This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters really hope this story continues after all the finalist still have to go to the final round in the TuneIn exams now that Rochi Maru plans have been royally screwed up because of the death of Sasuke, which, by the way, really shocked me, especially finding out that he was going up against Gora in the first preliminary round also, I was shocked to find out that Haku and Naruto were secretly married and they didn’t even know it been me. I’ve been furious though it was with the person that I know that I truly love, but I would still be furious about the whole thing, revise the same way as Naruto oh yeah, Souza would definitely be getting Pranked from hell also Naruto and Haku have to meet Naruto‘s mother and also even with what Sade has been saying about her not ever being pregnant. She’s been checked to see if she had ever been pregnant E.T. or they even remotely end up finding out how Naruto is her son and also with all of that isn’t Naruto supposed to have some kind of inheritance from who his parents are and the other clans that he’s related to really hope this story continues and comes out soon 0:03
Before anyone flames and trolls me this is just my personal opinion. I've listened to this whole thing and don't get me wrong. I kind of like the change of pace but they brought in too much of the Buffy The vampire slayer high school teenage sexual love Interest drama into this, it just doesn't fit for Naruto. And while Naruto has a lot of character development interest stories.It's just too much or it's so blatant.That needed to be toned back.So I wanted more fight action but that's just me
I know this is my second posting on this one. But why does This story show up under harem search. If you're going to include something like the CRA OR polygamous society. Why make it so d*** convoluted and confusing? Everybodys bending over backwards not to just do the deed. This story has turned into a Frustrating teen anxed story. The society this is based is a feudal era, Japan.They had polygamous relationships Left and right. If you had the money, to take care of a harem, you were allowed to have it. Hell, that's true for most of the world. Everybody makes it out like it's a bad thing. Except for the last 200 years is the only time monogamous Relationships were actually thought to be the norm before that all of human history, there were multiple people in relationships not just 2. It all come back to how strong you were and how much money you had. Before anybody gets into Biblical stuff. Think about some of the most holy kings in the Bible head multiple wives. The chosen of God had multiple wives king David. King Solomon all of them had in some counts, hundreds of wives and concubines so just do it or don't, but don't drag it out through the whole book and then say at the end of it, No, we're not going to do it.
I pray for part 2 this series its Wan of de best haku x naruto story's ever so please don't stop now
Love the part 1 need a part 2 please 💚💚💚
Part 2 please
please continue this.
Zabuza doing paperwork funny 😂
Give us a part 2 damn it
Name of fanfic and author
Great story part 2 as soon as possible please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I hope more is coming this is great, great job ❤❤❤
This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters really hope this story continues after all the finalist still have to go to the final round in the TuneIn exams now that Rochi Maru plans have been royally screwed up because of the death of Sasuke, which, by the way, really shocked me, especially finding out that he was going up against Gora in the first preliminary round also, I was shocked to find out that Haku and Naruto were secretly married and they didn’t even know it been me. I’ve been furious though it was with the person that I know that I truly love, but I would still be furious about the whole thing, revise the same way as Naruto oh yeah, Souza would definitely be getting Pranked from hell also Naruto and Haku have to meet Naruto‘s mother and also even with what Sade has been saying about her not ever being pregnant. She’s been checked to see if she had ever been pregnant E.T. or they even remotely end up finding out how Naruto is her son and also with all of that isn’t Naruto supposed to have some kind of inheritance from who his parents are and the other clans that he’s related to really hope this story continues and comes out soon 0:03
It's always the quiet ones 💀💀💀
Before anyone flames and trolls me this is just my personal opinion. I've listened to this whole thing and don't get me wrong. I kind of like the change of pace but they brought in too much of the Buffy The vampire slayer high school teenage sexual love Interest drama into this, it just doesn't fit for Naruto. And while Naruto has a lot of character development interest stories.It's just too much or it's so blatant.That needed to be toned back.So I wanted more fight action but that's just me
Lol there won’t be a sasuke retrieval ark in this one
I know this is my second posting on this one. But why does This story show up under harem search. If you're going to include something like the CRA OR polygamous society. Why make it so d*** convoluted and confusing? Everybodys bending over backwards not to just do the deed. This story has turned into a Frustrating teen anxed story. The society this is based is a feudal era, Japan.They had polygamous relationships Left and right. If you had the money, to take care of a harem, you were allowed to have it. Hell, that's true for most of the world. Everybody makes it out like it's a bad thing. Except for the last 200 years is the only time monogamous Relationships were actually thought to be the norm before that all of human history, there were multiple people in relationships not just 2. It all come back to how strong you were and how much money you had. Before anybody gets into Biblical stuff. Think about some of the most holy kings in the Bible head multiple wives. The chosen of God had multiple wives king David. King Solomon all of them had in some counts, hundreds of wives and concubines so just do it or don't, but don't drag it out through the whole book and then say at the end of it, No, we're not going to do it.