Did no one proofread this script? I'm only halfway through and we've already had the husband going off on nonsensical sidetracks and everything the sisters say is just repeated back and forth like 5 times.
Can’t decide what is worse. The horrible script, repeating shit over and over, the flat emotion in the main character voice, the cartoon voice for the guy or the INCREDIBLY awful fake crying by the sister. Better acting in middle school plays.
Yep ! It was annoying as hell. Him screaming (this VA is always screaming in his stories, it’s not even fun anymore, I hope he does not talk like this in real life) and his ex having such a bored tone has killed the fun. With less repeat you could have closed the story in 15mns by going straight to the point. So 👎
Spinal transplant? I thought it was a kidney transplant. Besides, there is no such thing as a spinal transplant. There are many ways to treat spinal problems.
Exactly. Even if this were a thing, it would be a cadaver, not a transplant from a living donor. They could have at least made the script believable by sticking with the usual kidney/liver transplant lines🙄
You seriously need to get your story right before uploading it Says sister, she’s only a step sister since she stated they don’t share blood relation And it’s not a kidney donation, but I’ve never heard of spinal fluid donation??? I’m actually laughing thru this whole story 😂😂😂
Paul: And what other choice did I have when you did nothing around the house all day OP: "In sickness and in health"... Does that phrase sound familiar? Re: Paul The DARVO is strong in that one.
Ok I know that I have ADHD so my brain can be a bit “off” but this story is all over the place even for me. It’s like the writer had 2 incomplete stories that hey were working on at the same time & somehow got the two stories mixed together. Someone really needs to be better about proof reading these before they are published.
Oh, Debbie! Stealin' your sister's husband from her 🎵is nothin' to be proud of / not a life you can hang a hat on / that's a chin held low / a butt stuck out / a good spankin' is happenin' now / so you're askin' for a kidney / you can't be serious really / if he could be stolen / that can't be true love / so it's nothin' to be proud of🎵 (to the tune of "Somethin' To Be Proud Of" by Montgomery Gentry.....may the Gentry in that duo RIP)
What is up with this script? It's like they think we have the memory of a goldfish and have to keep repeating to same information, over and over again. This 24 minute story could've been 10 minutes, saving us a lot of boredom. After 10 minutes of repetition, I skipped to the last 5, just out of curiosity, to see how it ended.
This guy never lets you down, he shouts in every text story he's in and for me spoils the storyline every time! There must be other VA's who would handle the role in a much calmer and passionate manner, I'm surprised that nobody has said anything to him, it makes a mockery of a good story!
One of the things that these videos never address is that the spouse is not the one you sue in an alienation of affection lawsuit. It’s only directed at the third party. If that person doesn’t have a lot of money, you are probably wasting your time and your money. It’s very expensive to sue, and there are only 6 states in the country that even allow it. The courts don’t like it, and they are trying to do away with the law allowing it in some of these states. It can also be very difficult to prove even with evidence.
Sister has lower back issues, Paul isn't specific about the problem, but he somehow knows she needs a donor. And Ginny mentioned spinal fluid before it was mentioned to her. Story continuity issues? Script writer: "I know, I'll have one character speak their lines. Then, I'll have the other character respond by repeating back to them what they just said. (Oscar material if I ever saw it)" Damn! Debbie's good. She not only repeated what was said to her, she repeated it AGAIN with more detail for emphasis. And Ginny responds in kind. And Debbie comes back again stating the same thing. OH MY GOD! This video could have come in at under ten minutes, if you took out all of the repetition. Wait until Rotten Tomatoes hears about this.
NO the donor doesn't have to be family that's why most people choose to be donors. And Paul can't make anybody do what he wants. So is it a kidney that Debbie needs or is it back surgery that she needs? I guess Paul doesn't understand those vows he took. Wait Debbie is ok cheating with her sisters husband but it's not ok that he cheated on her? WOW that's some crappy double standards, Debbie doesn't deserve to win a lawsuit. Can you guys maybe I don't know put some emotion in any of this crap? and please stop making the guy's voice sound like some cartoon villain.
.....Did an AI chatbot write this script? Its like listening to 'The Court of King Caractacus' with even more exposition. Way too long-winded, down-voted and did not finish the video. Have fun with that in your algorithms 🙄
![[Apple] My toxic mother returned after many years to take my kidney, but I only have one left...](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/cFo3Um3oJ24/mqdefault.jpg)
Even a goldfish would be annoyed by the repetition.
When will people learn. If they cheat WITH you.
They will cheat ON you.
You’re not lying Sister!
Did no one proofread this script? I'm only halfway through and we've already had the husband going off on nonsensical sidetracks and everything the sisters say is just repeated back and forth like 5 times.
I'm in that bit now with the sisters going back and forth, and I'm getting dizzy!
@@carolroberts4614just got past that and was wondering why my head hurt
Yah but didn't you appreciate how fast and whiney the sister talked AND all in one breath. I found myself taking in a breath for her. Lol 😆
Feels like a drinking game
They are repeating the same things !! Too much
Can’t decide what is worse.
The horrible script, repeating shit over and over, the flat emotion in the main character voice, the cartoon voice for the guy or the INCREDIBLY awful fake crying by the sister. Better acting in middle school plays.
I don't know what happened, these used to be better. The acting was so much more emotional, just better. I miss those.
ALL of it is shitty, that's why I wish we still had the other channels back.
@@samanthashaverI’m beginning to consider the text to speech one’s is that bad?
For Christ's sake, we got! You slept with her husband, which led to her divorce, and you married her ex!
They said this line 50 times. 😂
Her voice. She sounds like she’s always sarcastic and matter of fact and nothing will make her happy
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Then Paul, why are you calling your ex for, so if you are so happy DO NOT CALL HER.
I know right
Because miserable people feed off another’s misery so work hard to make sure they are
Debbie's biggest crime was her sentences running on and on about everying.
Jeez Debbie you did all that Steal your family husband from her ,,you can't have your cake and eat it too,you and Paul are 🤢🥱🙄🤮😔😏🙄
Good morning, everyone. Normally decent stories but this story is ridiculous.
OMG are they related to Mojo Jojo? They keep overexplaining things. And it's spinal fluid, not a kidney donor. Did any thought go into this writing?
Yep ! It was annoying as hell. Him screaming (this VA is always screaming in his stories, it’s not even fun anymore, I hope he does not talk like this in real life) and his ex having such a bored tone has killed the fun.
With less repeat you could have closed the story in 15mns by going straight to the point. So 👎
Spinal transplant? I thought it was a kidney transplant. Besides, there is no such thing as a spinal transplant. There are many ways to treat spinal problems.
Exactly. Even if this were a thing, it would be a cadaver, not a transplant from a living donor. They could have at least made the script believable by sticking with the usual kidney/liver transplant lines🙄
I was thinking about the same thing, donate spinal fluid??? What is that???
Paul would be a criminal if he escape his job and the countryside to get his own revenge
Spinal fluid. Not spine.
This video would have been 4 minutes if they didn't constantly repeat what the other person said.
I'm done. The "what do you mean" over and over and over is exhausting. I see her converation with her sister is worse? F*** that.
Oh, right Paul. Start out insulting and demeaning the person that you need for your wife?? What an insufferable creep.
How many times is Debbie going to repeat the same damn thing over and over.....🥱🥱🥱
OMG too much repetition. Ridiculous.
Delusional Debbie 😂🤣,And Paul
You seriously need to get your story right before uploading it
Says sister, she’s only a step sister since she stated they don’t share blood relation
And it’s not a kidney donation, but I’ve never heard of spinal fluid donation???
I’m actually laughing thru this whole story 😂😂😂
I don't wanna hear another peep outta either of you, Paul and Debbie!!
Paul: "When are you going to get over the past, huh?!"
OP: "When you stop reminding me every damn time and go back to any cave you came from!"
Paul: And what other choice did I have when you did nothing around the house all day
OP: "In sickness and in health"... Does that phrase sound familiar?
Re: Paul
The DARVO is strong in that one.
Ok I know that I have ADHD so my brain can be a bit “off” but this story is all over the place even for me. It’s like the writer had 2 incomplete stories that hey were working on at the same time & somehow got the two stories mixed together. Someone really needs to be better about proof reading these before they are published.
"Just hand over your spine.".... nope
Oh, Debbie! Stealin' your sister's husband from her 🎵is nothin' to be proud of / not a life you can hang a hat on / that's a chin held low / a butt stuck out / a good spankin' is happenin' now / so you're askin' for a kidney / you can't be serious really / if he could be stolen / that can't be true love / so it's nothin' to be proud of🎵 (to the tune of "Somethin' To Be Proud Of" by Montgomery Gentry.....may the Gentry in that duo RIP)
👍 Happy Tuesday 👋🤗🌮
Well this is a rip off of a rip off of another rip off. It's sad
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What is up with this script? It's like they think we have the memory of a goldfish and have to keep repeating to same information, over and over again. This 24 minute story could've been 10 minutes, saving us a lot of boredom. After 10 minutes of repetition, I skipped to the last 5, just out of curiosity, to see how it ended.
repeated story
Ginny please stick to your guns and don't back down no matter what you do
A lot of repetition. And Debbie was the traitor first, so she should shut up.
script is very good and interesting
Expository overload
Absolutely Terrible. Look this over. I can't hear u crying ....... over text.
🤔🤔Guys is the male voice Ray Barone?😅😅
Run-on sentences much?
This guy never lets you down, he shouts in every text story he's in and for me spoils the storyline every time! There must be other VA's who would handle the role in a much calmer and passionate manner, I'm surprised that nobody has said anything to him, it makes a mockery of a good story!
One of the things that these videos never address is that the spouse is not the one you sue in an alienation of affection lawsuit. It’s only directed at the third party. If that person doesn’t have a lot of money, you are probably wasting your time and your money. It’s very expensive to sue, and there are only 6 states in the country that even allow it. The courts don’t like it, and they are trying to do away with the law allowing it in some of these states. It can also be very difficult to prove even with evidence.
Are they making these scripts for aliens or people with short term memory issues? The re-explanations are TIRING
There was a story where a character broke the 4th wall and mentioned the repeating was the writer having to meet a certain word count for the story.
Starting to get the feeling that he's cheating on his wife with her sister behind her back😂😂
I like this voice of the female actor
Paul seems to be a little excited
I enjoyed listening to this one
Sister has lower back issues, Paul isn't specific about the problem, but he somehow knows she needs a donor. And Ginny mentioned spinal fluid before it was mentioned to her. Story continuity issues?
Script writer: "I know, I'll have one character speak their lines. Then, I'll have the other character respond by repeating back to them what they just said. (Oscar material if I ever saw it)"
Damn! Debbie's good. She not only repeated what was said to her, she repeated it AGAIN with more detail for emphasis. And Ginny responds in kind. And Debbie comes back again stating the same thing.
OH MY GOD! This video could have come in at under ten minutes, if you took out all of the repetition.
Wait until Rotten Tomatoes hears about this.
sister had already talked to sister before ex husband did.
@@barbarajoyce6424: No she didn't. She tells Paul that this is first she's hearing about it before she talks to Debbie.
Ofc he cheated from his new wife lol
Just don't answer him
Who does Paul think that he is? He's her ex husband and she doesn't owe her sister anything. He and her sister are Aholes.
Lol ....everything is happening around the word back...!!! Karma is a bitch....!!
NO the donor doesn't have to be family that's why most people choose to be donors. And Paul can't make anybody do what he wants. So is it a kidney that Debbie needs or is it back surgery that she needs? I guess Paul doesn't understand those vows he took. Wait Debbie is ok cheating with her sisters husband but it's not ok that he cheated on her? WOW that's some crappy double standards, Debbie doesn't deserve to win a lawsuit. Can you guys maybe I don't know put some emotion in any of this crap? and please stop making the guy's voice sound like some cartoon villain.
Did Debbie have an affair with her husband causing them to get divorced and then Debbie married her ex-husband? Just want to make sure.
Debbie quit whining you betrayed her first
make him stop yelling please.....
Do you get paid by the word?
I know they think they're clever by writing dialog like this. Horrible and stupid
Geez spout the same thing over and over again my god and can the va be any more bland and robotic 🤖
Yeah, this was really badly written.
Plot twist: They hired Vicki The Robot from the Small Wonder series. At least that's what they might as well have done.
Wow the two sisters have explained this story like 12 times in a row, do better.
Um....Just hand over your spine? Really? I think that the writers need a new class in English.
Donate spinal fluid?
.....Did an AI chatbot write this script? Its like listening to 'The Court of King Caractacus' with even more exposition.
Way too long-winded, down-voted and did not finish the video. Have fun with that in your algorithms 🙄
No they never do. It’s terrible. Just copy and paste from other channels.
Terrible story! Words are left the story all mixed up! Doe anyone proofread this things?
Omfg stop repeating everything. Good lord thats annoying. We dont need a recap every 2 sec
Huh😒🤔🤔🤔🤔😴😴
This is stupid 😕
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