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Hearing the rowing suddenly stop was deadpan comedy gold. The fact that Henry is convinced that she has an eidetic memory and still forgot the most important thing makes this even more hilarious.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 I can't remember if the rowing stopping was part of the script, but I remember giggling to myself when I cut off the rowing. 😇
They're both chaos incarnate. 😂 Henry tried to make up so hard for his earlier years that he ended up making Jane way too comfortable with him. Which isn't exactly bad when you're a parent because you want to know what your kid's up to. The only piece of information Jane actively kept from her dad was that the internet guy's real name is also Henry. For some curious reason, that's the only thing her unfiltered mouth can't say.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Well, she did say she was looking for her dad's traits in potential partners. This one's definitely the least bad trait she could have picked.
@@brainydragonva Jane meant she's looking for someone who's ready to lose it all when it matters. The crowbar scene and Henry's near bankruptcy were core memories to her. She wants someone who stands on business.
I don't really think she found out anything about cheating. Because she just blames her ex for hurting her mom and not considering how evil her mom was. And worse, some of her actions do kinda make me feel she needs to be careful and considering in relationships.
Ngl after the stuff her parents did. I expected her to be more innocent, not that. I mean, ghosting guys, having random sexual relations, actually feeling a connection with someone yet still doubting if he is still the one. Just hope she doesn't pull of shit like her mom and actually goes to see that guy instead of hurting him too.
I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. 😔 At least she doesn't seem to have actively abused someone, yet. I'm kinda worried for this poor letter guy, though.
@@brainydragonva letter guy is jane's almost perfect match. A test reader said she got a bit scared of letter guy when he and jane finally met. Probably because of how cold he talked. Though I don't think I've written anything too extreme.
@@brainydragonva she didn't introduce herself but somehow found a way to get welcomed in as a stranger. Then Jane kept mentioning specific details of the house like a bottle opener, the lack of tv... Basically things that a stranger shouldn't know, seriously creeping the guy out.
It’s insane. I love it. It’s like I’ve lived an entire life through this series. Never felt anything like that with only a few videos. Seriously love it. Also, you almost gave me a heart attack with “… and he’s a great teacher” I almost slapped my face in shock😅 Thank you❤❤❤
I have to give credit to the scriptwriter for their amazing storytelling here. They pieced together the story in just a few episodes. I'm so happy you get to experience their story through this audio, and I'm so happy you love the audio. And yeah, the "teacher" line caught me off guard the first time I read it haha.
I have an online note on Jane and the guy on the internet that says at what age they die. 😂 It doesn't impact the story in any way but it does help me put some things in perspective.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Fair! I usually try not to stick around the toxic ones long enough to find out if they can change, so I guess I wouldn't know. 😂
Hmm, I wonder if I've kept anyone toxic around me long enough to see them change? I think I know some toxic folks for a bit... and no, they haven't changed yet. :(
wow the daugter has lived an interesting life and a jokester. 12:33 "I know I was an accident the unpleasant surprise" oh god! this line hurts the soul! Daughter or not ;-; Great audio Rose! To the performance and ambience. Worth the wait
"I feel like we aren't synchronizing as perfectly as I expected." Ladies and gentlemen, the line to use when you have to break up with a business major. 😂
ngl, this is a rather positive outcome considering how worried i was for jane in previous episodes - and she's such a fucking chaos child lmao. i think you did a great job with her characterization. she feels like a better management of all the darkness and chaos that we see in her mom. i may not agree with her on all fronts, but she's a fun character regardless 🦚 also, saw your post about you changing the software you use to produce your audios, and i think you nailed it. im not savvy in audio matters, but this one sounds really great. i got the feeling like your voice comes across more clearly. if anything, the sfx were a bit too loud imo, but that's just a matter of preference
🦚 Thanks for the comment, Wind! I think it's better for Jane to turn out like this than traumatized, anxious, timid, etc. (NOT saying it's the fault of those who are abused that they are abused---just saying that it's better to be not abused/recovered from abuse than abused.) At least this way, she has the confidence and comfort to navigate the world on her own. I think she's a really fun character to voice even if the things she says are like... completely not things I would say! T_T I'm glad you liked the editing in this one! I actually had to go back in to manually adjust the volume of every 2-3 second snippet of recording since I didn't figure out how to use a different tool. I'll try to make the SFX quieter! Because I listen to an audio so often, I can never tell if something is too loud or not. Thanks for the feedback!
WOW! This was a very in-depth father & daughter moment. I can see some of the cold and calculating traits of her mother in her, but I can also see that she's quite intelligent and logical about her future. As her father, part of me would be proud of her that she's practical and headstrong. But another part of me would worry that she's cold, and in some ways lacking sentimentality. Come what may, I like her. She's callous but intelligent. Cool audio Rose! LOVED IT!!!😊💚👍
while this was a good audio, she didn't really find out about her mom's cheating habits it was mostly about her relationships and her adult life, but like I said still a good audio
no one knows what happen to the mom's ex. i guess he is really dying alone just like the late mother said to him on the previous part. this is a good series. keep up the good work. 👍
Avena's ex is doing well. I'd like to think that things went "really well" with his client during the lunch meeting. Though she was right when she implied that his standards have gone way up after his glow up. Source: i wrote the whole thing. 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 that's good to know. since money isn't a problem for him anymore, dude probably attract various gold diggers which is a lot worse than dying alone tho. but i do really hope he finds the right person in his life.
@blackmagictutorials6810 It would be entertaining to see how things would unfold, with the Ex's daughter knowing the full story later down the road and stumbling upon whatever the Ex BF has made for himself. It might even give both a chance at a morbid form of closure after both ordeal.
@@Rathalos2428 even if Jane were to learn everything, she simply wouldn't care much about her mom's ex. She would express some fascination at most. As far as she's concerned, that guy's ancient history. This part 5 is both an epilogue to Avena's story and a prologue to a book written in the letter guy's pov. So yeah, Jane does actually follow through with meeting her anonymous paramour some three years later which puts her at 28.
The wait was certainly worth it. This went in a different direction than I expected, nonetheless it's nice to see the two talk about the topic since personally keeping this a secret would be quite hard given the circumstances. Amazing performance as always rose! Super enjoyable audio!
Thank you for the comment, and sorry about my delayed reponse! I'm so surprised by the daughter's reaction because, if I were her, I'd feel... betrayed(?) by the mother. 🤔 But I'd also be relieved that my mother changed for the better so much before she died. I'm so happy you liked the audio, Illusionary! 🌹
@@RoseWeiVA no need to apologize for the delayed response and those are valid reactions, I would feel the same as someone who believes in second chances
Yeah, the scriptwriter's imagination is wild. I'm conflicted about the end result as well, but I'm so honored to have been able to play both Avena and Jane's parts! :D
@@RoseWeiVA The secret is to spend a fair amount of time with psychological conditioning. 😂 ask them for help with fishing stuff. "I need to change my line. Reel it in while I hold the spool." or show them several lures "if you were a fish, which would you bite?" Ease them in slowly until they're familiar. Familiarity is the seed of interest. quick side note, I have a long comment for the video 12 days ago which you may have missed. 😂 I can't tag you on the comment itself as yt doesn't seem to allow it.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 The psychological conditioning is both scary and smart, depending on your intentions. 😭 Is that what Jane's father did?! There are a lot of comments to read, so I'm sorry for the delay. I have been getting through them slowly so that I can give each one a proper response. But feel free to remind me again later if it seems like I completely didn't see the comment. 💗
Nice video. I wonder if we get an epic meetup with the original listener and the girls father. Also I found a song that kinda fits to this series. Listener: You took advantage of me You showed me things I could be You tried to make me believe You loved me more than I did So first you love me Then you hurt me Now you throw me away. The cheating ex: If who I am is what you see Then well Stay the hell away from me Away from me I'll stay right here amongst the flames And I'll sail across the endless sea Endless sea. The song is called Endless by NXCRE & The Villains. And the last lyric just fits this video so well, cause she did sailed across the endless sea.
Oh gods, she keeps looking for _our_ traits? No wonder she got bored with green flag guy so quickly. Although in fairness, there's nothing wrong with not wanting to be with someone who doesn't excite you, in and of itself. People deserve to have partners who make them happy, who have chemistry with them, not just ones who don't hurt them. It's just that a lot of people who have been abused think that a relationship is boring _because of_ the lack of abuse, since adrenaline isn't pumping through their veins all the time. Fortunately, she's being single for a while, which is exactly what people should do in that situation. Being single, and working on themselves.
Despite her obscenely relaxed demeanor, Jane still hasn't forgotten the things that happened before. At the slightest hint of real abuse, she's gone. I'd say a lot of female listeners could relate when she says, "Fck his feelings, I wanna live in peace."
I have to agree with you there. Although, I think the chemistry and excitement only really happen at the start. From what I've been told about long lasting relationships, the couple begin to feel comfortable and content. I have heard at least one friend who broke up with their partner because they stopped feeling the excitement, but I had thought things were going well until then. :(
@@RoseWeiVA happened to a close guy friend of mine. I thought things were going really well for them since i believe they met through an online game, hence both gamers. She ended up cheating on him.
(i wrote the script) No, he is not. 😅 Oddly enough, that internet guy Jane mentioned was already a POV character in the book years before I wrote about Jane's mom.
Some boys get real desperate on the first few days of ghosting especially if it's their first time. Jane kissing him good made it much worse. 🤣His love bombing annoyed Jane even more.
@@RoseWeiVA Definitely _better_ than he was before! Not sure about _good_ or not, though. My problem is, I would always be waiting for the other shoe to drop, as if he was a tamed tiger that might decide you actually do look like a tasty snack at the slightest provocation. It's kind of hard to see someone as a decent person, after they've been a terrible one to you.
They way it starts is exactly how I imagined it would go. 10/10 asmr breathing. "I'm kidding. Or am I?" No, she definitely was not. I kept replaying a few bits because I love the way you said them. The "strangled" bit sounded personal 😂. I recall not putting any sort of emphasis on that. In my native language, we have a word for that; it sounded like it had some "gigil" (overwhelming emotion; Usually caused by anger, frustration or cuteness.) which I very much adore. I also played back the part where she says "I could just go to his house and....... Huh." Absolute perfection. That line meant a lot to me. I could feel her entire thought process during that brief silence. The "don't you think I'm a good girl, daddy?" caught me off guard as I forgot that i wrote it. I laughed the same time as Jane 🤣. Jane's laughter and giggles are the stuff of dreams. I will keep coming back to this video when I need to hear her as I write the book. Btw, the sfx are outstanding wtf 🤣. When I was writing, I thought "yeah... this is gonna be hell for Rose. Where's she even gonna find a fishing reel sfx?" The timing is so on point. When the rowing stopped during Jane's little joke, I could see her dad with raised eyebrows like "dude wtf are you serious?" Wordless communication done right. Jane is an absolute menace and you have breathed life to her in ways I was not expecting. Thanks to your voice and portrayal, I've gotten much more clarity as to what kind of person Jane is. Pure joy to listen to.
I didn't realize the breathing in the beginning was "asmr breathing" or "sus" until the comments pointed it out. Now I am so shy! I loved the "I'm kidding. Or am I?" part because it really reminds me of her mother haha. When I voice act, I will sometimes make the hand gestures associated with a motion to make it sound more realistic, and I definitely did for the "strangled" part haha. Gigil is a cute word, which is very appropriate given what it means. I'm so glad you liked that part! I was worried I didn't deliver the "I could just go to his house and....... Huh." right. There was a lot of empty space, and I didn't know if it served it well or not. I'm happy to hear that it did! :D "The "don't you think I'm a good girl, daddy?" caught me off guard as I forgot that i wrote it. I laughed the same time as Jane 🤣. " YOU HAD ME SAY THIS LINE AND THEN YOU DON'T REMEMBER. 😂 Ah, sorry, I used all caps for the fun of it. I injected quite a bit more laughter and giggles than I think the script had, so I was worried I overdid it. I'm relieved to hear you liked it! I took so long editing this audio and finding all the SFX. You really wrote this script knowing I would struggle finding SFX. 😭 If it's a SFX I can't find, I end up having to leave it out unless I can find something even vaguely similar. I'm so happy you liked the rowing stopping part! I'm so proud of it. I smiled when I played it back after editing to give it a listen-over. Thank you for the amazing script. Your characters and their emotions are always so beautifully crafted, and your prose is phenomenal.
@@RoseWeiVA I've always felt that you enjoy seeing how far you can really go so I wanted to write something that sees to that. 😂 It seems that some of the subtle stuff I wrote in went unnoticed. The breathing, the knife length, etc. While I was writing these, I thought; "Yeah, she does spice. She'll get it." Apparently not. I'm sorry.😭 I've always enjoyed writing things with multiple meanings. 😆 I like how it was Avena who was actually kidding and Jane was the one being serious. SFX was a bit detailed with this one as I was writing from experience. I indulged a bit with it as I was a bit frustrated with an upcoming fishing trip of ours that keeps getting postponed due to life happenings. 😭 I learned from the king of prose, Mark Lawrence. To me, all good prose has the anatomy of a hilarious joke. I really wanna send over a copy of the book with jane because I'm quite proud of the prose in that but I can't find the time to finish the cursed thing. I'm always just drained after the end of the day, which I just now realize is a great prompt for a script. And thank you for lending your voice to my characters. Always a pleasure to hear your take on them. I'm dying to write a new (slightly lighter) script but these next several months are gonna be crazy busy for me workwise. Hoping to hear you voice Rayca at some point.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 For me, it's more so developing my skill of what sorts of characters I can voice and what sorts of tones I can adopt. 😅 I think the spice has to be obvious or labeled for me to realize it's spice. 😭 Then my listeners will point it out, and THEN I will realize and be super embarassed/shy. Ooh that's true. There are differences between them in that way. I didn't think of that! Ah, sorry about the fishing trip. Is it you with friends? Mark Lawrence has some amazing prose! I've heard Joe Abercrombie was the king of prose before too. 🤔 I hope you can get a moment to relax to work on the writing you enjoy. 😊
@@RoseWeiVA There's a random character I thought up before that looks like someone who would have your voice. Elarra Kleiss, Bane of the Reaper. (Yeap, Avena's ancestor) A medieval knight commander who's more about power and authority. I'm still clueless on how she fits the main plot but I like her name enough to find a way to make it work. Her artstation description goes like this "From a young age, Elarra has been knighted by King Evius. A tactician with no remorse. Tasked with the absolute slaughter of all evilkin infesting the Blood Pass, she has completed the impossible siege within a fortnight. Knights say that whenever she stares death in the eye, it blinks." Also, King Evius is the 7th Fallidian king. it's all connected. 😂 Fishing trip is with my dad (😮), an uncle, and a friend. Jane's frustration with the cost of lures stacking up comes from the heart. I'm pretty sure Mark and Joe know each other. Haven't had the pleasure of reading Abercrombie's work, though. I'm sure I'll find a way to work on all of them at some point. I'm like a gremlin. Easily attracted to new shiny things. 🤣
@@blackmagictutorials6810 You might as well write a story for each person in the ancestry tree. 😂 If you write a script with Elarra that you think suits me, feel free to send it my way! 😊 I remember the Fallidian King thing from the Jane script! 🤯 Is your dad named Henry? 👀 I think I've seen an interview with both Mark and Joe before, or maybe it was two different writers.
(￣～￣；) concerning...kinda hope for a different outcome, but it does make sense how she turned out....I mean she is aware at least. Nice she going for brains and that love letter preference. Ah....difficult but nice audio, story, and thanks.
Thanks so much for listening, Christopher! And that emote at the beginning of your comment is so adorable. I would also be super concerned if I had a kid and they told me these things. 😭
5:17 - 5:22 " 5 in. Is Enough , If You Know What You're Doing . Anything Longer Than 6 in. Is [ BS ] " Perhaps some unintened Innuendo , Lewdness ? They are daughter and father after all .
@@Eraser_69 Oh, I see what you mean! Yeah, the title is a bit misleading, but I wanted to connect it with the previous episodes in the series. Titling it as "Daughter and You Have an Adult Conversation" doesn't really capture what happened previously. I might still change the title to make it less "catfish," as you put it.
One of the scriptwriter's recent comments: "Avena's ex is doing well. I'd like to think that things went "really well" with his client during the lunch meeting. Though she was right when she implied that his standards have gone way up after his glow up. Source: i wrote the whole thing. 😂"
@@blackmagictutorials6810 No, but I do take my time responding sometimes (busy, no brain cells left that day, forgot, didn't see, etc). I'd say I avoid conflict. 😅
@@RoseWeiVA whenever I ask my mom as to what reason a familiy acquaintance / friend would have to decide having a child in a poverty stricken country, she just laughs it off. 🤣
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"I kinda forgot all the fishing lures back home."
I literally laughed out loud at this one. 😂
Hearing the rowing suddenly stop was deadpan comedy gold.
The fact that Henry is convinced that she has an eidetic memory and still forgot the most important thing makes this even more hilarious.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 I can't remember if the rowing stopping was part of the script, but I remember giggling to myself when I cut off the rowing. 😇
@@RoseWeiVA i think it wasn't. But it fits the context so well.
Yeah if I had a daughter this would NOT be a conversation I would be comfortable having. Yeesh.
They're both chaos incarnate. 😂 Henry tried to make up so hard for his earlier years that he ended up making Jane way too comfortable with him. Which isn't exactly bad when you're a parent because you want to know what your kid's up to. The only piece of information Jane actively kept from her dad was that the internet guy's real name is also Henry. For some curious reason, that's the only thing her unfiltered mouth can't say.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Well, she did say she was looking for her dad's traits in potential partners. This one's definitely the least bad trait she could have picked.
@@brainydragonva Jane meant she's looking for someone who's ready to lose it all when it matters. The crowbar scene and Henry's near bankruptcy were core memories to her. She wants someone who stands on business.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Ahhh, that makes sense. I heard 'traits like her parents,' and immediately thought 'abuse and toxicity.' 😅
I don't really think she found out anything about cheating. Because she just blames her ex for hurting her mom and not considering how evil her mom was. And worse, some of her actions do kinda make me feel she needs to be careful and considering in relationships.
Ngl after the stuff her parents did. I expected her to be more innocent, not that. I mean, ghosting guys, having random sexual relations, actually feeling a connection with someone yet still doubting if he is still the one. Just hope she doesn't pull of shit like her mom and actually goes to see that guy instead of hurting him too.
Yeah about that... I'm roughly 20k words into book 1. Don't worry though. That guy has several screws loose as well.
I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. 😔
At least she doesn't seem to have actively abused someone, yet. I'm kinda worried for this poor letter guy, though.
@@brainydragonva letter guy is jane's almost perfect match. A test reader said she got a bit scared of letter guy when he and jane finally met. Probably because of how cold he talked. Though I don't think I've written anything too extreme.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Now I'm somehow _more_ concerned, just not only for letter guy. 😂
@@brainydragonva she didn't introduce herself but somehow found a way to get welcomed in as a stranger. Then Jane kept mentioning specific details of the house like a bottle opener, the lack of tv... Basically things that a stranger shouldn't know, seriously creeping the guy out.
The worst part is that I didn’t want her (daughter) to find out. Ty Rose. Once you reach 7k, I'll have you a shoutout post ready
Oooh that's true. I don't think she wanted her daughter to find out either. What do you mean by shout out post? :O
@@RoseWeiVA I’ll have a community post for you
It’s insane. I love it. It’s like I’ve lived an entire life through this series. Never felt anything like that with only a few videos. Seriously love it. Also, you almost gave me a heart attack with “… and he’s a great teacher” I almost slapped my face in shock😅
Thank you❤❤❤
I have to give credit to the scriptwriter for their amazing storytelling here. They pieced together the story in just a few episodes. I'm so happy you get to experience their story through this audio, and I'm so happy you love the audio. And yeah, the "teacher" line caught me off guard the first time I read it haha.
I have an online note on Jane and the guy on the internet that says at what age they die. 😂 It doesn't impact the story in any way but it does help me put some things in perspective.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 I'm curious now. 😮
@@RoseWeiVA would you like me to tell you?
@@blackmagictutorials6810 tell me! I’m super interested!
"Hi bear! F- you, we're on a boat. 😂"
Everybody gangsta, 'til the bear starts swimming. 🐻😔
Which is why she whispered. I had to check if bears can swim before writing this bit. 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 😂
I was thinking the same thing! I know bears fish in rivers. 😭
Dang, she seems really comfortable around us despite casually referencing being afraid of us hurting her or her mom. 😅
That was over 19 years ago. Guy grew up emotionally. 😆
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Dude must have grown up a LOT. 😂
@@brainydragonva people change. 🤣
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Fair! I usually try not to stick around the toxic ones long enough to find out if they can change, so I guess I wouldn't know. 😂
Hmm, I wonder if I've kept anyone toxic around me long enough to see them change? I think I know some toxic folks for a bit... and no, they haven't changed yet. :(
It’s nice to hear an audio from you once again Rose, nice audio as usual and hope you have a great weekend!
Thanks for stopping by, Dillon! I am happy to see you around. Have a lovely weekend as well!
wow the daugter has lived an interesting life and a jokester. 12:33 "I know I was an accident the unpleasant surprise" oh god! this line hurts the soul! Daughter or not ;-;
Great audio Rose! To the performance and ambience. Worth the wait
"I feel like we aren't synchronizing as perfectly as I expected."
Ladies and gentlemen, the line to use when you have to break up with a business major. 😂
I may or may not have used this exact line to end things after a week of texting with a certified public accountant. 😂😂😂😂
Most HR thing to say for real.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Daaaaaaaaaang that's savage. 😂
@@brainydragonva I tried to ghost her but folded after three text messages. 🤣
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Oooooooof. 😅
ngl, this is a rather positive outcome considering how worried i was for jane in previous episodes - and she's such a fucking chaos child lmao. i think you did a great job with her characterization. she feels like a better management of all the darkness and chaos that we see in her mom. i may not agree with her on all fronts, but she's a fun character regardless 🦚
also, saw your post about you changing the software you use to produce your audios, and i think you nailed it. im not savvy in audio matters, but this one sounds really great. i got the feeling like your voice comes across more clearly. if anything, the sfx were a bit too loud imo, but that's just a matter of preference
🦚 Thanks for the comment, Wind! I think it's better for Jane to turn out like this than traumatized, anxious, timid, etc. (NOT saying it's the fault of those who are abused that they are abused---just saying that it's better to be not abused/recovered from abuse than abused.) At least this way, she has the confidence and comfort to navigate the world on her own. I think she's a really fun character to voice even if the things she says are like... completely not things I would say! T_T
I'm glad you liked the editing in this one! I actually had to go back in to manually adjust the volume of every 2-3 second snippet of recording since I didn't figure out how to use a different tool. I'll try to make the SFX quieter! Because I listen to an audio so often, I can never tell if something is too loud or not. Thanks for the feedback!
"No dad, I have not been s*xually active for the past..."
*counts on fingers*
"...Two days!" 😌
LOL Yeah, I was surprised when reading the script... then I saw the rest. XD
WOW! This was a very in-depth father & daughter moment. I can see some of the cold and calculating traits of her mother in her, but I can also see that she's quite intelligent and logical about her future.
As her father, part of me would be proud of her that she's practical and headstrong. But another part of me would worry that she's cold, and in some ways lacking sentimentality. Come what may, I like her. She's callous but intelligent.
Cool audio Rose! LOVED IT!!!😊💚👍
Oh our sweet little bundle of joy... She was bouncing around so much even I was having a hard time keeping up with the topic! 🦚🐐🐣
🦚 Yeah, she jumped from topic to topic. She must've really wanted to yap haha. 🐐🐣
@@RoseWeiVA Yapped so hard even I lost track of the conversation 😂🐣
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Hope you have a lovely weekend Rose :) 🦚
@@BadgersDen You too, Badgers! 😊
while this was a good audio, she didn't really find out about her mom's cheating habits it was mostly about her relationships and her adult life, but like I said still a good audio
That's fair! I wonder what I could change the title to to make it less misleading.
@@RoseWeiVA I mean why not go for the obvious? "a father daughter talk about adult life" just a suggestion, though great voice acting btw
@@thexslayer820 It was because I wanted to make it connect to the previous parts in the series as well. Hmm, but I do like the suggestion.
sucks how eventually the mom dies 😢😢😢
Yeah, it's heartbreaking despite what she's done. :(
@@RoseWeiVA oh well its God's way of punishing her for her cheating i suppose
Sorry but this girl it's a walking red flag.
Everyone's a walking red flag, one way or another.
Yeah, she's a big red flag to me too haha. But she's also kind of endearing.
@@RoseWeiVAwho wouldn't fall for someone who donates to charity? 😅 Or at least tried to.
@reaper66657 we all know she gets it from her mother
Lo and behold, the online guy that she’s currently meeting is the son of her mom’s ex (us) 😭
I can neither confirm nor deny this despite having been writing/daydreaming Garren's POV (internet guy) for over four years now.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 😭😭😭
@@RueRorda but yeah, no. The book doesn't even mention her mom's ex. It's mostly the online guy's POV about wanting companionship.
RUE, THAT WOULD BE WILD OMG. 🤯
@@RoseWeiVA I KNOW RIGHT? 😮💨
Amazing video as always. Good thing we are never going to see the ex ever again!
Yeah, she's gone, and nobody seems to really miss her. 🤔
@@RoseWeiVA yea would you? 🐐 rose the goat!
@@DaKrispyGaming No, you're the goat! 🐐
@@RoseWeiVA you are the 🐐 times infinite no take backs
this is on another level amazing work
Aww, thank you so much! I'm grateful that you gave it a listen. :D
no one knows what happen to the mom's ex. i guess he is really dying alone just like the late mother said to him on the previous part. this is a good series. keep up the good work. 👍
Avena's ex is doing well. I'd like to think that things went "really well" with his client during the lunch meeting. Though she was right when she implied that his standards have gone way up after his glow up.
Source: i wrote the whole thing. 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 that's good to know. since money isn't a problem for him anymore, dude probably attract various gold diggers which is a lot worse than dying alone tho. but i do really hope he finds the right person in his life.
@blackmagictutorials6810 It would be entertaining to see how things would unfold, with the Ex's daughter knowing the full story later down the road and stumbling upon whatever the Ex BF has made for himself. It might even give both a chance at a morbid form of closure after both ordeal.
@@Rathalos2428 even if Jane were to learn everything, she simply wouldn't care much about her mom's ex. She would express some fascination at most. As far as she's concerned, that guy's ancient history. This part 5 is both an epilogue to Avena's story and a prologue to a book written in the letter guy's pov. So yeah, Jane does actually follow through with meeting her anonymous paramour some three years later which puts her at 28.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 So much for my headcanon that the ex died surrounded by his loving harem of well paid pr*stitutes. 🥲😂
The wait was certainly worth it. This went in a different direction than I expected, nonetheless it's nice to see the two talk about the topic since personally keeping this a secret would be quite hard given the circumstances. Amazing performance as always rose! Super enjoyable audio!
Thank you for the comment, and sorry about my delayed reponse! I'm so surprised by the daughter's reaction because, if I were her, I'd feel... betrayed(?) by the mother. 🤔 But I'd also be relieved that my mother changed for the better so much before she died. I'm so happy you liked the audio, Illusionary! 🌹
@@RoseWeiVA no need to apologize for the delayed response and those are valid reactions, I would feel the same as someone who believes in second chances
And now we’re at part 5 this is a fucking ride and I don’t know If like it or not
Yeah, the scriptwriter's imagination is wild. I'm conflicted about the end result as well, but I'm so honored to have been able to play both Avena and Jane's parts! :D
Yup....she was a bop. Don't take after her.
What is a bop? :O
@@RoseWeiVA something you don't wanna be.
@@dreamlessking9 I'll take your word for it. 😅
"I could just go to his house, and-"
And that, ladies and gentlemen, is how yanderes form. 🐣
She's got all the skills of a yandere minus the psychopathic tendencies. 😂
I'm glad she's got a little bit of the yandere qualities in her. It makes her carefree recklessness seem threatening.
@@RoseWeiVAshe could be a threat to national security if she had a reason to be 😂
Boating at 4am. Will add this to potential father/child bonding notes.
Aww, that'd be so cute though! Although, good luck dragging them out of bed haha.
@@RoseWeiVA The secret is to spend a fair amount of time with psychological conditioning. 😂 ask them for help with fishing stuff. "I need to change my line. Reel it in while I hold the spool." or show them several lures "if you were a fish, which would you bite?" Ease them in slowly until they're familiar. Familiarity is the seed of interest.
quick side note, I have a long comment for the video 12 days ago which you may have missed. 😂 I can't tag you on the comment itself as yt doesn't seem to allow it.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 The psychological conditioning is both scary and smart, depending on your intentions. 😭 Is that what Jane's father did?!
There are a lot of comments to read, so I'm sorry for the delay. I have been getting through them slowly so that I can give each one a proper response. But feel free to remind me again later if it seems like I completely didn't see the comment. 💗
@@RoseWeiVA not consciously but they were under one roof for a long time so his hobbies rubbed off on her. 😆
You know it's bad when you get _less_ abusive when drunk. 😔
Not less. He turns into the dalai lama when drunk. 🤣
Wait, that's a good point. :0
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Bro knows the secrets of the universe, and is spiritually connected with all creatures. 😇😌
...but only when drunk. 😔
This audio is peak 🗣️ *_a lil wild,_* but *PEAK* 🗣️💯💯
Haha, which part is wild?
@@RoseWeiVA The part about "fucking his brains" 🧠😭😭
@@Finality-BlizzardBolero I get so shy saying stuff I normally wouldn't say. 😭
@@Finality-BlizzardBoleroJane is a menace. 😂
Jane has a yandere level familiarity with knives. 😂 And a particular set of skills to go with it.
Haha, I love that she's into fishing and knives.
@@RoseWeiVA mostly the influences of her dad. 😆
Can I say that I feel kinda cucked? I mean the series WAS from the ex's POV. And now here is her daughter talking to his husband that she married.
Next we'll have it from daughter's POV, we cooking up with this one
That is a good point. Huh.
Yeah, we kinda need a resolution for the listener.
I don't even care about the ex's husband, so I don't watch the video myself.
@@nibblesnarfer Was part 4 not complete enough of a resolution? 😮
@@RoseWeiVA It's a resolution for her. We don't know more about the Listener's side more.
Nice video. I wonder if we get an epic meetup with the original listener and the girls father.
Also I found a song that kinda fits to this series.
Listener: You took advantage of me
You showed me things I could be
You tried to make me believe
You loved me more than I did
So first you love me
Then you hurt me
Now you throw me away.
The cheating ex: If who I am is what you see
Then well
Stay the hell away from me
Away from me
I'll stay right here amongst the flames
And I'll sail across the endless sea
Endless sea.
The song is called Endless by NXCRE & The Villains. And the last lyric just fits this video so well, cause she did sailed across the endless sea.
Woah. That song is kind of sad. Now I am curious about the rest of the song.
I 💗 u, Rose Wei VA
Thank you for the support! :D
@@RoseWeiVA Anytime 😊 ❤️ 😉 💕 😎 💖
Oh gods, she keeps looking for _our_ traits? No wonder she got bored with green flag guy so quickly.
Although in fairness, there's nothing wrong with not wanting to be with someone who doesn't excite you, in and of itself. People deserve to have partners who make them happy, who have chemistry with them, not just ones who don't hurt them. It's just that a lot of people who have been abused think that a relationship is boring _because of_ the lack of abuse, since adrenaline isn't pumping through their veins all the time.
Fortunately, she's being single for a while, which is exactly what people should do in that situation. Being single, and working on themselves.
Despite her obscenely relaxed demeanor, Jane still hasn't forgotten the things that happened before. At the slightest hint of real abuse, she's gone.
I'd say a lot of female listeners could relate when she says, "Fck his feelings, I wanna live in peace."
I have to agree with you there. Although, I think the chemistry and excitement only really happen at the start. From what I've been told about long lasting relationships, the couple begin to feel comfortable and content. I have heard at least one friend who broke up with their partner because they stopped feeling the excitement, but I had thought things were going well until then. :(
@@RoseWeiVA happened to a close guy friend of mine. I thought things were going really well for them since i believe they met through an online game, hence both gamers. She ended up cheating on him.
@@RoseWeiVA Yeah, once the chemistry wears off, there has to be friendship at the bottom. Otherwise, the relationship isn't going to last very long. 🥲
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Oooooooooof. That's horrible. 😨
Wait, is the guy she's texting her mom's ex???
(i wrote the script) No, he is not. 😅 Oddly enough, that internet guy Jane mentioned was already a POV character in the book years before I wrote about Jane's mom.
Wait, he professed his love for her when she ghosted him after 3 dates and a kiss? That sounds like way more of a red flag than being boring.
Some boys get real desperate on the first few days of ghosting especially if it's their first time. Jane kissing him good made it much worse. 🤣His love bombing annoyed Jane even more.
Their whole relationship was concerning to me. 😭
@@RoseWeiVAshe tested the waters and said "nope".
@@RoseWeiVA I don't think I've seen a single relationship in this series that didn't _at least_ make me concerned. 😂
I am to please. 😂
Chat, did my goat upload ? 🗣️
Aww, thank you! 🥰
Wow you sound really close to Satori Tamaba from the dubbed version of Armed Girl's Machiavellism anime.
I just checked that out. I think the way I speak in this audio is somewhat similar! :O
@@RoseWeiVA Not saying its bad. Great audio btw. It just reminded me of her.
This has to be connected to one of the other previous audios. That’s just my opinion tho
This is part 5 of the previous audios.
9/10 the title is a little misleading
Yeah, it is a bit misleading. I wonder what I could change it to to make it less misleading but still appealing.
Holy f- we're the abusive husband in this one. 😱
Do you think he's better now after the change?
@@RoseWeiVA Definitely _better_ than he was before! Not sure about _good_ or not, though.
My problem is, I would always be waiting for the other shoe to drop, as if he was a tamed tiger that might decide you actually do look like a tasty snack at the slightest provocation. It's kind of hard to see someone as a decent person, after they've been a terrible one to you.
They way it starts is exactly how I imagined it would go. 10/10 asmr breathing.
"I'm kidding. Or am I?" No, she definitely was not.
I kept replaying a few bits because I love the way you said them. The "strangled" bit sounded personal 😂. I recall not putting any sort of emphasis on that. In my native language, we have a word for that; it sounded like it had some "gigil" (overwhelming emotion; Usually caused by anger, frustration or cuteness.) which I very much adore.
I also played back the part where she says "I could just go to his house and....... Huh." Absolute perfection. That line meant a lot to me. I could feel her entire thought process during that brief silence.
The "don't you think I'm a good girl, daddy?" caught me off guard as I forgot that i wrote it. I laughed the same time as Jane 🤣.
Jane's laughter and giggles are the stuff of dreams. I will keep coming back to this video when I need to hear her as I write the book.
Btw, the sfx are outstanding wtf 🤣. When I was writing, I thought "yeah... this is gonna be hell for Rose. Where's she even gonna find a fishing reel sfx?" The timing is so on point. When the rowing stopped during Jane's little joke, I could see her dad with raised eyebrows like "dude wtf are you serious?" Wordless communication done right.
Jane is an absolute menace and you have breathed life to her in ways I was not expecting. Thanks to your voice and portrayal, I've gotten much more clarity as to what kind of person Jane is.
Pure joy to listen to.
I didn't realize the breathing in the beginning was "asmr breathing" or "sus" until the comments pointed it out. Now I am so shy!
I loved the "I'm kidding. Or am I?" part because it really reminds me of her mother haha.
When I voice act, I will sometimes make the hand gestures associated with a motion to make it sound more realistic, and I definitely did for the "strangled" part haha. Gigil is a cute word, which is very appropriate given what it means. I'm so glad you liked that part!
I was worried I didn't deliver the "I could just go to his house and....... Huh." right. There was a lot of empty space, and I didn't know if it served it well or not. I'm happy to hear that it did! :D
"The "don't you think I'm a good girl, daddy?" caught me off guard as I forgot that i wrote it. I laughed the same time as Jane 🤣. "
YOU HAD ME SAY THIS LINE AND THEN YOU DON'T REMEMBER. 😂 Ah, sorry, I used all caps for the fun of it.
I injected quite a bit more laughter and giggles than I think the script had, so I was worried I overdid it. I'm relieved to hear you liked it!
I took so long editing this audio and finding all the SFX. You really wrote this script knowing I would struggle finding SFX. 😭 If it's a SFX I can't find, I end up having to leave it out unless I can find something even vaguely similar.
I'm so happy you liked the rowing stopping part! I'm so proud of it. I smiled when I played it back after editing to give it a listen-over.
Thank you for the amazing script. Your characters and their emotions are always so beautifully crafted, and your prose is phenomenal.
@@RoseWeiVA I've always felt that you enjoy seeing how far you can really go so I wanted to write something that sees to that. 😂 It seems that some of the subtle stuff I wrote in went unnoticed. The breathing, the knife length, etc. While I was writing these, I thought; "Yeah, she does spice. She'll get it." Apparently not. I'm sorry.😭 I've always enjoyed writing things with multiple meanings. 😆
I like how it was Avena who was actually kidding and Jane was the one being serious.
SFX was a bit detailed with this one as I was writing from experience. I indulged a bit with it as I was a bit frustrated with an upcoming fishing trip of ours that keeps getting postponed due to life happenings. 😭
I learned from the king of prose, Mark Lawrence. To me, all good prose has the anatomy of a hilarious joke. I really wanna send over a copy of the book with jane because I'm quite proud of the prose in that but I can't find the time to finish the cursed thing. I'm always just drained after the end of the day, which I just now realize is a great prompt for a script.
And thank you for lending your voice to my characters. Always a pleasure to hear your take on them. I'm dying to write a new (slightly lighter) script but these next several months are gonna be crazy busy for me workwise. Hoping to hear you voice Rayca at some point.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 For me, it's more so developing my skill of what sorts of characters I can voice and what sorts of tones I can adopt. 😅
I think the spice has to be obvious or labeled for me to realize it's spice. 😭 Then my listeners will point it out, and THEN I will realize and be super embarassed/shy.
Ooh that's true. There are differences between them in that way. I didn't think of that!
Ah, sorry about the fishing trip. Is it you with friends?
Mark Lawrence has some amazing prose! I've heard Joe Abercrombie was the king of prose before too. 🤔
I hope you can get a moment to relax to work on the writing you enjoy. 😊
@@RoseWeiVA There's a random character I thought up before that looks like someone who would have your voice. Elarra Kleiss, Bane of the Reaper. (Yeap, Avena's ancestor) A medieval knight commander who's more about power and authority. I'm still clueless on how she fits the main plot but I like her name enough to find a way to make it work.
Her artstation description goes like this "From a young age, Elarra has been knighted by King Evius. A tactician with no remorse. Tasked with the absolute slaughter of all evilkin infesting the Blood Pass, she has completed the impossible siege within a fortnight. Knights say that whenever she stares death in the eye, it blinks."
Also, King Evius is the 7th Fallidian king. it's all connected. 😂
Fishing trip is with my dad (😮), an uncle, and a friend. Jane's frustration with the cost of lures stacking up comes from the heart.
I'm pretty sure Mark and Joe know each other. Haven't had the pleasure of reading Abercrombie's work, though.
I'm sure I'll find a way to work on all of them at some point. I'm like a gremlin. Easily attracted to new shiny things. 🤣
@@blackmagictutorials6810 You might as well write a story for each person in the ancestry tree. 😂
If you write a script with Elarra that you think suits me, feel free to send it my way! 😊
I remember the Fallidian King thing from the Jane script! 🤯
Is your dad named Henry? 👀
I think I've seen an interview with both Mark and Joe before, or maybe it was two different writers.
(￣～￣；) concerning...kinda hope for a different outcome, but it does make sense how she turned out....I mean she is aware at least. Nice she going for brains and that love letter preference. Ah....difficult but nice audio, story, and thanks.
Thanks so much for listening, Christopher! And that emote at the beginning of your comment is so adorable. I would also be super concerned if I had a kid and they told me these things. 😭
The word play in this bruh 🤣🤣💀
Which ones do you mean? 😯
@@RoseWeiVA I haven't listened yet but I think I know which one it is. 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 😭Which one?
@@RoseWeiVA there's a bit where the script says "Rose-wait... Or was it a lily?" I think it's that one. Though I haven't listened yet. 😅
@@blackmagictutorials6810 I didn't get that one! 😅
5:17 - 5:22
" 5 in. Is Enough , If You Know What You're Doing . Anything Longer Than 6 in. Is [ BS ] "
Perhaps some unintened Innuendo , Lewdness ?
They are daughter and father after all .
Oh, that's a good point! Oh my...
Whoever came up with this whole series is a menace to society.
@@blackmagictutorials6810 Tooting your own horn, I see. 😂
@@RoseWeiVA So satisfying for some reason. 🤣
When did she found out she was just talking (kida a catfish audio)
What do you mean? :O
@RoseWeiVA when did she find out about the cheating it was like a 1sec talk about her and otherwise nothing it was a waste of time personally
@@Eraser_69 Oh, I see what you mean! Yeah, the title is a bit misleading, but I wanted to connect it with the previous episodes in the series. Titling it as "Daughter and You Have an Adult Conversation" doesn't really capture what happened previously. I might still change the title to make it less "catfish," as you put it.
@RoseWeiVA yeah that would be better
There's no happy ending for the ex bf of her mother 😢?
One of the scriptwriter's recent comments: "Avena's ex is doing well. I'd like to think that things went "really well" with his client during the lunch meeting. Though she was right when she implied that his standards have gone way up after his glow up.
Source: i wrote the whole thing. 😂"
@@RoseWeiVA I love how you included the source. 😆 makes the whole statement feel totally legitimate.
@@RoseWeiVAI'm so happy
17:23 *This real fr* 😭😭🙏
I'm scared to replay that part to see what you mean. T_T
@@RoseWeiVA It's the part about avoiding difficult conversations. *Literally me* 😭😭
@@Finality-BlizzardBolero OH FOR REAL RELATE
@@RoseWeiVAhave you ghosted people before? 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 No, but I do take my time responding sometimes (busy, no brain cells left that day, forgot, didn't see, etc). I'd say I avoid conflict. 😅
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🦚 Thanks for the comment, Cup!
@@RoseWeiVA Anytime Ms Rose 🩷
ts is NOT relatable, I am NOT ready to be a dad😭
Neither was Henry. 😂
@@blackmagictutorials6810 who tf is henry
@@iluvplayboicartisomuch the dad.
Fair enough haha. I'm not ready to be a mom either. 😭
@@RoseWeiVA whenever I ask my mom as to what reason a familiy acquaintance / friend would have to decide having a child in a poverty stricken country, she just laughs it off. 🤣
ಠ︵ಠ Sus start
Which part? 😮
@@RoseWeiVA 0:01
I find the daughter character so despicable.
In a way, she's quite wicked.
Same. I can count 3 reasons to disown her.
@@Synthetic94 DANG.
|Great Video!! I hope you are doing well!!≈❤^
Thanks for stopping by again! I hope you are doing splendid as well. :D
Wow, thanks for insulting.
What do you mean? :O
@@RoseWeiVA It doesn't matter. I was not myself, please don't pay attention. It's just sad audio in many aspects and emotions clouded the mind.
@@quantum_spectra That's okay! I hope you feel better soon. 🥺
@@RoseWeiVA thanks!
First 😈😈😈
Not quite, but thanks for commenting and giving the audio a try! :D
First 😈😈😈😈
Wow, even before my own comment. So fast haha.
This was a great audio Rose. 🫶
Thanks so much, Ezekiel! I am happy you enjoyed! :D
@@RoseWeiVA of course always makes my day better 😊
@@ezekielmartinez8705 Your comments make my day better too! 😊