@@bangtan_fiction12 I understood that English is not your first language, not mine too. I won't say it's bad bz you're writing in another language which you might be on a learning phase. But I wanna be truthful to you rather than sugar coating, you need a lot of improvement, in grammar , vocabulary and spellings. I suggest you to read English books or newspapers, if you don't have time to study these things. Take it as a positive feedback for your betterment rather than feeling sorry Or hurt
Dekho mind na krna ma hate nhi kr rhi pr ya story copied ha pr koe na vo urdu ma thi ya eng ma ha aur english readers k leya acha hogaya pr apko credit dena chaya ❤
@@FarahKhan-yd4yu gg mojhy pata ha ye heer writer g ka ha or mojhy bohat ziyada passand ha Isliye hi TU mana English ma translate Kiya ha taky or famous hu or ye credit mojhy nhi heer g ko jata ha or wo mojhy bohat ziyada passand ha
Make more top kook please 🥺🥺🥺 love this one ❤❤❤
@@NonameLexi okay
Oh my Lordy 😂😂😂…you are walking around with marriage papers in your pocket?! Haha! i can’t stop laughing 🤭✨💜💚💫
It’s really a very funny strory😂😂
I love it so much next please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Yaaahhhh...aithornim...is so puny i very love this story😂😂😂😂😂😊
Next episode plzzz
Which language did I read now? My brain is not braining after reading this
@@AK-ny5sq what??
@@AK-ny5sq Is my English so bad that you don't understand?
@@AK-ny5sq English is not my language
@@bangtan_fiction12 I understood that English is not your first language, not mine too. I won't say it's bad bz you're writing in another language which you might be on a learning phase. But I wanna be truthful to you rather than sugar coating, you need a lot of improvement, in grammar , vocabulary and spellings. I suggest you to read English books or newspapers, if you don't have time to study these things. Take it as a positive feedback for your betterment rather than feeling sorry Or hurt
@@AK-ny5sq okay thank you
Dekho mind na krna ma hate nhi kr rhi pr ya story copied ha pr koe na vo urdu ma thi ya eng ma ha aur english readers k leya acha hogaya pr apko credit dena chaya ❤
@@FarahKhan-yd4yu gg mojhy pata ha ye heer writer g ka ha or mojhy bohat ziyada passand ha Isliye hi TU mana English ma translate Kiya ha taky or famous hu or ye credit mojhy nhi heer g ko jata ha or wo mojhy bohat ziyada passand ha
@@bangtan_fiction12 gg muja pata tha mena apko positive way ma bola ha
@@FarahKhan-yd4yu okay 👍🏻
Next ep pls