Not bad, but it could be a much longer story with much more back story. Why were her warriors trying to kill her? Who put. The crystals on the first chamber? What were they really for? What about the archive, can it be reactivated and questioned ? What about the invasion's attempts to end the colony? Why is she now not being persecuted for having survived the mutiny?
While Noah's quips were annoying, this is an excellant story. Job well done. Good narrator, too.
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Not bad, but it could be a much longer story with much more back story. Why were her warriors trying to kill her? Who put. The crystals on the first chamber? What were they really for? What about the archive, can it be reactivated and questioned ? What about the invasion's attempts to end the colony? Why is she now not being persecuted for having survived the mutiny?
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