This is amazing, I came here right after having read the story and this really portrays the anxiety of the original!! And that soundtrack fits so well. I don't understand how this doesn't have a million views!
Thoroughly blown away by the work you are producing, please keep it up!!! I cant even begin to imagine how much time, effort and energy this one took you. Thank you! I hope my students will like it as much as I do!!!
Gorgeous work man ! Very scary the part inside the burrow ! Just one note: I would have preferred that the final monster remained a supposition of the protagonist !
Still beautiful work :) I am finishing my 3rd literary seminar, and am rereading the Burrow to include it in some capacity. I hope you are doing well!!!!!
Nice to hear from you again! I’m doing quite well. Been productive thanks to all the new generative AI stuff, which is nice. Good luck with the literary seminar!
Myrto H The composer is Robert Bruce and the piece is called "Circles". It's in the end credits. It's a fantastic neoclassical piece and I think it complements the thematic content of the Kafka source material nicely. Upon hearing it I knew there was no question as to whether or not it would be included.
Beautiful set design, I loved the forest especially. My main critique is that I think it could've been executed better. The pacing was too slow and I watched for four minutes to find that still nothing was happening. I understand you have to set the scene, but I was too bored to keep watching. Try to capture your audiences attention more by having a stronger narrative and something to focus on. The opening just seemed like a jumble of stills that had overdosed on the Ken Burns effect. However, as a fellow animator, I know how much work you must have put into this piece. You should definitely be proud and keep making more!!
@@FRandAI Thanks for reading it, I hope I wasn't too harsh. We learn more from the criticisms than from the compliments… although compliments never hurt. Great video with fantastic sets and awesome characters :)
Expertly done. Captures the anxiety and the paranoia behind the text beautifully.
Just wish it coukd be longer ;)
This is amazing, I came here right after having read the story and this really portrays the anxiety of the original!! And that soundtrack fits so well. I don't understand how this doesn't have a million views!
Diego G Thank you for the very kind comment.
Kafka is something of an acquired taste, & this is a lesser known work..
Truly unbelievable... Thanks for sharing with us... Keep it up with these great masterpieces.
Thank you for the kind words!
Thoroughly blown away by the work you are producing, please keep it up!!! I cant even begin to imagine how much time, effort and energy this one took you. Thank you! I hope my students will like it as much as I do!!!
I loved it ! Now I'm curious to read the story. Carry on this is really cool :)
Really enjoyed. Thanks for making and sharing
This was a great presentation of the story! Well done!!! (Kyriakos Chalkopoulos)
very impressed pls make more
Gorgeous work man ! Very scary the part inside the burrow ! Just one note: I would have preferred that the final monster remained a supposition of the protagonist !
Thanks for the kind words.
Hmmmm, is it *certain* whether or not it was a supposition? 😉
Still beautiful work :) I am finishing my 3rd literary seminar, and am rereading the Burrow to include it in some capacity. I hope you are doing well!!!!!
Nice to hear from you again! I’m doing quite well. Been productive thanks to all the new generative AI stuff, which is nice. Good luck with the literary seminar!
Very nicely done
This perfectly expresses the paranoid vigilance of the covid-19 experience.
This will give me nightmares. Great work!! What's the music in the introduction? Please credit the musicians
Myrto H The composer is Robert Bruce and the piece is called "Circles". It's in the end credits. It's a fantastic neoclassical piece and I think it complements the thematic content of the Kafka source material nicely. Upon hearing it I knew there was no question as to whether or not it would be included.
@@FRandAI I'm apologise for not noticing the credits. Great work again, I do agree with you about the music fitting perfectly. Have a lovely day!
Beautiful set design, I loved the forest especially.
My main critique is that I think it could've been executed better.
The pacing was too slow and I watched for four minutes to find that still nothing was happening. I understand you have to set the scene, but I was too bored to keep watching. Try to capture your audiences attention more by having a stronger narrative and something to focus on. The opening just seemed like a jumble of stills that had overdosed on the Ken Burns effect.
However, as a fellow animator, I know how much work you must have put into this piece. You should definitely be proud and keep making more!!
Thanks for watching and giving your critique.
@@FRandAI Thanks for reading it, I hope I wasn't too harsh.
We learn more from the criticisms than from the compliments… although compliments never hurt.
Great video with fantastic sets and awesome characters :)
@@CrocaHead Thank you. I don’t mind harsh criticism. People can say whatever they want.
I don’t get it
Good animation, but the "protagonist" looks too much like a teddy bear, so all the angst of Kafka's original is lost.
Thank you for offering your critique.
I love it. ❤️❤️
Why I can’t find you on instagram? I would love to talk films with you.
I’m on Instagram. I just barely interact there.
@@FRandAI if you don’t mind, I would love to connect with you. I am also a big Kafka Lover and trying to get into films.