no music for some reason sorry 😭 also thx so much on 15kkk we’re almost at 20k 🙀🙀💌 also i’m starting a new series, called Vampire’s Wish, so keep on a look out for the first episode 🫣
How does it go from "she's your lover because you can read her mind" to how the ending turned out?! Maybe Hannah doesn't have feelings for her, and she held her hand as a reassurance. The only thing about it was her emotion, she had hearts above her head. Almost like the reason she pulled Hannah back was because within the 2 days they might have became lovers. Note how she also pulled Hannah without hesitation, like they already liked eachother and that's why she did it, compared to the start of the story where she was just nervous even talking to Hannah. TLDR: There are major plot holes within the story, and the ending needs more context to it.
why end it like that? the whole thing started out as hannah and anton supposed to be soulmates. theres a lot of things that don’t make sense and aren’t really finished.
PLEASE it can’t end like that Anton can’t die he still loves Hannah they you at least have to make him fall in love or something make it a good ending I can’t OML he can’t die just like that please😢😭🙏
Gurl i know right I also want to see them together I hope she will make Season 2 of it ❤❤❤ I really like this GLMM even though I didn't see them together it's a bit sad to see them not together
Whay happened to mind reading and wasn't the whole point that since he can read her mind it means there ment to be together what happened the ending makes no sense how did the girls get together one dosent even have emotions but she somehow magically ends up with the other girl like explain pls
So hi there! So i use these "movies" more as an inspiration, since finding new concepts, plots or ideas in general is kinda hard sometimes and im too bored to create them myself. As a thanks for not only you but all of the creators of this community, im going to give you a few tips. What im about to say might sound like criticism, but I assure you it's not and I just want to help ya make better movies in the future. Let's start by the title: ... can *read minds* . The title of a book, novel, film, series or videogame is very important for the viewer to understand what he is about to watch, read or play. If you're gonna put read minds, then im going to assume that the main part of this story is centered right on that specific thing and not on something else. The lack of this element can be seen in basically all the episodes, and while there are certainly some moments where it's present, id say you should give more attention to it. Lets move onto the story. First off, props to you for warning the viewers about anything that can bring them uncomfort, since thats something many people take for granted. The plot is fine, not anything too special, but its not too boring to just click off the video. I think you could have sped up the things in the first 2 episodes since I think the main part really arrives in the last like 30 mins, but I guess thats just me. This doesnt mean that the movie should always be fast, but at the beginning its very important since thats the part when most of the people click off a video. If you can't get their attention in that span of time, you are done. Other than that there aren't any remarkable tips I can give, and I shouldn't be talking much since you're not a real professional, but I still do hope these words I just gave you will help you improve in the future. With that being said I mean no hate with this and I hope that everyone will take this comment nicely. Thanks for reading!
Just one thing. "Emotionless" doesn't exactly mean that the person can't feel emotions, it means they can't show it because most of the time it is almost physically impossible. Like Hannah said "I can't fall in love", unless it's not mentally possible, she can, but she might have a hard time showing or expressing it (I guess sometimes that would be a good thing, but otherwise, what abt family, spouses, etc?). For example (true story but not mine): Someones girlfriend broke up with them because a dog got ran over the the guy was "emotionless", so he showed no signs of sadness, but truly he was sad, he just couldn't express his feelings. Good thing, he did get a loving, supportive wife, but what I'm saying is that on the inside, he was a very loving, kind, and gentle person, just couldn't show it. I hope you get what I'm saying, because this is a very misunderstood topic. Thanks for reading! Good movie btw, love it! ❤
#arifan Nooo I need pt 4 😢😢 but anyways this series is perfect I just wanna know what happen if Anton woke up or if Hannah and Evelyn got together bc if they did ima be so mad!
downloaded the first part to watch in the plane and subbed once i reached! your plot lines are amazing and you earned yourself a step closer to 20k, a minor one tho since it is only 1 sub but love ur vids!
I wasted an hour an five minutes of my life to find out the ending sucks and it's apparently the full ending 🧍🏻♀️ DO THEY GET TOGETHER? DOES SHE LIKE EVEYLYN LIKE COME ON
One, this was so bad. There is no plot what so ever, the title is so misleading, and the characters are so irrelevant. Two, none of the characters were likeable, Evelyn was the best character in this story, but she still lacked character development. This "story" was so all over the place. Anton didnt even read her mind...maybe twice. The main character sucks and delilah is such a rando character. The ending was so disappointing. To add, there is literally no story behind Anton having a "boss" and the whole time they just trying "fixing" Hannah. Even if she is emotionless her character sucked. I hope to see better in the future
at like around 9 minutes i was like EVELYNS A LESBOOOOOOOOOOOOOO then like 30 seconds later ok maybe not and then at 9:40 i was like LESBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
this was so good! im so sad that aton didnt get a happy ending tho i rlly wanted to see him w/ hannah after all his attempts but ig fate has its way 😮💨still subbing tho
OMG SO SHE LITERALLY NEVER GETS HER EMOYION BACK LIK EHAT WE NEED A PART FOUR WHERE SHE AND EVELEYN LIKE GET MARRIED RO SOMEHNG AND HAVE LIKE CHILDREN BECAUSE HOW WILL I LIVE THE REST OF MY LIFE KNOWING SHE NEVER GETS HER EMOTIONS BACK LIEK WHATSGHAFJTG YJFJ BG SBBCGBCGRIETCEBLYWERBI46T733Q😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Can somevone tell me with who is hannah with cuz i dident understend the end so is hannah with Evelyn or is she with Anton pls somvone explain it to me😢
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no music for some reason sorry 😭 also thx so much on 15kkk we’re almost at 20k 🙀🙀💌 also i’m starting a new series, called Vampire’s Wish, so keep on a look out for the first episode 🫣
OMG I CAN’T WAIT!!!!!!
YESSS
Hi! I love ur channel sm! I’m so lucky i’m early :3
Can’t wait
YEas
How does it go from "she's your lover because you can read her mind" to how the ending turned out?! Maybe Hannah doesn't have feelings for her, and she held her hand as a reassurance. The only thing about it was her emotion, she had hearts above her head. Almost like the reason she pulled Hannah back was because within the 2 days they might have became lovers. Note how she also pulled Hannah without hesitation, like they already liked eachother and that's why she did it, compared to the start of the story where she was just nervous even talking to Hannah.
TLDR: There are major plot holes within the story, and the ending needs more context to it.
why end it like that? the whole thing started out as hannah and anton supposed to be soulmates. theres a lot of things that don’t make sense and aren’t really finished.
for real.
Frr bruhhh Hanna and Anton should have been soulmates
In my opinion who cares about evalyn
PLEASE IT CANT END LIKE THIS PART4!!
PLEASE it can’t end like that Anton can’t die he still loves Hannah they you at least have to make him fall in love or something make it a good ending I can’t OML he can’t die just like that please😢😭🙏
Gurl i know right I also want to see them together I hope she will make Season 2 of it ❤❤❤ I really like this GLMM even though I didn't see them together it's a bit sad to see them not together
Bro I was watching this with my phone full volume and then all of a sudden the music came on it scared me so bad💀
OMG SAME
lol
OMGGGGG SO SADDD AT THE PART OF “GRAPE” AND “EMO”
I feel so bad for Evelyn when she saw them both kissing
Same
Same bro
She should have just moved on
37:30 bahahaha pink highlighter is just beyond funny
It's a nice and light story, and looking at it all, I even liked it, so it's good :)
Whay happened to mind reading and wasn't the whole point that since he can read her mind it means there ment to be together what happened the ending makes no sense how did the girls get together one dosent even have emotions but she somehow magically ends up with the other girl like explain pls
So hi there! So i use these "movies" more as an inspiration, since finding new concepts, plots or ideas in general is kinda hard sometimes and im too bored to create them myself. As a thanks for not only you but all of the creators of this community, im going to give you a few tips. What im about to say might sound like criticism, but I assure you it's not and I just want to help ya make better movies in the future. Let's start by the title: ... can *read minds* . The title of a book, novel, film, series or videogame is very important for the viewer to understand what he is about to watch, read or play. If you're gonna put read minds, then im going to assume that the main part of this story is centered right on that specific thing and not on something else. The lack of this element can be seen in basically all the episodes, and while there are certainly some moments where it's present, id say you should give more attention to it. Lets move onto the story. First off, props to you for warning the viewers about anything that can bring them uncomfort, since thats something many people take for granted. The plot is fine, not anything too special, but its not too boring to just click off the video. I think you could have sped up the things in the first 2 episodes since I think the main part really arrives in the last like 30 mins, but I guess thats just me. This doesnt mean that the movie should always be fast, but at the beginning its very important since thats the part when most of the people click off a video. If you can't get their attention in that span of time, you are done. Other than that there aren't any remarkable tips I can give, and I shouldn't be talking much since you're not a real professional, but I still do hope these words I just gave you will help you improve in the future. With that being said I mean no hate with this and I hope that everyone will take this comment nicely. Thanks for reading!
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Just one thing. "Emotionless" doesn't exactly mean that the person can't feel emotions, it means they can't show it because most of the time it is almost physically impossible. Like Hannah said "I can't fall in love", unless it's not mentally possible, she can, but she might have a hard time showing or expressing it (I guess sometimes that would be a good thing, but otherwise, what abt family, spouses, etc?). For example (true story but not mine): Someones girlfriend broke up with them because a dog got ran over the the guy was "emotionless", so he showed no signs of sadness, but truly he was sad, he just couldn't express his feelings. Good thing, he did get a loving, supportive wife, but what I'm saying is that on the inside, he was a very loving, kind, and gentle person, just couldn't show it. I hope you get what I'm saying, because this is a very misunderstood topic. Thanks for reading!
Good movie btw, love it! ❤
you've got talent, tysm 4 entertaining me you have earned a new subscriber!!!
I need pt 4 this series is perfect I just wanna know what will happen next
grape haired boy got me dying of laughter😂😂😂
QNA TIME!!! DID SHE GAIN EMOTIONS BACK EVENTUALLY????
Oh my God, an actually good thumbnail
#arifan Nooo I need pt 4 😢😢 but anyways this series is perfect I just wanna know what happen if Anton woke up or if Hannah and Evelyn got together bc if they did ima be so mad!
Same
I would be so happy if they got together bruhh
Help 14:34 was so similar to my math hw a few weeks ago 😂
I need me an overly possessive bratty girl that likes me just like Magenta. 🙏🙏🙏
The first time Evelyn blushed at Hannah I was like: I SENSE LESTBIAN!!! 😍
I feel bad for Evelyn😭
Being the third wheel everywhere😭😭
BRO EVA AND HANNAH NEEDAA DATE THEIR THE REAL SOL,ATESSSS
downloaded the first part to watch in the plane and subbed once i reached! your plot lines are amazing and you earned yourself a step closer to 20k, a minor one tho since it is only 1 sub but love ur vids!
¡Por favor! Haz otra segunda película, te lo suplico, quiero ver a Hannah y Evelyn saliendo 🥺💗🏳️🌈
I really wanted Hannah and anton to be together 😢
Same
I really wanted a part 4 and really wanted Hannah and Anton together but sadly that didn’t happen. Still amazing story tho! 😁❤️❤️
Casual barcode slap, I might try to scan it at like Walmart for sum
I wasted an hour an five minutes of my life to find out the ending sucks and it's apparently the full ending 🧍🏻♀️ DO THEY GET TOGETHER? DOES SHE LIKE EVEYLYN LIKE COME ON
Pleaseeeee make a season 2!! Take your time, but for me, i really want evelyn and hannah to date!! 💗💗 Thanks for reading
LARISSA AND HANNAH HAVE THE SAME EYES!! 42:40
THATS WHAT IM SAYINN
she could be her mother?
@@Moeka_the_girly YESSSS
@@quitting01 Frr
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Ok and?
Thanks for the dedication in your vid’s! ❤😍😍 #arifan 4 life!
Hiiiii would u be ok with it if I voice this? It would probs be more funny than serious but I'll give u credits and stuff :3
#arifan also I love this series hope I get shoutout! probs wont tho-
One, this was so bad. There is no plot what so ever, the title is so misleading, and the characters are so irrelevant. Two, none of the characters were likeable, Evelyn was the best character in this story, but she still lacked character development. This "story" was so all over the place. Anton didnt even read her mind...maybe twice. The main character sucks and delilah is such a rando character. The ending was so disappointing. To add, there is literally no story behind Anton having a "boss" and the whole time they just trying "fixing" Hannah. Even if she is emotionless her character sucked. I hope to see better in the future
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at like around 9 minutes i was like EVELYNS A LESBOOOOOOOOOOOOOO then like 30 seconds later ok maybe not and then at 9:40 i was like LESBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Dude, atleast make a part 4 where Hannah would realize Larissa is her mother and she’ll marry Anton😢
NO HANNAH AND EVELYNN ARE LIKE THE BEST COUPLE❤
I@@zer0_n1x_Wcslayits not ment to be
@@zer0_n1x_Wcslay but it makes no sense
I loved the story❤❤❤
this was so good! im so sad that aton didnt get a happy ending tho i rlly wanted to see him w/ hannah after all his attempts but ig fate has its way 😮💨still subbing tho
Dude fate said they where ment to be together sao what happened
don’t tell the gang I fw gacha
Rs
I loveee ur videos soooo much. To the point my sisters are tired of me
THIS IS AmAzInGgGgGg!!!!!
Tbh Evelyn and Hannah should date we need part 4 frfr
43:50 why not Evelyn just slap the gun out of the pink highlighters hands and all of them attack, this don’t make sense
it very needs a part 4 pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaseeeeeese
WHAT DID IT END LIKE THIS HANNAH AND ANTON WERE SO SUPPOSE TO BE TOGETHER😢😢BUT WHY EVE AND HANNAH😢😢😢😢😢Its okay but i really ship hannah and anton tho😢
let anton die for Hannah and Evelyn can be together ❤️
Eh I like anton and hannah
FRRRRRRR I LOVE HANNAH AND EVELYN TG
No no no
THIS IS AMAZINGGGGG
190 LIKES?!
Let’s all fix that ❤
I was expecting them to kiss at the end..
I ship Delilah and Franklin stoop there so cute💗💗
and kids thats how we fell in love
I was waiting for hannah to say english or spanish when she was about to get shot lol
Nooooo 4 hours agoooooo😭😭😭😭
Why did she reject him I need good ending plssss😢
OMG SO SHE LITERALLY NEVER GETS HER EMOYION BACK LIK EHAT WE NEED A PART FOUR WHERE SHE AND EVELEYN LIKE GET MARRIED RO SOMEHNG AND HAVE LIKE CHILDREN BECAUSE HOW WILL I LIVE THE REST OF MY LIFE KNOWING SHE NEVER GETS HER EMOTIONS BACK LIEK WHATSGHAFJTG YJFJ BG SBBCGBCGRIETCEBLYWERBI46T733Q😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Chili the fuck out
Dude i want part 4 ugh...fine...
Evelyn reminded me of hinata from naruto the movie🥰
Not really
part 4 pls love you pls do it
THIRD ALSO CG ON 15K!!!
#arifan
PLS PART 4😭
38:03 see it would be hot if they kissed 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️💕💕
Can somevone tell me with who is hannah with cuz i dident understend the end so is hannah with Evelyn or is she with Anton pls somvone explain it to me😢
YESSS
Another part please? Im begging im on my knees
Can there be a part 4?? :(
Part 4 please!!!
WHY DID IT HAVE TO END????
Hannah x Evelyn. IM SORRY BUT I CAN'T
Bruh where’s the 4th part ?? 😭😭🙏🙏
OOOOH YEAAAAAAAAAH PAAART 333333333333333333
Part 4 plsssssssssssss
Are you gonna do a season two
PLEASE TELL ME HANNAH AND EVELYN GOT TOGETHER
NOO
I hope not
Um sis ... Whre is part 4
Pretty please ❤❤❤❤❤❤
NOO ADD MORE RIGHT NOW
Season 2 please!!!
#arifannn, i love ur videos
#arifan I LOVE UR MOVIE SO MUCHH
AHHHH 10 MINS AGO
55:47
#arifan MaTiRiAl GuRl
9:00 9:40
🎉🎉new subscriber pls shout out❤
39:30
First!
❤❤
I kinda wanna see Hannah and Evelyn date
#arifan
second!