Rudy Francisco - My Honest Poem

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  • @TheJazz3698
    @TheJazz3698 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1040

    "I don't allow myself to cry as often as I need to" wow.

  • @sarahvican4531
    @sarahvican4531 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1340

    I've always loved the line "My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following," but I never heard the full poem until now. Absolutely mesmerizing!

  • @chantaniacerisiers5557
    @chantaniacerisiers5557 9 ปีที่แล้ว +828

    "... I kow God listens to my heartbeat on his ipod..." That gave me goosebumps

  • @rachelspencer8092
    @rachelspencer8092 7 ปีที่แล้ว +655

    "I'm afraid that if I let you see my skeletons, you'll grind my bones into powder and get high of my fault lines" wow this speak levels for me!

    • @dinahcoombs1117
      @dinahcoombs1117 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Rachel Spencer tbh I thought he was gonna say that they'll grind his bones to make their bread but that's kinda childish of me

    • @veronicabrady4976
      @veronicabrady4976 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sickest line I’ve ever heard in my life... gave me goosebumps

  • @SplitSniper7
    @SplitSniper7 9 ปีที่แล้ว +377

    Solar power confidence and a battery operated smile... I know all too well what that means. I love this poem.

    • @b00tsyallday
      @b00tsyallday 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      SplitSniper7 so so so deep..cause the way Solar Power works... Love Love Love how he just..u know?.

    • @fayx1097
      @fayx1097 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      b00tsyallday yep a day thing :) it's so beautiful

  • @vengefulpictures5031
    @vengefulpictures5031 6 ปีที่แล้ว +613

    I was born on July 27th, I hear that makes me a Leo
    I don't really know what that means
    I'm 5 foot 6... and a half. I weigh a hundred and forty-five pounds
    I don't know how to swim, and I'm a sucker for a girl with a nice smile
    And clean sneakers
    I'm still learning how to whisper
    I'm often loud in places where I should be quiet
    I'm often quiet in places where I should be loud
    I was born feet first and I've been backwards ever since
    I like ginger ale... a lot.
    I've been told that I give really bad hugs
    People say that it feels like I'm trying to escape
    Sometimes it's because I am, and secretly I get really nervous
    Every time someone gets close enough to hear me breathe
    I have this odd fascination with things like sand castles and ice sculptures
    I assume it's because I usually find myself dedicating time to things
    That will only last a few moments
    That's also why I tend to fall in love with women
    Who would never love me back
    I know it sounds crazy, but it's actually much easier than it seems
    And to be honest, I think it's safer that way
    See relationships, they often remind me that I'm not afraid of heights or falling
    But I'm scared of what's gonna happen
    The moment that my body hits the ground
    I'm clumsy. Yesterday, I tripped over my self-esteem
    I landed on my pride and it shattered like an iPhone with a broken face
    Now I can't even tell who's trying to give me a compliment
    I've never been in the military, but I have this Purple Heart
    I got it from beating myself up over things I can't fix
    I know it sounds weird but sometimes,
    I wonder what my bed sheets say about me when I'm not around
    I wonder what the curtains would do if they found out
    About all the things that I've done behind their backs
    I've got a hamper that's overflowing with really, really loud mistakes
    And a graveyard in my closet, I'm afraid that if I let you see my skeletons
    You'll grind my bones into powder and get high on my fault lines
    Hi, my name is Rudy
    I enjoy frozen yogurt, people watching
    And laughing for absolutely no reason at all
    But I don't allow myself to cry as often as I need to
    I have solar-powered confidence, I have a battery-operated smile
    My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors
    And trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following
    I don't know much, but I do know this
    I know that heaven is full of music
    I know God listens to my heart beat on his iPod
    It reminds him that we still got work to do.

    • @miltonmuthoka2297
      @miltonmuthoka2297 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Thank you soooo much❤️❤️☺️

    • @rarefox8846
      @rarefox8846 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Thanks ima use this for a assignment

    • @cara0803
      @cara0803 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@rarefox8846 faxx, what can be a theme?

    • @rarefox8846
      @rarefox8846 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@cara0803 broskie we have to read a poem off a site then make a poem simaler to the poem this was closes thing and I can't think of a poem 15 to 20 liens long

    • @othonpedro2870
      @othonpedro2870 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you

  • @mightiebamboo
    @mightiebamboo ปีที่แล้ว +30

    I revisit Rudy’s poetry whenever I need to feel something

  • @alyssaking3663
    @alyssaking3663 5 ปีที่แล้ว +56

    "I got this Purple Heart from beating myself up over things I couldn't fix," argh his poems always relate to what I'm going through now

  • @rva
    @rva 6 ปีที่แล้ว +217

    Wonderful. I adore poetry

  • @sadieinit5976
    @sadieinit5976 9 ปีที่แล้ว +553

    this was beautiful, wish it never ended

    • @ilovetrevorsmith
      @ilovetrevorsmith 9 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      me neither

    • @davidhere27
      @davidhere27 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I love the journey it takes you on. nice indeed.

    • @carlawalker9649
      @carlawalker9649 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It never ends...just tap "Save" and "repeat".

  • @chaimalabed5423
    @chaimalabed5423 7 ปีที่แล้ว +145

    "i don't allow myself to cry as often as i should"
    " i get attached to things that only last for moments"

  • @Filmyism
    @Filmyism 9 ปีที่แล้ว +111

    ..."and trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following." damn. damn. dayuuum.

  • @thesunrises7756
    @thesunrises7756 8 ปีที่แล้ว +259

    " I landed on my pride, and it shattered like an iPhone with a broken face... " This guy is a really great poet...

    • @coolfiretire12
      @coolfiretire12 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      im sorry im bad at comprehension. WHAT DOES IT MEAN

    • @andrewrubio6463
      @andrewrubio6463 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      yeah? His self esteem is low and lands on his pride which can’t cushion him. The iPhone’s shattering is emotions shattering as they can’t piece what to perceive as good and bad

  • @TheSneakerDome
    @TheSneakerDome 9 ปีที่แล้ว +173

    Goddamn, never in my life has a work been so amazing to me that it made me want to quit writing. Until now. I love this poem very much.

    • @StephanieonYT
      @StephanieonYT 9 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      +TheSneakerDome Check out his other works!

  • @ASMinor
    @ASMinor 7 ปีที่แล้ว +299

    This is a written transcript of "My Honest Poem" by Rudy Francisco. This is a public service, and I am in no way claiming any association with this artist, this TH-cam video, or this TH-cam channel. Forgive how long it is, but this is the way that I write lyrics for my spoken word poetry music videos about mental health awareness and various other topics on my own TH-cam channel. Enjoy! 💓
    "-I was born on July 27th,
    -I hear that makes me a Leo.
    -I don't really know what that means.
    -I'm 5 foot 6... and a half,
    -I weigh a hundred and forty-five pounds,
    -I don't know how to swim,
    -and I'm a sucker for a girl with a nice smile.
    -And clean sneakers.
    -I'm still learning how to whisper.
    -I'm often loud in places where I should be quiet,
    -I'm often quiet in places where I should be loud.
    -I was born feet first and I've been backwards ever since.
    -I like ginger ale... a lot.
    -I've been told that I give really bad hugs.
    -People say that it feels like I'm trying to escape.
    -Sometimes it's because I am,
    -nd secretly I get really nervous every time someone gets close enough to hear me breathe.
    -I have this odd fascination with things like sand castles and ice sculptures.
    -I assume it's because I usually find myself dedicating time to things that will only last a few moments.
    -That's also why I tend to fall in love with women who would never love me back.
    -I know it sounds crazy, but it's actually much easier than it seems,
    -And to be honest, I think it's safer that way.
    -See, relationships, they often remind me that I'm not afraid of heights or falling,
    -But I'm scared of what's gonna happen the moment that my body hits the ground.
    -I'm clumsy.
    -Yesterday, I tripped over my self-esteem,
    -I landed on my pride and it shattered like an iPhone with a broken face.
    -Now I can't even tell who's trying to give me a compliment.
    -I've never been in the military, but I have this Purple Heart,
    -I got it from beating myself up over things I can't fix.
    -I know it sounds weird but sometimes,
    -I wonder what my bed sheets say about me when I'm not around.
    -I wonder what the curtains would do if they found out about all the things that I've done behind their backs.
    -I've got a hamper that's overflowing with really, really loud mistakes,
    -And a graveyard in my closet,
    -I'm afraid that if I let you see my skeletons
    -You'll grind my bones into powder and get high on my fault lines.
    -Hi, my name is Rudy.
    -I enjoy frozen yogurt, people watching,
    -And laughing for absolutely no reason at all.
    -But I don't allow myself to cry as often as I need to,
    -I have solar-powered confidence,
    -I have a battery-operated smile.
    -My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors,
    -And trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following.
    -I don't know much, but I do know this:
    -I know that heaven is full of music.
    -I know God listens to my heart beat on his iPod.
    -It reminds him that we still got work to do."
    **This is not meant to infringe upon Rudy's work. I've met him a few times when we both competed at the same national competitions, and he's a very nice and generous person, so I'm sure he wouldn't see it that way.

    • @magolorsoul4441
      @magolorsoul4441 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      A.S. Minor Issues I

    • @andreaellis2062
      @andreaellis2062 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      A.S. Minor thankkk uuu

    • @honeys.9579
      @honeys.9579 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      He strong for this! I wouldn't know if I could find my voice in front of people like that. Congratulations Leo season, it's just a zodiac he seems like a good guy in general 🎉👏🏽💯

  • @hilanaim1024
    @hilanaim1024 7 ปีที่แล้ว +62

    Once in a while I come to listen to this again and
    1. It always bring me to tears
    2. My power to live another day is restored

  • @MissGeorgiex1
    @MissGeorgiex1 9 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    I fell in love with this poem the first time I heard it and I've listened to it over and over again since then. Particular lines resonate with me like 'trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following' or 'I tripped up over my self-esteem, I landed on my pride and it shattered like an IPhone with a broken face'. Just breathtaking :)

    • @isthatchrisk
      @isthatchrisk 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      exactly! his line (which not many people seem to mention) "I'm clumsy. yesterday I tripped over my self-esteem, landed on my pride..."
      such a phenomenal writer!

    • @isthatchrisk
      @isthatchrisk 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      exactly! his line (which not many people seem to mention) "I'm clumsy. yesterday I tripped over my self-esteem, landed on my pride..."
      such a phenomenal writer!

  • @RiniLoki
    @RiniLoki 7 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    "I know heaven is full of music, I know God listens to my heartbeat on his iPod...It reminds him we still got work to do."
    i'm not a God believer and yet this line gets me every time..love this one so much

  • @phoenixphinx
    @phoenixphinx 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I come back to this after growing up and moving from a junior in HS to a person in the workforce after 5 years. Hearing these words again spun a whole new understanding of what he’s saying. Poetry has this power to be the words you need most in your worst moments. Love Rudy’s work

    • @ButtonPoetry
      @ButtonPoetry  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you so much for sharing!

  • @Theratlord342
    @Theratlord342 6 ปีที่แล้ว +237

    In response to the poem
    I was born on August 24th 2001
    That makes me a Virgo
    I am an introverted extrovert
    I dislike hugs and embraces
    I feel trapped
    I don't feel love
    I feel scared
    I flirt with sleep but never kiss it
    I hold onto things for too long
    I cry too easily
    I don't love well
    And when I do
    It's a mess
    I am a Virgo
    a chaotic twisted storm
    With black clouds and thunder
    But I can be a rainbow.
    Just give me time

    • @queenayama
      @queenayama 6 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Caroline Gunter It’s August 24..Happy birthday‼️💚

    • @Theratlord342
      @Theratlord342 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Queen Ayama thank you!!

    • @twinslov23
      @twinslov23 5 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      if you are a chaotic twisted storm make sure to let the world know how loud your thunder is and remind everyone that black is beautiful, and when you colors start to come through make sure you let them shine. ~Sincerely, someone who believes in you.

    • @CharlieCAndGeorgeC
      @CharlieCAndGeorgeC 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      it was august 24th yesterday, happy late birthday!

    • @Theratlord342
      @Theratlord342 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      ItzCrypto thank you!! Strangers are so nice!

  • @nanaespacini
    @nanaespacini 9 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    beautiful rudy. always making me cry while smiling. only person that can do that.

  • @thefastcommenter7774
    @thefastcommenter7774 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I first heard this poem in 2022. It was stuck in my mind but I finally found it today. 2 years later and I finally have found it. What a nice poem.

    • @ButtonPoetry
      @ButtonPoetry  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Wonderful!

  • @lindsayjohnson5503
    @lindsayjohnson5503 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    All these year’s later and this still gives me chills. Such a talent.

    • @1ngz018
      @1ngz018 ปีที่แล้ว

      aye wsp my fellow 2023'r

  • @talitharae1830
    @talitharae1830 8 ปีที่แล้ว +99

    Damn. Metaphor game is strong!!!

  • @pineapplesarefineiguess300
    @pineapplesarefineiguess300 6 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    “I’m afraid that if I let you see my skeletons you’ll grind my bones into powder and get high on my fault lines.”
    The most humane thing I’ve heard today.

  • @seagamingseahaven
    @seagamingseahaven 9 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    It has been said before, but Rudy, every time we see your name show up we don't know what to expect, but we know it will surpass our expectations. Thank you for what you do.

  • @mistagloriousjacobsatorius4837
    @mistagloriousjacobsatorius4837 9 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    "Trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following.." I love how melancholy and well written this poem is :)

  • @marcheleann
    @marcheleann 9 ปีที่แล้ว +96

    This reminded me of Tucker Bryant's "Facts About Myself" poem . I love it !

    • @lilamu1493
      @lilamu1493 9 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Tucker probably inspired himself from Rudy, his poem is not new.

    • @Amiller816
      @Amiller816 9 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      +Mar'Che LeAnn Rudy orignally did this poem 5 years ago. Tucker took some of his lines from Rudy, which I believe is why Button posted Rudy's original one

    • @marcheleann
      @marcheleann 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      +Lila Mu ohhhhh

    • @marcheleann
      @marcheleann 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      +Andrew Miller that makes sense !

  • @keayrawillier9807
    @keayrawillier9807 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Been listening since I was 13. I’m 21 now I love Rudy 🥹

  • @MaggieFulmer
    @MaggieFulmer 9 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I've watched many live versions of this poem before. I love Rudy and he just seems to get better and better.

  • @Flimmy22
    @Flimmy22 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    “I wonder what the curtains would do if they found out all the things I've done behind their backs. I’ve got a hamper that’s overflowing with really, really loud mistakes. And a graveyard in my closet I’m afraid that if I let you see my skeletons, you’ll grind my bones into bones, and get on my fault lines.” - Rudy Francisco 🔥🔥🔥
    that was some moving he said❗

  • @ryanharris6833
    @ryanharris6833 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The entire poem was unbelievable. That last line that "God listens to my heart on his iPod"had me crying. Exactly what I needed to hear. *snaps* Mr. Francisco.

  • @betix95
    @betix95 9 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Diction :) I'm not a native speaker, so sometimes I struggle to understand the poets, but HE has a really good diction. And a talent, of course ;)

  • @iamrobynn638
    @iamrobynn638 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have to listen to this exact poem at least once every three months. Makes me realize we are all struggling and different.

  • @lilytorres1117
    @lilytorres1117 8 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I AM DONE THIS POEM TOOK MY BREATH AWAY....I HAVE NO WORDS

  • @HustlingJesus
    @HustlingJesus 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I seen him perform yesterday night & it was amazing. His new poem about his daughter is truly touching

  • @mizzyallen6843
    @mizzyallen6843 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I resonate deeply with this poem . I'm so overwhelmed I'm crying. This was so powerful. Thank you Rudy

  • @nettyk6862
    @nettyk6862 9 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    All I saw was Rudy and I automatically knew it was going to be a serenade to my ear

  • @jetoyeandrews9820
    @jetoyeandrews9820 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I fall more in love with every poem I hear from this man never stop performing 💜

  • @FirstThief
    @FirstThief 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    5 years later and it’s still one of my favorites

  • @tammythread6898
    @tammythread6898 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    trying to convince my shadow that I am someone worth following. Wow. That hit me hard. I had to take a breath, repeat and then marvel in its beauty. This is golden.

  • @kaolee4736
    @kaolee4736 8 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I can relate so much to this. God bless, man.

  • @carlawalker9649
    @carlawalker9649 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is absolutely incredible. Thank you, Rudy!

  • @Kamweshhh
    @Kamweshhh 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Happy birthday Rudy ❤❤❤❤

  • @myopinionSD
    @myopinionSD 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That hug part, that is so me.
    Snaps, snaps, snaps!

  • @khushbu_luhar
    @khushbu_luhar 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    "I never allow myself to cry as often as I need to."
    Each and every line hit home

  • @yeseniajimenez592
    @yeseniajimenez592 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love Rudy so much. Every time. amazing.

  • @craffte
    @craffte 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    OH. MY. LORD. wow. PLEASE do not stop writing. beautiful.

  • @morganpenelope8927
    @morganpenelope8927 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    My absolute favorite, forever and always.

  • @brandynpluchino1948
    @brandynpluchino1948 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    what I wouldn't give to watch Rudy my favorite button poet in person

  • @latrekistaboricuablogger7421
    @latrekistaboricuablogger7421 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy is just much needed LIGHT in this often dark world....plzzzzz let us know when you'll be in Charlotte

  • @allysenweisler161
    @allysenweisler161 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    this makes me cry because I relate to it so much and its finally put into words

  • @sexiiliexi
    @sexiiliexi 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy Francisco will forever be my favorite poet

  • @sheenachifamba2312
    @sheenachifamba2312 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    One of the best poems I have ever heard 😮

  • @9994L-g3k
    @9994L-g3k 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I always come back to this. the man who made me like poetry.

  • @Magpiebard
    @Magpiebard 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    Poems like this are the reason I subscribe to this channel. Just gorgeous.

  • @solarrae3667
    @solarrae3667 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is the one, I got goosebumps listening to this. The deeper you got, the more I felt your words and passion. I want to do a piece where I introduce myself as well, as you have made me want to tell my story too. Thank you!

  • @loganohlhaver1239
    @loganohlhaver1239 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The first time I watched this, it hit me so hard, I sat there in silence for a few minutes afterwards. Now I watch this all the time.

  • @cayesh1234
    @cayesh1234 8 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    "I have solar power confidence"
    YES.

  • @theiconicjade36
    @theiconicjade36 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is my favorite piece by him he absolutely snapped

  • @mexicanghostgirl2839
    @mexicanghostgirl2839 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    One of the best poets of our generation !

  • @eleanorelaborates7084
    @eleanorelaborates7084 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just discovered Rudy Francisco- his poetry is so relatable

  • @lornsokleng7807
    @lornsokleng7807 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    “I was born feet first and been backward ever since “ I can relate to that

  • @kairifan12
    @kairifan12 9 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    He has always been my favorite

  • @connieward9864
    @connieward9864 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love his heart and his honest words.

  • @aadhyajain7658
    @aadhyajain7658 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The power this man holds.🙌

  • @abdullahhassan9195
    @abdullahhassan9195 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Respect to all the poets out there

  • @Rita-zz9us
    @Rita-zz9us 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Am so happy I found this channel 😍
    "I have solar power confidence" got me

  • @curvaceousphotography1206
    @curvaceousphotography1206 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for sharing you and be brave enough to share what so many of us feel are afraid to.

  • @TaurusEyz
    @TaurusEyz ปีที่แล้ว

    This came across in an email and I had saved the link on my computer and then it died. I’m thankful I finally found this because I’m going to share. This is so powerful for anyone who needs empowerment and confidence in themselves.

    • @ButtonPoetry
      @ButtonPoetry  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What's meant to be seen will always circle back! So glad you found this poem again!

  • @gloriannawhiteman8605
    @gloriannawhiteman8605 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I felt that in my soul.

  • @scatterrealms5166
    @scatterrealms5166 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This punched me in the heart and rang it like a bell

  • @nicolestrickland90
    @nicolestrickland90 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is beyond breath-taking.

  • @adrianitaelena3693
    @adrianitaelena3693 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Rudy Francisco.

  • @BamalamGaming
    @BamalamGaming 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I connected to this poem so much and I can’t stop listening to it

  • @XTA1N0
    @XTA1N0 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy Fransisco is amazing...

  • @abbeycarter6952
    @abbeycarter6952 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy; I love you and you’re a beautiful person. Thank you for what you do

  • @vodkilifa
    @vodkilifa 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I feel this in my soul, this is so beautiful.

  • @made2love97
    @made2love97 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    I related so much to this that I'm currently speechless and frozen. So beautiful.

  • @aileenaudria2977
    @aileenaudria2977 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Such beautiful poetry...so honest.

  • @lovedichoreo1529
    @lovedichoreo1529 9 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    That reference to sandcastles and ice sculptures tho' and the comparison to wanting to love women who won't reciprocate or are unavailable

  • @ieuandeakin6497
    @ieuandeakin6497 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    i cannot wait to hear Rudy live in a couple of weeks

  • @KhushbooSinghQueenOfHearts
    @KhushbooSinghQueenOfHearts 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Beautifully written, beautifully spoken! ♥

  • @mousetrap8790
    @mousetrap8790 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is beautiful, brought tears to my eyes.

  • @keketaylor4781
    @keketaylor4781 9 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Whenever I see Rudy (I never read the rest) I just click. I drop everything to watch him. I loveeeeee him 😩

  • @leoni6980
    @leoni6980 9 ปีที่แล้ว

    Never related to something as much as I've related to this. It's like he's narrating my life story. Beautiful.

  • @thegirlfrompeacestreet
    @thegirlfrompeacestreet 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    "yesterday I tripped over my self esteem" I can relate !

  • @FerSanchezSwag
    @FerSanchezSwag 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    five years later this is still one of my favourite poems ever

  • @zaftigey4648
    @zaftigey4648 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am late, but right on time. Ty Rudy and PB for showing me what is possible in spoken word. This elevated my possibilities.

  • @ishaqa3569
    @ishaqa3569 9 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    "Heaven is full of music, and God listens to my heartbeat on his iPod" I love it

  • @vannaparish8016
    @vannaparish8016 9 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I love button poetry. they're amazing.

  • @hayleyduff
    @hayleyduff 9 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    unreal !! i have goosebumps

  • @heriethalexander5145
    @heriethalexander5145 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    When he bit his tongue and said hi my name is rudy ..my heart melted

  • @catherinenewton733
    @catherinenewton733 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have another new FAV poet, you Rudy Francisco have a amazing way with words......

  • @pauljarvis4132
    @pauljarvis4132 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love this guy Rudy Francisco Shit cuts deep

  • @officialkinxg693
    @officialkinxg693 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Rudy is definitely my favorite poet

  • @victoiretshitenge3123
    @victoiretshitenge3123 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This so amazing, and every time I listen to it it’s remind me of myself

  • @Bunny-ei1wx
    @Bunny-ei1wx 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I’ve watched this so many times i pretty much liked almost all the comments

  • @swagthabeats
    @swagthabeats 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    I appreciate this poem so much.

  • @zoeb.rush4
    @zoeb.rush4 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Watched this at school today and I started crying 😭