i wrote this as a 13 year old...

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  • @thatgamerboy3467
    @thatgamerboy3467 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +790

    I feel like this is one of those times where i feel like i wanna die because someone was able to make something so ethereal at an age younger than me

    • @suspensionrailway7094
      @suspensionrailway7094 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +27

      Always that feeling of missing something that others seem to understand so well. But don't let it get so bitter, try to put your ego at bay for a moment (I'm not implying anything, it's just an advice) and enjoy other people's music, you might even get inspired by it. Sincerely, not projecting myself in anyone's work is helping me with my esteem, so it may help you too

    • @thatgamerboy3467
      @thatgamerboy3467 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +12

      You know what brother? This piece feels as though it is like impressionist, an ethereal one at that. I wish to even learn its theory so that i may apply it to the pieces i may make, ones with romantical aspects. Impressionism and romanticism may be different but to me they seem almost the same, the only difference that impressionism may take on different forms depending on the listener. What i love about this is that is it not that love feels as though when you see the one who brings you joy makes you feel like there is a howling and powerful gale going through your body?
      The beauty of this piece makes me imagine that of being in piece with myself almost, like a sparkling waterfall or being above the towering clouds. So, indeed you are right brother, I should appreciate this piece at this moment so that i may be moved by it, inspired by it. It is not wrong nor right to look down on oneself simply because another did better when they were younger, but what is wrong is being bitter about such things. If this piece have not been made and not even uploaded in the first place, then i may never have been able to appreciate such a great thing in this world. Thank you brother for reminding me that between artists, age, nationality and other such things do not get in the way of our expression, for it is our creation that helps us express ourselves in ways that no words can be able to, that age is not a roadblock.
      Thank you again brother, I deeply appreciate the words you have said.
      Okay so sorry for getting so deep there 😭

    • @landofbol1098
      @landofbol1098 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

      ​@@thatgamerboy3467 It's always that moment where you witness something some random person made that seems utterly unmatchable, because the way the art is getting to you somehow bestows you with utter amazement, but at the same time, almost this feeling of existential dread... this has happened to me before. This might be the feeling of a powerful gale that you described.
      I produce electronic music. I've been inspired by modern EDM artists like Snail's House and The Living Tombstone, but I love composers like Koji Kondo as well. As of now it's been around 5-6 years for me of having gone through many DAWs and pseudostyles of electronic music. There have been times, one in particular, when I have heard some tracks that were made by one person, such that it seemed I would never be able to match that level of artistry and capability of channeling such precise and powerful emotion. It felt as if I should just quit my favorite hobby that I take so much joy in, even if my stuff that I had made wasn't even that far behind it at that time. My mixing was no doubt much better, but I felt like they had a sort of focus in the particular genre of EDM they were making, that just obliterated my hope in the kind of thing I had been chasing towards creating. I got up from my PC and paced around my house, with a feeling in my heart and my head that I'm sure you've felt before, based on your comment.
      I don't remember exactly when that was, but it was probably a little over a year ago. In retrospect, it pushed me to make things better than what I have ever made before, within even just a few months' time. I've always had this problem that I can't make something new, but in July and August of this year I would say I've just about defeated it - My past 7 projects (none of which are completely finished, but atleast a considerable amount of it is complete) have not fallen below my standard of decent, and can probably impress most people by my ability to have made them. Just because of this random .mp3 on some random discord server, I've possibly become much better in my methodology and mindset for making music, and have much more to show off than I did 1 year ago.
      The thing to understand with making art, is that you can go, in a few hours, from having what feels like nothing, to having what feels like everything. I'm not exactly sure what programs you use, but it's true for almost any digital forms of content creation like music production, composition, art, animation, game development - you name it - that you are able to create something within a singular session that can utterly change how you view your abilities as an artist, and eventually, that thing you sit down to create will be something that could be utterly successful or viral on the internet. As long as you never give up, this will eventually be true. Hans Zimmer, who is clearly regarded as a musically genius composer, didn't even start his career until his 20s, didn't see any real commercial success until his 30s, and probably didn't make anything you would know or recognize until he was into his 40s. It took over two decades of him chipping away at his goals to make a real dent in the world.
      You will see TH-cam comments and Discord replies to people's art that will make you feel like you could never compete, because you could never get the same response as easily. I'e felt like this for years. But it doesn't matter. Just keep doing what you love and making art. Keep trying, despite what anybody says, and eventually you will find success. No matter what. If you never give up this thing you love doing throughout your entire life, you will.
      I feel like there's so much more that I would have to say about this but I don't want my comment to get too long. I mostly wanted to encourage a fellow artist who feels like their art might be worthless in comparison to others, because it's exactly what happened to me, and it felt awful. For me, that is a massive part of what makes me who I am, and when it's taken away by comparison to other people, I feel like I have almost nothing left with my value as a human. But you just have to push through and create, and your value will never be taken away in the end. The ability you have now is just a small amount of your potential - they have no idea what you will have the abilities to eventually accomplish.
      Sorry if that was really long, but I hope you can find some encouragement in what I said.

    • @isabeanieboos5342
      @isabeanieboos5342 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      Hi! I just wanted to let anybody and everybody who reads this know that Jesus love you so much! If you are going through something hard he will help you get through this! Just call on his name and he will answer! Ilysm and feel free to talk to me any time! I hope you have a blessed day or night and ily again!😊

    • @ПростойЧеловек-к8г
      @ПростойЧеловек-к8г ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      Maybe you just weren't born and built to be a lot better than others

  • @danielkelley6711
    @danielkelley6711 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +4241

    please discover 12/8

    • @JacobMeland
      @JacobMeland 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +364

      I'd prefer reading it in 4/4 personally. You don't need the triplet notation after the first few measures and there are a lot of duplets that would feel awkward in 12/8 imo

    • @troysmithfr
      @troysmithfr 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +35

      @@JacobMeland Same honestly

    • @thefitness-grampacertest9364
      @thefitness-grampacertest9364 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +51

      and cross staff beaming

    • @harrypottah4500
      @harrypottah4500 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

      debussy didnt right arabesque in 12/8 so be quiet

    • @TridentTrist
      @TridentTrist 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

      @@JacobMelandsame honestly x2

  • @sebbb6442
    @sebbb6442 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +787

    This the kind of video to get recommended randomly in 10 years. Love it!

    • @BereaShepherd
      @BereaShepherd 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

      It has been recommended. Its 2033 here 😂 Great piano 🎹 👌🏻

    • @zMarsIsCool
      @zMarsIsCool 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yea lmaoo

    • @dryst3ak
      @dryst3ak 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      literally happens to every video

    • @spilltheactualtea
      @spilltheactualtea 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      i was here in the beginning!

    • @oliverfernandezmoreno7105
      @oliverfernandezmoreno7105 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      So true

  • @hessi_943
    @hessi_943 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +230

    that is insanely impressive, oh my gosh those key changes

    • @athingfromouterspace
      @athingfromouterspace 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      omg i just found you in another comment section in a different video lol

    • @hessi_943
      @hessi_943 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      @@athingfromouterspace im everywhere!

  • @TridentTrist
    @TridentTrist 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +1122

    13 Year old had no right being that majestic with key changes (0:37)

    • @muffinman-zd4gd
      @muffinman-zd4gd 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +16

      Exactly what I was thinking

    • @-sparky
      @-sparky 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

      ouuhhh god this note took my soul you’re correct

    • @chris1549
      @chris1549 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      Real, I got jot hard by the "HUH"

  • @samseltoter560
    @samseltoter560 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +930

    This really sounds like a peaceful water level in a Legend of Zelda game. It reminds me of twilight princess.

    • @魚-c3d
      @魚-c3d 8 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

      Yeah, now that you say so it reminds me of Lake Hylia's theme and Midna's Lament ! Funnily enough, I was actually watching some TP content when this video was recommended to me xd

    • @SpamLRBLX
      @SpamLRBLX 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      That's what I was also thinking

    • @BucketHeadBricksStudios
      @BucketHeadBricksStudios 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      Twilight was amazing. Even though I liked twilights themes for nostalgia and other older themes, botw and totk has the most calming. Song of storms is amazing too

    • @yoonseok3321
      @yoonseok3321 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      I also thought of The legend of Zelda! Very beautiful

    • @mysteriam9679
      @mysteriam9679 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      it genuinely sounded like midna's lament at the start

  • @Sentinel07
    @Sentinel07 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +71

    This video combines three different things that I’m not great at using when composing:
    -polyrhythms that sound good
    -grand staff instruments (specifically piano but also harp)
    -ostinatos that sound good
    I’m trying to improve on all of these things, especially ostinatos and polyrhythms, and this is a great source of inspiration! Great work!

    • @Adam.Clark.
      @Adam.Clark. 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I dont know if you want to hear this or not, but her is my method. One way to make ostinatos sound better is to write an outline and then fill it in. effectively you create a counter point to your melody and then make it more rythmically dense. that way the ear has something to follow without the ostinato becoming monotinous.

  • @NotTheActualChopin
    @NotTheActualChopin 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +536

    0:21 That small part really made me think of the sparkle in ballade no 3 of Chopin! You nailed it bro.

    • @atthoBA
      @atthoBA 9 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      제가 느낀 것과 같아요😂

    • @ultimateconstruction
      @ultimateconstruction 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      MOTHERFUCKING SAME LMAFO 😂😂😂😂😂

    • @joshuasgamingchannel124
      @joshuasgamingchannel124 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@atthoBA How is it funny? 😭😭

    • @thedesolatemusic
      @thedesolatemusic 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      My thoughts exactly

  • @jackdiaz5616
    @jackdiaz5616 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +418

    Man the TH-cam algorithm is really getting better if it recommended this.

  • @Qwagal
    @Qwagal 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +421

    Same lol, I didn’t write songs this good, but they were SUPER complex because I didn’t understand time signatures 😂

    • @brevortofficial
      @brevortofficial 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

      SAME I still barely understand time signatures :(

    • @chris1549
      @chris1549 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      ​@brevortofficial I think no one truly understands time signatures. They just vibe until it sounds right

  • @troysmithfr
    @troysmithfr 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +836

    Debussy and Ravel would be proud.

    • @vanek_9397
      @vanek_9397 18 วันที่ผ่านมา +15

      I just firstly thought this is a Debussy's piece😅

    • @redfishplayz4476
      @redfishplayz4476 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      More Debussy

    • @onlysofiaa
      @onlysofiaa 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

      nah at first i thought it sounded a lil bit like debussy’s arabesque in E

    • @dannywapbang
      @dannywapbang 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      And Schroeder

    • @FredericChopin-if5rn
      @FredericChopin-if5rn 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @onlysofiaa Those triplets sound like Doctor Gradus ad Parmesan

  • @AwKeShen.
    @AwKeShen. 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +23

    With the melody singing above the flowing accompaniment... this is accomplished for a 13 yr old!

  • @Hyonemoto
    @Hyonemoto 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +14

    0:20 sounds like chopin's Ballade No.3!
    Very good composition btw

  • @grae9543
    @grae9543 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    I am going to use this as 'credits' music in my long running dnd campaign with some friends, it's ending sometime next month and I can't wait to see the look on their faces as it ends with this beautiful piece playing in the background, thank you for giving me the final piece to my enormous passionate puzzle.

  • @Brandonek_ENTP
    @Brandonek_ENTP 10 วันที่ผ่านมา +103

    Very surprised to see another young teen composer in impressionism for piano! I've been writing music for a while also in the same style more on ravel then debussy but both are similar in the time period. Using the triplets It would probably be easier to use 12/8 just for notation but other wise it is very nice. If you live in the US I'd suggest joining some competitions. Ones I've done are MTNA, NAFMC, and SCMEA. Doing so can really get you out there! I believe that this could get you in high rankings!

    • @Jwellsuhhuh
      @Jwellsuhhuh 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

      *modernism

    • @Brandonek_ENTP
      @Brandonek_ENTP 8 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@Jwellsuhhuh There is a difference in composition and color/tone styles between modernism and impressionism. I compose in an impressionistic sound but for this composer im not so sure. But could you tell me how it is modernism. Id like to know!

    • @Jwellsuhhuh
      @Jwellsuhhuh 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Brandonek_ENTP ok so I searched it up and basically every music historian to ever exist bullied ravel/debussy by calling them impressionists when they were actually "modernists" for the time, in the meaning that thier work's style deviated significantly from their late romantic counterparts, breaking the rules of harmony and using exotic scales. But they were still mostly quite tonal and were known for their music being sorta atmospheric and textural. Contrast to stravisky and other later 20th century composers and its taken again to a whole new level. "Now", stravinsky is "modernist" and debussy is simply just "impressionistic" simply because he didn't really deviate from tonal norms that much, especially compared to later composers.
      In the spirit of being empathetic to the time period, "impressionism" should rightfully be called modernist, or at least "early modernist", in my opinion. It puts more emphasis on ALL inventions made by composers of the period, not simply the fact that their music was very atmospheric.

    • @Brandonek_ENTP
      @Brandonek_ENTP 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Jwellsuhhuh That makes sense how you put it and I do remember learning that which is really fascinating! I do compose very similar to ravel and Debussy and with that logic from the time modernist would make sense since the colorful and different tonality but overal the term from tha specific group of composers has dropped down to impressionism in todays terms. But back then you could say that I was a modernist!

    • @Jwellsuhhuh
      @Jwellsuhhuh 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Brandonek_ENTP yes

  • @roostercubed
    @roostercubed 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +29

    i LOVE polyrhythms and this made my day

    • @ascalt7868
      @ascalt7868 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Listen to Pyramid Song by Radiohead

  • @PhxIsPhx
    @PhxIsPhx 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +107

    13 years old is insaneee 😮 this song reminds me of a Minecraft series called whitepine (similar music)

    • @nurrasyid14_
      @nurrasyid14_ 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      I started to compose when I was 11. My first work is the theme of Variations in Eb minor on my vids.

    • @omekapo
      @omekapo 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I LOVE WHITEPINE❤❤❤

    • @nova-witchwood
      @nova-witchwood 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Whitepine is peak! I’m happy someone else is talking about it!

    • @crocodillian9486
      @crocodillian9486 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      WHITEPINE MENTION ASHAJSKSJAJSKSKA

    • @gachaxJDE
      @gachaxJDE วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      MY EXACT THOUGHTS HELLO???

  • @audreyyaj
    @audreyyaj 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +34

    I’m in love with measure 19

    • @ayden709
      @ayden709 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      pleasure-striking key change chord

    • @omekapo
      @omekapo 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      same

  • @santiagopesci7561
    @santiagopesci7561 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +115

    The polyrythms are strong with this one...

    • @Fakob225
      @Fakob225 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      What polyrhythms? There are no polyrhythms. There are a crap ton of triplets that don't need to be there though. This song should be in 12/8.

    • @sismik6025
      @sismik6025 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@Fakob225 there are polyrhythims right before the key change in 0:36, watch out

  • @the_green_snake4187
    @the_green_snake4187 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

    this is incredibly beautiful! im glad this popped up in my recommended 😊

  • @LaurenRippe-dj6so
    @LaurenRippe-dj6so 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Aww, I play piano a little bit but mostly trumpet, but I believe that if you work hard and you want to become one, you could become one of the greatest composers of our time! :D you’ve got a new subscriber, and I’m excited to see you grow!

  • @maximoperalta3095
    @maximoperalta3095 4 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    i actually love it, its so calm and charming

  • @tipicoseisillo3230
    @tipicoseisillo3230 10 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    Dude, this its beautiful, very inspiring, I love it!

  • @mathiasstewart2914
    @mathiasstewart2914 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    The chord changes m19-23 are so well done!

  • @EmmanuelGiouvanopoulos
    @EmmanuelGiouvanopoulos 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

    Very nice!
    I am also 13 and studying music, nowhere NEAR this good tho!
    take care man (or woman, idk), congrats

  • @nick-t4r3c
    @nick-t4r3c 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    This is amazing. My new favorite piece!

  • @W4Lalways
    @W4Lalways 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Young man, you’re amazing.

  • @grantschade2072
    @grantschade2072 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    this was beautiful to listen to. you just gained a subscriber. i look forward to hearing more stuff you write!

  • @aPersonWhoHasViolins
    @aPersonWhoHasViolins 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +97

    Hm you really like adding triplets! I'm a student learning music too.

    • @Iamjustapianostool
      @Iamjustapianostool  21 วันที่ผ่านมา +28

      Yeah, I do hahaha :) Hope to see you a lot in the field, it's such a small circle!

    • @aPersonWhoHasViolins
      @aPersonWhoHasViolins 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      :)

  • @TheConnor6901
    @TheConnor6901 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    I once composed (and could play) a song when I was around 13, too, but I couldn't make it online because it has rubato and smorzandos.
    Good song, nonetheless!

  • @TobiTried
    @TobiTried 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    This reminds me of Midna's Lament from Legend of Zelda Twilight Princess with the piano

    • @boone99999
      @boone99999 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

      It's in Dorian (like that song)

  • @thesecondfeliks5152
    @thesecondfeliks5152 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +34

    Very nice, reminds me of Debussy

    • @Iamjustapianostool
      @Iamjustapianostool  21 วันที่ผ่านมา +18

      thanks! wrote this with french impressionism in my mind, so i'm glad you said that!

  • @andrewwatson8615
    @andrewwatson8615 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Accurate description 😂. Jokes aside, this is really impressive. I hope you continue composing.

  • @ZakCheshire
    @ZakCheshire 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

    I like it! Reminds me a bit of Daydreaming by Radiohead

  • @sunilj2608
    @sunilj2608 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The cadenzas and shifting tonalities halfway through the piece, the subsequent undercurrent of tension and its release reminde me so strongly of Miriam Hyde (renowned Australian 20th century comppser) and her pieces, perhaps Water Nymph in particular ❤

  • @Rocks_193
    @Rocks_193 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bro you are a wizard or some sh because this is BEAUTIFUL

  • @ashtonstaples2996
    @ashtonstaples2996 7 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I want more music like this. Reminds me of Animals as Leaders without all the metalness haha great sound

  • @crunchypb1
    @crunchypb1 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    amazing harmonic journey

  • @Seekingtruth0664
    @Seekingtruth0664 33 นาทีที่ผ่านมา

    I think this piece was really well done. It has a nocturne type feel to it with the arpeggiating bass line and the lyrical soprano. I would say Chopin type music, but there isn't enough ornamentation. More of something back from John Field's era. I do really appreiciate this though. This reminds me of Mozart when he started creating music when he was really young too. I'm glad we still have such people like that today that enjoy the art of composition.

  • @sharpy_arty
    @sharpy_arty 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This popped up on my youtube feed and wow this is absolutely beautiful

  • @cherrypicker777
    @cherrypicker777 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Wow this is beautiful well done!

  • @mypianoschat9475
    @mypianoschat9475 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Not bad lmao. Not bad. It's wonderful. It has alot of Potential as well. Reminds me of Un baroque Sur L'ocean. Amazingly done

  • @Lìnne1196
    @Lìnne1196 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The key changes are absolutely heavenly

  • @NothingHere-rn5bw
    @NothingHere-rn5bw 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    imagine that if you keep learning and trying different stuff, you'll get to compose even better pieces

  • @JJBerthume
    @JJBerthume 22 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Ooo after 0:40 is especially magical

  • @cookiedadev
    @cookiedadev 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I'm proud of you son, like genuinely. This is insane

  • @rosafloera
    @rosafloera 2 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    that's wonderful piano stool, i'll be cheering for you.

  • @johnnytheyoungmaestro
    @johnnytheyoungmaestro 7 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Wow, this is impressive!! Fantastic job!! :)

  • @suto_05
    @suto_05 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Bro must have grasped the concept of reversed cursed technique on the brink of death.

  • @purajieloh5669
    @purajieloh5669 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    bro is the embodiment of the simply piano AD. Jokes aside, this is beautiful

  • @hooman9554
    @hooman9554 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    I'm sorry for ever touching staff paper

  • @syberyah
    @syberyah 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    That's gorgeous. It's a little weird that it's pp the whole time--I had to turn my computer volume all the way up--but that is really pretty

  • @maddie-yt2qn
    @maddie-yt2qn วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    idk why but it reminds be of raindrops and in the end the rain stops

  • @Kuba-xw1mw
    @Kuba-xw1mw วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sometimes I feel like I'm making progress learning piano for 3 years, but then I see someone younger being better than me.
    I feel proud and happy for them, but also a bit disappointed in myself too

  • @cameronpeterson1175
    @cameronpeterson1175 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Just very very lovely. I am proud of you for your sensitivity as a 13 year old to melody and colorful harmony. Well done.

  • @andreami7
    @andreami7 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    u wrote this at thirteen??! thats pretty fire ngl but like hello? time signature?

  • @kiti-g8c
    @kiti-g8c 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    dude I be you finna get famous asf and then others find this as your frist apperince keep it up!

  • @Mj-kl3rb
    @Mj-kl3rb วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    plot twist hes now 14

  • @kitsicatz
    @kitsicatz 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    this is gorgeous omg

  • @croffule
    @croffule วันที่ผ่านมา

    the kinda melodies i make in my head 😭 this is so impressive oh my lord

  • @EleleleanorK
    @EleleleanorK 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is a really lovely little piece
    Good job :)

  • @LuiDeca
    @LuiDeca 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Good work!! I also started composing at 13 (that was a while ago). Never stop!!!

  • @JirafaSardina
    @JirafaSardina 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your composition is beautiful, I like so

  • @ghxt-6865
    @ghxt-6865 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    This makes me think of video games where the background music changes whenever your in battle!

  • @cocop1139
    @cocop1139 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    I know this will pop up in the algorythm in 8 years so this is a message for the future people, has GTA 6 come out yet?

  • @isaacramos4335
    @isaacramos4335 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +9

    This should be the next minecraft song disc, incredible

  • @mysticthemyth
    @mysticthemyth 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This makes me think of the majestic music of Genshin Impact I love it

  • @chris1549
    @chris1549 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    There's a certain young quality to it. It's like you can hear that you were young or maybe less experienced when you wrote it. Ofc I couldn't do that bow lol and it is impressive, but I think that the lack of polish adds to the charm

  • @nicholaswise5818
    @nicholaswise5818 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Reminds me of Midna's Lament

  • @nonameyet678
    @nonameyet678 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    It's so good it sounds like someting i could play on repeat for 4 hours a day, it sounds like trying to remember a memory that's hard to remember, it sounds like something ethereal and out of this universe, if a robotic play was that good then what if an actual human plays it with alot of emotions?

  • @SomethingN-xd7de
    @SomethingN-xd7de 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    damn this is actually really good tf

  • @Flappy09
    @Flappy09 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Here’s a tip, make it 12/8, and set the tempo as dotted quarter =, as opposed to quarter =

  • @thatoneguynooneknows8187
    @thatoneguynooneknows8187 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This has a really strong Halo odst feel to it

  • @WhereHowWhenWhy
    @WhereHowWhenWhy วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is about to be one hell to practice with all that polyrhythm but will sound cool :]

  • @TheSpiderMeisterFT
    @TheSpiderMeisterFT 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Very nice notation 😭

  • @kennacy
    @kennacy 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This just means that you were an insanely talented teenager! Way to go!

  • @Misterbebecito
    @Misterbebecito 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Close enough Chopin, welcome back!

  • @str1c7
    @str1c7 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Ts magnificent 🙏

  • @happyhex9497
    @happyhex9497 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I hope to hell you’re still writing because this is so good 😭😭

  • @villemartensson6047
    @villemartensson6047 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Sounds SOOO Minecrafty and I like it

  • @MichaelPianoYT
    @MichaelPianoYT 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This reminds me so much of reverie but idek why

  • @scrybe_of_technology
    @scrybe_of_technology 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    new pokemon town theme just dropped

  • @Catsdrivingatruck
    @Catsdrivingatruck 16 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Pls release this on Spotify I need it in my soul rn

  • @vinni-.-
    @vinni-.- 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This is magestic af

  • @thefitness-grampacertest9364
    @thefitness-grampacertest9364 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    You could probably play around with different textures and registers, but other than that, this is extremely impressive given your age. (also you could use 12/8 and cross staff-beaming

  • @scemer_cat
    @scemer_cat วันที่ผ่านมา

    It‘s so good!❤

  • @corrin9796
    @corrin9796 20 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Damn that's good, I started when I was 15...2 years have passed and made little progression

  • @daylightbuilds5594
    @daylightbuilds5594 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Need your musescore link!

  • @Românașul5678
    @Românașul5678 9 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    very good piece for a 13 year old

  • @Wandering-sheep
    @Wandering-sheep 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Utterly beautiful.

  • @Catherines_Gospel_Music
    @Catherines_Gospel_Music 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    At this rate you might be the next “ The World’s best piano player” 😁

  • @Blueskies2513
    @Blueskies2513 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    No way i got a notification and it synced with this PERFECTLY

  • @rodneymills6477
    @rodneymills6477 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Holy heck.
    I was writing at this age, and writing quintents. But they were far more I-V-vi-IV-I.
    I did always end on IV. Still do. It's unresolved, like my life.

  • @seanieempire4014
    @seanieempire4014 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Ok ok, I see the signs, fine, I’ll write my own music now.

  • @letosvet1
    @letosvet1 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    That's amazing, very well done

  • @antonikalinow286
    @antonikalinow286 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    people will see the most common method, like passages on chords, basic melody (no rythm only on one chord) and they will still say that sound really good, not that look like a improvisation, its like playing passages on 5 chords,
    i mena probably this piece have already existed, or similar, too simple can't be remembered
    yes im the hater, but not of you, of the piece, keep making pieces, themore you make the better
    your first piece
    thing i would like to know before i started composing:
    -using dominant chord is the first step to sound beautiful (harmonic tension)
    -second step is using subdominant
    - learning chord, scales, theory will improved my composing/improvising the most
    good luck

  • @魚-c3d
    @魚-c3d 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Lovely composition, impressive for a 13 years old 😵‍💫

  • @Cogmania
    @Cogmania 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I love it! very arabesque-y! you should record an acoustic piano version, as opposed to just computer audio!

  • @Nanjiancool
    @Nanjiancool 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Great song! Crazy song i love it it looks hard i wish i could i can play it

  • @YanSay
    @YanSay 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Damn.. at 13 years old I started playing Chopin’s waterfall etude, but with so many mistakes