I'm torn over this video. It has brilliant A02 content and outlines everything mentioned in the title but there's no explanation! Direct quotes of (a few) of the instances that annoyed me about this video '[insert quote]' ; 'has changed before it... erm has changed before it (he's wondering what he wrote because it doesn't make sense) has now changed erm… you know, before this really important dramatic event (breezes past it, ignoring what he is saying is wrong) ; 'Soraya's story which is a bit meh' (WHAT DOES THAT MEAN? First there is no explanation to that 'comment' but you say it contrasts to Amir. How? This is the same throughout. Comments with seemingly no explanation or apparent 'link'). Can I also say anther really important thing for all those of you who are using this? You might want to fact-check some of the things this guy says. Just two because there is so many and I'm only half way through. 5:20 'change in voice...after the rape we only get the rape with very little emotion'. I know this is simply incorrect because it is SO emotional after the rape my teacher got us to write a whole essay on it. 9:21 'pathetic fallacy-clouds of guilt over Amir' in the first page, opening chapter. I thought 'that's interesting' *goes to book* literally says 'The early-afternoon sun sparkled on the water'. Zero reference to clouds. I wouldn't have such a problem over these things if your channel wasn't called 'A level Revision', which suggests it should be a credible resource for students. For these 'comments' and incorrect details to be in your video, when clearly a lot of people come here to learn information that they will put in exams, it's not really right. Don't let this stop anyone watching. I'm just saying that If you do, take things with a pinch of salt.
Great video, only thing is that you just read out the notes, I mean they were great notes and all. But you didn’t at all explain things further than the notes itself and that’s the only problem
thank you! my exam is tomorrow, and this has helped me more than my actual teacher :)
I'm here for my semester exam and I hope this helps 🙏
I'm here for an AP test tomorrow after not studying beforehand
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how did your exam go 8 years ago?
I'm torn over this video. It has brilliant A02 content and outlines everything mentioned in the title but there's no explanation! Direct quotes of (a few) of the instances that annoyed me about this video '[insert quote]' ; 'has changed before it... erm has changed before it (he's wondering what he wrote because it doesn't make sense) has now changed erm… you know, before this really important dramatic event (breezes past it, ignoring what he is saying is wrong) ; 'Soraya's story which is a bit meh' (WHAT DOES THAT MEAN? First there is no explanation to that 'comment' but you say it contrasts to Amir. How? This is the same throughout. Comments with seemingly no explanation or apparent 'link').
Can I also say anther really important thing for all those of you who are using this? You might want to fact-check some of the things this guy says. Just two because there is so many and I'm only half way through. 5:20 'change in voice...after the rape we only get the rape with very little emotion'. I know this is simply incorrect because it is SO emotional after the rape my teacher got us to write a whole essay on it. 9:21 'pathetic fallacy-clouds of guilt over Amir' in the first page, opening chapter. I thought 'that's interesting' *goes to book* literally says 'The early-afternoon sun sparkled on the water'. Zero reference to clouds.
I wouldn't have such a problem over these things if your channel wasn't called 'A level Revision', which suggests it should be a credible resource for students. For these 'comments' and incorrect details to be in your video, when clearly a lot of people come here to learn information that they will put in exams, it's not really right.
Don't let this stop anyone watching. I'm just saying that If you do, take things with a pinch of salt.
thank you ! my exam is tomorrow, this was very helpful.
exams in two hours!!! thank you for this
Thanks this was really helpful, you also sound like Daniel Radcliffe btw
HELP what happens in the book?
Thanks bro helped so much now I can pass with excellence endorsement!
Great video! exam is tomorrow aaaah
Sadears A same
Yo 2018 Same
2019 gang let's go
Thank you SOO much for this. My exam is tomorrow😂
Very informative and great literary analysis! :)
Nafeesa Khan Thanks! :)
cheers, my exam is just tomorrow.
great video thanks mate
thank you my exam is tomorrow !
Glad you've found it useful! Yeah me too. Good luck Shelley!
A level Revision good luck to you too, stranger!
Thank you my test is tomorrow 😂😂
Great video, is there a chapter analysis video? Thanks
My exam is in an hour xD
Mine is in hours
thank you, helped alot!
thanks my exam is in 30 minutes
Wow, you sound so enthusiastic!
This is actually a good revision video tho
This was pretty good but you don't sound very bothered
Why does that matter he gave you the answers you needed bruh
Great video, only thing is that you just read out the notes, I mean they were great notes and all. But you didn’t at all explain things further than the notes itself and that’s the only problem
Could you make this a downloadable pdf please?
Bill Li why
@@columbiasound8869 So i can use it whenever i want
Very helpful
Helpful overview but you sound so done with this. Did your teacher force you to begrudgingly do this? aha :) thank you though!
Amazing
I have an exam tomorrow thank you for this
Can you tell me about the book?
Thankkku
ehrenmann
thankyou but if you can just increase the quality and explain more easily then it will be very good
A lot of this is not interpreted or developed properly.
This may be the worst revision video I've ever seen
Read the book then dumbass