"Tumhaara Na Hona" - Priyanshi Bansal ft Abhin | UnErase Poetry
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 21 ม.ค. 2024
- Tumhaara laut aana, meri aakhri umeed..
Credits:
Written & Performed by: Priyanshi Bansal
Music by: Abhin Joshi
Curated by: Simar Singh
Shot at: NCPA, Mumbai
Video Production: Vision Of Gap
Live Sound Recording: Sohaill Gandhi & Varun (NCPA)
Lights by: Saurabh Tawde (NCPA)
Sound Mixing & Mastering by: Sohaill Gandhi
Edited by: Abhishek Bhutwani
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For anyone struggling with heartbreak. It’s tough, I understand but please know that it gets better moment by moment. Haar nahi maante, yaaaraaa ❤️🩹
HOPE IS A BAD DRUG
Nhi hota
Staying Strong 💪
Not to explain but... it became really tough without her. 💔
Yrr haar ki baat hi mt krna koi because ek red flag Wale ko idk ku green flag milti h hmesha or vo uski value nhi krta h m bhi 3 saal hone Wale h kitne efforts duu yarr m gurudwara mandir pata nhi kis jis god ko nhi bhi mnti thi unko bhi manne lg gyiii hun yarr uske chkr m shayar BN chuki hun yarr me mere pss abh wait krne k alawa or koi bhi option nhi h mne apna best dediya h vese baki god knows lekin jbh tk meri aukat m hoga efforts m lgti rhugii aap log bhii apna best doo itna ki samne wala hi khud shocked ho jayee and uk what uske sabh frnds bhi yhi bolte the merse ki kya dekh liya h usme aisa vo toh look wise acha h but utna bhi acha nhi hmko bna lo bf bnaa y vo and all that yarr but sabh bolthr h ki Mt jaa uske peche lekin fil h ki mnta nhi i hope who will read this comment will understand my feelings🥺🤞🤲i will wait for him until I can ....🤲🤞🥺
This guy Abhin has magic❤❤
And the girl,Oh my God How beautifully she just expressed my feelings!
Started crying... The emotions, the heart touching tune from the strings n the way you recited... Just wow... I am not going through any break up now and I had already dealt with it but the emotions in your poetry made me cried... Keep writing
All is well ❤️🩹
"Mei Sita banne ko taiyaar hoon"
Aksar mere dost mujhse poochte hai ki tujhe kaisa partner chaiye. Toh ye kuch likha hai meine aap sbse bhi share karna chahungi...
"Mei Sita banne ko taiyaar hoon mujhe Ram saa ek varr chahiye.
Mei rh lungi Vann Mei bhi, bss saath uska Umar bhar chahiye!!
Ki mei Sita banne ko taiyaar hoon mujhe Ram saa ek varr chahiye,
Mei rh lungi Vann mei bhi, bss saath uska Umar bhar chahiye!!
Aur mei thodi puraane khayalat ki ldki hoon,
Kiii mei thodi purane khayalat ki ldki hoon mujhe Charno mei uske swarg chahiye.
Mei sirf uski hoon woh sirf mera ho mujhe uska woh ghamand chahiye, Haan mei Sita banne ko taiyaar hoon mujhe Ram saa ek varr chahiye.
Mujhe sone kaa hiran nhi uski aankhon kaa woh noor chahiye, ki uske naam kaa sindoor mujhe bharpoor chahiye, aur Kar sake jo intezar mera bhi saalon saal,
Aur Kar sake jo intezar mera bhi saalon saal.. ek humsafar aisa zaroor chahiye,
ki mei Sita banne ko taiyar hoon mujhe Ram saa ek varr chahiye!!"
Meine humesha se manifest kiya hai pure love, jo jb ho toh examples set ho, toh uske liye bhi kuch 2 lines....
"Ki jo mei Radha banu, tum Shyam bnn jana, mei Sita tum Ram bnn jana.
Mere saath mei hasna, mere saath mei gana, jo rou mei kbhi tum khoob hasana!
Gussa ho jaau toh mujhe khoob mnana, aur mei bhi tumhare liye ye sb krungi,
Aur mei bhi tumhare liye ye sb krungiii bss Agar mei Goura banu tum Bholenath bnn jana , mei Radha toh tum Shyam bnn jana!!!"
THANK YOU!!!
Do Subscribe to my channel where im soon gonna upload more such "koshishein"🙊🙊
Very well written ❤
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bohot pyara likha h
Wow ❤
Kuch kahun ya bs rehne du... 💙
The Metaphor She has used in this poem is amazing I say .....
Tumhara laut ana hits you differently when you janeman is no more here on this Earth!🥀🖤💫
The intro music is of which song? Does anyone know?
It's ' Kitni baatein '
@@ruchirabakal4504 thankyou so much🙇
this is so beautifully written 🙂 each word has its own feeling , now I can feel how u felt while writing this ❤but don't worry i've prayed for u all these days🌻 and hence the new journey ahead would be filled with 🌻lots of love and happiness for you !!❤🌻
Intezaar ek aakhri ummid ❤
the lover in me feels so seen by you, what can I say, got me teary eyed 🥹🫶 I wish and pray that we all can love to our hearts desire in this lifetime ❤
Nadiyaan saagar me milne se inkaar kar den, to kar den ❤🌿🌻
Lekin wafa ki mohabbaton me bewafaee ki gunjaisen nhi ❤
This channel is so important in my life❤
Boys stop crying over the girl...
There is many things to do. Ur beautiful future is waiting to unrest with success...
Let's vanished the word of heartbroken over girl!!!❤🎉🎉
Baby love me the way u want
Don't be shy
Its just me and you
We're all gonna die
So just pretend
All we have is just tonight
So love me the way you want
Its gonna be a tremendous night....
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Keep writing ❤❤@Priyanshi Bansal
It made me very emotional...
Kisi shayar ke saare alfaaz khatam hojana❤❤❤❤I can relate to it
Sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum sengaanthalum
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How is this explicable that a person can deny such love of mine that exists in books, movies, those poetries that give butterflies, that hope that still blooms in our heart and that smile that holds nothing but innocence and pure intentions to just fall with all of themselves!!!!🥺
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The emotion in every utterance of the poem was very beautiful. Literally, I felt happy after hearing this. #bookmarked🌷🤍
لاجواب
Tumhare hone se mene khush rhna seekha aur tumhare na hone se strong bnna!! Kbhi nahi Socha tha ki tumhare Bina bhi survive krpaungi..but see....😅😅
This was just so beautiful ❤️
Abhin Joshi needs a shoutout ❤
I really don't understand why people give so much importance to someone who never cares for him/her , people come and go, one should not give the keys to one's happiness to anyone, be confident to leave people; aasman mein udne wale panchhi kabhi pedho se Mann nhi lagate"
💐❤️ this poetry left me in teary eyes
Abhin Sir loved your singing.
Tumhara laut aana ......
Meri ek aakhri khwaahish ........
#PJ🧿
Please batayen ki poetry channel k liye copyright clam kaise Karte hain...taki to miss copy na kare hamara poem..?
I loss you but I really love you khdus I am always yours
Still waiting 🙂💓
I could sense the feel from your voice
Goosebumps ❤
Luv u Beautiful ❤ Proud of you mera bschcha😍❤
0:33 ishq ka pyaar se bichhad jaana🤌💔🤕
Usne kaha mere hone na hone se kya farq padta hai
Mene kaha
Tumara na hona rat ki nind udata hai
Tumara na hona dill mai dard deta hai
Tumara na hona sukun chheen leta hai
Tumara na hona haste huye bhi rulata hai
Tumara na hona khushiyon mai bhi mayusi Lata hai
Tumara na hona kisi ka hokar bhi hone nahi deta
Sirf tumara na hona
So pure and melodious recitation and also amazing guitar work ❤
Heartbreaking isn't easy but it Happens ❤️ ... Stay Strong yaaarraa... Somebody will come for youuhh Janamaannn... Just dil ko Taklif mat dena
Each word touch the soul ❤
After a long time , touched by something beautiful❣
Pain in her voice🥹
बहुत सुंदर...
Beautiful words
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beautiful words 🥺❤
So beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
I am writing how I can contact
Beautiful ❤
It is great
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Lots of love to u❤
Why am I relating this a lot ?
You made me cry....❤❤
Ur voice is ultimate
😭😭😭so heartbreaking
Amazing 😻
Can I perform at your platform?
Nice sharing ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Best poetry
Ma'am I am writing poetry,s plz give me chance
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Love 💖
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superb
damm🥺
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