I AM SOO SORRY I AM late as i was a bit busy…. 👉🏻👈🏻 BUT I AM GONNA READ IT NOW AND I ALREADY KNOW THAT IT IS GONNA BE REALLY GOOD….. and congrats for getting so many views.. yay!!!! So happy for ya 🎉❤
I really liked it author. But tbh with you. It felt like it was AI generated. It can be because your English is so good and advanced but what i didn't really like was when you used the word Mr.Jeon to describe jungkook. I mean in starting it was okay but even after the introduction and when recalling the past and even in the last scene you used Mr.Jeon. Please address him with just jungkook when the formal titles are not needed. Cuz it feels a bit weird, I am not saying that the story wasn't good, in fact it was really good. I don't mean to be rude but I was just stating my opinion
I was writing this part on wattpad.. so I was in my absent mind and wrote Mr Jeon repeatedly... I fixed it when I was editing.. but still some parts were skipped..🫣 About English, it's my second language and I'm trying to become pro.. ielts fact 💀
@Dreamy_fairy damn your English is really good! And about the Wattpad, can you please give me your Wattpad Id? I also write on Wattpad and i want to read your story on it!
@@Dreamy_fairy can you please make a story"when your step father is obsessed with you" And i am going to compare your ff to T world ff U can say that it is compition between two channel and price is one water mark and 10 subscribers Wanna join??
I AM SOO SORRY I AM late as i was a bit busy…. 👉🏻👈🏻 BUT I AM GONNA READ IT NOW AND I ALREADY KNOW THAT IT IS GONNA BE REALLY GOOD….. and congrats for getting so many views.. yay!!!! So happy for ya 🎉❤
We need a bonus😭💗 it was soooo goood 💌
thats soooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet and beautifullllllllllllllllllllllll
This is sooooooo cute and heartwarming. I loved it. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Bonus please please please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
This needs a bonus
Bonus please....so romantic
Cute ☺️
It was so good
🙏💜🌻🎶✨️
I really liked it author. But tbh with you. It felt like it was AI generated. It can be because your English is so good and advanced but what i didn't really like was when you used the word Mr.Jeon to describe jungkook. I mean in starting it was okay but even after the introduction and when recalling the past and even in the last scene you used Mr.Jeon. Please address him with just jungkook when the formal titles are not needed. Cuz it feels a bit weird, I am not saying that the story wasn't good, in fact it was really good. I don't mean to be rude but I was just stating my opinion
I was writing this part on wattpad.. so I was in my absent mind and wrote Mr Jeon repeatedly... I fixed it when I was editing.. but still some parts were skipped..🫣
About English, it's my second language and I'm trying to become pro.. ielts fact 💀
@Dreamy_fairy damn your English is really good! And about the Wattpad, can you please give me your Wattpad Id? I also write on Wattpad and i want to read your story on it!
It's Dreamy_fairy_7.. There's no significantly any different story there but I'm going to start though.. give me yours one too!
@@Dreamy_fairy can you please make a story"when your step father is obsessed with you"
And i am going to compare your ff to
T world ff
U can say that it is compition between two channel and price is one water mark and 10 subscribers
Wanna join??
We need a bonus
Or more parts