I don't know if anyone caught this Easter egg, but during the part when the Starships Are reporting their bearings from the Enterprise, the USS Saratoga's registry number briefly changes from NCC-1887 to NCC-31911.
Ok. The good: The concept was there. I liked your sorta out of the box thinking and giving A section 31 Bio Weapon used on a federation ship is a semi good in universe explanation of why the ENT B was “lost and never found”. Can be improved: The quality was just not there. It wasn’t unsettling, and felt more like a PowerPoint with the usual cliche text to speech bot. Looks like something made from an 8 year old. The concept was good, but I felt it could have been taken further. What was the virus? What kind of monsters did they turn into? Things like that. How did Sulu find out about this top secret weapon? Did he dig around? Did someone tell him? Something. TL:DR; While the concept and ideas were good, it could have been expanded, and the execution was not there, and it came off so silly because of it. Nevertheless, I couldn’t help but enjoy it. I hope to see you improve in the future.
Definitely something a potential sequel could answer and explore and improve upon, I have a few potential options and ideas for how Sulu would have found out and what the nature of this virus was and why it turned them into monsters but I am not the maker sadly. I do think the use of an AI voice for computer voices would be nice additions too.
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Can we please get some positive comments on this video. I'd really appreciate it. 👍
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I don't know if anyone caught this Easter egg, but during the part when the Starships Are reporting their bearings from the Enterprise, the USS Saratoga's registry number briefly changes from NCC-1887 to NCC-31911.
Ok.
The good: The concept was there. I liked your sorta out of the box thinking and giving A section 31 Bio Weapon used on a federation ship is a semi good in universe explanation of why the ENT B was “lost and never found”.
Can be improved: The quality was just not there. It wasn’t unsettling, and felt more like a PowerPoint with the usual cliche text to speech bot. Looks like something made from an 8 year old.
The concept was good, but I felt it could have been taken further. What was the virus? What kind of monsters did they turn into? Things like that.
How did Sulu find out about this top secret weapon? Did he dig around? Did someone tell him? Something.
TL:DR; While the concept and ideas were good, it could have been expanded, and the execution was not there, and it came off so silly because of it.
Nevertheless, I couldn’t help but enjoy it. I hope to see you improve in the future.
Definitely something a potential sequel could answer and explore and improve upon, I have a few potential options and ideas for how Sulu would have found out and what the nature of this virus was and why it turned them into monsters but I am not the maker sadly.
I do think the use of an AI voice for computer voices would be nice additions too.
The end was pretty anti-climactic.