This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. It’s cool how Naruto personality isn’t his canon self he’s more bad arse score that he sees the little witch girl as his sister is cool that he got it on with the inner mocha, don’t really know how that would affect the outer mocha even though she knows what it happened. Really hope that Naruto had gotten mocha pregnant. I mean, that is a possibility even from what Karama said. I’m sure we all like to know what mocha had said to Naruto, after what he had said to her, after she got it all lip in his face really hope that those two end up being together after all they’re supposed to be together as for what the title of the story states and besides me, I know others are gonna wanna know just exactly what Naruto will do to thegroup that had massacred the last years newspaper club members and I’m sure Inoka will end up coming out and Naruto really hope that this story continues and comes out soon 0:02 also, how is what’s his name going to find it feel when he finds out what mocha and Naruto did especially if she ends up pregnant 0:02
Eh, didn't like it to much in my opinion, hope to see naruto get his own haram but all it is. Dark naruto or sasuke personality bashing naruto stuff Plus naruto knows he holds the cards after all he got the 9 nines major weapon Mermaid and others that don't get much spot light would of been great to pull into this story but it's bit disappointing 😅
This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. It’s cool how Naruto personality isn’t his canon self he’s more bad arse score that he sees the little witch girl as his sister is cool that he got it on with the inner mocha, don’t really know how that would affect the outer mocha even though she knows what it happened. Really hope that Naruto had gotten mocha pregnant. I mean, that is a possibility even from what Karama said. I’m sure we all like to know what mocha had said to Naruto, after what he had said to her, after she got it all lip in his face really hope that those two end up being together after all they’re supposed to be together as for what the title of the story states and besides me, I know others are gonna wanna know just exactly what Naruto will do to thegroup that had massacred the last years newspaper club members and I’m sure Inoka will end up coming out and Naruto really hope that this story continues and comes out soon 0:02 also, how is what’s his name going to find it feel when he finds out what mocha and Naruto did especially if she ends up pregnant 0:02
omg pls pls pls make part 2 need more ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Name of the fanfiction
Next part please
Eh, didn't like it to much in my opinion, hope to see naruto get his own haram but all it is. Dark naruto or sasuke personality bashing naruto stuff
Plus naruto knows he holds the cards after all he got the 9 nines major weapon
Mermaid and others that don't get much spot light would of been great to pull into this story but it's bit disappointing 😅