I really loved that how jungkook and his mother got a good ending unlike other ff which end up with rivalry with their mother this ff shows a special bond of mother and son loved it
Well! you took this down roads I wasn't expecting and did a wonderful job. The heel of Yn's shoe in the eye was priceless. I loved that. I also loved that while she was unarmed - you proved that sometimes you just need to think fast and realize that the obscure can be the most important thing, and you gave Yn her own piece of power - even if she didn't recognize it in herself. JK did. You also proved her love was as strong as his and she'd do what it took to protect her man, but I was surprised you didn't use that piece in the conversation with Mr. n Mrs. Jeon as it would have helped to solidify trust with Mrs. Jeon who feels Yn is not up for being a Mafia Leaders Queen. (Thought you found an interesting way to work that through without using that card.) This second piece pulled the story together well, and I think it was well worth your time writing it. It raised the bar on this work. Thanks for your hard work!! St@nce
Y in every ff yn is shown as an angel who can forgive anything? I can understand she didn't wanted to create a barrier between a mother and a son, but everything has its limits. How can she just forget everything his mother did? She is just a human after all.
Admin this is master piece and army on 9 June bts new single song take two is coming so we need to give our best in streaming and voting so plz be ready to break records🙏💜
You make this story plss The Mafia king fall in love in inosent girl and merry to her forsfully and she is hate jungkook and slowly slowly yn love jungkook than jungkook want a child but yn is only 19 years old jungkook cunves yn than both are ready for baby than yn pregnant end se so care less but jungkook caring for yn and his baby one day jk enemy kidnep yn and enemy forces to jk to he died himself otherwise enemy kill yn and his unborn chid than sudanly taehyung entey and shot enemy and on the spot he died And jk yn and taehyung are go to the hospital because yn unconsciou become of bullet voice and the are come home and coming story depend on you 😊 please please make this story and this story is big so you make 4 part ❤❤
You know why this was unique? Because of the ways you put this. You should y/n's strength, Jungkook's trust in y/n, y/n's trust in jungkook, love between in-laws, and ofcourse, second chances....you really proved there is a right time fore everything in this world. You dont put the noodles in cold water and then boil it, you boul the water before the noodles. Just like that, there is a right time for everything💜💜💜💜
hi there everybody you doing good?😄..........btw after reading this i feel single for 9999 time today🙂 aaaahhhh😭i don't know why i love romantic things when i clearly know that i will ended up feeling single and jealous😭 i think i am going to take off my t-shirt that have ''#singleforever'' writing on it😭 tho i will still be single😭
Watch part 1 here th-cam.com/video/0NRNyB9nCIU/w-d-xo.html
Will there be a bonus part
Btw this ff is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good 😊
7:23 this represents that yn is a pure ✨Asian✨
Yes 😂😂
of course we should add the song"That's meh girl"
FRR 🤣🤣
Faster then suga rap 😂😂
Haha
You are 0.9999seconds still late then suga😂😂😂😂😂😂
Fr haha
😅🌚
Nope 🙅
Suga rap is still faster than speed of light😂😊
I really loved that how jungkook and his mother got a good ending unlike other ff which end up with rivalry with their mother this ff shows a special bond of mother and son loved it
Well! you took this down roads I wasn't expecting and did a wonderful job.
The heel of Yn's shoe in the eye was priceless. I loved that.
I also loved that while she was unarmed - you proved that sometimes you just need to think fast and realize that the obscure can be the most important thing, and you gave Yn her own piece of power - even if she didn't recognize it in herself. JK did.
You also proved her love was as strong as his and she'd do what it took to protect her man, but I was surprised you didn't use that piece in the conversation with Mr. n Mrs. Jeon as it would have helped to solidify trust with Mrs. Jeon who feels Yn is not up for being a Mafia Leaders Queen. (Thought you found an interesting way to work that through without using that card.)
This second piece pulled the story together well, and I think it was well worth your time writing it. It raised the bar on this work.
Thanks for your hard work!!
St@nce
Thank you so much for your close observation 😊. I really love that you took your time and carefully read all the details of the story. 🥰
@@paralleluniverseffs9036 You're a good writer. You make it easy for me to get carried away with your stories. :)
OMG I ACTUALLY JUST SAW THE FIRST PART. AND SAVED IT FOR LATER CUZ I AIN'T FREE RN. BUT OMFGGGG
Y in every ff yn is shown as an angel who can forgive anything? I can understand she didn't wanted to create a barrier between a mother and a son, but everything has its limits. How can she just forget everything his mother did? She is just a human after all.
i did not watch it yet but i know it is gonna be a masterpiece ❤😊
Yezz❤
This is good. I think deserve a bonus episode
Now that is a perfect ending! ❤❤❤
A bonus part plss I really loved it
It's really cute..how sweet and caring jk is.. Loved it 😻😻😩😩💜💜🫶🏻
U know what......I just love it , its so cute awww ❤
It's a really nice story. I love, love. Great job, and thanks for sharing this with us ❤💜🫶💐
Everyone deserves a second chance so does Mrs
Jeon too. And Yn being fearless defending her man 😊😊😊😊
Love it ❤❤❤❤
unnie unnie can you make a bonus part???
only if it is okay with you 😊
Yess
Is there any ring left for Somi? Isn't she also the heir?
The ending is nice ❤
It was a fabulous ff
So I am the only one who want one more bouns part of this series
Me me too
bonus plzz🤗🥰
Yezs❤
Plzz can we have bonus part?plzzz😊.
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Another bonus ☠️
I was not expecting a part 2 nice much love 💜
Please make 2nd part of falling apart
Yess❤
It was amazing 💜💜
Admin this is master piece and army on 9 June bts new single song take two is coming so we need to give our best in streaming and voting so plz be ready to break records🙏💜
Bonus pls
Yess❤
I think it's an old story. I have read it on your page only 😊
Such a beautiful ending...❤❤❤❤
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You make this story plss
The Mafia king fall in love in inosent girl and merry to her forsfully and she is hate jungkook and slowly slowly yn love jungkook than jungkook want a child but yn is only 19 years old jungkook cunves yn than both are ready for baby than yn pregnant end se so care less but jungkook caring for yn and his baby one day jk enemy kidnep yn and enemy forces to jk to he died himself otherwise enemy kill yn and his unborn chid than sudanly taehyung entey and shot enemy and on the spot he died
And jk yn and taehyung are go to the hospital because yn unconsciou become of bullet voice and the are come home and coming story depend on you 😊 please please make this story and this story is big so you make 4 part ❤❤
When are u going to upload dangerous mafia first love part 2 🥺
Yes 😢
Nice ending ❤
Bonus part
Unnie when you are going to upload "when you accidentally made a deal with devil king" plz unnie we are waiting patiently plzzz
Wahhhh i was waiting for this❤️
perfect
hehe hehe faster then jin rap
Masterpiece ❤
Yess❤
She still degraded y/n excuse me 🤣🤣pshhh
You know why this was unique? Because of the ways you put this. You should y/n's strength, Jungkook's trust in y/n, y/n's trust in jungkook, love between in-laws, and ofcourse, second chances....you really proved there is a right time fore everything in this world. You dont put the noodles in cold water and then boil it, you boul the water before the noodles. Just like that, there is a right time for everything💜💜💜💜
hi there everybody you doing good?😄..........btw after reading this i feel single for 9999 time today🙂 aaaahhhh😭i don't know why i love romantic things when i clearly know that i will ended up feeling single and jealous😭 i think i am going to take off my t-shirt that have ''#singleforever'' writing on it😭 tho i will still be single😭
Unnie so so so so fast impressive
Btw masterpiece ❤❤
Yup❤
Loved it bro🎉
18 min late🤡~😑
I am 40 min late🗿
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Yay first like😉
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💜💜💜💜💜WOW,im late 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Yayy..1st!
Congratulations
First reader 😅
Can you please pin me
Nah she already pinned her own comment 😊