Raymond Wave ft. kypizont - The Broken Clock

A gothic story of a lonely man, And a broken clock. This song I'm quite proud of.
Vocals: kypizont.
THE BROKEN CLOCK
He wakes up at night
To a faint echo of a distant cry
The pendulum of the old clock has been still
Ever since the lady of the house fell ill
He still hears the cords and chains
The tick and tock of the broken clock
He lights a lantern
There should be some brandy left
In the kitchen cabinet
---
Memories
Of the family he needs
He weeps and weeps
And never sleeps
Memories
As he walks the endless halls
He walks and walks
And never sleeps
Tick, tock, tick, tock of the broken clock
I am sorry
i’m so sorry of everything
i’m so sorry
---
He walks the empty halls
With paintings on the walls
Faces of the past
The pendulum of the old clock has been still
Ever since their only child fell ill
He still hears the sighs and tears
The tick and tock of the broken clock
They did their best
But by the morning light
His wife and child were already in eternal rest
---
Memories
As he walks the endless halls
He walks and walks
And never sleeps
Tick, tock, tick tock of the broken clock
I am sorry
i’m so sorry of everything
i’m so sorry
i’m so sorry of everything
i’m so sorry
---
(C) Rami Laine 2024

[@lyssajames9814]

Wonderfully haunting, a great story that is well delivered. It stays with you long after you have listened. I love it.❤️

[@surgentsunnysongs6359]

WOOOW ! Holy Moly ! This is so beautiful and awesome. Fantastic ! Top notch ! Big compliments to you all ! So well done !

[@kallemannonen]

Excellent stuff, this is very nice listening.

[@dlp-dolapoofficial.]

This is very well done 👍 It's a mood setter for me. Everything is in it proper place. I absolutely love the arrangement and the vox as well as the harmony. Particularly the way the lead vocal purred through out the piece. Cool writing, rendition and delivery. Well done 👍

[@DennisCambly]

Hello Raymond I hope you are doing well. This piece of music shows you can trip my mind as usual. Vocals are haunting as are the words and music. I can feel myself fall into the song as I play it for the second time this morning and share it with others

[@marksharmanmusic1]

This is brilliant. Such a fab ambience you have created so suited to the lyric