I like your work, but I feel like your songs are incomplete? I mean this will absolute respect. They seem off. I make the mistake of rushing my writing. I feel like there's much more you could add to your songs, especially this one. I like the short increase in intensity at the end there, but I feel like that should of came sooner with another phase of the song elevating or cementing the emotional stakes
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All your songs are very beautiful, but the time is short
I expect it to be at least 30 minutes or more
I like your work, but I feel like your songs are incomplete? I mean this will absolute respect. They seem off. I make the mistake of rushing my writing. I feel like there's much more you could add to your songs, especially this one. I like the short increase in intensity at the end there, but I feel like that should of came sooner with another phase of the song elevating or cementing the emotional stakes