The ONLY IELTS Writing Task 2 Strategy You Need in 2025

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  • @Ieltsadvantage
    @Ieltsadvantage  2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

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  • @DayAres
    @DayAres 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +110

    My exam is tomorrow, good luck for me and for everyone else!

    • @ngeneichristian7483
      @ngeneichristian7483 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      good luck

    • @luzlamboglia8062
      @luzlamboglia8062 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      believe it I dint need lucky, I am the lucky one :)

    • @Alaa-wv4jk
      @Alaa-wv4jk 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      saaaame here im kinda stressed hahah , best wishes to us

    • @tabella5233
      @tabella5233 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Same here!

    • @onyiebisi8836
      @onyiebisi8836 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Thanks alot, your explanation is wow

  • @aditii1145
    @aditii1145 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +56

    I manifested this video! I was looking for a video to guide me for task 2, and this was uploaded today :)
    My test is day after tomorrow and hope to score well

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

    • @pulakgaming2246
      @pulakgaming2246 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

      aditi will you be my friend

  • @buni076
    @buni076 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +228

    Tomorrow my exam please wish me best of luck🎉🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +37

      Best of luck!

    • @MalikaOlimovq-g4b
      @MalikaOlimovq-g4b 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      Good luck,🎉

    • @nifutaka
      @nifutaka 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Good luck!

    • @Tar3q_1998
      @Tar3q_1998 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Same here.

    • @kritibhaskar3286
      @kritibhaskar3286 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

      Best of luck may you get 8.5

  • @NguocDongVanHoc
    @NguocDongVanHoc 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +25

    Following your guidances and advices, I have been able to achieve my dream score of 8.5 writing a few weeks ago. My appreciation for you is simply ineffable. Thank you so much.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Fantastic!

    • @VICTORCHERUYOT-q8w
      @VICTORCHERUYOT-q8w 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      How long did you train

    • @NguocDongVanHoc
      @NguocDongVanHoc 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @ I have self-taught myself under the tips and lessons from my teachers (both irl and Chris) for 3 years now. My starting point was around the range of 2~2.5 wri back then.

    • @ngeneichristian7483
      @ngeneichristian7483 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      wow, congrats

    • @giveme8.0band
      @giveme8.0band 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      congratss!! may i ask for some of your online sample sources/materials for writing? im also viet btw

  • @MuxammedAtamuratov
    @MuxammedAtamuratov 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    The do & don'ts made it so simple to undertand and easy to follow!

  • @airplanedrawings6204
    @airplanedrawings6204 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +16

    Heyyyyy!!!! Thankyou for your guidance!!! I wrote my IELTS Academic test in December on the 31st but only recieved a 6.5 band score. I realised that I had written the wrong answer and that hindered my task completion score. So I did the IELTS again a few days back and recieved an 8 band score in writing!!!! And I got a 9 in listening and the remaining two went well (I got an 8.5 in both speaking and reading). I binge watched a lot of your videos and I would definitely recommend this channel!!

  • @mehrajhussen1
    @mehrajhussen1 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +15

    My exam is tomorrow, and I was looking for a writing part 2. Yay!

    • @iftakhartalukder5651
      @iftakhartalukder5651 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      What was the task 2 question?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

    • @mehrajhussen1
      @mehrajhussen1 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

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  • @MuhammadUmarxonov
    @MuhammadUmarxonov 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +24

    My exam is tomorrow. Fortunately, I have been watching your videos for 3 months . Wish me luck

  • @MuxammedAtamuratov
    @MuxammedAtamuratov 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    This video drastically helped me boost my confidence in writing essays!

  • @Kriti-fv2ys
    @Kriti-fv2ys 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +29

    I got 7.5 overall band watching your writing task videos, just 2 days from my exam and your videos and the website helped me more than my online course. Thank you for these videos and all the resources!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      Amazing. Well done for doing all the hard work.

    • @Mubinasaidakbarova
      @Mubinasaidakbarova 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Woow great where are you from

    • @mariacloud5517
      @mariacloud5517 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      congratulations! can you tell me how did you study? Any plans or advice?! Is it difficult for a person with 70% or let's say 65% English level for example... I'm looking for a Scholarship after a month but I don't have IELTS certificate yet. I'm hesitant.

    • @Kriti-fv2ys
      @Kriti-fv2ys 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@mariacloud5517 I was in a similar place as well, but I feel with IELTS, in addition to english level it’s also about time management and confidence. I think the reason I scored less in writing was my inability to manage time effectively, like I feel I could have scored better if I had managed my time better and avoided silly mistakes. So practice writing and learn time management, at-least finish your writing exam 5 minutes before, so you can go over through the whole thing and this will let you spot silly mistakes. This was my experience prior to giving the real test, as I had less time to prepare, this realisation came to me quite late. Also, while speaking be calm and relaxed, and be confident just answer the question like you are talking to a friend, not an examiner. I feel I could have scored more, if I was relaxed because of my test anxiety I feel I got stressed for no reason. At least, this was my experience with the exam. And as for reading and listening, practice from the real test as Chris had mentioned, it will give you the confidence. Before that I had attempted mocks from fake websites and that hampered my confidence a bit. And at last, for me in listening maps questions were the most difficult one and I feel I loose focus during that as the recordings are quite boring to listen to so try maintaining that, in listening, focus is all matters. I hope this helps !

    • @Kriti-fv2ys
      @Kriti-fv2ys 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ⁠@@mariacloud5517 I was in a similar situation as well and I feel my level of english is also around 70%. I feel in IELTS other than the English level, confidence and time management matters a lot. In writing, I could have scored more if I managed my time effectively. If I had managed my time better, I am pretty sure I could have done some revision and avoid making silly mistakes.This is something I realised, when I was practising 2 days before my IELTS exam. In addition to this, while speaking be calm and confident, don’t think you are giving a test or be stressed that the examiner is going to ask very difficult questions and you will make some kind of mistake. I am pretty sure mistakes would be made, but don’t dwell on it while giving or before the exam.
      When, I gave my speaking, due to test anxiety I guess, I fumbled a bit and lost my confidence and ended up repeating things, which led me to having slightly lower score. So try giving the exam with the mindset that you are talking to a friend and be relaxed. I know, easier said than done, but I feel it’s an important aspect. Other than this for listening, focus matters quite a bit and I feel I lost some concentration, while listening to audios, because quite frankly they are very boring. Practise official mock tests and try maintaining focus. I hope this helps and all the best!

  • @abishekk6020
    @abishekk6020 14 วันที่ผ่านมา +11

    Thank you, IELTS Advantage! I practiced using your videos throughout the week before my exam and was able to achieve an overall band 8.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're welcome and congratulations!

  • @itstimeforfun7292
    @itstimeforfun7292 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Hello Chris. I’ve watched ur videos during the last weeks for my ielts test and somehow I got a 7.5 even though before I’ve never gotten pass 6.5. Tysm for the videos and keep up the good work.

  • @Ramseyfra
    @Ramseyfra 10 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I want to thank you, Mr. Pell, for all the content you provide. I only had three days to prepare for my IELTS, and thanks to your videos, I managed to achieve an overall score of 7.0.

  • @TheDichan123
    @TheDichan123 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thanks

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Thank you! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to contact us.

  • @delvarisreginald5781
    @delvarisreginald5781 7 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Hello, Chris!!
    I've found out about your channel not long ago, but ever since I've been learning how to write properly.
    Thank you!!

  • @axsthxticccc___
    @axsthxticccc___ 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I’ve got 7 bands chris you helped me a lot because of you I’ve got 7 bands within 2 weeks

  • @27thprecinct
    @27thprecinct 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Chris, thank you so much for your materials here on YT! I was referred to your channel by a friend who had her exam last year. I prepared my exam for just one week using your videos (my problems comes mostly from the writing section). I have just received my score, an overall band 8.0! (L:9, R:8.5, W:6.5, and S:7)
    Thank you so much, and keep up the good work!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Congratulations! Well done!

  • @Unrecyclabletrash
    @Unrecyclabletrash วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    1.General topic
    Specific topic
    2. Why is This
    What "effects" does it Have on them?
    3. Brainstorm -> what is the Most obvious answer to previous questions
    4. Intro : paraphrase, answer both questions simply
    5. First answer + explanation + example
    6. 2nd answer + explanation + example
    7. Summary of Answer to both question

  • @yugadinawale15
    @yugadinawale15 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Hello Chris!
    I got my IELTS results today and I scored an overall of 8.5!
    I did not prepare a lot but just understood the writing structures using your videos. Your tips for speaking helped as well!
    Thank you!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Great job!

    • @samuelomochi7912
      @samuelomochi7912 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

      congratulations! how long did you prepare

  • @jiyag2707
    @jiyag2707 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    i got overall 7 because i did just two days of prep 😭(regretting now), my writing score was 6 which bought it down but the rest were in the range of 7.5-8
    because of your channel i was able to achieve this! thank you sm

  • @acommonplacebook
    @acommonplacebook 9 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Thank you very much for your videos! My exam is tomorrow, please wish me the best of luck. 🙏🏻✨

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  9 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You're very welcome! Best of luck on your exam tomorrow!

  • @joykarunya8265
    @joykarunya8265 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Thank you so much Chris sir. I’m really grateful to you. I got my results today. I’ve got overall band score 7.
    Your advices and strategies helped me a lot.🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • @shreyaroy817
    @shreyaroy817 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Hey Chris! I just passed my ielts with an overall score of 8.0, with a prep time of only three days. I couldn’t have done it without your amazing videos. Thanks a lot 🫶

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Great job! Congratulations!

  • @amirkhanasadzada
    @amirkhanasadzada 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you, very much. I got almost 7.5, thanks to you. You are the best online teacher.

  • @daOnlyak1on
    @daOnlyak1on 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you chris I got an overall 7 band due to your videos especially reading and writing

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  9 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Congratulations! We're glad the videos helped.

  • @idowuronkeakinsuwa2794
    @idowuronkeakinsuwa2794 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    She puts everything together as a paragraph

  • @chuminhkhue5608
    @chuminhkhue5608 6 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hey Chris! My dad and I only had 2 weeks to study for our IELTS, so when I found your videos and realized how informative they are, I immediately shared them with my dad. He was so delighted, and we both learned a lot from your videos. We received our scores today: I got an 8.0, and my dad got a 6.0. Without you, my dad and I would hardly have been able to get this close and achieve these scores in such a short time. Thank you, Chris!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're welcome and thank you for your kind words. Congratulations to you and your dad.

  • @MuxammedAtamuratov
    @MuxammedAtamuratov 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I wish much luck to everyone whose exams are due to. I hope you all get your desired scores and prove that hard work pays off!

  • @SrushtiPatel-p4v
    @SrushtiPatel-p4v 11 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Tomorrow is my exam I think I will get a good score please wish me the best of luck 🎉

  • @claudeericsoncoronado1597
    @claudeericsoncoronado1597 10 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Here's my take, hope I get selected!! Taking my One-Skill Retake on the 24th of Jan and I need comments on my writing! I need a 7.5 or higher, but aiming for at least an 8.5!
    Food is one of the most important necessities for a person to live, if not the most important. Nowadays, people consume larger quantities of processed food than ever before. The reason for this could possibly be due to the convenience and cost-effectiveness that this kind of commodity provides. However, the possibility of illness and disease arising from its long-term consumption might occur.
    We are now living in a fast-paced environment where people are expected to accomplish tasks more rapidly to be able to do more. As a result, processed food was invented to provide consumers with the most efficient and convenient way of nourishing themselves. Food that originally took hours to prepare would now only take a few minutes to be ready. This allowed people to allocate more time for other activities in their day. Also, processed food is cheaper than other commodities like vegetables, fruit, and meat. This encourages households to gravitate toward the former because they can shop for more food while on a small budget. Given its convenience, and cost-effectiveness, this would naturally lead to people eating more of this product than before.
    On the other hand, we must consider the detrimental effects this might have, especially on one’s health. Processed food is known to contain a myriad of preservatives and chemicals. In fact, it is well-documented that long-term exposure to some of these ingredients like Nitrates, for example, are a risk-factor for developing a variety of cancers in the body. Furthermore, eating large amounts of processed food can lead to an individual eventually being out of shape and overweight. Down the line, this could possibly lead to cardiovascular disease like hypertension and atherosclerosis.
    In conclusion, due to the benefits of processed food like its convenience and affordability, it led to people buying more of this today. Nevertheless, we must not ignore the effects that this might have on our bodies in the future.

    • @OlaideFadimu
      @OlaideFadimu 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You tried. Well done

  • @aditii1145
    @aditii1145 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    People have started consuming more and more processed food items now, as compared to the past. This stems from people having less time to cook at home due to their demanding lifestyles, and results in negative health impacts. This essay will delve into the reasons for the popularity of processed food among people, and its effects.
    One of the reasons for people preferring processed food is convenience. People have to put in more hours at work now, as opposed to the past, due to which they hardly get any time to cook their meals at home. Therefore, they are attracted to processed food items which are affordable, require little to no effort to prepare, and also appeal to the taste buds. For example, supermarkets across the world are now filled with processed items like cheese, sauces, frozen foods, etc. which are extremely popular among the masses.
    Although processed foods solve these problem in the short-term, they have been proven to have long-term negative health impacts. The consumption of whole foods such as fresh fruits and vegetables has reduced due to this, and has lead to people facing vitamin deficiencies. Various studies have also shown that highly processed food contains many preservatives and chemicals, which can lead to harmful side-effects such as digestion problems, weight gain, etc.
    In summary, it is due to the shift to a hectic lifestyle that people favour processed food items and it is fast becoming one of the causes of their deteriorating health.

  • @matt_b551
    @matt_b551 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Please make this kind of video about speaking part🙌🙌

  • @jyotilama6431
    @jyotilama6431 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    Tomorrow i have my exam . Wish me luck 🍀 . Will comment after getting positive results.

    • @AzharJaved-ss7op
      @AzharJaved-ss7op 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      best of luck, tomorrow is also my final exam .

    • @ngeneichristian7483
      @ngeneichristian7483 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      good luck to everyone writing tomorrow

    • @jyotilama6431
      @jyotilama6431 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Best of luck​@@AzharJaved-ss7op

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

    • @adeshmore22
      @adeshmore22 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      hey how was your exam?

  • @AAhmed_Alii
    @AAhmed_Alii 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your videos have been very helpful for me in achieving my desired score within a few days. Thank you very much!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You're very welcome! We're glad the videos helped you achieve your desired score.

  • @EainsiWin-m3i
    @EainsiWin-m3i 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    thank you so much pell for your ultimate guidelines for all of listening, speaking, reading and writing. I took ielts exam last weekend and I got my target with only 1week practice..

  • @GilasiaMovie
    @GilasiaMovie 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Had my computer based IELTS friday and just came here to thank you for all of your efforts.
    Listening 8, Reading 8, Speaking 7, Writing 6.5 with overall of 7.5.
    It all happened because of your teaching methods and I will appreciate you forever!
    Thank you and keep the good stuff going

  • @akvlogstamil5062
    @akvlogstamil5062 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tomorrow I’m writing my exam, This channel was very helpful, wish to score high 💯

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.html. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

  • @ԳոհարԳրիգորյան-է2ձ
    @ԳոհարԳրիգորյան-է2ձ 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hey Chris, I got band 7 with only 1.5 months of preparation. Your videos helped me so much. Thank you!!!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Great job! Congratulations!

  • @marinaperera.33
    @marinaperera.33 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Those rules she mentioned, in my opinion, should be considered more as guidelines for a better writing strategy than as strict black and white conditions that are gonna make one lose points. I don't see a problem in repeting words, specially if the word is a key one for the main topic of the essay and as long as it's not overly repetitive. I doubt that they would reduce the score taking in consideration isolated rules if the overall quality of the writing is decent. I'm preparing to do my IELTS Academic test soon and your videos are great! Truly helpful. Thanks a lot.

  • @nataliiamedianyk9416
    @nataliiamedianyk9416 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hallo, Chris. It is an essay-version from me. People eat more processed food than they did in the past.
    Why is this?
    What are the effects of this?
    Many years ago, people didn’t consume processed food as much as we do today. This is because we work longer and improved our technics to process food farther, so, it gets us save time and make life easier.
    Nowadays, we have to work more and need to accomplish more in a single day than in the past. With busier schedule, individuals tend to plan their shopping list in advance and have a weekly grocery haul. For example, recent calculations showed that cutting, marinating, steam-tempering and cooling chicken pieces in advance on Sunday can save around 60 percent of people’s weekly time, compared to prepare them fresh every day with minimal processing.
    By trying to simplify daily life, we have developed plenty of food processing techniques and create wide variety of appliance for easier cooking. Thus, by reducing cooking time, we can afford to relax and rejuvenate after coming home late in the evening. For example, in 1970s, microwave ovens and modern kitchen machines were not common at all. However, today, we can cut a lot of vegetables at once, cook and preserve them in the freezer for a long time. When it’s time for dinner, just taking prepared food from the freeze and warming it in the microwave. In 5 minutes, delicious and nutritious meal is ready to enjoy.
    In conclusion, people tend to eat more processed food now compared to the past because there are plenty of “helpers” in the kitchen to do our life easier after a long working day and we don’t need cutting time into work to reach all task in our dynamic life.

  • @KrishalGamingYT
    @KrishalGamingYT 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    I will be attending examination tomorrow, wish me luck 🤞

  • @Sheyh_pubg
    @Sheyh_pubg 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you very much , I took IELTS in summer and got 6.5 from writing and the only problem was generating ideas

  • @ZarinaRozmetova-w7z
    @ZarinaRozmetova-w7z 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Less than a month left to my exam .As I am watching your videos these days, I feel that I am nearly close to my decent score. Thank you for sharing with us valuable tips.
    Zarina from Uzbekistan 🇺🇿❤

  • @mansiparit
    @mansiparit 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I have an exam on monday... Thank you Thank you Thank you!!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

  • @EnaxonTursunova-x6l
    @EnaxonTursunova-x6l 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Thank you too much for teaching writing skills.When i see your videos, i say myself one day i will teacher as you.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You are welcome! If there's anything we can assist you with, please feel free to reach out.

    • @nifutaka
      @nifutaka 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Wish you best of luck on your journey! Where are you from, if you don’t mind me asking?

    • @EnaxonTursunova-x6l
      @EnaxonTursunova-x6l 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @nifutaka i am from Uzbekiston🇺🇿

  • @harsharss1171
    @harsharss1171 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hello Chris , I just gave my ielts exam and got a band 7.5 , overall L-9, R-7, W-7, S-7, just by watching your videos and only 2 weeks preparation time. Thank you very much, you're the best out there

  • @ryrydjaoud321
    @ryrydjaoud321 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    PLEASE FOR ANYONE THAT PASSED THE TEST CAN I USE THESE VIDEOS AS A PRÉPARATION ???

  • @47r
    @47r 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    hey man, i did my ielts test with only 12 hours of preparation and binge watching your videos recent videos and scored a band 8.
    thank you for going over every detail and the heads up on what to expect in every part of the test. If it weren't for you i wouldn't have gotten the score i got.
    seriously though, anyone doing the test don't procrastinate..

    • @mariacloud5517
      @mariacloud5517 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Hi there congrats ! can you tell me how did you study? Any plans or advice?! Is it difficult for a person with 70% or let's say 65% English level for example... I'm looking for a Scholarship after a month but I don't have IELTS certificate yet. I'm hesitant.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Congratulations!

  • @Svitlana-K75
    @Svitlana-K75 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you so much, Chris.
    Here is my essay.
    People consume larger amounts of processed food than they used to many years ago. This is due to their hectic lifestyles, and as a result, more and more people have worse health than before.
    In the extremely competitive and expensive world, people tend to have more working hours than some decades ago to earn a better living for their families. This means they have to be at work earlier and come home later. Therefore they have less time for cooking at home and are used to buying ready-to-eat products on their way from work or at the weekend. That is cheaper and faster: they can have a family dinner by heating the food. Moreover, their children can serve themselves whilst their parents are still at work. In Toronto, for example, the streets and public transportation are usually overcrowded early in the morning and late in the evening with employees commuting home tired after long working hours without any desire to prepare food.
    The primary effect of eating highly processed food is the overall poor health conditions of the population. In other words, a large proportion of people especially children do not have a well-balanced diet containing all the vital nutrients and suffer from a variety of diseases that sometimes require special treatment. One of the widespread predicaments, for instance, is growing obesity among children and adults almost around the world. These obese people are the result of consuming highly processed food with ingredients harmful to human beings.
    In conclusion, the increasing consumption of processed products caused by a busy life with long working hours harms people’s health.

  • @Alisher-h1d
    @Alisher-h1d 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Thanks for doing such a great job 😊

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're very welcome!

  • @pershangkordabadi8359
    @pershangkordabadi8359 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you for the wonderful video 😊

  • @Lawrence-o8f-o4z
    @Lawrence-o8f-o4z 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Tomorrow I have my IELTS exam . Please wish me luck ! Hope to get the desired marks

  • @nirajagarwal8755
    @nirajagarwal8755 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hey Chris,
    I just wanted to convey my heartfelt thanks to you. When I started preparing, just 2 weeks ago, I was completely clueless on how to approach IELTS. However, I just sticked to your channel and followed everything you explained and I was able to score very well.
    I got my results yesterday and was able to score a 7.5 band.
    Much appreciation for the hard work you have put in.
    Thanks !!

    • @LucyNkrumah-pu3og
      @LucyNkrumah-pu3og 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Wooow that wonderful
      Can share with how you did it

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      This is great to hear! Thank you for your kind words. Congratulations!

    • @nirajagarwal8755
      @nirajagarwal8755 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@LucyNkrumah-pu3og i just sticked to basics, prepared all types of question and practiced. Since i had less time, i devoted around 6 hours everyday. All the best to you !!

    • @adeshmore22
      @adeshmore22 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@nirajagarwal8755 hey niraj congratulations! how about reading how you prepared?

  • @vuxoy_7101
    @vuxoy_7101 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    My test is tomorrow! Hope i'll get good score. Good luck everyone💗

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.html. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

  • @rainbowlyronaldgaming
    @rainbowlyronaldgaming 14 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Has been following Chris since June 2024
    Took my test on 7/1/2025
    L: 8.5 R: 9 W: 6.5 S: 7
    Overall 8
    Thanks for making such high-quality videos, they really helped me out!

  • @Raymond_25have427
    @Raymond_25have427 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thanks a lot for your video !! it is very useful for me

  • @davidajuogu
    @davidajuogu 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Thank you so much sir for your amazing contents. They are so informative.

  • @janntulfahim9009
    @janntulfahim9009 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I wish to work with you guys in the future as a teacher. Right now, I am in the process of excelling in all modules where I have already cracked Band 9 in all modules except writing. Hopefully, in the near future when I am confident about being an expert, i will approach you guys to give me an opportunity to work you.

  • @cleopasmunemo7942
    @cleopasmunemo7942 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    1 week of watching your videos and i scored 7.5. keep posting videos they are helpful.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  11 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Congratulations on your 7.5! We’re so glad our videos helped you.

  • @everythingminah383
    @everythingminah383 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    this was indeed informative and helpful.

  • @ndoloesabe1268
    @ndoloesabe1268 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Had my speaking test today. Was nervous at first but as soon as I started answering my questions, the nervousness disappeared . I am from a native speaking country. Hoping to get a band 7 upwards. My reading, writing and listening is tomo. Please wish me well. Will come back hear with my results . It’s my first attempt.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Best of luck with your scores! You got this!

  • @kalvizidan7118
    @kalvizidan7118 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you, Chris.
    here is my essay
    Nowadays people consume more processed food than ever. This essay believes that this is majorly because of excessive workload. And with too much consumption people may suffer some serious consequence.
    People majorly resort to processed items due to their hectic schedules. In this modern age, people have extreme work pressure which takes a huge amount of their daily lives. After dedicating a long period of time to their jobs, it becomes hard for them to prepare their meals with a tired mind and body. For example, in the US almost every working household uses canned foods for their three time meals as they neither have time or energy to cook for themselves.
    These intakes of highly processed foods results in severe health problems. For preservation purposes, high levels of artificial agents and flavor enhancers are added in canned meals. But, our organs are not build to absorb or process these chemicals which leads to kidney damage, liver damage, gut health issues, etc. For instance, Doctors have found that artificial chesse found on burgers and hot-dogs have so much fat and chemicals in them that by weekly intake a person might suffer from long term heart issues and in the worst case blockages in the heart.
    In conclusion, due to the lack of work life balance people choose processed meals but as these items have extensive amount of unnatural substance heavy consumption of these foods might lead to different sorts of physical problems.

  • @ELS-learn
    @ELS-learn 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Thank you for your help❤

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're welcome. I hope you find it helpful.

  • @sbinhacyeva5105
    @sbinhacyeva5105 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Chris,
    I wanted to thank you for your incredible videos and website. Today, I received my IELTS score, which is an overall 8:
    Listening: 9
    Reading: 8
    Speaking: 8
    Writing: 6.5
    I also want to thank your team for answering all my questions about the exam.
    Thank you again for your support!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You're most welcome and congratulations!

  • @Lahori369
    @Lahori369 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

    May God bless you, dear brother from Pakistan

  • @shodiyorburhonov618
    @shodiyorburhonov618 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hello IELTS Advantage
    These types of content are very useful and helpful,can you please do more videos like these.My writing is becoming better because i know what kind of mistakes i am doing and how to avoid or fix them because of your strategies and advices.I wish you all the best thanks again for helping foreigners to improve

  • @SheteSukanya
    @SheteSukanya 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thankyou sir. I came across your channel during my final days of preparation. Got 7.5 overall with each band score above 7. It was possible because of your great teachings.
    I was lucky to come across this channel. Thankyou very much, I'll appreciate you forever!!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  11 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Congratulations! We're glad the videos helped.

  • @cardosoexotics
    @cardosoexotics 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I just came to this video to say thank you a lot for all the tips you have in your channel.
    Just received my IELTS score with around 1 week of actual studying using your videos and I got:
    L: 8.5 R: 8.0 W: 7.0 S: 7.5
    Overall band 8 which is just what I wanted :)

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Congratulations! We're so glad our videos helped you achieve your goal. Well done!

  • @ruthvikmp9
    @ruthvikmp9 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I've booked my exam on the 24th of January. Hope i get an overall band 7.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Best of luck with your test!

  • @bedirhanyldz5761
    @bedirhanyldz5761 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Chris,
    I just got my IELTS results.
    Band 7.5 overall in my first attempt(L:9/R:7.5/W:6.5/S:7.5)
    Thank you so much, you and your team contributed this success as much as I did. Please never stop helping people around the world. You are the best

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're welcome. Congratulations!

  • @umutargn369
    @umutargn369 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I like your voice you're so tremendously tutor, I realized on of things about your voice I bet your voice is a magical voice isn't it 😅👑

  • @thelamenepali
    @thelamenepali 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    My IELTS band scores are Listening 8.5 Reading 7 Writing 7 Speaking 6.5 Overall Band 7.5 thanks for the guidance

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Congratulations!

    • @adeshmore22
      @adeshmore22 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      hi i need some tips for reading

  • @fuhinar
    @fuhinar 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tomorrow is going to be my exam, just hope for the best results😁

  • @Bouchra__
    @Bouchra__ 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    thank you, your videos are so helpfull

  • @pupsique
    @pupsique 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hello, IELTS Advantage team and Chris! Thank you for your videos. They are sooo useful! Especially videos about moral preparation to the exam. Love you!!! My results: L - 7.5, R - 8, W - 6.5, S -7.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You're welcome. Glad we were able to help. Congratulations!

  • @Quranalkareem14
    @Quranalkareem14 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sir ,my teacher told me to mention the units used in writing task 1, such as " the units used are $ and percentage "

  • @dorrrizzz
    @dorrrizzz 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Chris! Im not the type of person to write comments on youtube, but I really really wanted to thank you for all the materials you provide on this channel! I used only your channel as the guide for my preparation and was able to get 8.5 ❤️ Thanks for your efforts with IELTS Advantage and wish you luck 🍀

  • @Prakruti_Patel29
    @Prakruti_Patel29 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank youuuuuu, I have my exam tomorrow!!!!!!!🎉😭

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.html. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

    • @Prakruti_Patel29
      @Prakruti_Patel29 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @Ieltsadvantage Ohhh, Thank you soo much!

  • @mehrshad.h6919
    @mehrshad.h6919 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    great and such a useful video

  • @ARJs_Gallery
    @ARJs_Gallery 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Using collocation may result in variance

  • @mashrikihussain8341
    @mashrikihussain8341 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you so much for your guidance! 🙏 I got 3/4 days to practice and only followed your videos for writing and speaking guidelines. Today I have received my result. Overall score 8 (Listening 9, Reading 8.5, Writing 7 and Speaking 7.5). Can't thank you enough! 🙏

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Congratulations! We're happy the videos helped you.

  • @faizalramli6654
    @faizalramli6654 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi, Chris! This is my essay for your last question. Hope you can give a feedback for it
    - - - - - -
    These days, people tend to eat more processed food than they did decades ago. This is because they don’t have time to cook and this habit can cause several health problems including obesity.
    Consuming processed food can save our time in this fast-pacing-world. Specifically for people who work in competitive industries, cooking isn’t their main priority, because they are expected to came up at the office early and get home late with short time for break. People don’t have time to cook their meal anymore because they have so many things to do in a short period of time, and processed food often becomes the solution because it’s easier to get and can be saved for a long period of time. In Jakarta, for example, employees who are expected to be at the office at 9 AM should be on the road at 3 or 4 AM to avoid traffic jam, this makes cooking food from scratch for breakfast is harder than just cooking instant noodle that only costs them 10 minutes, and this also happens in lunch and dinner time.
    The main effect of this lifestyle is that it can increase the number of several health problems, including obesity. Processed foods are usually contains high sugars and calories, and also lack of other nutrients that the body actually needs. Those sugars and calories end up becoming fat, and combined with other lifestyle such as lack of physical activities, people are becoming more prone to obesity. World Health Organization reported that the rate of obesity is higher than it was a decade ago, and this correlates with the increasing number of processed food consumption.
    Besides of its advantage by making our life easier in term of finding something to eat, processed food brings several disadvantages, especially when it comes to health. With its high sugars and calories, making it to higher body fat, that can lead to obesity.

  • @ReallyPUBG2023
    @ReallyPUBG2023 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Interesting question for you Where do you live? In Canada?

  • @illuminated197
    @illuminated197 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I am so relieved I have found your channel after desperately searching for a suitable one for me! My academic exam is in 5 days and I need a solid 8, but I haven’t had much time to prepare. (Let’s say I have a week only). Your videos are such a great help. Thank you for what you are doing!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You're very welcome. Best of luck with your test!

  • @karanjeetsingh8419
    @karanjeetsingh8419 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sir plzzzzz ...add more and more videos about writing task 2 love from India

  • @mironshohsobidov2424
    @mironshohsobidov2424 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tomorrow is my exam, thank you

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  11 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.htmlsi=O4uQDc0HduLwvbJ8. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

  • @oualidchoui
    @oualidchoui 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    my exam is tomorow wish me luck good luck for everyone ;)

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  12 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.htmlsi=O4uQDc0HduLwvbJ8. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!

  • @AhmadWithAnE
    @AhmadWithAnE 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I got a 7.5 All thanks to you, I took the decision of giving IELTS on 31st December 2024 and I didn’t really think much of it cause it was an ENGLISH exam I picked the date of 9th January 2025 because my father loves the number 9 and asked me to(haha), I came across your channel learned what to do and what not to do even if you are an avid speaker in these days that I had. And I know I could’ve done better if I would’ve taken it a tad bit seriously.
    NOTE:- I selected Computer based IELTS and it was my first time giving a written test on a computer.
    Thanks a ton again. Cheers❤

  • @LiladharBasyal-v5i
    @LiladharBasyal-v5i วันที่ผ่านมา

    Today is my exam good luck for me and everyone else 🙏

  • @TheOn1yOne.99
    @TheOn1yOne.99 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    While watching your videos and guidance i feel the test is so easy but when i practice the real test, it becomes harder😅

  • @aditii1145
    @aditii1145 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Just got my result today -- Reading 9.0, Listening 8.5, Speaking 7.0, Writing - 8.0, Overall band 8!! This was possible only because of your videos, thank you so much IELTS Advantage and Chris!!

  • @73-mi4ke
    @73-mi4ke 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Chris thank you so much for your help.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      You're welcome! If there's anything we can assist you with regarding your IELTS preparation, please feel free to reach out.

    • @73-mi4ke
      @73-mi4ke 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @Ieltsadvantage you are doing great job, I am really happy to fallow you

  • @IrfanAhamed-c8b
    @IrfanAhamed-c8b 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hey Sir !
    I don't know who you are but your videos helped me to get 7 overall.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  14 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      That's good to know. Congratulations!

  • @christianpedon-ym93
    @christianpedon-ym93 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thanks for the video Chris. Here you can find my essay.
    Over the last decades with new researches done in chemistry field the food market has changed radically. Society has known many new types of processed foods respect the past.
    Thanks to all the technology innovations in various branches of engineering which together have contributed to increasing the types of production techniques. The speed and quality of each process has been dramatically improved with considerable benefits for the food supply system and people.
    With the advent of the modern era our society from agricultural has become progressively industrialised and with it many foods as well. Chemistry and mechanics industries have surely been two of the biggest players in this food revolution. The major control on the chemical composition has made possible to prepare foods in physical states easier to transport in any part of the globe while the mass production a lower average price with a higher affordability. But what has directly increased the processed food consumption in this historical phase is the movement of people from the countryside to the towns and cities. Those who began to live in urban areas were bounded to obtain their food mainly from the industrial supply chain instead of making by themselves.
    The effects we can see of this major consume are both positive and negative and both linked to the great the great variety and availability of foods. On the positive side, the chemical treatment on processed foods allows each person today to choose and find the best solution according personal taste and dietary needs. As instance, respect the past we can think how many malnutrition-related diseases have disappeared.
    On the negative side, we are now daily exposed to any kind of junk food. Salty snacks, energy drinks and sugary foods are the main examples to talk about food addiction especially if the taste is altered to make them more appetising. As consequence our society has seen the highest number of overweight and obese people in the history. Quoting the World Obesity Atlas 2024, it is projected that their number will reach 1.53 billion in 2035.
    To sum up, the technological transition of the last century has increased the quality but also led people to eat more processed foods in their lives with evident pros and cons.

  • @mys-yusuf-2002
    @mys-yusuf-2002 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tomorrow is my IELTS exam. Wish me luck 😊😊 Thanks for helping me in throughout my journey 🤗🤗

  • @mindandheart4213
    @mindandheart4213 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you so much Chris

  • @Tasmiatory
    @Tasmiatory 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tomorrow is my exam...wish me luck... I have been following your videos since 4 months....

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

  • @ΕυηΜασγκαλια-ξ3υ
    @ΕυηΜασγκαλια-ξ3υ 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    My exam is tomorrow good luck to me and everyone 🍀

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Best of luck with your test! You got this!

  • @bhgaming4077
    @bhgaming4077 7 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    tomorrow's my exam, and this video really helped greatly! wish me and everyone good luck! 🙏

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  7 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Hi there, please watch this video on what to do in the 24 hours leading up to your exam: th-cam.com/video/5BJmUQFt0FI/w-d-xo.html. If there’s anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!