In end the twist doesn't go well I know it will break hearts but considering all this a dream is not justice to author's writing I have different ending.. After yn burns the book and recalls jk's name again and again After 5 years Author's pov: she burned the book but she was unaware of the power that words hold it was written in her destiny now which was decided by her love so without any choice she forgot jk and now is married to tae who was love of her life Present:tae was cooking breakfast yn enters in kitchen with wide smile Yn: I don't know why I feel like I am being pampered like this for ages Tae:Are you sure you didn't had any bf before marriage Yn:maybe I have to give it a thought Then they both chuckled They live happily together after as jk wanted Everyone deserves to be loved..❤ Hope you won't hate this I just wrote my mind ☺️
Aww this was so cute. I actually had this same ending in my mind... but thought readers will be broken hearted due to Jk's death thats why I had to add the twist in the end. But your plot is what I had written first. ❤️❤️😊
Well I did think the same ending!! That Yn will fall for Tae but forgetting all the existence of Jungkook No!! So the author's writing part is Better for me !!! Maybe A tragic past life of them but I'm happy it's a happy ending of our Couple!!! Atleast
Whyyyyyyyy are so good huh? Why it did you write it so well 😭😭😭I'm writing this with my trembling hands .. I can't stop crying..how well you thought of this story and left a sweet ending too.. I wish I could meet you in person anyways I'm just too overwhelmed 😭😭😭
I was litrally crying but then I was like WTF!!!???? WHAT WAS THAT HOW DID HE CAME AGAIN........author you are very cruel if you wanted to end like this then why made us cry....Those lines can be a bit simple🥲😭😭
Just want to tell you author that This is the great masterpiece Where I was feeling all the emotions same as in the story Hats off to you You are the great writer
You know girl ... I read this story at 2 am and because of the medical condition that Jungkook had .. you reminded me of a novel's character... actually my favorite novel's character... Mr. Salaar Sikandar❤❤ Thank you for reminding me about him. Loved the story❤❤❤... I was almost about to cry but then ek dam se waqt badal gaya ...jazbaat badal gye .. everything changed 😢❤
for some reason the last part reminded me of a anime movie"your name". it was really nice author.apke charan kya author didi mujhe choona h. it was wonderful. at the end i was litterally crying so bad. great work keep it up
I read a lot of FF by now but let me tell you one thing, I never left a comment like this. I cried watching this ff until the twist and I cried watching many other ff's as well but this ff was way different than others. I feel like I was really watching Yn and JK's interaction from very close. I feel like I wasn't reading a ff and it was right in front of my eyes. I don't know what else to say btw Your other ff those I watched were good too.
I don't know, if you would see this or not , I'm late , but still I'll tell you , Author "You Are The Best. Author Ever," and I'm not lying, Like, I literally cried multiple times , at different stages and this time I really felt like my heart stopped REALLY, , why you made me feel this way? , it was so deep , I didn't wanted it to turn out this way , my strong feeling to get that fucking pen and diary in my hands , pleaseee, i wanna change it all , But still thousand loves to you author , you're so professional, i hope this masterpiece of yours is getting more fame , " Aapka ff Pehli Baar Mein Dil Mein Utar Gya"❤ Love youuuu unnie✨✨
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In end the twist doesn't go well I know it will break hearts but considering all this a dream is not justice to author's writing
I have different ending..
After yn burns the book and recalls jk's name again and again
After 5 years
Author's pov: she burned the book but she was unaware of the power that words hold it was written in her destiny now which was decided by her love so without any choice she forgot jk and now is married to tae who was love of her life
Present:tae was cooking breakfast yn enters in kitchen with wide smile
Yn: I don't know why I feel like I am being pampered like this for ages
Tae:Are you sure you didn't had any bf before marriage
Yn:maybe I have to give it a thought
Then they both chuckled
They live happily together after as jk wanted
Everyone deserves to be loved..❤
Hope you won't hate this I just wrote my mind ☺️
Aww this was so cute. I actually had this same ending in my mind... but thought readers will be broken hearted due to Jk's death thats why I had to add the twist in the end. But your plot is what I had written first. ❤️❤️😊
@@bkf.7 thanks for your reply ☺️
You are a great writer I like your work a lot
Can you please pin my ending if its fine with you 🙏
@@taetaememeworld5659 Ofcourse
Well I did think the same ending!! That Yn will fall for Tae but forgetting all the existence of Jungkook
No!! So the author's writing part is Better for me !!!
Maybe A tragic past life of them but I'm happy it's a happy ending of our Couple!!! Atleast
@@subhrajyotirana7164 ya everyone have different perspectives I respect your pov
Someone like my comment so that i can come again and again to watch it❤
Come back 😂
Hi hello 👋 👀 strong power, thank you
When she had the book which makes everything that she writes can become true
She could write for his comeback ..🤷🏻♀️
He died a month ago ..you want him to come out of his grave? 🤣💀
@@bkf.7 no I said she would have done it then the moment ..she comes to know about his issue
Also according to the title it also should be possible 🙂
After his death' she came to know the truth abt dairy hope u read again
@@ramagayatri6255 she got to know about the dairy after his death
Actually Jungkook could write that he wish not to die right ?
Ooor what if Y/N wished to turn back time when he was still alive, would it work? 🤔
Whyyyyyyyy are so good huh? Why it did you write it so well 😭😭😭I'm writing this with my trembling hands .. I can't stop crying..how well you thought of this story and left a sweet ending too.. I wish I could meet you in person anyways I'm just too overwhelmed 😭😭😭
Thank you so much ❤️😀 love u❤️❤️
I was litrally crying but then I was like WTF!!!???? WHAT WAS THAT HOW DID HE CAME AGAIN........author you are very cruel if you wanted to end like this then why made us cry....Those lines can be a bit simple🥲😭😭
Because of end twist iam liking this..😇
I cried a lot !!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Bro i was on the verge of crying 😭...btw it was so beautiful ❤️
Just want to tell you author that
This is the great masterpiece
Where I was feeling all the emotions same as in the story
Hats off to you
You are the great writer
🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 what a twist
Love it ❤❤❤❤
No way my heart broke and i literally was crying mess 💔... I was crying the most when y/n said she saw a long dreamm!!!!😭😭... dude I'm broken again
You know girl ... I read this story at 2 am and because of the medical condition that Jungkook had .. you reminded me of a novel's character... actually my favorite novel's character... Mr. Salaar Sikandar❤❤
Thank you for reminding me about him.
Loved the story❤❤❤... I was almost about to cry but then ek dam se waqt badal gaya ...jazbaat badal gye .. everything changed 😢❤
This was sooo fucking good... ❤❤❤❤loved it...❤❤
You are unbelievable eonni 😭😭.... It was so amazing ....
You should write noble ,You really have potential .
Bonus plssss 💜💜
for some reason the last part reminded me of a anime movie"your name". it was really nice author.apke charan kya author didi mujhe choona h. it was wonderful. at the end i was litterally crying so bad. great work keep it up
I read a lot of FF by now but let me tell you one thing, I never left a comment like this.
I cried watching this ff until the twist and I cried watching many other ff's as well but this ff was way different than others. I feel like I was really watching Yn and JK's interaction from very close. I feel like I wasn't reading a ff and it was right in front of my eyes. I don't know what else to say btw Your other ff those I watched were good too.
@@I._.CANT._.JIM._.OUT4262 aww thanks..love you ❤️🥹
I don't know, if you would see this or not , I'm late , but still I'll tell you , Author "You Are The Best. Author Ever," and I'm not lying, Like, I literally cried multiple times , at different stages and this time I really felt like my heart stopped REALLY, , why you made me feel this way? , it was so deep , I didn't wanted it to turn out this way , my strong feeling to get that fucking pen and diary in my hands , pleaseee, i wanna change it all ,
But still thousand loves to you author , you're so professional, i hope this masterpiece of yours is getting more fame ,
" Aapka ff Pehli Baar Mein Dil Mein Utar Gya"❤
Love youuuu unnie✨✨
@@tarunshibansal5861 love you too 🥹😘❤️
I am the 1st one reading this ❤
You kidding me?...Wifey!? So were those meetings also a dream? I mean....
Second
Your writing skills are amazing author...the way you mold emotions into words are really fabulous❤️🩹❤️🩹💖💖💖