Don't say that. Based on your comments your writing is just fine. All you need to do is practise answering questions regularly to prevent you blanking out in the exam
I do well in the English Language however, I can't seem to pass my CXC English exams. I can take 5 to 7 hours to plan on paper, ''A good essay or a short story- 430 words''. It all depends on the category or idea that is based on my vocabulary. I don't read wide.
Sir but this is way pretty than 450 words which I'd the maximum. And this isn't your story, right? Because even seen this before. Lastly, I wish I can find a video where the teacher is literally writing a short story on a yt video.
You can't see this before because it's my work. 450 words is what cxc expects is a decent word count for the student to express himself enough to be graded adequately. It's not a limit.
Part 2 will be posted in 7 days...
ok
May I please have a copy of the story?
It's me again. Such elegance with simple words and magically constructed sentences. English is not my strongest😥😥
Don't say that. Based on your comments your writing is just fine. All you need to do is practise answering questions regularly to prevent you blanking out in the exam
Malika here. Thank you sir
My goodness, I cried😭😂its very emotional Jamain, thank you .
That storyyy😩🤧the beginning is justt wow
#TheReCap
THE HORN😭😭 the story was going so good
Wow as I read the first sentence,I knew this story was going to be good😩
Me: Alright let's see how I can improve my...
Video: "His OWN FLESH AND BLOOD!"
Me: 👁👄👁
Beautifully done💖
I was getting sleepy until I came across this video. This story woke me up. Great job! I loved it.
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Swearrrr I literally had a headache 😂😂😂😂but it’s gone now
Lok
Such a beautiful story
Very great story 😭✌Thank you so much for this.
“the good looking jamain hatton” lol sir
Longest short story ever😂. But it was good tho💯
I love everything about this
This was very deep 🤧🤧😔😔I really enjoyed it u should really write a book❤️❤️❤️🌞
Lol this felt like a movie🔥I love it and want to know morre
Such a great story
Amazinnngg!
great story
Nice piece
Mann this story was fire.
Wish me good luck Tuesday
Thank you for this video
Same here🙈
Hii sir
Can u pls upload more samples🙏🙏🙏
They r amazing n I think students would be able to better grasp essay writing with more available samples
I wish I had watch this before exam
Wow
Students from Niss, please, this (mayor,dejonelle,azariah,de-andre, thelisha,Dylan,kerrono,leasia,shavanya,Richard)
I do well in the English Language however, I can't seem to pass my CXC English exams. I can take 5 to 7 hours to plan on paper, ''A good essay or a short story- 430 words''.
It all depends on the category or idea that is based on my vocabulary. I don't read wide.
WOW
Good night Sir.you are the best teacher ever... I got the English .with your help God blesd
Blush. Stop buttering me up
It was carefully crafted, this is my story😔 and many others in the Caribbean.
Wonderfully crafted*
So sorry to hear that, sigh😭😭😭
This was deep 😕
oh wow
Is what happen Ms Brown?
@@JamainHatton lol that story is really good sir! thanks btw
Incredible
What is
@@JamainHatton The piece, the way you presented it. I really liked it
How did it go????
@@JamainHatton It went well sir. Thanks again for your help!
Known for 16 years...6 years old..🤔🙄😒😬?
16= age of the sister.
Sir but this is way pretty than 450 words which I'd the maximum. And this isn't your story, right? Because even seen this before. Lastly, I wish I can find a video where the teacher is literally writing a short story on a yt video.
You can't see this before because it's my work. 450 words is what cxc expects is a decent word count for the student to express himself enough to be graded adequately. It's not a limit.