How To Write A Perfect Admissions Essay (Statement of Purpose)

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    In this video we share the secrets of writing successful motivation letter (some universities also call it admissions essay, and if you are applying for a bachelor program the correct name would be Statement of Purpose also known as SOP). If you want to get into American University and get full ride scholarship it has to be outstanding.
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ความคิดเห็น • 168

  • @zahraa100
    @zahraa100 5 ปีที่แล้ว +236

    1. Sell yourself
    2. Make sure the letter fill the rest of application
    3.Shape to your audience
    4.Specify the place
    5.Show you as individual

    • @KasunAtthanayke
      @KasunAtthanayke 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      People might have the false impression of the video as a whole. The person in the video is explaining things broadly rather than narrowly.

  • @TimesResumes
    @TimesResumes 4 ปีที่แล้ว +43

    The first important lesson a student must learn from this video is that one ought to write a unique motivation letter for each university application. It means that one must write six unique motivation letters or statements of purpose for application to six universities after conducting in-depth research on what each of the six universities has to offer. Thanks!

  • @veerlegeraets146
    @veerlegeraets146 8 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Thank you so much for this channel! I am from the Netherlands and want to apply for a master program in Italy. All of these admission things such as GMAT, motivational letters and TOEFL are new to me! These things are very uncommon in the Netherlands so I struggle to find help and information about this. My friends and family have no experience with this either. So really, thank you for this channel and I hope you will keep up the good work!

    • @Y_Surniaiev
      @Y_Surniaiev 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      How is it going now? Did you succeed with your application?

    • @mariellvillafuerte3787
      @mariellvillafuerte3787 ปีที่แล้ว

      I am from Peru and want to apply for Netherlands please help me

  • @mirelafcardinal
    @mirelafcardinal 8 ปีที่แล้ว +66

    I'm a brazillian psychologist who will apply for master's degree programs at US. Thank you for this channel, all your videos help me a lot! Keep with your good work! :)

  • @luthfianurrahmi
    @luthfianurrahmi 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    I stucked with my Admission Essay and found this channel, it's so hellpful ! Im a future special education curriculum consultant and will apply this year. Wish me luck!

  • @oliverfraful
    @oliverfraful 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Great Video! I saw down in the comments a few brazilians thanking you and I am also one of them. I am currently applying for a Computer Science MS up in USA and your channel has been helping me a lot! Keep it up!

  • @samueloseibonsu5111
    @samueloseibonsu5111 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I am a Ghanaian applying for a Masters program in both France and US. Thank you for the insights, I hope they help me draft the best letter and get admission as well.

    • @sergi1788
      @sergi1788 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      did you get it?

  • @sibhatafewerki4406
    @sibhatafewerki4406 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is great advice and guides to write SOP. What I want to say in short is that when he refers to considering your self as a character from what I understand is that your SOP to represent your self as you represent in person to new institution staff. Its not the voice missing I thing you misunderstand him and may be other can take it in that way which is not good. Thanks!

  • @barbaragrison1081
    @barbaragrison1081 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    this was the only video I watched that showded me a different perspective. Thank you!

  • @joellekanyana5874
    @joellekanyana5874 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is the most helpful one of these I have watched. Thank you!

  • @diegomarshall
    @diegomarshall 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Excellent, detailed explanation of how an admission essay is preferred to be written. It's hugely valuable for me in order to transmit these guidelines to my applicant students. Thank you very much indeed from Buenos Aires, Argentina.

  • @raulantuan
    @raulantuan 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am just a teenager, but this is a very useful video. thanks!

  • @linhknguyen2389
    @linhknguyen2389 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm going to apply to bachelor's course in Netherlands next year and i find really hard to write a motivation letter. Thank you for making such a useful video like this :)

  • @thanhatbuio6860
    @thanhatbuio6860 ปีที่แล้ว

    Should I write about my personal interest? For example, "Communication through photography" or so...

  • @kelvinize
    @kelvinize 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Marina
    I subscribed to your channel just 3 days ago and I already love it
    Just today i was doing some research about scholarships in the UK and how to apply to them, and then you upload a video about it haha
    It will be really useful
    thanks again

  • @kiramorgan9831
    @kiramorgan9831 8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks for such accurate and profound tips! It would also be very helpful to learn about how to ace a competence interview 🙏🏼!

  • @mykidsaresupercute
    @mykidsaresupercute 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Thanks, that answered a big question of mine!

  • @christogunussunday
    @christogunussunday 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I am so happy after i have listened to you. Thank you very much

  • @danielprokopowicz8570
    @danielprokopowicz8570 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    A lot of useful information, I will try to write a motivation letter for myself just like a task.

  • @abimbolaadebo6120
    @abimbolaadebo6120 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    These tips are very useful, I have been battling with how to write the letter, thanks so much.

  • @Sweetamber222
    @Sweetamber222 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Already submitted mines, but still watching vids to "see how I did" .

  • @riyanshbuktar854
    @riyanshbuktar854 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was really really helpful...thanks a lot

  • @patriciacorro5614
    @patriciacorro5614 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Privet Marina!
    Nice channel with useful videos, thanks for sharing!
    Regards from Panama!

  • @himland2951
    @himland2951 6 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    what is missing?
    at 3:01
    "your VOICE is missing actually"
    lmao great just great!

    • @brownproud8511
      @brownproud8511 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      him land - lmao I was likeeeee whatttttt come on girl you are running this channel you have a fully funded scholarship and you give such lame answers

  • @abdulraheembaharetha8426
    @abdulraheembaharetha8426 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Linguamarina.... it's very crucial to gain such these things to be accepted at universities.... Thanks

  • @KoVaLtesg
    @KoVaLtesg 8 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Спасибо, как раз думал на этим. Просветили тему.

  • @MrAndrei099
    @MrAndrei099 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your video was really helpful! You're the best!

  • @ZzliyaSan
    @ZzliyaSan 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    That's a great advices...thanks a lot Marina!!!❤

  • @sb8205
    @sb8205 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is very helpful. Thank you very much. I hope it will help me to make my motivational letter. :)

  • @hichem493
    @hichem493 8 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    thank you for the work you are doing, this is great . i would like to know if you can give us some tips for the GRE exams

  • @farazahmed8263
    @farazahmed8263 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    u r doing some real work immpresive

  • @samsonkidane9829
    @samsonkidane9829 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I need to be clear the difference between motivational letter and statement of purpose. Would you please clarify them ?

  • @mohamedali-tz5zu
    @mohamedali-tz5zu 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    It's really good and useful advices thank u

  • @sriwahyuningsih5185
    @sriwahyuningsih5185 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much.. btw could you correction my personal statement? I am not sure it is a perfect or not...
    Thanks 🙏

  • @vinsetaangel
    @vinsetaangel 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much this helped me a lot!

  • @samuelquayson2037
    @samuelquayson2037 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thanks much. great stuff we've got here.

  • @АлибиКамбаров-у4ъ
    @АлибиКамбаров-у4ъ 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good! It s great thank you for this information!

  • @prasunanand4330
    @prasunanand4330 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    should I be mentioning that my grade is low because my school use absolute grading instead of relative grading or would it feel as if I am giving excuses while applying for internship programs in universities

  • @abdullahnaeem749
    @abdullahnaeem749 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Kindlly make a video on UGRAD cultural exchange program

  • @rehimsi369
    @rehimsi369 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    How to write letter for internship? What I need to focus on cover letter?

  • @irsaatta1926
    @irsaatta1926 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Is it important to mention job leaving reason in motivational letter for scholarship? Need guidance.

  • @ruxshonafayzullayeva6915
    @ruxshonafayzullayeva6915 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I don't understand🤨
    If I want to study in US or UK's universities I must write a motivational letter

  • @tobiaszb
    @tobiaszb 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    What does it mean to sell yourself?

  • @ayubaalim2201
    @ayubaalim2201 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    if u r going to master or PhD program ..........they interested to know exactly ..........HOW YOU ARE PREPARED........WHY YOU INTERESTED IN THIS PARTICULAR PROGRAM.........i need clarity!!!

  • @chitrarajagopal8504
    @chitrarajagopal8504 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Marina,
    Could you please tell me if I should mention my first research paper which was in cryptography in my SOP. I want to study in the field of AI and machine learning so is it a good idea to mention a different work in SOP?

  • @NiteshKumar-sd2cz
    @NiteshKumar-sd2cz 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    ur channel helped me a lot

  • @noubaddi8567
    @noubaddi8567 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for this video

  • @mrinmoyroy269
    @mrinmoyroy269 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    As you suggested not mention specific professor , what if it is instructed in the university website to mention name of potential supervisor in STATEMENT OF PURPOSE?

  • @dilkhan7320
    @dilkhan7320 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hello bro what are doing the systems exams is great levels so baby I know that sessions very well priorities written ground slowly

  • @MAFANcrew
    @MAFANcrew 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great intel Thanks

  • @gaming_with_rachit_tyagi9088
    @gaming_with_rachit_tyagi9088 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks

  • @khadidjadadi9196
    @khadidjadadi9196 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Marina, would you please send me a motivation letter sample I really need it to apply for a scholarship.

  • @feliceboy1510
    @feliceboy1510 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    THANK YOU!!!

  • @adityashinde7287
    @adityashinde7287 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    hey Marina i am doing diploma in civil engineering so i will have some knowledge about civil engineering. Will this help me to getting into my desired institute?

  • @LivinWithNineRegrets
    @LivinWithNineRegrets 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    they're trying to act interested in college entrance letters when underlying they just want to hook up.

  • @itrstt66
    @itrstt66 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Where can i contact mr. walker?

  • @yasmenalsham401
    @yasmenalsham401 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you and I hope that you answer my question: ok if I explain about beriod and why I have bad score caused by problems in that beriod is that rong to mention it in the letter....
    .....thank you again

  • @bissketng213
    @bissketng213 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    without sub after 4:30

  • @mohammadnikanghorbani9940
    @mohammadnikanghorbani9940 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you
    Very Helpful

  • @purneshsingh8174
    @purneshsingh8174 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Haven't any body noticed something different/ similarity in the thumbnail of this video ?

  • @fizanbajwa2693
    @fizanbajwa2693 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Check “ beacon of hoppe “ to how To write motivation letter, and scholarships and application process in European countries and how to find universities in Europe. And many more information is coming every week.

  • @nevenatanaskovic3563
    @nevenatanaskovic3563 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the third video I'm commenting on, I could've as well sent you an e-mail haha.
    Are there any MA programs that you're more likely to get scholarships for?

  • @jaswanthchowdary2086
    @jaswanthchowdary2086 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice one...&thankyou...

  • @09TechInfo
    @09TechInfo 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    very informative
    LIKE !!

  • @brandomiranda6703
    @brandomiranda6703 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    are there any good online services for writing SOPs?

  • @therealilyaskhan
    @therealilyaskhan 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    can't focus on audio

  • @metalhammer5
    @metalhammer5 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    3:00 NO SHIT SHERLOCK...

  • @brandomiranda6703
    @brandomiranda6703 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    do you guys provide writing services for SOP?

  • @mintida3112
    @mintida3112 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do u have an English online course ?

  • @urvishmistry1632
    @urvishmistry1632 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm a future aspirant for a MBA program still undergraduation (2nd year) can you advice me how I should plan from now for top B school

  • @fdggfgdfgd251
    @fdggfgdfgd251 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you from Tiagauras. Come visit

  • @zainulabidinbinriaz28
    @zainulabidinbinriaz28 ปีที่แล้ว

    Produce something new
    For Masters program they are interested in why you are interested in this particular institution and why you are interested in this particular institution. Shape your audience.

  • @bubatouray3382
    @bubatouray3382 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great work

  • @felipec.925
    @felipec.925 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Lingua, I have a question. Can I be accepted with a good GMAT score, good TOEFL score but not so good at GPA at Stanford Business School?

  • @tendulkartoni2499
    @tendulkartoni2499 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    If it's possible show some sample letter

  • @joechu7935
    @joechu7935 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    help a lot ! thanks

  • @sainani5150
    @sainani5150 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please give information about gre

  • @ravimn4637
    @ravimn4637 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you!

  • @ЕваЗырянова-э8с
    @ЕваЗырянова-э8с 8 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    МАРИНОЧКА КАК ВСЕГДА ШИКАРНА!!!!!!

  • @jaiprakashshukla9911
    @jaiprakashshukla9911 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    I wrote about my struggle with trigonometry. Is this a common topic or it is unique?

  • @yousufazad6914
    @yousufazad6914 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    you inspire me Ms. Marina ^_^

  • @mmxsingh2024
    @mmxsingh2024 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    i want to collect my bsc graduation degree from the college who can i writte impressive application to the principal

  • @venkatkanaparthi2375
    @venkatkanaparthi2375 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    may I get sample SOP of some one else for MBA..

  • @santojacobkoshy3618
    @santojacobkoshy3618 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    thanks

  • @maulanasekartimur3788
    @maulanasekartimur3788 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    dude looks like matthew mcconaughney and woody harrelson at the same time..

  • @SuperTsogo
    @SuperTsogo 6 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I'll bet he's trying not to check her out, I mean damn she's looking fine.

  • @amadounomogo4642
    @amadounomogo4642 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Im Malian studing English Language for master degree if there is any

  • @beamarie8041
    @beamarie8041 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This guy looks like Ben Miles. Peter Townsend from The Crown

  • @keyrusalia6735
    @keyrusalia6735 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you send me a sample SOP please?

  • @sufyanrahmat3220
    @sufyanrahmat3220 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    hello i have been watching all of your video since long time but now im going to graduate now could you please help me out how should i prepare myself for master programmed in USA scholarship as well. can i have a your gamil.id

  • @tang3151
    @tang3151 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    telling me to sell myself as an individual in a letter is hard since I'm such a boring and uninteresting person with no special skills or talents whatsoever.

    • @lohanwilliams1619
      @lohanwilliams1619 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You really don't have to sound boring.
      I can help

  • @DebrajDey006
    @DebrajDey006 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    ohh it's like the Statement of Purpose (SOP)

    • @linguamarina
      @linguamarina  8 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      yes, you are right! The term SOP is normally used when applying for bachelors program!

    • @DebrajDey006
      @DebrajDey006 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      linguamarina Ohh God...that's not good..:(

    • @crisyorke1328
      @crisyorke1328 8 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It's also called motivation letter for master;s and doctoral program

  • @rishabhkumardjain
    @rishabhkumardjain 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Is it only me or she actually looks like Anllela Sagra

  • @kaand2232
    @kaand2232 5 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    damn stop looking at the camera marina

  • @venkatkanaparthi2375
    @venkatkanaparthi2375 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    may I get sample SOP of some one else..

  • @pradhumanpatel8527
    @pradhumanpatel8527 8 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can i know how to make sop for master in pharmacy

    • @linguamarina
      @linguamarina  8 ปีที่แล้ว

      +pradhuman patel it still needs to be about you as a person really, remember moments/books/people that made you choose pharmacy

    • @pradhumanpatel8527
      @pradhumanpatel8527 8 ปีที่แล้ว

      Am good in chemistry during school days.. So i choose pharmacy as my core course

  • @olaimadhalawanii3790
    @olaimadhalawanii3790 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can I send my SOP and to be reviewed by you guys for free?

  • @nischalkarki2960
    @nischalkarki2960 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Don't look at the camera like that girl, or else I am gonna fall for you

  • @molliemoko9673
    @molliemoko9673 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    THANKYOU!!!

  • @eliz18122001
    @eliz18122001 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    What city in Russia do you live in?