I like the story but I'm not satisfied the ending not detailed story when I almost finish to read U make rushed to finished the story U made nice story but don't rush to end.plz make the story detail and beautiful ending 😊 thnk u
O I kinda got lose why jk hated jimin jimin got pregnant which seem to b the story of his life and lose the baby and forgave jk little confusing but I still enjoy it
You started off well then rushed the ending. Something that would have been good became something disappointing. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but quality writing is much better than rushed "half ass" writing.
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Seriously???? He tortured him & he easily forgives him like nothing happened??
Wow 🤯
because he loves him thats why he forgave him
@BTS13-j still... If someone did the same with you (just imagine)
You'll forgive him easily??
I know it's an imaginary story but still
@@Jimkookfiction this was my first ff so i dont have much idea to bs jo likhna hua wo likh dia ab ni ho ga bhn maaaf kr da 😅😅😅😅🙂🙂🙂
@BTS13-j Ke dia maaf balike 😂
@@Jimkookfiction thank you so much maina to kha ab meri phir izzat ho jani aap sa 😅😅😂😂😂
Not fair... how can he forgave him that easily 😢
🙂🙃🙂🙃
yeahh thatss not fairr
@NenaNyna okay next time ma aisaa character bnau gy jo us ko jldi maaf ni kra gy
It was really crazy, we don't know why JK was treating him that way and why JK didn't suffer after he found out he was hating Jimin for no reason?
I like the story but I'm not satisfied the ending not detailed story when I almost finish to read U make rushed to finished the story U made nice story but don't rush to end.plz make the story detail and beautiful ending 😊 thnk u
O I kinda got lose why jk hated jimin jimin got pregnant which seem to b the story of his life and lose the baby and forgave jk little confusing but I still enjoy it
Next ff
You started off well then rushed the ending. Something that would have been good became something disappointing. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but quality writing is much better than rushed "half ass" writing.