Credit where credit is due: Speaking as an old newspaper editor, I see decent plotting, good characterization, good description, good foreshadowing, though it could be more subtle, and emotionally effective and affective. There are very few stories here on which I would spend two parts, but this one had me from the get go. Well done!
Wow...... you must have sucked as an editor because this title does not even match the story ? Clearly they found him and he is not that cunning, F-ing Boring story !
@@chrisbutler1176 The clickbait titles almost never match the story. That's a given. Also, in terms relative to the usual incomprehensible schlock that most of these stories are, this one, though boring, at least can be followed by the average reader. It is even apparent, usually, who is speaking at any given moment, a rarity in this genre. I would be delighted to edit your prose any time.
Robert suffered the most because people all used him and the only one who didn't ask anything of him and cared for him the Most was Mary as she was his Savior and the one he should give his heart to. Peg was easily manipulated and not a strong woman like Mary and can only hope her two daughters will possess more of their fathers instinct and intellect.
WTF the title of the story dose not even match the story? It starts with him talking to his family explaining his disappearence? How is he cunning when they clearly found him? This story is BS and sucks, boring! Wish I could revese time and get an hour of my life back.
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Credit where credit is due: Speaking as an old newspaper editor, I see decent plotting, good characterization, good description, good foreshadowing, though it could be more subtle, and emotionally effective and affective. There are very few stories here on which I would spend two parts, but this one had me from the get go. Well done!
Wow...... you must have sucked as an editor because this title does not even match the story ? Clearly they found him and he is not that cunning, F-ing Boring story !
@@chrisbutler1176 The clickbait titles almost never match the story. That's a given. Also, in terms relative to the usual incomprehensible schlock that most of these stories are, this one, though boring, at least can be followed by the average reader. It is even apparent, usually, who is speaking at any given moment, a rarity in this genre. I would be delighted to edit your prose any time.
An exiting and almost happy ending story. I loved it.
Good story. I listen regularly
This story is unbelievable. They could have showed the video to the police.
Robert and Peg should get back together.
A heartfelt story
I hope he gets back on his feet and marries Mary!!
Robert suffered the most because people all used him and the only one who didn't ask anything of him and cared for him the Most was Mary as she was his Savior and the one he should give his heart to. Peg was easily manipulated and not a strong woman like Mary and can only hope her two daughters will possess more of their fathers instinct and intellect.
Very good
Yeah Rite Peg Didn't No Robert Was Gone😮😮
Poor Robert😮😮
Nice
Charlie's A Nasty Fog😮😮😮
Oh God Not Charlie😮😮😮
Boring 😮
How's it boring
@@Funcreativity-Ij it it is to me
sucked
Dog
WTF the title of the story dose not even match the story? It starts with him talking to his family explaining his disappearence? How is he cunning when they clearly found him? This story is BS and sucks, boring! Wish I could revese time and get an hour of my life back.
I guess Charlie isn't the only heartless person