@2:23..."Sorry Thoda Emotional Ho Rha h"... Ma'am U Are Telling This directly From Ur heart💓 One Can See Ur Hidden Tears In Ur Eyes...!! So Touching Words..🙂
Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu Tere har waade se tujhe aazad karti hu Koshish to bahot ki tujhe paane ki Lekin apne pyar ki haar ko aaj tujhpe waar karti hu Beinteha mohabbat ki tujhse maine ai mere yaar Lekin aaj usi mohabbat ko khatam karne ki baat karti hu Ab na laut kar aana tu meri zindagi me Aaj tujhe tere har waade se aazad karti hu Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu Jiss haseen waqt me mujhe tu mila tha Usi waqt ki kasam tujhe aaj bhulne ki faryad karti hu Ki Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu Teri meri iss kahani ko bemisal karti hu Tere naam ko apne naam se alag karne ka ailan karti hu Takleef to ho rahi hai ye baat likhne me Lekin fir bhi aaj tujhse duur hone ki baat karti hu Chal tujhe aaj tere har waade se aazad karti hu Aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu Aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu SABA AMAN
Abe Chutiye Aisa kya likh diya usane ki Ro diya, me to sar patak patak kar Pagal ho gaya is tarah k log bhi Shayari likhte h, Jinhe Shayri ka A bhi nahi pata, Khuda bachaye in Chutiyo se na Jan jati hai na Jeene deti h
Ya dear...I did the same with my partner...He told me one day that he doesn't has feelings for me ...I let him go his own way bcoz there was nothing to be in that relationship...I cried for him for 6 months but didn't call him then slowly I became normal in my life ....I was single for 3years then a boy came in my life...I don't know how much he love me bcoz he is crazy for me...He is very simple,mature ,caring ND understanding person...I also fell for him...Now we r together but still whenever I listen poetry I still remember my love but I doesn't hate or abuse him..Maine use maaf Kar diya...kyuki ab koi hai Jo usse kahi Jada mujhe pyar karta hai aur Mai bahut khush hu apne life me...Maine to kabka use azad Kar diya
Amazing poem.... Same condition m going through these days... Thank for making this worse condition in beautiful poem. Khush naseeb h wo jinke pyaar ki kadar hoti h... True...
Most heartfelt lines Chl aaj tujhko ajad krte hai.... Actual jab pyar krne wala kehta hai uske ankho me assu bandh k nadiyo ki tah ruke hue hai To vo ye line sirf kehta hai andr hi andar vo kya feel krta hai sirf whi janta hai
Chal aaj kuch khaas krte hain..alfaaz ko apni zubaan se azaad krte hai..na rakhna koi shikwa gila mujhse ae sanam..dil m jo bhi gubbar hain aaj unhe faash krte hai..chal aj kuch khaas krte hain..
Thanks you Shivani for writing it down. Kyunki mujhe toh shabd hi nahi mil rahe the, samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kaise saare emotions ko paper par utaar dun. Haan agar kabhi likhta bhi toh kuch iss tarah hi likhta... So thank you for sharing... And I really hope you are doing well these days...
Acha ye pal ataa h humari jindgi me humme logo ko pehchane ka ek nazriya milta h. Its help in future. Bs aap kisi ek vajah se puri duniya ko mujrim na thera dena
I hv written some lines also.... This is my frst one... 😅 Mujhe nahi pta mein kya chahte hun, mein kyun itna dukhi hun, na jaane kyun itna khoya huya hun.. Ye uske dur jaane ki wajah se hai, ya uska kisi aur se baat karne ki wajah se.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Ye uska kabhi mera na ban pane ke wajah se hai ya, ya apna sach use na bta pane ki wajah se.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Pehle hum uske liye raaton ka sahara hote the, uski bus journey ka tym pass hote the, lekin ab koi aur uska sahara ban gya hai, koi aur humse pyara ban gya hai, kya isliye pareshan hun mein..... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Din bhar uske call ka intezar kiya karta hun, un purane dino ko yaad kiya karta hun, uski Awaaz Sunne ko bekarar rehta hun mein, Kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Uski dosti mein koi kami nahi hai, usse Acha to koi dost hi Nahi hai, magar meine hi na jane kyun usse dil lga liya, usko apne har sukh/dukh ka karan bna liya, kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Usko to pta bhi nahi kitna marte hai hum uspe, apni jaan chidakte hai hum uspe, kaise batayein ye sach hum use, jo nahi de sakte wo, wahi chahte hai hum unse, Kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein..... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein Ab jab tumhe koi naya sahara mil gya hai, zindagi mein kinara mil gya hai, aapki is khushi mein shamil to hai hum, Magar apna sach batane ke kaabil Nahi hai hum, kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Chal aaj tujhko aazad karte hai, Ab dil apna thoda saaf karte hai, Sayd tujhe kuch farq naa pada ho, Par Koi nahi.. Aaj hum tumko tahe dil se maaf karte hai, Aur Wajood tumhara saaf karte hai.. - Arun
It's soo heart touching .. .........mere akho say niklny ....wali 💧khati h .....chlo ajj tujy ajaad karty h.........aapni sekaty ..sirf aapny naam krty h .😇
Awsm... Loved it.. Mai bhi iss me ek alfaaz mere pesh karna chanunga... Har mandir me ja kar Bhagawan se teri fariyaad karte hai.. Tu hamesha khush rahe ye guzarish karte hai... Apni khushi se bhi zyada tuze hum yaad karte hai... Chal aaj tuzko azaad karte hai... Chal aaj tuzko azaad karte hai... 😅😅😊😃😃
Baat schi h jo apna kahi.. Pr har koi asa to ni hota.. Ajj b duniya m asa rishta jo dono hi side sa ak dusra ka dil sa sath nibata h.. Bina kisi mtlb ka
I'm listening for the first time and i released him two hours ago wuts amazing I was just scrolling u tube and got it then I comment that Chal aaj tujy Azad krty hai💔
life is a grat travel trip Priyanka problem that it doesn't come with map and we have to search our own ways to reach the destination agar kahi se lage ki kya dhoka kya fareb chal ek bar fir jindgi tujhe ajmate hai to ek bar call krna life result positive paogi but i am 3rd hand not 1st 7275441121
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. जो मेरी हंसी मेरे आंसू तुझपे वार रखे है जिनकी तुझे खबर तक नहीं - 2 ऐसे इल्जाम जो लगाए तुझ पर, आज उनको बे-बुनियाद करते है चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है. एक छोटा सा सफर तुझे मिलकर तुझे खोने तक का -2 झूट नहीं बोलूंगा वो सब सफर दुनिया था मेरा मेरी वो दुनिया जो तुझ तक थी उसे भूलकर एक नया आगाज़ करते है. चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है. तरस मत खाना मेरी सूरत देखकर -2 बतलाना वही मुझको, जो सच है. तेरे दिल में मेरे लिए इश्क़ नहीं हाँ दुःख होगा मुझको आज इस मुश्किल से डट कर लड़ते है. चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है. आगे गुजारिश है मेरी तुझसे फिर मुड़कर न देखना मुझको -2 तुझे मालूम नहीं तेरी नज़र मुझपे क्या सितम ढाती है कहीं फिर न आ जाऊं तेरे पीछे, इसलिए आज आखरी बात करते है. चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है. इस हद तक तुझसे मोहब्बत की, की अब इश्क़ के नाम से भी डरते है -2 खुदा बचाये इस मर्ज़ से, तुझे पाने की मन्नत छोड़कर अब ऐसी फ़रियाद करते है. चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है. मैंने तुझसे प्यार किया, इस फरेब की दुनिया में रब से बढ़के तेरा नाम लिया अब बदले में मिली अँधेरी रौशनी में चलते है, कहंते है न, लोग, ठोकर खाकर ही सँभलते है. ऐसे बहलाकर खुदको, तेरी चाहत पूरी करते है. चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है. कभी नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है. खुशनसीब है वो जिनके प्यार की कदर होती है -2 वरना आज भी कुछ लोग तन्हाई में खुद से खुस का ही जिक्र किया करते है.
The way she speaks ....it tells that her heart still aches for him.....may god bless her with courage and strength to fall in love again.
Maybe Never true love again.
Her voice n hands r shivering that indicates the pain which she is suffering..somehow I am understanding..😔ur poem is awesome❤
Shivani. I won't say much, but you truly reminded me of someone I have been trying to forget. And it's lovely. Thank you
finally, after years, i got words to my thoughts!!!
Thank you!
@2:23..."Sorry Thoda Emotional Ho Rha h"...
Ma'am U Are Telling This directly From Ur heart💓
One Can See Ur Hidden Tears In Ur Eyes...!!
So Touching Words..🙂
I didn't knew it's everybody's story🙂 it made me emotional
It made me emotional too.
I even dont know😁😁
Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu
Tere har waade se tujhe aazad karti hu
Koshish to bahot ki tujhe paane ki
Lekin apne pyar ki haar ko aaj tujhpe waar karti hu
Beinteha mohabbat ki tujhse maine ai mere yaar
Lekin aaj usi mohabbat ko khatam karne ki baat karti hu
Ab na laut kar aana tu meri zindagi me
Aaj tujhe tere har waade se aazad karti hu
Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu
Jiss haseen waqt me mujhe tu mila tha
Usi waqt ki kasam tujhe aaj bhulne ki faryad karti hu
Ki Chal aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu
Teri meri iss kahani ko bemisal karti hu
Tere naam ko apne naam se alag karne ka ailan karti hu
Takleef to ho rahi hai ye baat likhne me
Lekin fir bhi aaj tujhse duur hone ki baat karti hu
Chal tujhe aaj tere har waade se aazad karti hu
Aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu
Aaj tujhe mai maaf karti hu
SABA AMAN
So nice keep it up👍✋👏👏👏
Superb line ...
very nice
Super 😘
Superb yaar
Usko to kab ka aazad kar diya, khud ki aazadi ka kya.
Very nicle poem. I loved each and every words, and way she said is aswm
You made me cry and reminded every moment we spent together .. love ur poem.. lots of love to u..
Abe Chutiye Aisa kya likh diya usane ki Ro diya, me to sar patak patak kar Pagal ho gaya is tarah k log bhi Shayari likhte h, Jinhe Shayri ka A bhi nahi pata, Khuda bachaye in Chutiyo se na Jan jati hai na Jeene deti h
One of the most respectful last goodbye ❤️
Ya dear...I did the same with my partner...He told me one day that he doesn't has feelings for me ...I let him go his own way bcoz there was nothing to be in that relationship...I cried for him for 6 months but didn't call him then slowly I became normal in my life ....I was single for 3years then a boy came in my life...I don't know how much he love me bcoz he is crazy for me...He is very simple,mature ,caring ND understanding person...I also fell for him...Now we r together but still whenever I listen poetry I still remember my love but I doesn't hate or abuse him..Maine use maaf Kar diya...kyuki ab koi hai Jo usse kahi Jada mujhe pyar karta hai aur Mai bahut khush hu apne life me...Maine to kabka use azad Kar diya
@@lovemaahi6902 , hmm! I understand and feels too...
@@lovemaahi6902 it's okay be happy! Rahne wala rahega, Jane wala jayega ... Hmm tc
@@abhrarenu so sweet of u💕
@@banajakumari437 thank you dear😍 I m happy now💕😁
After listen this deep and beautiful poem all reminds me some old pain.
bohotttttt zyada pyaari poem likhi hai yrrrr same mera ye hi haal hai ro rhi thi main ye sunn ke ........awesome yr dil ko chhu gai baat
Ditto my current situation 😞💔😭
Every single word of this poem is applicable on my life ryt now
It's heart touching... 😊
Breakup k lgbg 3 din bd is poem ko sunna.. Mano jaise dil jo kehna chahta kisi ko.. Wo keh diya..
Nic
Don't worry ... U'll find ur loved ones who will love only u
Shinam Favourites right
@@ayushipanday3460 yup
Shinam Favourites @ same
Amazing poetry so heart touching..kabhi kabhi hum unko to azaad kar dete hai lekin khud hum azaad nhi ho paate...
हो चुकी थी यादें उनकी,
काफी हद तक धुंधली सी ।
तुम्हारी बातें सुनके आज,
मौसम ज़रा साफ़ हो गया ।।
😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
Ha to hum ko yad kr lo bolo Jay bhole ki 👻👻👻👻👻👻👻☠️☠️👻☠️☠️☠️👻👻👻👻👻
@@Sharmaas6 JAY bHOLE KI bhai
Ja gaye guru
Wow
Ryt bro
I can totally relate to each an every line of this poem....😞😞...but any way bahut achha likha h apne 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
helllo
neha anand me too..every single word
Kisi ka sath pakr usko nibhana bhi asaan nhi hota,
Mohabbat k is chote se safar mai galatfahmiyaa sbse bdi diwar bnke samne aati h
Exactly yaar Each and every word is relatable........From the last 2 days I'm totally broken
Dont be sad yarr move on and be happy
Speechless after hearing such beautiful line 👏👏👏👏👏👏💐💐🌷🌷🌹🌹🌺🌺🌸👌✌💝💝💝💝💖💕👍👍👍proud of uh
Mam nice...dil Khush ho gya...aapki poem sunke...aap bhi hmesha Khush rhe
..
Amazing poem.... Same condition m going through these days... Thank for making this worse condition in beautiful poem.
Khush naseeb h wo jinke pyaar ki kadar hoti h... True...
Strange aaj k time me koi sach me kisi se pyar krta hai. Nowadays we are just busy in changing gfs n bfs.
Very heart touching..! It made me cry.. 😥😥 me b aazad kardungi.. 😊
What A Timing, Exactly Reasonates To My Situations 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Most heartfelt lines
Chl aaj tujhko ajad krte hai....
Actual jab pyar krne wala kehta hai uske ankho me assu bandh k nadiyo ki tah ruke hue hai
To vo ye line sirf kehta hai andr hi andar vo kya feel krta hai sirf whi janta hai
Love is never mutual. It's always an assymmetric relationship.
I never get this emotional.. Also not a big fan of poetry.. But seriously girl ur lyrics touched my heart.. So beautiful 😊
Sach bola Wahi bdii baat hai.. 🤗
Chal aaj kuch khaas krte hain..alfaaz ko apni zubaan se azaad krte hai..na rakhna koi shikwa gila mujhse ae sanam..dil m jo bhi gubbar hain aaj unhe faash krte hai..chal aj kuch khaas krte hain..
Most lovable... dil ko jinjhor kr rkh diya🤗🤗
Itna emotional tha video ki sun k rona aa gaya .....sch m bht sai likha h apne 👍
Plz ek bar mere channel ko check kr lijiye ummid karta hu aapko poetry pasand aayegi
Her voice has the pain that says it all 🥺💔 I honestly cried because I've felt this
Hii
@@mohammedhaneef9386 hi
Hi saumya G
Couldn’t stop crying after this.
Thanks you Shivani for writing it down. Kyunki mujhe toh shabd hi nahi mil rahe the, samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kaise saare emotions ko paper par utaar dun. Haan agar kabhi likhta bhi toh kuch iss tarah hi likhta...
So thank you for sharing... And I really hope you are doing well these days...
Heart touching poem...this made me cry..Meri current situation yahi h exactly
Acha ye pal ataa h humari jindgi me humme logo ko pehchane ka ek nazriya milta h. Its help in future. Bs aap kisi ek vajah se puri duniya ko mujrim na thera dena
Yaisa Ku hota h tara
I have tears in my eyes 😭 so emotional 💔
First time I commented, this poetry is really touched my heart 💓💓
Ab mehsoos hua ki aap nazmon ko kyu jeene lagte hain !!
So pure emotions.
I hv written some lines also.... This is my frst one... 😅
Mujhe nahi pta mein kya chahte hun, mein kyun itna dukhi hun, na jaane kyun itna khoya huya hun..
Ye uske dur jaane ki wajah se hai, ya uska kisi aur se baat karne ki wajah se.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Ye uska kabhi mera na ban pane ke wajah se hai ya, ya apna sach use na bta pane ki wajah se.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Pehle hum uske liye raaton ka sahara hote the, uski bus journey ka tym pass hote the, lekin ab koi aur uska sahara ban gya hai, koi aur humse pyara ban gya hai, kya isliye pareshan hun mein..... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Din bhar uske call ka intezar kiya karta hun, un purane dino ko yaad kiya karta hun, uski Awaaz Sunne ko bekarar rehta hun mein, Kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Uski dosti mein koi kami nahi hai, usse Acha to koi dost hi Nahi hai, magar meine hi na jane kyun usse dil lga liya, usko apne har sukh/dukh ka karan bna liya, kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Usko to pta bhi nahi kitna marte hai hum uspe, apni jaan chidakte hai hum uspe, kaise batayein ye sach hum use, jo nahi de sakte wo, wahi chahte hai hum unse, Kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein..... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Ab jab tumhe koi naya sahara mil gya hai, zindagi mein kinara mil gya hai, aapki is khushi mein shamil to hai hum, Magar apna sach batane ke kaabil Nahi hai hum, kya isliye itna pareshan hun mein.... Magar itna pta hai khush nahi hun mein
Loved it
@@emaanalii7008 Thnx dude 😘
Loved it a sort matched with my situation
@@myrahsk2752 😉
@Lalchand Prajapat thnx bro :)
Sab sab sab words mere liye tha thank you so much ji....
Mera ehsaas aur kuchh kuchh mere alfaz 👏👏👏👏👏
Very nice poem , true interpretation
last two lines were the punch line.
nice "Chal Aaj Tujhko Azaad Karte hain"
this is beyond beautiful...
why it feels so relatable 💔💔😢😢😢
Soo emotional and heart touching!! ❤❤
Chal aaj tujhko aazad karte hai,
Ab dil apna thoda saaf karte hai,
Sayd tujhe kuch farq naa pada ho,
Par Koi nahi..
Aaj hum tumko tahe dil se maaf karte hai,
Aur Wajood tumhara saaf karte hai..
- Arun
Wah
Wooo
😂😂😂😂
gzb
Woww super lines
It went directly into heart❤️
It's soo heart touching ..
.........mere akho say niklny ....wali 💧khati h .....chlo ajj tujy ajaad karty h.........aapni sekaty ..sirf aapny naam krty h .😇
These lines touched my heart..❤️❤️❤️
Each lines got touched 👏👏
Tq shavani Apne ladki ki dil ki bat ko kya khubsurat Kavita me bata Diya... nice..keep it up..😊😊👌
Lladkon k bhi dil mai aisi feeling aa sakti hai jab unki lover unhe chod k door ho jaati hai
Meri feelings ko aapne apne shabdo se bayan kar diya...tq di ❤️❤️
Wow this is so heart touching
And this matches for the person To whom i love
Kis kis se related hai ye poem
Muj se hai ye related. .............♡♡♡♡♡
I can also relate this to me
@@khushikhan1050 ok
🙋
Me😒
Mujhe se v
Tears rolled down my cheeks
Hii
Awesome. Apki har baton se khud ko relate kr rhi hu
Wow❤️❤️❤️ i can relate myself with this poem..💔
Hii
Ohh great
Thankyou for writing this ❤️❤️❤️... It acted as a medicine for my broken heart 💔
Awsm... Loved it..
Mai bhi iss me ek alfaaz mere pesh karna chanunga...
Har mandir me ja kar Bhagawan se teri fariyaad karte hai..
Tu hamesha khush rahe ye guzarish karte hai...
Apni khushi se bhi zyada tuze hum yaad karte hai...
Chal aaj tuzko azaad karte hai...
Chal aaj tuzko azaad karte hai...
😅😅😊😃😃
bhai tum sabne kisi se bhot pyar kiya hoga ya karte hi
👌👌👌👌
Ossam aap to bahut achchha likhte ho
Nice☺️☺️ line which u added
Mr _micky 👌🏻
Yr poetry boht pyari h.....sab kuch sach kaha h....Or boht pyara likha h sab lines mujpe suit krti h
Its.. Heart touching...
Me also broken heart...💔💔
यही आज का आईयना है।।
जिसको जितनी शिद्दत से चाहों वो उतनी ही शिद्दत से आपका फैयदा उठता है और मतलब पूरा होते ही अपने रास्ते निकल जाता है।।
Such kahe aap
Sahi kaha aapne
Baat schi h jo apna kahi.. Pr har koi asa to ni hota.. Ajj b duniya m asa rishta jo dono hi side sa ak dusra ka dil sa sath nibata h.. Bina kisi mtlb ka
Sahi kaha aapne
Ye to 100% right h..
It seems that i told her my love story & she just wrote it .
Loved it ,
Best thing which completely justified my love for her.😥
Aapki aawaj bahut achhi he di. Or kya gjb hi kaha he apne......
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Aakhri ki 2 line ne dil chhu liya..
Voice with real pain of losting love
Dmmmm u just uttered my unspoken feelings .!!!! Your words were lit . Thanku for this one . Have a great life ahead !!!!
Hii
Kha se aap
इंसान के शरीर का सबसे खूबसूरत हिस्सा है दिल❤, अगर वो साफ ही नहीं तो चमकता चेहरा किस काम का।😘😘😘👍👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Super nice
👍
Ravi singhraur bhai aapke video mere Dil Ko chhu lete h love you bhai😘😘😘😘😘
@@anshuroy8866 Thanks ji
you're wrong aj kal log sirf chamkte chehre dekhte dil ka or uske truth and honest ki koi value nhi .....
Ladki me dam hai dam me dard hai aur dard me iska itihaas hai...aur wo itihas me uski jajbaat hai 😭😭😭 May God bless her to fight with courage 😍😍😍
This is my story...by some one else...thanks dear...so nice nd beautiful poem
ladki ne mera dil le liya i love you Shivani..😘😘😘😘
Maine bhi kr diya aazad ❤️
Chl aaj tujhe aazad krte h....
Chl ab time mila h,
thoda khudse bhi pyar krte h....
Asha good linesss
lekin hm kyu nai kr paa rahe.
Asha meena hiii
Bilkul 🥰🥰
asha meena subscribe my chanel plz
mtlb dil ki saare baate kh gyi aap bhut vdiyaaa....thank u
Beautiful !!! Very beautifully written 😊 soooo good!
ज़्यादा ना रुक सकेंगे, अश्क़ यूँ पलकों पे,,,
गिरेंगे ये भी नज़रों से कभी, तुम्हारी तरह...!!
जहर भाई साहब 🙏🙏👌👌
Gajab
😄
Bahot achhe
thanks for this😭❤
It's words to words related to me.... It's very heart touching ... Sunte hue aankhe nam ho gai... 😢
Hii
Unfortunately it's related to me ❤❤❤ Each lines got touched to me very badly
I'm listening for the first time and i released him two hours ago wuts amazing I was just scrolling u tube and got it then I comment that
Chal aaj tujy Azad krty hai💔
Mjhse related h ye poem but bht achhi h😭😭..........
Kis kis ko psnd ayi 👆poem
Poem may wafadari hai.. bahot kam log real life may wafadari karte hai..
Mjhe
Meri bhi
@@raniansari4579 acha
@@govindrawat6780 hmmm
listening to ur 4lines frm starting.. touch my heart..
Ma'am aap Dil se likhe hai, aur Dil se bol rahe hai.....Aapki chupi huyi aasuon byan kr rahi....🙏
Ryt
Ryt
I feel she love someone
Ye pyar hai koi gel nehi ki aajad kiya jaye
Hum to tujhme ghul gye tu hume
nikal
Hum bhi sikhenge ki dil se kaise aajad
Kiya jaye
After 10yrs of relationship
Chaal aaj tuje azad kar diya 💔
Duyaye tu nehi kar sakte lekin khus rehna
Damn every single line just touched to my heart 😥
Wow beautiful line...I can badly relate myself to these lines....shivani you just rock girl....God bless you with courage and lots of love ❤
I totally related each n every line......😒😒 n osmmmm writing keep doing 😊✌️✌️✌️
Me also
कभी कभी ये प्यार भी खुले आसमान में कैदी बना देता है।
Sechi
Hmm
life is a grat travel trip Priyanka
problem
that it doesn't come with map
and
we have to search our own ways to reach the destination
agar kahi se lage ki kya dhoka kya fareb chal ek bar fir jindgi tujhe ajmate hai to ek bar call krna life result positive paogi
but i am 3rd hand
not 1st
7275441121
Me also ☹️☹️☹️
It's exactly happened with me before 10months and today,it's really touched my heart😢
Same thing happened with me 7th month ago .....he could not read my eyes which anyone see my emotion through eyes ki how much i loved him ........
Ek ek line me Jaan h 😘😘😘😘😘😘
Very true. Salute to you mam for sharing wonderful lines.
Iss hadd tk tujhse mohabbat ki ab ishq k nam se bhi darte h
🤘correct lines😐
Really
Ek insan dhokha pa le to usse nafrat ho jati pyar ke naam se v
I can understand what going through on u r heart and mind.
Right😢
Mujhe bhi ishq Nam se darr gyi hu
Best video for this year in the social house ❤️❤️
Aajkal mohabbat ka yhi vasool hai
Ham jiske liye ro rhe hai
Vo kisi aur ko khush karane me mashroof hai.....!!!
Pta ni yr aisa kyu hota h😓
@@umasharma6119 😘😘
Totally related to me . Ankho me ashu aa gaya superb line
Mujhse related h ye, thank you for making such poem
Sonia goyal hellllo
दिल वो पंछी है, जो एक बार महोबत के पिंजरे में कैद हो जाए,
तो ताउम्र रिहा नहीं हो पाता,, बस शर्त एक है कि महोबत सच्ची हो...
Handsome ho koi kar sakti hai pyar tumse
Right sir
Ye meri favorite poetry h...n related
wahhh... sahi keh gye sb...🙂🙂🙂
U r osam dear
U make me cry that deep ur words were.
Keep going like this
Luv u😘
Hi
Don't read the comment while watching ,just feel it the lines.😄
😊 ओके जी
Ok😅
How do u know it !!!🤔😲
"ऐ इश्क़ जन्नत नसीब न होगी तुझे,
बड़े मासूम लोगों को तूने बरबाद किया है !!"
Heat love 💔💔💔💔💔💔👈👈👈
Æyain Kahan 😅
Hate*
Yrr kya kahu koi words nhi mre pass... But seriously dil jeet liya
Nhi rha jaata ab
Bhut jyada yaad aa rhi h aapki mj
I miss you 😖😖😖😖😖😢😢😢😢😢😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😞😞😞😞😞😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Wonderful written .. touched to the bottom of heart ..
Can I get written document of this script ?
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
जो मेरी हंसी मेरे आंसू तुझपे वार रखे है जिनकी तुझे खबर तक नहीं - 2
ऐसे इल्जाम जो लगाए तुझ पर, आज उनको बे-बुनियाद करते है
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है.
एक छोटा सा सफर तुझे मिलकर तुझे खोने तक का -2
झूट नहीं बोलूंगा वो सब सफर दुनिया था मेरा
मेरी वो दुनिया जो तुझ तक थी
उसे भूलकर एक नया आगाज़ करते है.
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है.
तरस मत खाना मेरी सूरत देखकर -2
बतलाना वही मुझको, जो सच है.
तेरे दिल में मेरे लिए इश्क़ नहीं
हाँ दुःख होगा मुझको
आज इस मुश्किल से डट कर लड़ते है.
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
नहीं बताएँगे अब की कितना प्यार करते है.
आगे गुजारिश है मेरी तुझसे फिर मुड़कर न देखना मुझको -2
तुझे मालूम नहीं तेरी नज़र मुझपे क्या सितम ढाती है
कहीं फिर न आ जाऊं तेरे पीछे,
इसलिए आज आखरी बात करते है.
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है.
इस हद तक तुझसे मोहब्बत की, की अब इश्क़ के नाम से भी डरते है -2
खुदा बचाये इस मर्ज़ से, तुझे पाने की मन्नत छोड़कर अब ऐसी फ़रियाद करते है.
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है.
मैंने तुझसे प्यार किया, इस फरेब की दुनिया में रब से बढ़के तेरा नाम लिया
अब बदले में मिली अँधेरी रौशनी में चलते है,
कहंते है न, लोग, ठोकर खाकर ही सँभलते है.
ऐसे बहलाकर खुदको, तेरी चाहत पूरी करते है.
चल आज तुझको आज़ाद करते है.
कभी नहीं बताएँगे तुझको की कितना प्यार करते है.
खुशनसीब है वो जिनके प्यार की कदर होती है -2
वरना आज भी कुछ लोग तन्हाई में खुद से खुस का ही जिक्र किया करते है.
Super!!!
Plz ek bar mere channel ko check kr lijiye ummid karta hu aapko poetry pasand aayegi or na aaye to jo mn me aaye bol lena gali bhi chalegi
Dil chhu gai
How can i copy this?
@@harryfoxcs स्क्रीन शॉट
Ek hi toh Dil hai ...madam ketni Baar jeto gi....bahut khub likha hai...apney