Hey everyone, thank you so much for all your support. Check out the video I was referring to here. Let's make our own story!! th-cam.com/video/3gF5mn3ZSac/w-d-xo.html
Don’t apologize for the time taken my friend. Focus on the quality first. Quantity will come with time. This is another good chapter. I look forward to seeing where we go from here.
Yea great point haha, he aint too far off the mark! And Anakin was, in a way, brainwashed, but of course it was still his decision to embrace the darkness.
What if Count Dooku *was* General Grevious? Instead of Grevious, Dooku suffers a horrific injury and is forced into the suit originally reserved for Dooku
I personally am not a huge fan of force healing since we never saw it in the original 6 films, and it would feel a little out of a place here but thats a cool idea and maybe you could use it in your own what if!
I watched the vid, I thought it was a great idea. This is the only channel willing to try and have the commenters come up with story ideas. For me, I personally do prefer star wars at a Star Wars channel. But you also offered people could submit their own ideas if they didn't agree with yours. And that was fine, so I tried to submit a chapter 1 for Star Wars with unique characters. But.....my chapter was too long or something, the comment section wouldn't allow me to submit the reply. So....with the comments so limited, I was thinking if you could maybe offer an email system, or a blog, something somewhere to properly place these chapters for you to retrieve, and possibly use in a video on your channel for all to see/hear....maybe that would work better. Otherwise, these chapters people submit might be so small no one will probably be able to grasp the characters being developed in the stories submitted. That is my suggestion. Then when that chapter is mentioned in a vid, people can submit the next chapter. With enough people trying to right the next chapter, maybe it could even develop in competition where people vote for the best 'next chapter', then you turn the winner into a video. This could end up becoming something pretty cool....in my opinion.
Take your time. Quality is far more important. Some of the youtubers I follow upload videos months or YEARS apart. Good content is worth the wait. Vader has learned Sith Lightining! The Jedi are going to have a problem when it turns out that the Sith Master they've been looking for had been replaced by another, far more powerful one. Yet he still has his greatest weakness: crippling fear of losing his loved ones. Anakin's decision to get the hell away is entirely reasonable, given his limited knowledge. If his plan succeeds, he's in for a disappointment when he attempts to set course for Coruscant and the astromech/navicomputer returns no such planet...
I really appreciate your patience and compliments! Yea I am SO excited for Vader to use sith lightning, and his fear of losing his loved ones is his greatest weakness, but also, perhaps it could turn into a strength... Also, I'm curious as to why Coruscant wouldn't turn up on the computer? It wasn't blown up or anything
I'm sorry for replying so late, I somehow missed the notification on this one. I do not think Vader's possessiveness - or any Sith quality - could ever be a strength; if anything, it would send him further down the Dark Side. During the final confrontation in RotJ, to save Luke, he had to let him go (since Vader knew that going against Sidious would very likely kill him). At the end, he was also telling Luke to let go; something he had been unable to do himself for almost all of his life. I view all of this from a heavily pro-Jedi perspective. Regarding the name - the out-of-universe explanation: in the OT, that planet was called the Imperial Center; the name "Coruscant" first appeared in the Thrawn Trilogy and was canonized by Lucas in TPM. Personally, I think that Palpatine renaming Coruscant would be silly (and I like to imagine it never happened)... But yeah, that's canon, even if it's just because of preserving continuity.
@@ralphfrederickdouglasohh haha thats so silly but totally something Sidious would do. Maybe if the user searches Coruscant it automatically redirects to the Imperial Center, like when you search a website's old name and it redirects to you to the same site even though the name has changed
What if the Dragonborn was in One Piece? Prologue Pt. 1 He had done it. Dovahkiin had finally achieved victory over Alduin. All he had to do was wait for his final battle so he could return to Sovngarde to feast forevermore with his predecessors. However, the All-Maker had different plans. "Contact the friend of the Skaal and deliver this message. Your task is not yet complete. There are more foes that must be defeated. Meet me in Sovngarde for your final instructions." Frea jolted up with a look of bewilderment on her face. It had only been a couple of weeks since she and Dovahkiin had spoken with each other. Frea went to the basin in her home to splash some water in her face in order to drive the sleepiness from her eyes. She then sat down at her desk to write what would probably be a very confusing letter to Dovahkiin. Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend The All-Maker wishes to meet you in Sovngarde, where you defeated the World Eater. He says that your task is not yet complete. There are more foes that must be defeated. Beyond that, I do not know what he wants. Make haste. Time is of the essence. Your eternal ally, Frea Frea then sealed the letter with a magic rune that would only release when in Dovahkiin's hands. And with that done, she geared up for the trip to Raven Rock and set out. After three days, she arrived in Raven Rock. Thankfully, Captain Gjalund was there. "Captain Gjalund, I need you to deliver this letter to our mutual friend, Dovahkiin. I'm afraid that time is of the essence," said Frea. "Fear not, we are now headed back to Windhelm, and I shall personally deliver your letter," Gjalund replied. Three Days Later Through the use of messenger hawks, Captain Gjalund found out that Dovahkiin was in Windhelm. "Thank the Nine," he muttered. Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend was a very busy man, leading the Thieves Guild, the Dark Brotherhood, the College of Winterhold, and the Companions. He also had very little time for personal pursuits. However, he was able to devote some of his time to ensuring the continuation of his legacy, and that is what he was doing when he received an urgent knocking on his door. "I'm glad I caught you at home," Gjalund said excitedly. "I have a letter for you from Frea." Dovahkiin instantly knew what was going on. "Here's some gold for you and your crew. Words can not express how much this means to me." Dovahkiin then handed a purse with 5,000 gold coins to Captain Gjalund. As soon as Captain Gjalund left, Dovahkiin called on his acolytes, ordering them to escort the second in command from each of the guilds, from the Dark Brotherhood, Nazir, from the Thieves Guild, Karliah, from the Companions, Aela, and from the College of Winterhold, Tolfdir. When the Lieutenants of each guild arrived at the predetermined meeting spot, Dovahkiin called the meeting to order. "You all knew this day was coming. To Tolfdir, the master wizard of the College of Winterhold, I leave the Archmage's robes, The Black Star, The Staff of Magnus, and the keys to my old quarters Try to integrate the College with the rest of Skyrim and pledge your services to High King Ulfric. To Karliah, I leave the Guild Master's Armor, The Amulet of Articulation, and the key to the Tribute Chest. I also want you to pledge your services to High King Ulfric. Steal from the enemies of Skyrim, especially if they're allied with the Dominion. To Nazir, I leave the Ancient Shrouded Armor, the Blade of Woe, and this task, find the next Listener. Just like the other two, I want you to pledge your services to High King Ulfric. He still has enemies who want him dead. Eliminate those enemies. To Aela, my most trusted ally, I leave Wuuthrad, the Harbinger's Armor, and these quests, build a secondary location in Windhelm and guard High King Ulfric with your lives. I look forward to seeing you all in Sovngarde. May the All-Maker guide each of your steps." Dovahkiin was on his way to Skuldafn when he heard the roars of two more allies, Odahviing and Paarthurnax. As was customary, Dovahkiin and the two dragons greeted each other with the fire breath shout, "Yol Toor Shul!" Causing a fire tornado for a short while. "Drem Yol Lok, Odahviing and Paarthurnax. Why are you here?" Dovahkiin asked. In his semi cryptic manner, Paarthurnax responded, "We are here because you are here. We know that the All-Maker is sending you on your final mission. And we wish to join you." Dovahkiin pondered this for a few moments before responding, "Odahviing can come with me if he wishes, but you have responsibilities here on Tamriel. You must teach the other dragons to live in harmony with men and mer. But if you must come, I will ask the All-Maker to reincarnate your soul where I'm at, wherever that may be." Paarthurnax seemed to be taken aback by the choice of words, but he relented and said, "Su'um Arkh Morah. Breath and Focus Dovahkiin." Soon after, Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend mounted his ally, Odahviing. "Please take me to Skuldafn," he said, and with that, Odahviing took off.
This is such a cool story!! I would suggest you post this comment on the video I have linked in the pinned comment, called "Lets Make Our Own Story Through TH-cam Comments" because your story might end up being buried here
I found this channel a little while back, but I want to give you feedback on what I think can be improved or how to make it more engaging. Most Star Wars what-if channels are pretty low quality, but I see a lot of potential for you. So here are some suggestions to make you truly stand out more: Your music choices are fairly good, but they tend to be somewhat repetitive. You want that dark undertone given what's happening, but try to give it some variety that adds different elements other than just that dark humming sound. But, there was at least one choice for music that made the scene hard to listen to. The music at the 16:42 mark took away from the scene since it feels like it's not taking itself all that seriously, which is a stark contrast with the rest of the story that you're presenting. Add more voice acting scenes, and work on improving your voice acting. This is an element that many stories try to use. Many use A.I as a crutch, but it comes across as lifeless. You have a pretty deep voice and you speak clearly, so with some work from TH-cam for improving your voice acting, I can see you doing very well in that area over time and it would make the engagement so much more interesting. The images tend to be stale; try to give them some life. Perhaps add some movement to the bodies within the image when your characters interact with one another or for scene interactions in your narration rather than just giving movement to the image itself. In regards to views: Try to keep your upload consistent and at least once a week. Nothing kills the views on a channel faster than an inconsistent schedule and videos that only occasionally pop up, and I'd try not to keep *too* long on one story; you can observe the views on each video tending to go downwards, videos that contain many parts for the same story tends to die no matter how good it's. So keep that in mind if it seems disheartening when the views go down over time for a series. But you're an extremely good storyteller, and I love how you keep things (At least to the best of your abilities) realistic with how the characters would really interact with the what-if premise. Many storytellers try not to deviate from Canon to the best of their ability, but that gets dull quite fast. I at least want to see how the galaxy at large changes from these major storyline changes given from the premise. ;)
I really appreciate your taking the time to comment, and I assure you, all of these criticisms you are naming have already been noticed by myself. As mentioned in the video, if I had the time and money, I would love to be able to put out higher quality more consistent content!
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Hey everyone, thank you so much for all your support. Check out the video I was referring to here. Let's make our own story!!
th-cam.com/video/3gF5mn3ZSac/w-d-xo.html
Please do not let the flame of this series die out it's been a great listen and return to listen again video series.
This is an excellent series. Thank you for creating this.
Thank you for watching and commenting!
Don’t apologize for the time taken my friend. Focus on the quality first. Quantity will come with time. This is another good chapter. I look forward to seeing where we go from here.
Thank you so much for your consideration and patience my friend. I greatly appreciate it
"only to then demonstrate his unlimited power, his unlimited DECEIT" thats such a good line 😂😂
Hahaha thanks, you could tell Vader was salty 😂
Hell yeah I’ve been waiting for this! Keep up the great work!
Thank you!!! Youre awesome
I’m so excited! It should be a crime to be this underrated with such splendid ideas and good quality videos. Love it!
Wow your words feel super great to read, I really appreciate it my friend
@@Randomthew Of course! I’ll stay tuned to see what else you got cooking up. Take the time you need. I will look forward to it
@@silverflower72 I'll look forward to more bird videos from ya too!
3:10 I mean, he's not *completely* wrong in that assumption. The Sith *are* technically a cult..
Yea great point haha, he aint too far off the mark! And Anakin was, in a way, brainwashed, but of course it was still his decision to embrace the darkness.
LET’S GO!!!!
Btw you’re really quiet and I have my headphones at 90%
Either that or Costa is loud.
Haha I believe it may be Costa Rica 😂 thanks for watching!!
finaly
Thank you for your patience haha!! And thank you for watching I really appreciate it!!!
Still waiting for 6th episode 😢@Randomthew
@@Wasilele stay tuned, its coming out today 😉
I can't wait for part 6!!! But if I wake up in an strange ship i would check the computer at first to find out what time is it before i make a move.
Thats a good idea as well, in hindsight thats what Anakin probably would have done, there probably would have been computers in that room he was in
What if Count Dooku *was* General Grevious? Instead of Grevious, Dooku suffers a horrific injury and is forced into the suit originally reserved for Dooku
That sounds so terrifying, a General Grevious with the skill in lightsaber dueling of Dooku and the ability to use the force? Oh snap
I can’t wait for part 6! Subscribed and Liked!
I really appreciate your support and encouragement 😊
Hey take your time, I'm loving this series and I'd rather you take your time to make it good!!
Man you're so awesome for saying that
I love this Channel so much! I missed your last video because ive been working overtime nonstop but i will definitely smash like and comment.
No worries my friend, I have also been busy!! Thanks for the support
I wonder if force healing is going to come into play for the Anakin trapped in Vader's body.
I personally am not a huge fan of force healing since we never saw it in the original 6 films, and it would feel a little out of a place here but thats a cool idea and maybe you could use it in your own what if!
I watched the vid, I thought it was a great idea. This is the only channel willing to try and have the commenters come up with story ideas. For me, I personally do prefer star wars at a Star Wars channel. But you also offered people could submit their own ideas if they didn't agree with yours. And that was fine, so I tried to submit a chapter 1 for Star Wars with unique characters. But.....my chapter was too long or something, the comment section wouldn't allow me to submit the reply.
So....with the comments so limited, I was thinking if you could maybe offer an email system, or a blog, something somewhere to properly place these chapters for you to retrieve, and possibly use in a video on your channel for all to see/hear....maybe that would work better. Otherwise, these chapters people submit might be so small no one will probably be able to grasp the characters being developed in the stories submitted. That is my suggestion.
Then when that chapter is mentioned in a vid, people can submit the next chapter. With enough people trying to right the next chapter, maybe it could even develop in competition where people vote for the best 'next chapter', then you turn the winner into a video. This could end up becoming something pretty cool....in my opinion.
Keep up the good work! I do enjoy your story line. Thank you!
Thanks man!! I really appreciate you
I've been looking forward to this!
My suggestion for what to call the comment-chain storytelling is just "Relay-Storytelling"
Thats actually a great name! Maybe I will use that name and give you the credit, if the "Lets Make Our Own Story" series takes off
Take your time. Quality is far more important. Some of the youtubers I follow upload videos months or YEARS apart. Good content is worth the wait.
Vader has learned Sith Lightining! The Jedi are going to have a problem when it turns out that the Sith Master they've been looking for had been replaced by another, far more powerful one. Yet he still has his greatest weakness: crippling fear of losing his loved ones.
Anakin's decision to get the hell away is entirely reasonable, given his limited knowledge. If his plan succeeds, he's in for a disappointment when he attempts to set course for Coruscant and the astromech/navicomputer returns no such planet...
I really appreciate your patience and compliments! Yea I am SO excited for Vader to use sith lightning, and his fear of losing his loved ones is his greatest weakness, but also, perhaps it could turn into a strength...
Also, I'm curious as to why Coruscant wouldn't turn up on the computer? It wasn't blown up or anything
I'm sorry for replying so late, I somehow missed the notification on this one.
I do not think Vader's possessiveness - or any Sith quality - could ever be a strength; if anything, it would send him further down the Dark Side. During the final confrontation in RotJ, to save Luke, he had to let him go (since Vader knew that going against Sidious would very likely kill him). At the end, he was also telling Luke to let go; something he had been unable to do himself for almost all of his life. I view all of this from a heavily pro-Jedi perspective.
Regarding the name - the out-of-universe explanation: in the OT, that planet was called the Imperial Center; the name "Coruscant" first appeared in the Thrawn Trilogy and was canonized by Lucas in TPM. Personally, I think that Palpatine renaming Coruscant would be silly (and I like to imagine it never happened)... But yeah, that's canon, even if it's just because of preserving continuity.
@@ralphfrederickdouglasohh haha thats so silly but totally something Sidious would do. Maybe if the user searches Coruscant it automatically redirects to the Imperial Center, like when you search a website's old name and it redirects to you to the same site even though the name has changed
I love the community story idea! I would suggest maybe a different thumbnail b/c I think I saw it and scrolled past it 😢
Haha rip 😭
great stuff like always, I wonder how Anakin will react whe he sees Coruscant overrun by the Empire "cult"
Thanks so much man!!
What if the Dragonborn was in One Piece?
Prologue Pt. 1
He had done it. Dovahkiin had finally achieved victory over Alduin. All he had to do was wait for his final battle so he could return to Sovngarde to feast forevermore with his predecessors. However, the All-Maker had different plans. "Contact the friend of the Skaal and deliver this message. Your task is not yet complete. There are more foes that must be defeated. Meet me in Sovngarde for your final instructions."
Frea jolted up with a look of bewilderment on her face. It had only been a couple of weeks since she and Dovahkiin had spoken with each other. Frea went to the basin in her home to splash some water in her face in order to drive the sleepiness from her eyes.
She then sat down at her desk to write what would probably be a very confusing letter to Dovahkiin.
Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend
The All-Maker wishes to meet you in Sovngarde, where you defeated the World Eater. He says that your task is not yet complete. There are more foes that must be defeated. Beyond that, I do not know what he wants. Make haste. Time is of the essence.
Your eternal ally, Frea
Frea then sealed the letter with a magic rune that would only release when in Dovahkiin's hands.
And with that done, she geared up for the trip to Raven Rock and set out. After three days, she arrived in Raven Rock. Thankfully, Captain Gjalund was there. "Captain Gjalund, I need you to deliver this letter to our mutual friend, Dovahkiin. I'm afraid that time is of the essence," said Frea. "Fear not, we are now headed back to Windhelm, and I shall personally deliver your letter," Gjalund replied.
Three Days Later
Through the use of messenger hawks, Captain Gjalund found out that Dovahkiin was in Windhelm. "Thank the Nine," he muttered. Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend was a very busy man, leading the Thieves Guild, the Dark Brotherhood, the College of Winterhold, and the Companions. He also had very little time for personal pursuits. However, he was able to devote some of his time to ensuring the continuation of his legacy, and that is what he was doing when he received an urgent knocking on his door. "I'm glad I caught you at home," Gjalund said excitedly. "I have a letter for you from Frea." Dovahkiin instantly knew what was going on. "Here's some gold for you and your crew. Words can not express how much this means to me." Dovahkiin then handed a purse with 5,000 gold coins to Captain Gjalund. As soon as Captain Gjalund left, Dovahkiin called on his acolytes, ordering them to escort the second in command from each of the guilds, from the Dark Brotherhood, Nazir, from the Thieves Guild, Karliah, from the Companions, Aela, and from the College of Winterhold, Tolfdir.
When the Lieutenants of each guild arrived at the predetermined meeting spot, Dovahkiin called the meeting to order. "You all knew this day was coming. To Tolfdir, the master wizard of the College of Winterhold, I leave the Archmage's robes, The Black Star, The Staff of Magnus, and the keys to my old quarters Try to integrate the College with the rest of Skyrim and pledge your services to High King Ulfric. To Karliah, I leave the Guild Master's Armor, The Amulet of Articulation, and the key to the Tribute Chest. I also want you to pledge your services to High King Ulfric. Steal from the enemies of Skyrim, especially if they're allied with the Dominion. To Nazir, I leave the Ancient Shrouded Armor, the Blade of Woe, and this task, find the next Listener. Just like the other two, I want you to pledge your services to High King Ulfric. He still has enemies who want him dead. Eliminate those enemies. To Aela, my most trusted ally, I leave Wuuthrad, the Harbinger's Armor, and these quests, build a secondary location in Windhelm and guard High King Ulfric with your lives. I look forward to seeing you all in Sovngarde. May the All-Maker guide each of your steps."
Dovahkiin was on his way to Skuldafn when he heard the roars of two more allies, Odahviing and Paarthurnax. As was customary, Dovahkiin and the two dragons greeted each other with the fire breath shout, "Yol Toor Shul!" Causing a fire tornado for a short while. "Drem Yol Lok, Odahviing and Paarthurnax. Why are you here?" Dovahkiin asked. In his semi cryptic manner, Paarthurnax responded, "We are here because you are here. We know that the All-Maker is sending you on your final mission. And we wish to join you." Dovahkiin pondered this for a few moments before responding, "Odahviing can come with me if he wishes, but you have responsibilities here on Tamriel. You must teach the other dragons to live in harmony with men and mer. But if you must come, I will ask the All-Maker to reincarnate your soul where I'm at, wherever that may be." Paarthurnax seemed to be taken aback by the choice of words, but he relented and said, "Su'um Arkh Morah. Breath and Focus Dovahkiin."
Soon after, Dovahkiin Skaal-Friend mounted his ally, Odahviing. "Please take me to Skuldafn," he said, and with that, Odahviing took off.
This is such a cool story!! I would suggest you post this comment on the video I have linked in the pinned comment, called "Lets Make Our Own Story Through TH-cam Comments" because your story might end up being buried here
hey I made a discord for collaborative story telling, you are free to join it if you'd like! discord.gg/N29ams8f
I found this channel a little while back, but I want to give you feedback on what I think can be improved or how to make it more engaging. Most Star Wars what-if channels are pretty low quality, but I see a lot of potential for you. So here are some suggestions to make you truly stand out more:
Your music choices are fairly good, but they tend to be somewhat repetitive. You want that dark undertone given what's happening, but try to give it some variety that adds different elements other than just that dark humming sound.
But, there was at least one choice for music that made the scene hard to listen to. The music at the 16:42 mark took away from the scene since it feels like it's not taking itself all that seriously, which is a stark contrast with the rest of the story that you're presenting.
Add more voice acting scenes, and work on improving your voice acting. This is an element that many stories try to use. Many use A.I as a crutch, but it comes across as lifeless. You have a pretty deep voice and you speak clearly, so with some work from TH-cam for improving your voice acting, I can see you doing very well in that area over time and it would make the engagement so much more interesting.
The images tend to be stale; try to give them some life. Perhaps add some movement to the bodies within the image when your characters interact with one another or for scene interactions in your narration rather than just giving movement to the image itself.
In regards to views: Try to keep your upload consistent and at least once a week. Nothing kills the views on a channel faster than an inconsistent schedule and videos that only occasionally pop up, and I'd try not to keep *too* long on one story; you can observe the views on each video tending to go downwards, videos that contain many parts for the same story tends to die no matter how good it's. So keep that in mind if it seems disheartening when the views go down over time for a series.
But you're an extremely good storyteller, and I love how you keep things (At least to the best of your abilities) realistic with how the characters would really interact with the what-if premise. Many storytellers try not to deviate from Canon to the best of their ability, but that gets dull quite fast. I at least want to see how the galaxy at large changes from these major storyline changes given from the premise. ;)
I really appreciate your taking the time to comment, and I assure you, all of these criticisms you are naming have already been noticed by myself. As mentioned in the video, if I had the time and money, I would love to be able to put out higher quality more consistent content!
My friend, quality over quantity. I would rather wait between uploads for an amazing story rather than just pumped out drivil
Part 6
LOVED IT MAN KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE YOU GROW 🪴
@@trinidad428 thanks so much man it felt great to read this at the start of my day
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