unintentionally makes tramautized oc’s that aren’t edgy, we can all admit we’ve made edgy oc in our sketchbooks right now.
Yeah, one of my first OCs was a hybrid of a Night Fury and most of the other dragons I knew at the time. She had colors ripped off from some sort of fanmade NightFury I forget the name of, a Titan-Wing mode, and was somehow born in a damn lab???? and somehow killed all her siblings despite being a kind individual????? I don’t f’ing know what was going through my head lol
@@matchedpowerofthesun That’s so weird a lot of my ocs were former lab subjects too :0
(Yep lol and most of them still are )
@@Noursinette_ Lab subject OCs can be pretty neat if they’re done correctly! I still have a handful myself, mostly for roleplay storyline purposes.
@@matchedpowerofthesun What’s your lab oc like? Personality wise and stuff I mean :D
@@Noursinette_ My notable current lab OC is mind-controlled by an alien criminal who experimented on an Earth creature, and turned it into a sort of slave. But if it weren't for the mind control, she'd be a friendly, caring individual despite how she's been tormented, since inside she just wants to live a normal life.
wait she is a kit, night blaze is gonna go to jail
4 years and 4 moons, not just 4 moons :p
My first original OC was Rosestar and she had this like, really complicated design that was realistic colors but unrealistic for her breed. Turkish Algora are mostly know for having solid colors, yet I gave her stripes overlaying patches that were placed on her so. . .like, stiffly I guess? She had one blotch on either side of her neck, one bigger one right on the middle of her right side, and one on either side of her tail. Now hang on, this character is actually my current OC as I am still attached to the story I was trying to tell, so I'm not shaming her by writing this. I've recently decided to redeem her by completely redesigning her(which I'll add still needs some work) and keeping her basic story line but rewriting it immensely to make it more realistic and bearable and less clique and cringe.
I’m interested in seeing her old design
i mean, no warrior cat would actually be a specific breed unless they were a kittypet so those markings/colours would be fine lol
@@athernaut7939 Oh yeah, the story was that she came from this cat breeder who bred the specific breed and her stupid twolegs decided it would be a good idea to let all the kittens outside, in the snow, with chance of an oncoming blizzard back when she was a kit and she got blown onto Clan territory by the wind? Lol
*Le gasp* I have an OC named Roselake, (I reworked starclan into more of a tribe thingy)
Lol i had a ca oct named YellowWing, and he was pitch Black with bright yellow stripes and paws, Also heterochromia
Bloodflame: *why are we still here... Just to suffer?*
You think thats bad? My first oc was named Death. No explanation needed, roast him in the comments after I tell you three facts about him:
-Somehow Scourge's son
-Leader of Deathclan + Bloodclan
-Looked like emo black and red version of Scourge and edgy asf
My first OC was a pink dragon named Lyria.
Nothing more.
Her color palette consisted of pink, gray, a very light beige and neon cyan for her eyes.
And I still have her
Edit: also hello fellow WoF fan
@@CopperYeen Hello all the WoF fans + Warriors fans, I am one too!
My first OC was Mossflower
She was a heckin Mary Sue, like she was deputy but didn't want to be leader because "I wAnT MyY SiiStEr To Be LEaDUr"
and She was in a TrAgIc friendship with Blackfoot, Blackfoot had a whole other tRagIc backstory.
The only thing I like about her is the name and color pallet, she looked like Leafpool but with NeOn BelU EyEs!
hi wof + warriors fans!
for the first comment, that actually isnt even that bad for a first oc, trust me my first wof oc...oh man...
to the second comment, i actually really like that oc! its a great oc for your first warriors oc honestly, not a half-bad description either. trust and believe my first ocs were worse. here are their names in order in when they were created.
1. death/skunk
2. luna`moon (now bright moon, shes a tribe cat)
3. dog`fur (now wolf`cry)
4. moon`kit, sun`kit and diamond`kit (all sibs and made them at the same time so i put them in the same section, warrior names are moon`shine, sun`heart and bright`sky. bright`sky is diamond`kit since diamond isnt a prefix)
My first oc was "SoftKit", she was pretty Mary sue, she had WINGS for God's sake, and a magical necklace, and she was the kit of an angel or smth idk, but the angel kinda just let her possibly drown in a river?? Idk man the oc's backstory is just confused and idek how i thought it was good at all
@@luifaro__ bruh that is basically my old oc Luna`Moon/Bright Moon's old backstory in a nutshell lol
Oh dear the second hand embarrassment but to be fair I think everybody had that really edgy faze I remember going online during school just to watch sad videos and animations on a website called scratch and oh the memories I remember actually discovering warrior cats during my edge lord faze
So yeah this just brings back so much cringe but I really like your videos and your art has progressed so much I love your videos and wish you the best
OH MY GOODNESS SCRATCH
Ive just been flooded with memories. The edgy ocs i had 😭
I REMEBER BEING 8 ON ROBLOX AND RUNNING AROUND SCREAMING **KILLS** caps
I never had an edgy phase and I’m 13 (not yet at least)
Ahhh omg scratch, I too was obsessed with Warriors (I actually didn’t know about the fandom through the website, just found an old copy of into the wild in the library that my friend picked out for me because he knew I liked cats) and still have a few friends on there that I chat with every now and then. And don’t get me started on the “animations” I made…
Ahem---
:')
I think the edgiest could I ever had was a vent character named flowing song, she was a normal looking brown and amber cat who was seen as perfect and a hero but in reality she was suffering in her head despite having a good life, she would throw herself into danger to help others because she valued their lives over hers. For this she was seen as a hero which just made her sadder as they ignored her pain and attempts on telling them that she needed help, she was covered in scars caused by her throwing herself into danger and painless few caused by her on her left hip. Looking back on this character I realize that she was just a self insert character but with less fear and anxiety as I was struggling a lot with my anxiety disorder as it was not diagnosed at the time. I still have a place in my heart for this oc but I know that she was very cringe lol
To be honest though, it sounds pretty interesting :) Also I hope the character helped you feel better.
@@neptunetsunami3880 the characters helped me a lot, I’m just glad she wasn’t a red suicide no one loves me cat lol, she was well likes and appreciate y the clan but her mental health was just not good
@@Catinthecosmos155 Yeah, it especially bugs me when the red cat shows up because I'm sensitive to things like kil*ng yourself and they make it a joke. I'm glad your character helped you! I think it's sweet that she cares for her clan.
Hey, looking back on the oc it might be cringe, but it was a comfort oc and those can help alot somtiems :)
I remember my old warriors oc, to be more specific, her name was AshStar and she had a mate named Shadow. She wasn’t super weird but her design was. Her kits were more main to her story I made up.
the pain of having to go through old and cringy art and fics aside (relatable)- im still glad you were able to have that outlet as a kid to help sort through and process what you were going through emotionally at that time- thanks for sharing this! good to know i wasn't the only one who made Edgy warriors OC's that i projected everything on to xD and i think the redesign looks really cool! your art has truly come a long long way!!!
I remember Warrior Cats!
It's been so long since I've seen or heard anything Warrior Cats related (maybe 4-5 years). I still remember my OC Mushroom Tail, she was a reddish brown cat with a stumpy but very flooffy tail who lived in the woods as a sorta vagabond
I have a OC named Bloodclaw bc when he was shot out the kitty womb, some of blood came out of the kitty womb with him. Like Silverstream's birth but less blood. Also mom lived. Bloodclaw was just a problem child
I have a similar thing. Except for this the kits simply wouldn’t come and they had to do what can only be described as an improvised C-section. Fun. The mother and kits survived, but the mother was rendered incapable of either having more kits or feeding the ones she had. On the bright side, she did pick up one badass looking scar.
I also have an oc named Bloodclaw, but not for the same reason. In my head he was named Bloodkit cause he was the last living blood relative of his mother.
My oc was simply uncreative. My favorite animal was a fox, So..
Foxtail.
They looked like a fox.
A fluffy red tail, White tip..
Black paws.
Red fur.
W H Y
i mean as a cat in warrior cats, you can do a lot with that
@@caramel9154 heck I bet you could give them the plot of being mistaken for a fox entering camp
I also have a character named Foxtail X3
He used to look like a fox but I later made him a Somali cat lol
I have a cat who hunts foxes, so💀
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I have a oc named fox' star and his warrior name was fox' tail- AA
my warriors ocs were 'cringe and unrealistic' for a while, then i started caring about making my ocs realistic and now my ocs are arguably more unrealistic
my warriors ocs nowadays include:
Reverse Cabinet Man
A robot cat named Warriorcat
Murder rabbit
An immortal cat who is forever baby sized
Several different wolf ocs
A debatably immortal long furby warrior
An opossum who is convinced its a cat and it will scream at you
Tell me more about the murder rabbit. Is it just an actual rabbit that was so good at fighting that it joined a clan?
@@Shaun_Jones the murder rabbit, Rockleap, was actually taken into the clan when he was pretty young. Cosmicstorm, a decently respected warrior known for her faith in starclan, had gotten repeated "visions" leading up to her finding Rockleap alone. The visions were caused by the deceased former medicine cat, Deathberrysnap, who wanted to see just how much shit the clans would allow if "starclan said so" (deathberrysnap was not let into starclan due to her hatred of the clans post-exile).
Rockleap, or, rockkit/paw at the time, was harassed by his clanmates, only Cosmicstorm and two other queens , Blazingstride and Cherrypounce (who are dating bc gay people) would comfort and defend him. Because he was taken into an environment that was very aggressive, he had to compensate by putting up a facade of a violent but loyal warrior in order to have some shred of respect, or, more often fear.
I feel so bad- I accidentally disliked this comment while trying to like it *sobs in embarrassment* anyways g'day just letting you know I don't not like your comment:D
To be honest, I was saved from ever making one of these ocs simply because I somehow never really got online until i had grown out of the 'edgy oc' age range. Whenever I see people cringing at their old ocs, I can relate, but I also think the ocs are nothing to really be ashamed of. It was a time in people's lives where they can experiment and make anything they like, so yeah, it may be a 'generic red and black oc with an edgy backstory/no backstory' but at least you made something! Also, love the redesign, it's super cool.
This is a beautiful video 10/10
BloodFlame stepped forward, pebbles shifting under her paws. “This will end now…” BloodFlame mewed, placing a single paw forward. Small rocks crumbled under her feet, she braced herself for the fall. She hurled slightly forward, as a familiar figure ran forward. He lifted the light she-cats neck scruff mid-air. “What are you doing you dung-face!” He snarled, quickly pulling her back onto the hard rocky ledge. “Why should I live if there is nothing to look forward to? Nobody there to care for you when you need it?” BloodFlame murmured, resting her head down, eyes clouded with sorrow. “I love you mouse-brain!” NightBlaze lowered his head, sighing.
{KILL ME PLEASE-}
mmm loving the shakespear x warrior cats crossover we have going here
New Lets Review is UP!!! It's sadly not about a warrior cat oc, buuuuuuut-
Its about my 10 year old self writing a pokemon love story comic (and it is excruciatingly painful to read!)
Come cringe with me lol
What do you use to draw?
@@jayshade5190 I used paint tool SAI for over 10 years, but now I use procreate
@@vixelzzz Ah! Okay thank you, I've been starting to take art classes and I was hoping to find a good platform to work on!
Whats your devianart user? I'm interested in your work and I only joined a month ago.
@@unagidevi it's been dead for about 4+ years, but it's "espeonumbreonlover". The name I picked when I was like 9🤣
New Lets Rewew is UP!!!! Its about Bloodflame's mate, Nightblaze!!!
Come cringe with me!
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Lol I think we all had a OC that was cringe like this from depression to a perfect life into being a leader we have all made something like this, my cringe OC had a flower for a eye.
can you do more of these? They are actually very interesting. Also you go a new sub! :3
eeeeeeh okay so since you commented, ive made two others
I actually had an OC named Bloodmoon. He was a large, broad shouldered reddish-tabby Tom. The reason his mother named him “Bloodkit” was because his mother (Featherlark) had never wanted kits, and noticed how the tom looked oddly similar to their former (evil) leader, Cardinalstar. Featherlark, angry at the kit and herself, told the new leader (Falconstar) that she was abandoning her kit in the clan and leaving to become a rouge. Falconstar was horrified, demanding an answer and what to do with the unnamed kit. Featherlark just glared at him, and named him after all the blood Cardinalstar had caused to spill-Bloodkit. Falconstar couldn’t rename him, but he thought it was a cruel name for a harmless kit. Featherlark then disappeared-and his entire life, Bloodmoon was called “Red(kit/paw).” However, when “Redpaw” discovered his true name-he decided to stick to it. Falconstar and the rest of his clan were alarmed, asking why he’d want such a cruel and awful name. Now Bloodpaw, simply responded he didn’t see the name that way-but more of a flawed-gift. A way to respect the fallen warriors, and remind the clan that their blood will live on. Falconstar agreed, and Bloodpaw went on to be named “Bloodmoon.” He then went on the be a respected and well-oriented warrior, dying at the age of 60 moons (5 years) during a rouge attack in camp, defending the kits.
TLDR; mother named Bloodmoon “Bloodkit” out of anger, but he was nicknamed Red___. Bloodmoon then changed his name back to Blood___ because he didn’t think it was bad.
My first warrior cat oc was based on my real cat latzerus. We live on a farm and he ran away one day and never returned, so I made him join the warrior cats. Interestingly enough he didn't get OP or tragic, until after he died. He then proceeded to give the other cats ominous warnings in their dreams to prevent all the plotpoints from happening that I didn't like.
I need to do this with my old ocs XD
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I think there is a deformity that can occur in cats that can cause something akin to two tails? Lemme look it up
10/10 Characters
10/10 Storyline
10/10 Cringe
I say this is the best fanfic I have ever seen
"people make fun of me for my 2 tails"
Tails and Ahri: 👁️👄👁️
I mean I think tails’ backstory was he was made fun of for having 2 tails so sonic became his friend
My first and main warrior cats oc is called Corruptstar
He’s an ex-kittypet who’s owner abused him so he ran away and created reaperclan
I still use Corruptstar, his current main iteration (Corruptpaw) {from starlight forest} is currently my profile pic
My edge lord oc is tho only oc I ever use for stuff
Oh h e y
@@ThaeeBae Hoi
What the heck how am I only now finding your channel I freaking love this, your voice is super relaxing and your humor is on point :D
Man this brought me back. Rip Foresttail who was a silver tabby with a green star on her chest and a green paw 😂
Ngl I kinda want to try redesigning her now, about 13ish (?) years after I first created her hahaha
when i first saw this i could not believe it wasn’t satire lol,,, from her design to the way you talked in the captions and the justifying her name, this is every edgy 13yo perfectly summed up. bloodflame is art.
GOSH I WISH IT WAS SATIRE LMAOOO. i couldn't make a character this edgy now even if i tried. it just wouldn't be the same
The ammount of cringy oc's I had as a kid-
Dear lord I've had to rework their designs and stories for a while now
Well since TH-cam has decided that I *will* return to warrior cats I guess this is a good place to talk about my old warrior cat oc's. Mine was named Greysnake, plain dark grey with green eyes and a black stripe across her face, and she was sort of a wandering/rogue kind of cat. She had a sort of generic backstory, her mother was a stray kitty pet and her father was a forest cat who stole her from her mother to raise her to fight (short version). Anyways rebellious teen blah blah, ran away. But one of my favorite things about her was that while she was journeying she adopted a kit she had found, named Shiverkit, a basic brown tabby cat, and decided she'd rather being him with her then let him starve in the forest.
Also I had started a Wattpad story about her and I thought it was pretty good, to bad I don't use Wattpad anymore.
I remember I had two Warrior Cats OCs. They were both apprentices and one of them had the appearance of a Bengal cat...
A good lesson in sometimes embracing your old cringe.
sometimes your cringey ocs still have good elements and can be reformed, lord knows my "I am so edgy and insane mad scientist who does fucked up and evil experiments on things" is a much better character now I took his interesting elements and combined them with a different and more developed headworld.
i actually really like the name Braveflame! good job :>
As someone who used to make warriors OCS, I can say that you definitely improved a ton with this design. Although I will say polycaudal (many tailed) cats do exist, although rare as it's a mutation like polydactylism. It's perfectly realistic to have a two tailed cat exist, since there's canon polydactyl cats in the actual books (isn't Blackfoot/star described as having polydactylism in one of the super editions?)
Ok- Idk if u already decided on her backstory for the new oc- but I hv an idea. What if, when she was just a kit, a fire started in the camp. Why? A forest fire caused by some campers. The kit was caught in the fire, but luckily survived by a thread.
For this, the kit was named "Bravekit" For her bravery. Eventually, the fire burnt out, and they were all able to return back to their camp. And maybe she was teased alot, but it never really bothered her, with? Bc she thought it was actually funny. Please, tell me wut u think-
This is pretty cool
Tbh I think with the new design she could be a really interesting, if wrote right, good character.
The first warriors oc i can remember making was called HoneyWing. She was basically the mary sue y/n of warrior cats. Beautiful, talented, everyone had a crush on her, saved the leader’s life, became deputy, was bullied as an apprentice, she had everything except a tragic backstory.
My first oc had some red, but I redesigned her and made the red more brown and less cringy then gave her a very advanced backstory, then gave the background characters advanced back stories and now I have a whole fan clan 😃
*you know it's a main character when the father is dead*
Okay but like, imagine if your younger self could see the art your making now, they’d be shook lmao
I really love how you redesigned Bloodflame, she’s so cute!
This is my comfort video that I watch once every two weeks lol
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I used to have a warrior oc named white tail
Guess what colour his tail was
Black
OBVIOUSLY.. blue!
DUH, it's red
I had a character named Bloodstar but when he was a kit he was called Splinterkit because the first he did when he opened his eyes was get a splinter he later changed his name to Bloodthistle due to his great strength and to escape his embarrassing past, he’s now called Scorchstar since he became leader of Stormclan
Underrated, new sub.
That’s all I have to say.
This is amazing and underrated.
I’m not gonna lie, the idea of blood flame having two long tails and being bullied would actually make sense as the two tails could possibly be a genetic mutation, and when I first saw how you drew her Bob details I thought she actually lost her tails to a fox trap or something caused her to lose most of her tails..
I had a random idea (Anyone else can do this two by replying), I’m currently 13 and only have one main Warriors OC, I’m gonna write as much as I can about her here and then come back in a few years or maybe even a couple months (who knows when I’ll change my view on the character) to see if I think of her as edgy or not.
I’ll be editing this comment each time I come back to it, but I might forget at some point, hopefully that doesn’t happen lol
Name: CloudedHeart.
Gender: Female.
Appearance: White with a grey gradient of a sort of stripe/spot pattern, which is reminiscent of a clouded leopard’s pattern (Hence her name). She has bright, emerald green eyes and has generally short fur. Her tail is almost entirely grey and has a sort of plume of slightly longer fur at the tip (Not like a lion, it’s a natural occurrence and is barely noticeable).
Traits: Vaguely heart-shaped speckles hidden among her fur; and a few scratch marks across her legs from running through some fields of skin-irritating leaves.
Personality: Firm, reserved, frequently impolite/insensitive.
Clan: LeopardClan.
Rank: Warrior.
Story: The story my Warriors characters are usually set in is a sort of AU in which there’s clans based off of big cats such as lions, tigers, leopards, etc. This is based off of the fact that the original Warriors lore has fables or legends of these larger species.
CloudedHeart is a well-known warrior of LeopardClan, she is mainly known as being a merciless and powerful she-cat in battle. Her reserved and thick-skinned nature making her difficult to approach for conversation or small talk.
CloudedHeart has two siblings (Of which I haven’t named yet) but she barely has a bond with either of them, the only thing she seems to care about it obeying her leader’s orders and serving her clan. That is until her sibling has kits, a certain kit named after her (HeartKit) seems to take a particular liking to CloudedHeart, and despite CloudedHeart’s usual reaction having been “Leave me alone, I need to go hunting.” She paused, some part of her saying that she should protect this kit and try to be friends with him.
CloudedHeart slowly found herself growing to like HeartKit and his overly expressive personality, he always made a loud screech of excitement when he saw CloudedHeart and would fall over his own paws when running up to her.
A few moons later, HeartKit was an apprentice, but despite the great achievement that was HeartPaw’s new role; LynxClan was beginning to fight more and more with LeopardClan. Eventually a full-on war broke out between the clans, and unfortunately, CloudedHeart’s sister (The mother of HeartKit) had died to a LynxClan warrior.
CloudedHeart was devastated, she felt awful for all the time she had wasted training while she could’ve been spending time with her sister. Her sister’s death made her realize that she was only setting herself up for losing people earlier than she would ever want, so she vowed at her sister’s last breath that she would keep HeartKit safe. She would make absolute sure that if HeartKit was in danger, CloudedHeart would die simply to keep him out of it.
It’s very vague at the moment, but I’m still working on it. Anyone can also tell me their view on CloudedHeart if they’d like, feedback of any kind would be nice ^^
Omg nice story!!! Cloudheart looks like thse characters that take their time to open up to someone and thats okay! as long as you get her to go through diffrent moments to become a better person as the stroy progress,as when you get to the final parts of the story the character will see how far thay have gotten! but over all nice story and character!
Wow! The backgrounds look great!
Rewatching this AGAIN because it’s amazing
I might have a little suggestion to why that picture with Braveflame and Nightblaze at a cliff happened.
So let's say Rippleclan had gone through a tragic time. Braveflame being the deputy at the time is overwhelmed by everything going on, blaming herself for not being able to protect the clan. Thinking that the clan would be better off without her and she'd probably be the next victim to the terrible plague happening to the clan, she goes to jump off that cliff. However, Nightblaze stops her and instead of going "I'm bLinD In mY lEfT eYe" he gives her actual encouragement and gets her to open up while having a nice talk some length away from the edge of the cliff.
so glad I never had this phase, I just got quieter and listened to nightcore, that was my entire edgy phase.
I absolutely love the redesign sm! looks really good when you *slightly* tone down the vibrant red and make realistic marking shapes instead of the edgy lil flame monster that was destroying my eyes 😭 (no hate to all those edgy teens out there ofc)
lol, the end comic.
My first warrior cats OC was Snow'star a white she-cat who lead Skyclan(I wasn't aware of actual sky clan at the time) Skyclan was a floating island full cats with wings. She had a sister named Clover'heart who was a black and green cat my friend made who was deputy and a son named Gold'paw who didn't have wings, but was somehow able to make a jetpack another friend made Gold'paw ;-;
Bloodflame is awesome and I love her
Imagine a Clan so edgy that everyone was named after internal organs.
Boneclaw, Bloodflame, Tissuepaper
Fight me
Tissuepaper 🤣🤣🤣
Bloodflames entire sentence before she chose to jump was longer then the entire one piece manga 💀🤚
*(btw i love the art bestiee like im love ofc ✨✨)*
Yeah the warriors community is still way into adoptable designs. But most I’ve seen look pretty realistic and interesting.
We NEED more of this!
okay does anyone else notice how pretty the redesign is in the background
You're too kind 🥺😭
Ok but I honestly wanna see the original story be fully semi professionally voice acted dnndndnd
My edgy OC was literally a cat named Razorstar and he was white with black stripes and red eyes. I don’t remember his backstory but it was tragic as you would’ve guessed and he carried around a chainsaw to murder cats with. He ruled the clans along with his mate Violetflower (Who was the manipulator cat) and his four (?) brothers who were in the same tragic situation as him. He was also a self-insert in the canon story and I don’t know how that would’ve worked, he was Bramblestars old friend I think?
I brought him back to my current warrior story, and instead of being an edgy murderer, he’s kind and respectful. I didn’t change his name or design because I’d like to keep the charm.
Other than that, I don’t think I had any other edgy OCs that weren’t purposely trying to be edgy. My problem was mostly self-inserts to develop cringy romances with literally every tom ever in warrior cats. Ravenpaw was my favorite victim.
Wow. My OC has the same exact design-
I approve of the new name, well done.
The first OC I had wasn’t edgy… but all of them had an unnecessary tragic love story. I had four characters, all supposed to be littermates. The first one was Mistfall and she didn’t have any backstory. She had a mentor and he kept sneaking out so she followed him and realised he was in a forbidden relationship. I could’ve gone somewhere with that- but no, I just made her mentor get exiled and that was it- then I had so many romances for her… at first, when her mentor was exiled, I made her fall I love with a young warrior, who ended never liking her back (basically Bristlefrost and stemleaf situation,) and then I doubled back and made her fall in love with two brothers. And she never chose, she just dragged them both along. And that’s it.
Then, I have sunwish, who has a med cat. Nothing interesting, she has greencough as a kit, then her mentor died as an apprentice then she fell in love with the skyclan medicine cat, spruceleaf. Accidentally gets kits, she gives them away to be with their father, then she has no story.
Next, Minnowpool. She had no purpose except to be that “sweet nursery queen” sort of type. No backstory, but somehow important. Why? Because she was the other main character’s littermates.
Snowfoot. She’s my favourite, cause she has an actually personality and development! She was pretty snappy and rude. Her love interest was a cat who died shortly before her kit was born, and her kit died at birth. But then, two kits without a mother came into the clan, and Snowfoot took them. At first she didn’t express any sort of affection towards her Foster kits. But she eventually grew to love them. But that first moon she hated her foster kits had an impact. One of them was determined to find his mother, and leave his clan, while the other formed a great mother-daughter relationship with Snowfoot. Snowfoot came to realise its not the bad things that matter, but good. So with that mindset, she got herself up to be a highly respected warrior of her clan. Like her littermates, not much, but a good story in the end, no matter how short or not interesting it was.
I actually had a character named Bloodflame at some point but she changed her name when she was a warrior lmao
So I frequented Warriors Amino when i was like 10 or something and looking back makes me want to screech
I had two characters with the "edgy red design pattern", Redflame(😳)and Charredrose. Vast majority of my old warrior ocs originated from being the weird kid in school and doing roleplays on the playground with my friends. Tbh I think I like Charredrose's design the least out of the two looking back on it BUT did go back from like a year hiatus with better art skills and was like "hey i made her better" then disappeared again. Im terrified to go back but I honestly just decided f** it and as i write this im going to redesign the other one. Its nice to be able to return to your old work and make it something new and refreshing
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Happy to see what I’ll achieve in 7 years!!!! I’ve been working hard on warriors for almost a year and a half now!!
I love this so much xD
Imma put my oc here cuz why not ig-
Name: toad Web
Age: 21 moons (the equivalent to a 20 year old)
Looks: a black cat with olive green eyes. They have faded scars on their face with messy fur.
Backstory: their mother is a young loner who was kicked out of their clan for multiple partners. Their mother left them at the clan, to try and give them a better life. They did end up getting that, as they ended up becoming a medicine cat for dusk clan. That's it so far
Clan: dusk clan (fan made)
Gender: agender
Backstory idea! : she absorbed one of her siblings in the womb so she has two tails [ siamese/conjoined twin animals are my favorite types of animals, but usually they dont live long ]
The name Bloodflame unlocked a core memory- I used to go on Minecraft warriors rp servers when I was like 12, and there was a group of kids being edgy and they made this like rp cult within the server and i joined ofc cus i was an edgy kid too. And that's how my character Nightstrike started out- and one of the other cats there was named Bloodflame lol
I had a oc when I was 9 or something and he was like blue and looked a fish. His name was Blue Pelt/Star. Idk why but he has like.. a never ending live and he gets reborn everytime After dying in a very brutal way, but no one will remember his past life. (Don't ask) He can't get a mate and become a father. All he does is save someones life and then become deputy, and After that leader. I even still have one of his storys in word on my pc lol.
6:59 I GOT AN AD FOR EYEDROPS WHEN THAT PART PLAYED AHAGSDHDYHD
Please do more of these they”re amazing!
Done and done, theres now a pokemon one AND a nightblaze video underway
My first ever oc was the start of my writing experience!
*Embarrassment and despair kicks in*
Anyways, uhm, her name was spotpaw, and her friends were daisypaw and some other cringey oc (I remember when halfway through writing this, it was rosepaw) . My book I was writing was called "the scarred warrior" and wowie you guessed it, they're name had to do with a scar! They're name was scarredeye- spotpaw in like....chapter two I think, her friend died because her enemy blackclaw who was supposed to be an apprentice btw and I didn't notice I had Been calling him that until page like, 20. Anyways and she hated him and practically unalived him while he was going to the med cats den. Then somehow she had to go with the scarredeye stranger because she took candy from a stranger. She was traveling to the moonstone to talk to rosepaw or something, but then they turned around because she was mad. Then blackclaw saw them then they went back and she was allowed to go to patrol. When blackclaw threatened to tell the leader she whispered death threats in his ear for fun. Then they went on patrol and fought some random German shepherds and pitbulls them blackclaw got thrown into a rock and she fell in love with him for no reason. Then he was named Blackstone, she was named stripepelt, wowie bet you didn't guess her prefix would change! Then some other cat, tiger paw was name tiger heart and married dovepaw who become dovesomethingorother and she told Blackstone she loved him and then my cats tore up my notebook so past me never got the chance to finish that horrible disastrous fanfic!
Heh- I'm mentally not ok :D
My first OC wasn’t a warrior cat, but funnily enough was still a cat. My Skyrim character who was a khajiit named Katrina Nightpelt 😂 (which isn’t at all how khajiit names work if you know). My game had a lot of mods so of course I incorporated all of her powers into the bio. Despite that her actual personality was more down to earth than you’d think and she wasn’t going around to random pedestrians like ‘I wonder what your guts look like’. She was also scarcely used and when I found my longtime online friend and we created our still running today roleplay, the actual first character I made was much more normal and instead a version of my ideal self. Black hair, blue eyes, skinny, intelligent and can speak to dragons. Funnily enough I’ve completely changed her personality lately but she still retains her dragon speak ability, it has some neat story possibilities.
I low key wanna draw
edesign her (old vers) cus I low key love her and her edgyness
"We both have issues, you can't jump and LEEEEEAVE MEEEE!" - Nightblaze, probably
so good omg-
Bahahaha this reminds me of my edgy oc, she’s called Midnight and is a wolf. She used to have all-black fur, but I needed more colour so I added red (my fav colour)
I didn’t add the red to be edgy, but it’s bcuz black and red just mixed well together lol. She used to have really long hair, but now she has a tuft. She was also a demon-wolf lolll
I have this entire backstory for her and other characters, and I’m actually working on the lore rn (but changing some stuff that made no sense lol)
Bloodflame, the kit deputy. Amazing. Although I'm sure I've written even more terrible fanfiction, don't worry
THE RDAWING IN THE NOTEBOOK THE MEMORIES
Headcanon: she was bullied because the others thought her brown fur looked like mud
my first OC was water moon kitty star who had magical moon powers and could shift the water and all of their parents died from drowning and that made him so sad he went to a magical cave and got powers when he cryed it hit the floor because moon was a blue moon he got the water and moon power. OMG i was so smart back then lol
My first OC was literally Springtrap as a cat... He was so cringe, but I redesigned him and now he’s a spotted gray tom with green eyes, which actually makes sense. Also he’s Boulderstar now, not Springstar.
I can totally relate to this video. I had a fanfic about an emo rogue that falls in love with the shadowclan medicine cat 😅
I've never been too fussed about realistic markings and even colours can be stretched (like pinkish browns ect, but complete unrealistic colours are great aswell this is just personal taste)
My main bab rn is Duskfire. She is solid black up to the base of her tail where it goes from brown to bright orange with faint tabby stripes along her. She was based off the memory of a cat pic I saw weeks prior but in reality it like your gal with the red along the back Vs just the tail. Another bab I have is blossompelt and she is very pink and has rosets on her back,tail and stripped legs with a dark dun stripe on her back. Nowhere near realistic XD that was after a redesign, her original design was all over the place
4:12 doesn't love triangle imply like the crushing goes in a loop? So like, it'd be bloodflame fawning over nightblaze, his brother fawning over bloodflame, and then..... Yeah changing this aspect was definitely a good change cause it doesn't look good no matter it's worded.
reminds me of my old oc, whose name was literally, and i KID YOU NOT, death
I had an old emo OC named Crow who just had a FoRbIdDeN romance with a medicine cat. He had black hair over his eye, was blind in the eye that his hair covered, had tons of “cool battle scars” and had the signature “scar over the eye”