the levels are good, but editing out the mess ups will a best critique. also try to get a pop filter your P are too loud. Editing would be best and try to multiple takes of different sentences, sometimes you timing is a little off like the wait at the end of a sentence is tiny bit took long. but the more you do this the better you will get keep it up. you definitely have got changing from narrating to characters talking. just some tips to help you mate, routing for you.
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Man this is as good as I expected it to be.
DON'T WORRY I'LL WATCH IT 1000 TIMES
Can we get this to 1000 views? Share it around people!
Great job, really appreciate this
Not bad would love to see more
Looking forward to this series!
the levels are good, but editing out the mess ups will a best critique. also try to get a pop filter your P are too loud. Editing would be best and try to multiple takes of different sentences, sometimes you timing is a little off like the wait at the end of a sentence is tiny bit took long. but the more you do this the better you will get keep it up. you definitely have got changing from narrating to characters talking. just some tips to help you mate, routing for you.
Yea when I was editing I realized the pop filter thing. Thanks for the feedback bro!
Aye keep it up bro!
Good video
Keep doing them so far so good
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Great!
Any update on the next chapter
My computer completely shit itself lost like 3 or 4 chapters of recordings getting a new one on monday. I'm sorry for that man.
Ok glad your still planning on continuing