You putting in some extra work with the visuals and I wanna let u know I appreciate it, it deff made me listen to the beat longer but there are lil pitch things with your melody that goes into the verses that can throw someone off (just on this beat) I say this to say even though that is the case I come away from the video thinking this is a good beat because of the full presentation and the main melody being nice but just be careful with your artistic flurishes that extend outside of the key that you're playing in, if you wanna do that make sure to extend only one step up or down from the proper ending note of that melody (in that key) and only do it as the last note of a pattern to add flare and push the ear outside of the key but then it goes right back into the key so it sounds correct (or "jazz" like). I hope i'm not ramblin at this point 😂 keep doing your thing! 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
also be aware of what bass notes you use like those bass notes when it goes into the verse should go the opposite direction like they do the thing I described in the end of my comment but it started way before the last note so it sounds like an error but what I mean is if you put the note lower than the proper note instead of higher in this instance it would probably sound good even though the out of key note starts before the last note.
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![[free for profit] ambient x experimental x supertrap x grim brxzy x type beat - " xenomorph"](/img/tr.png)
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Bpm : 140
Key : A# Minor
You putting in some extra work with the visuals and I wanna let u know I appreciate it, it deff made me listen to the beat longer but there are lil pitch things with your melody that goes into the verses that can throw someone off (just on this beat) I say this to say even though that is the case I come away from the video thinking this is a good beat because of the full presentation and the main melody being nice but just be careful with your artistic flurishes that extend outside of the key that you're playing in, if you wanna do that make sure to extend only one step up or down from the proper ending note of that melody (in that key) and only do it as the last note of a pattern to add flare and push the ear outside of the key but then it goes right back into the key so it sounds correct (or "jazz" like). I hope i'm not ramblin at this point 😂 keep doing your thing! 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
also be aware of what bass notes you use like those bass notes when it goes into the verse should go the opposite direction like they do the thing I described in the end of my comment but it started way before the last note so it sounds like an error but what I mean is if you put the note lower than the proper note instead of higher in this instance it would probably sound good even though the out of key note starts before the last note.