*Squealing* I can't believe you did my song request AND the Secret Garden reference! You are amazing, Dawn! This just made my day! And you made it a continuation from Secret First Date which is really cool!
Your storytelling ability is to be worshipped, your writing is just beautiful, and your voice is pure magic. I've got nothing more to say. I. LOVE. IT.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous you could do a whole oneshot mini series lol We've had their first date and a proposal...... Could do hawkmoths defeat, identity reveal, wedding, first baby.... snapshots of their life together They could all be stand alone stories not needing the others to make sense but little references like this one did to the secret first date, but you didn't need to have read that story.... just an idea 🤷🏼♀️ Do with it as you wish, I certainly couldn't write it 😂
*Squealing* I can't believe you did my song request AND the Secret Garden reference! You are amazing, Dawn! This just made my day! And you made it a continuation from Secret First Date which is really cool!
Aw you are more than welcome, extra fluff and feelings. 😊
Homegirl you are GRINDING! :) Great job!
😊 Thank you so much, that means a lot coming from you.
I have to admit, big fan of both of you guys, I just wish I could do animatics and the fanfiction eases my pain and fulfills the urge
OMG BOTH OF MY FAVORITE MLB FANFIC WRITERS IN ONE COMMENT 😍🤯🤯❤❤❤❤❤😭😭😭😭 I CAN'T TAKE IT IIT'S TOO MUCH
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Hands down, “ Secret First Date”. I was literally just listening to it yesterday. 😌
I SCREAMED AT THE END WITH TEARS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE, I KNEW HE WOULD PROPOSE TO HER WHEN HE STARTED READING THAT POEM, I LEGIT CRIED.
Aww bless you, there is a follow on one-shot called All of Me. I hope you enjoy! 💖🎄🐞😺
Your storytelling ability is to be worshipped, your writing is just beautiful, and your voice is pure magic. I've got nothing more to say. I. LOVE. IT.
Thank you so much, that means the world to me.
Just lovely darling wonderful
I'm using these in British contexts
Another British one: Cheers Ma'dears 😀
WHEN YOU MENTIONED THE RING I KNEW IT WAS SECRET FIRST DATE!😊
Well done! Love the continuation from a previous one shot
Thank you 😄
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE
Amazing and heartfelt with tears of hope and love overflowing. Kudos !
Am I the only person wondering about what about their identities
nope! I have a feeling that will come up in another one-shot! Dawn likes to keep us coming back for more!
Nop , I’m just like it’s gonna be
“MARINETTE WEDS CHAT NOIR”
on the invitation 😂. That would be pretty wild tho
I'm speechless, this was so beautiful ahhh! How have I only just discovered your channel?? Your writing touches the heart!
This one is linked to Secret First Date, like a part 1 and thank you for your kind words 😊
Beautifulllllllll! 😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰
Thank you 😊 💓
I have no words😭❤️
Ahhhhhh I love this so romántic 💕♥💖
It’s really sweet and good
Thank you 😄
Now we just need a reveal and its perfect xD
The reveal happens in All of Me but there will be another part after that where they explain... coming soon. 😊💖
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Nice, thanks for letting me know.
amazing!!!
Ugly cries!!! 😍🥰😍
Aww bless 🥰
Another good song that you might use is I’ll Never Not Love You by Michael Bublé… just a suggestion 🙂
Secret first date definitely
Great again as always
aww, thank you so much 😀
I loved this one-shot and tsecret first date, but are they going to reveal identities since they are going to get married
Soooo good 🎉😊
That was such an awesome way to start my Tuesday 😍
😊 so glad you enjoyed it! 😉
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous are you going to do a reveal oneshot in the same series?
You want me to do another linked oneshot with a reveal? Could do. 🤔😉
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous you could do a whole oneshot mini series lol
We've had their first date and a proposal......
Could do hawkmoths defeat, identity reveal, wedding, first baby.... snapshots of their life together
They could all be stand alone stories not needing the others to make sense but little references like this one did to the secret first date, but you didn't need to have read that story.... just an idea 🤷🏼♀️
Do with it as you wish, I certainly couldn't write it 😂
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous This sounds cool!
Love it
😄 cheers
That...was...the most...romantic... thing...I've...ever...read!!!!! 😭😍😭😍😭😍😭😍😭😍😭😍😭 I'M SOBBING!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I AM THE 600 LIKER!!!!!!!!!
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😃 secret first date is my geuss
Loooooovvvvvveeeeeeeeeee itttttttt 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Thank you 😊
Can you do one one the song count on me by Bruno Mars please I really like that song
Oh that's a good one... I can see Marinette flipping it back to Adrien and play the friend card! 😉😏
Ok i need to know what happens now…..
Wait but dose Mari know A is chat 17:49
Jajaja 🎉😂❤ jajaja j🎉😮
Is it part of "All of Me?"
Yes, it is the one before All of Me, part of the Secret Love Series.
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