Honestly even the weakest shazam would absolutely body 3 nomu so he being beaten doesn't make sense also electrical resistance wouldnt work sense its magic electricity
I get what you mean. But look at it this way. Deku is new to this. And the story would be considerably bland if he just one shots everything. He'll he could have, in theory, one tapped all might at the beginning of the story when he first got the power. I find that watching a character gro to become over powered is way more exciting than them being naturally strong. It's why Rimuru and Sung Jin Woo's stories are way more interesting than Saitama's story. They rise to their greatness. Even if its a bit quick. Saitama trained off screen for the most part and just arrived as the strongest. He'd doesn't even have much character. I dont know. I write a little myself so that's how I see it. But it's just my opinion.
I think it would've more sense if those three had been the deadly sins in fact a potential plot twist might that it was three of them that possed the noums
Why is his suit blue and not red or green isn’t red he’s favorite color and green the boi is the embodiment of the color and the nature of it ,energetic , refreshing, tranquil, harmonious, peaceful. Also if he can use abit of Shazam power with out a transformation if u want him to progress slowly so he had a challenge it would of been better if he slowly got access to it full power over time with training instead of getting the whole package only to nerf it because it to strong 😂that what I’d tell the author of this fanfic because I’m not sure if it’s you or not
Yeah just read the description so author if u see this keep this in mind when using power from preexisting systems and characters that you have to be clear about your limitations early on so your not constantly changing his power settings to continue you story
@marcochandler9430 that is true. Fanbased stories need to establish a baseline. The ground work for growth. Introduce the concept at its early stage and build it up to the the point that it flows. Especially with preexisting characters. ESPECIALLY from Marvel and DC. You have to make it clear how strong or weak certain characters are and what limitations will be imposed. I think the flash story with midoriya Is a good example. He's fast but it tires him out. He has to keep his speed limited to conserve stamina. He eats alot because his body isn't used to the strain. And while he is smart, his imagination is limited on what he can use his speed for. All in all a much better concept.
i love when the audio cuts 😀
This part was amazing please make part 2 😍😍🤩🤩😁😁
Can't wait for part 2
More please 🙏
Part 2 please
part2
I’m so happy he called the cop for once on him 😤👍🏾
Honestly even the weakest shazam would absolutely body 3 nomu so he being beaten doesn't make sense also electrical resistance wouldnt work sense its magic electricity
True lightning might not do anything affective but magical lightning is a whole different thing.
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I get what you mean. But look at it this way. Deku is new to this. And the story would be considerably bland if he just one shots everything. He'll he could have, in theory, one tapped all might at the beginning of the story when he first got the power. I find that watching a character gro to become over powered is way more exciting than them being naturally strong. It's why Rimuru and Sung Jin Woo's stories are way more interesting than Saitama's story. They rise to their greatness. Even if its a bit quick. Saitama trained off screen for the most part and just arrived as the strongest. He'd doesn't even have much character. I dont know. I write a little myself so that's how I see it. But it's just my opinion.
That's because they nerfed izuku to make the story interesting
I think it would've more sense if those three had been the deadly sins in fact a potential plot twist might that it was three of them that possed the noums
Part 2 please 🙏🏼
Part 2 ❤😂I 😊
Please do a part two to this awesome story and keep up the good work
I like this, you can to more?
Part 3 please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Please give us more of this what if
It’s been an hour and it’s mostly been a relationship story
I have a what if request. What if Deku was Captain Marvel from Marvel Comics
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@@NotWhatIf oh never mind
POV: you die because you lose interesting dialogue to audio cuts
hell i would take ofa aswell just think all that power plus ofa and the other quirks
Please be a full story this would be 🤩
Izuku could never keep a secret telling him keep a secret is like telling a cat not to play with a ball of yarn 🧶
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Bro free fire nahi vdo script lao tabhi views badhega
Next part please 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏 🙂 😢 😭 😫 😔 🙏
The story is cute but it moves really fast.
Next part pls
Why is his suit blue and not red or green isn’t red he’s favorite color and green the boi is the embodiment of the color and the nature of it ,energetic , refreshing, tranquil, harmonious, peaceful. Also if he can use abit of Shazam power with out a transformation if u want him to progress slowly so he had a challenge it would of been better if he slowly got access to it full power over time with training instead of getting the whole package only to nerf it because it to strong 😂that what I’d tell the author of this fanfic because I’m not sure if it’s you or not
Yeah just read the description so author if u see this keep this in mind when using power from preexisting systems and characters that you have to be clear about your limitations early on so your not constantly changing his power settings to continue you story
@marcochandler9430 that is true. Fanbased stories need to establish a baseline. The ground work for growth. Introduce the concept at its early stage and build it up to the the point that it flows. Especially with preexisting characters. ESPECIALLY from Marvel and DC. You have to make it clear how strong or weak certain characters are and what limitations will be imposed. I think the flash story with midoriya Is a good example. He's fast but it tires him out. He has to keep his speed limited to conserve stamina. He eats alot because his body isn't used to the strain. And while he is smart, his imagination is limited on what he can use his speed for. All in all a much better concept.