This track has a lot of potential, but a lot of work needs to be done. Lyrics were decent, the mix needs refining: - Instrumental: Idk if you had the stems or if this is down to beat selection, but the drums sound a bit dry and tinny, while the guitars sound washed and lacking presence. - Vocals: the verses could use some compression and effects such as saturation and reverb to excite the vocals so they aren't as dull. The chorus also feels a bit washed in the background, so bring that up in the mix. Also, I have a feeling that the AMV editor of this song stole the manga edits from NinjaristicNinja at 3:27, seeing as the watermark is still there.
First verse Out of rhythm But the lyrics are nice and chorus was good Couldn't understand some chorus parts. Second part verses were good. Third was good too, a bit our of rhythm but not all Keep it up!
Lowkey...with a little bit of autotune and some alignment with the beat. This could have been on my playlist... I'll be watching my notifications. Redo. Make better. I believe
The chorus is fire 🔥💯
🔥🥺
👏👏👏
I will say that it's decent with amazing amount of potential. And what i would attribute is that everything feels flat without the kick to it.
I appreciate you getting me on this! 💯
This track has a lot of potential, but a lot of work needs to be done. Lyrics were decent, the mix needs refining:
- Instrumental: Idk if you had the stems or if this is down to beat selection, but the drums sound a bit dry and tinny, while the guitars sound washed and lacking presence.
- Vocals: the verses could use some compression and effects such as saturation and reverb to excite the vocals so they aren't as dull. The chorus also feels a bit washed in the background, so bring that up in the mix.
Also, I have a feeling that the AMV editor of this song stole the manga edits from NinjaristicNinja at 3:27, seeing as the watermark is still there.
Not bad
First verse Out of rhythm
But the lyrics are nice and chorus was good
Couldn't understand some chorus parts.
Second part verses were good.
Third was good too, a bit our of rhythm but not all
Keep it up!
And the beat was sick
Lowkey...with a little bit of autotune and some alignment with the beat. This could have been on my playlist...
I'll be watching my notifications. Redo. Make better. I believe