This was one of the best stories I have heard in a minute, I throughly enjoyed highschool dxd but this blows dxd out of the water. Thank you for narrating this story, you made this story even better.
Man, the finale came when I just got on the boat, seeing it doesn't make me sad, but makes me feel content, knowing that the dxd madlad that makes this shall make something even better to take it's place
@@Gamer-ce5lz the 3 factions of course have powerful dragons on their side. Dragons always follow the strongest. When issei roared he showed that he is the strongest so the dragons joined his side. And in that moment, issei knew he won the war
Even though this series is what made me sub to the channel I can't wait to see what else you bring to the channel, I wish you luck bro this series was one of the best things I've heard.
Finished season 4 around a week ago or so, started watching these a little bit after can’t believe the author came up with all this. Can’t wait for season 5 whenever it eventually comes! Never thought this anime and it’s world would grip me in the way it did lol.
This is great and I am happy that you finished written story, but i would like to hear your way of seeing future of the story and cant wait to see what else will you upload. Its pleasure to bu sub to you and i hope that you will continue uploading vids. Gl and I hope you enjoy a bit of break.
I was looking forward for issei to find rias and the rest and found out what he is going to do to them.Thank you for starting this series and ending it but I hope the writer Wil continue. Still thank you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
I'm a big fan of high school dxd and this series it definitely have me hook up just because we can see issei as badass of a dragon. Thank you so much for the narration hope to hear more 🙏
This series made me image how and what happened! I feel like drawing this but I’m not to great but I have an image of what happened when you tell the story! Hope this series become another in the making! Also great video, keep up the good work!
By the way I heard your going to do a new series titled “What if Issei was Smart”. That is something I am really looking forward to because that could change the whole dynamic of the story. Could he have already known Rias was a devil, would he have seen Raynes’ assassination attempt and would Rias and the Occult Research Club respect the same way or would he have even greater respect. All coming soon I hope.
Good story. If I was Issei and in this situation, I would have killed all the higher ups in the devil and fallen angel pantheon because they were the ones who probably decided to kill me. As for my former friends/crushes in the Occult Research Club they would be beaten down but not killed. I would force them to dwell in a barren and ruined part of the underworld for all eternity while my dragon faction flew high over them never interacting with them. All eternity to contemplate and be reminded of the wrong they did and where it lead them too.
No way that happened continue you what if series and I hope you the best well and for you wanted what if. If I were you do what if issei was a fallen angels or what if issei happened a white dragon or what if issei married rias and have kids or what if issei was a angle that my idea?
Man, this series was the best man, thank you so much for voicing this. Congrats for 14k subs and on your way to 15k fast! Gonna be waiting for season 5 and your next video soon, Thanks!
What?!?!?!? That it? I want more!!!!!! Still hel of good series!!!! Great job. I know will be listening to you other stories one the way to and from work.
Found this by shear coincidence binged everything and I'm happy you made it clear that's all the author wrote most people wouldn't say shit in and just end the video thanks man
This was a awesome series and your narrative voice perfection can’t wait for your next series. Also I think I know what story you were talking about when you mentioned what if issei was the son of great red
Thank you for the nice words. Yeah no hate to that guy but a lot of people are telling me to do the story with my voice cuz they would like to hear it whats your opinion?
fucken legendary series my guy, if you have any time pls try to carry it on and finish off the story as I think you would do an amazing job at it. congrats on the 14k subs bro you deserve it
My god that was such a blast! An adventure! A story that is a masterpiece! I loved it so much and I feel content after it ended 🤗 I wished there were more but I know how tiring it is to make what if stories. I subscribed for awesome what if stories like this! Keep it up! 😊
Also i don't think you should do the one that the other guy because people are gonna hear your part 1 then when they hear how incredibly amazing the story is their not gonna wait for the next part their just gonna go to the other guy whos already caught up to the story with all the parts
Sad to see this one come to an end. But bro, this was such an epic series. You did an awesome job with the narrations and edits. Looking forward to seeing what you do next
Yo this was a great series man keep up the good work man looking Forward to some more series of what if. I think what if tanjiro from demon slayers was in highschool DXD would be great.
Seriously bro you are a good narrator, I was eager for this video so I checked youtube again and again, so I saw some other fanfiction Narrating video, seriously bro they suck, you are far better Its not that I'm belittling other it just your narrating experience is far better
I mean if you think about it, Rias from the start pretty much let Issei go on that date with Raynare knowing he'd get killed so she could reincarnate him into a devil without asking. She *let him die* so she could *take his humanity away.* If Issei wasn't such a horndog and actually realized how fucked up and pointless this was, I imagine he'd be pretty disgusted with Rias. She could have just asked him to join the ORC and her Peerage and he would have said yes to tossing aside his humanity in a heartbeat if he'll get a harem of girls to do whatever he wants with down the line for it. There was no need for Issei's first experience with the supernatural world to be getting murdered by a psychotic fallen angel. A Persona 5 crossover fic where the Protagonist after the events of the game goes back to his hometown (which is the setting of Highschool DxD for the sake of the plot) ends up getting killed by Raynare after trying to stop her from offing Issei and gets reincarnated by Rias (thanks to some Velvet Room shenanigans) and his reaction to losing his humanity and freedom is a lot different from Issei's on account of the Protagonist not thinking with his lower brain and after having fought for so long during the events of Persona 5 for humanity to be free from the control of tyrannical divine or supernatural beings. The whole reincarnating into a Devil deal is actually pretty shit given you're screwed if the Devil you're bound to is an asshole or doesn't respect your desire for freedom and your only alternative is to run and get hunted down by them and devil society with the end result being: A. You get dragged back to your owner kicking and screaming or... B. You get killed soon enough because of what I suspect was an intentional feature of the Evil Piece System that if you separate from your owner for long enough you'll eventually devolve into a mindless bloodthirsty monster known as a Stray Devil. And apparently the Angeld want or have their own version of this fucked up system. The Highschool DxD universe is pretty messed up all things considered when you ignore the perverted shit.
@@SpartanicArtzDxD Some fates are way worse than death. Losing your humanity and then your insanity and becoming a hideous demonic abomination that just wants to slaughter and kill everything in sight is a far worse way to go.
love your narration spartanicartz. Btw worlds end harem premiers today fron 8:30 dc time on crunchyroll premium. Some say its eechie much like dxd or better Edit: Worlds end harem was pushed back after the airing of episode 1 and will start streaming and airing again in jan 2022
I remembered that you said that you were going to upload the final part on Monday, but I forgotten about the time gap between America and South Africa So I waited like a little bitch only realizing afterwards it's still Sunday there by you Damn I'm a greedy glutton for your content
if it is posible can you continue what if issei was betreyed if and when another part of the story is added this is so cool and i think i am speeking in everybody's behalf when i say that we want to see the end of the story. I did watch what if issei was son of great red and i want to see it continue so i hope that you can make videos about it, it will be much better if you are making video about it because i enjoy much more to listen to you and you make werry good voice when you read story so it is even more fun to listen to it and i would be happy if you made such a story it is so good
and as i see more people admire akeno more then rias and story what if issey was son of great red is sort of serceling around that and it was fun i cann't emagine how much better it would be if you present it
thank you, your videos make so much people happy because they are fun to watch, i personaly didn't ever hear such a voice when someuan was reading a story i enjoy every moment of your videos you are the best🤩🤩🤩
There is still undiscovered skill which is hatem. Also I have an idea to end the story, so here is a simple script: chapter 25: unexpected ending. So the war was overly matched to issei. And he knew he was gonna win this war *then continue with some war detail here*. Anyways I would like to go over some last chapter details: after winning agains 2 of the factions, there were only the devils left. There was a fight between issei and cersex, issei was approximatly out of energy, that's some of his team desides to go agains him. Doughnaseek and other members and the faction's spy desides to join the fight. Each one of them was using all of his power to get down issei. It was a disaster they were like tearing him apart
Suddenly issei falls to the ground powerless. Cersex get what ever energy left of him and made a power sphere and pointed it into issei. That's when rias stood up and screamed: ISSEI. The ball was shot and rias flew to issei with the speed of light, and proceed to hug him. "Why are you doing this" issei said. Rias responded with "I am sorry for everything... hope this can make you forgive me for everything I did... I love you" then she push issei out of the way."RIAS" Issei screamed before the sphere hit rias. Issei eyes attention were where rias laying on the ground after she got blown in the air by the sphere. Issei felt his dragon sense that he felt to the girls, but this one was diffrent, it was a complex between a lot of emotions like rag, anger, love and regret. Suddenly he scream "YOU'RE GONNA PAY CERSEX" and he unleash his monster. You can continue with the story from here if you can, I dont have a lot in mind.
Now this is good but I would exchange Rias for somebody like Raynare one of his partners in the story because Rias is a trader. And that would kind of mess up the whole entire point of Issei being betrayed but it's a cool start i will start on the story soon enough. But this gives me good ideas and a awesome start thank you!
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This was one of the best stories I have heard in a minute, I throughly enjoyed highschool dxd but this blows dxd out of the water. Thank you for narrating this story, you made this story even better.
Np I'm really glad u enjoyed it! Anything u want in particular?
@@SpartanicArtzDxD I don’t quite know, but I’m almost positive that what series you do next is going to be good, given your past videos.
@@SpartanicArtzDxD in my opinion you always pick a good story, just keep doing what you do. Also the way you tell the story is so good 👍
Dude you made me hate the Gremory house for a while good narration
Dam the MC never made a move on the girl oof moment
Man, the finale came when I just got on the boat, seeing it doesn't make me sad, but makes me feel content, knowing that the dxd madlad that makes this shall make something even better to take it's place
;) yesssssir
I loved this series I’m so happy you are growing so fast hopefully you find another story to read
I will don't worry about it I got options
@@SpartanicArtzDxD I didn’t understand the last part after that roar
@@Gamer-ce5lz the 3 factions of course have powerful dragons on their side. Dragons always follow the strongest. When issei roared he showed that he is the strongest so the dragons joined his side. And in that moment, issei knew he won the war
@@insertanynamehere9584 thanks for explaining
This series is way better than the original and you make it even better
Tysm!!!
Yo facts
So true
Yeah agreed
@XX SeitherXx yeah
YAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yesssur
Even though this series is what made me sub to the channel I can't wait to see what else you bring to the channel, I wish you luck bro this series was one of the best things I've heard.
Thank you man appreciate it!!
@@SpartanicArtzDxD same here is subed because I found this chanlle really good
@@priceyboy8369 spartanic is the goat bruh.
Enjoyed this journey with you my dude. I hope you add to this.
Most likely will!
Let's go
Yessir
Yes
Yess
Finished season 4 around a week ago or so, started watching these a little bit after can’t believe the author came up with all this. Can’t wait for season 5 whenever it eventually comes! Never thought this anime and it’s world would grip me in the way it did lol.
It happened to me to man lol. I get u it hooked me as well
This is great and I am happy that you finished written story, but i would like to hear your way of seeing future of the story and cant wait to see what else will you upload.
Its pleasure to bu sub to you and i hope that you will continue uploading vids. Gl and I hope you enjoy a bit of break.
I will don't worry I will stream most likely in the middle of the week then post the movie bit it will be a good break I'm pretty tired lol
He didn't write the story as he has said there is a link to the original story
I was looking forward for issei to find rias and the rest and found out what he is going to do to them.Thank you for starting this series and ending it but I hope the writer Wil continue. Still thank you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Np man glad u enjoyed
I hope so too but its unlikely. Last chapter was updated in 2018
I'm a big fan of high school dxd and this series it definitely have me hook up just because we can see issei as badass of a dragon. Thank you so much for the narration hope to hear more 🙏
Np I'm glad u enjoyed!
LETS GO
LETS GOOOO!
This was a good series
Yessir
Agreed
Agreed
This series made me image how and what happened! I feel like drawing this but I’m not to great but I have an image of what happened when you tell the story! Hope this series become another in the making! Also great video, keep up the good work!
I'm glad u like my commentating so much means a lot hopefully u pick to draw it that would be awesome
I binged this entire series in a week! This is incredible
I'm glad u liked it so much!
By the way I heard your going to do a new series titled “What if Issei was Smart”. That is something I am really looking forward to because that could change the whole dynamic of the story. Could he have already known Rias was a devil, would he have seen Raynes’ assassination attempt and would Rias and the Occult Research Club respect the same way or would he have even greater respect. All coming soon I hope.
Exactly would be actually awesome. I'm planning on it
Good story. If I was Issei and in this situation, I would have killed all the higher ups in the devil and fallen angel pantheon because they were the ones who probably decided to kill me. As for my former friends/crushes in the Occult Research Club they would be beaten down but not killed. I would force them to dwell in a barren and ruined part of the underworld for all eternity while my dragon faction flew high over them never interacting with them. All eternity to contemplate and be reminded of the wrong they did and where it lead them too.
No way that happened continue you what if series and I hope you the best well and for you wanted what if. If I were you do what if issei was a fallen angels or what if issei happened a white dragon or what if issei married rias and have kids or what if issei was a angle that my idea?
U got it!!
@@SpartanicArtzDxD yeah 😄
Thank you for this series really helped give me something to do during the holidays whilst I was bored
I'm glad I could help
Man, this series was the best man, thank you so much for voicing this. Congrats for 14k subs and on your way to 15k fast! Gonna be waiting for season 5 and your next video soon, Thanks!
Thanks man appreciate it!! And yessir how s5 comes
What?!?!?!? That it? I want more!!!!!! Still hel of good series!!!! Great job. I know will be listening to you other stories one the way to and from work.
I'm glad u like it so much and I'm sorry lol but yes more series to come!
I love the fact that as I finish episode 7 you upload episode 8
Lmao yessir
Bro today you have read so good. Keep doing this good work.
Tysm!
Damn I wish there was more. It's is such a great story but thanks for the storytelling!
Tysm!
Sad the series over but this was one of the best! Thank you 🐐
Tysm!!
Found this by shear coincidence binged everything and I'm happy you made it clear that's all the author wrote most people wouldn't say shit in and just end the video thanks man
Lmao yeah man credits in the description.
This was a awesome series and your narrative voice perfection can’t wait for your next series. Also I think I know what story you were talking about when you mentioned what if issei was the son of great red
Thank you for the nice words. Yeah no hate to that guy but a lot of people are telling me to do the story with my voice cuz they would like to hear it whats your opinion?
@@SpartanicArtzDxD yeah the robot voice was bugging me a lot and I really wanted a proper narrator and if you narrate it hands down way better
Literally this is a good series all of them from part one it's a good series I Can't Get Enough
;)
You gotta do an orochimaru one, one day that would be so epic
Yessir
Yo bro I’m watching! Yo!
;]
Bro this series is SO INSANE! Keep it up with the work bro
Thanks but all credits to the author I just narrate it
@@SpartanicArtzDxD i cant wait for the author to continue this series and for u to narrate it!
fucken legendary series my guy, if you have any time pls try to carry it on and finish off the story as I think you would do an amazing job at it. congrats on the 14k subs bro you deserve it
Thanks man appreciate it and I try to finish it off
Yes Let’s go🤩
:)
I've listened to all of these in one day, the story is amazing. This is one hell of a cliffhanger.
Lmao facts
We got the nod we here now
;)
Let's go this is the best series on yt
Yessir
thx man
Np
My god that was such a blast! An adventure! A story that is a masterpiece!
I loved it so much and I feel content after it ended 🤗
I wished there were more but I know how tiring it is to make what if stories.
I subscribed for awesome what if stories like this! Keep it up! 😊
Seriously thanks for the support!! Glad u enjoyed
@@SpartanicArtzDxD
😀👍 No probs
LETS GOO THE FINALE I'M SO EXCITED
YESSSSSIR!
Frickn epic super awsome it was interesting fun alot of things love it man keep it up bro
Thanks!
Holy shit... just like last week or sum you'd just hit 11 or 12k. And now you have 14.5k🤯. Good job man, keep up the work.
Yeah it'd crazy and really a blessing!! Thank you!!
have i ever said how amazing this story was im pretty sure i have cant wait too see what you do next
Also i don't think you should do the one that the other guy because people are gonna hear your part 1 then when they hear how incredibly amazing the story is their not gonna wait for the next part their just gonna go to the other guy whos already caught up to the story with all the parts
Hmmmmm that's true but I will do a poll today putting 5 stories up and I will see who wins
lests gooo been waiting for u to drop mahn
Yessir
Sad to see this one come to an end. But bro, this was such an epic series. You did an awesome job with the narrations and edits. Looking forward to seeing what you do next
Thank you man appreciate. There's more to come!
Glad to hear you have more content to come 🎉 🎉
Yo this was a great series man keep up the good work man looking Forward to some more series of what if. I think what if tanjiro from demon slayers was in highschool DXD would be great.
Agreed that would be cool and thanks
lets go
Yessir
This series was amazing top 10 best what if in general ranked number ten for me. Happy 14k subs!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Tysm
First
Let's go!
😓 i will miss this story BTW thx for narration 🔥
Don't worry more to come ;)
Seriously bro you are a good narrator, I was eager for this video so I checked youtube again and again, so I saw some other fanfiction
Narrating video, seriously bro they suck, you are far better
Its not that I'm belittling other it just your narrating experience is far better
Thank you man this truly makes me feel great. I will continue what it'f u got it!!
yes sir this is what I've been waiting for, Cant wait for the new season to come out.
Yesssir
@@SpartanicArtzDxD yessir
Let’s gooo
Yessir
Damn Bro This is better than the orginal
Lmao thank u
I mean if you think about it, Rias from the start pretty much let Issei go on that date with Raynare knowing he'd get killed so she could reincarnate him into a devil without asking.
She *let him die* so she could *take his humanity away.*
If Issei wasn't such a horndog and actually realized how fucked up and pointless this was, I imagine he'd be pretty disgusted with Rias.
She could have just asked him to join the ORC and her Peerage and he would have said yes to tossing aside his humanity in a heartbeat if he'll get a harem of girls to do whatever he wants with down the line for it.
There was no need for Issei's first experience with the supernatural world to be getting murdered by a psychotic fallen angel.
A Persona 5 crossover fic where the Protagonist after the events of the game goes back to his hometown (which is the setting of Highschool DxD for the sake of the plot) ends up getting killed by Raynare after trying to stop her from offing Issei and gets reincarnated by Rias (thanks to some Velvet Room shenanigans) and his reaction to losing his humanity and freedom is a lot different from Issei's on account of the Protagonist not thinking with his lower brain and after having fought for so long during the events of Persona 5 for humanity to be free from the control of tyrannical divine or supernatural beings.
The whole reincarnating into a Devil deal is actually pretty shit given you're screwed if the Devil you're bound to is an asshole or doesn't respect your desire for freedom and your only alternative is to run and get hunted down by them and devil society with the end result being:
A. You get dragged back to your owner kicking and screaming or...
B. You get killed soon enough because of what I suspect was an intentional feature of the Evil Piece System that if you separate from your owner for long enough you'll eventually devolve into a mindless bloodthirsty monster known as a Stray Devil.
And apparently the Angeld want or have their own version of this fucked up system.
The Highschool DxD universe is pretty messed up all things considered when you ignore the perverted shit.
Lmao yeah I keep telling people that you honestly wouldn't wanna live in the verse because u would most likely die
@@SpartanicArtzDxD Some fates are way worse than death.
Losing your humanity and then your insanity and becoming a hideous demonic abomination that just wants to slaughter and kill everything in sight is a far worse way to go.
Worth the wait
Glad!
@@SpartanicArtzDxD could you try find what if issei was red and white dragon emperor
@Spartanic ArtzDxD omg, it'll be super cool if your betrayed stories got turned in manga series^^ keep doing great work love your stories man^^
That would be awesome dude!!!
All credits to the author I just fixed some dialog and did the narrating though. But again thank you!
Keep making fanfiction videos bro we support you
U got it!
Ngl, I wanna see this animated sooo badly
Me to bro
im like yes i want this badly
If the author publishes more then can you please continue to narrated it, I'm loving this so much 💖 ❤ 💗
Yes I will of course!
lets gooo the finaly I loved this series I’m so happy but im sad kuse the series is about to end
;)
Don't worry there are more series to come
Yes this is the best Birthday gift ever. I love this series
;)
Happy b day
@@SpartanicArtzDxD thanks
Happy Birthday. I wish the best from heart, hope you enjoy your celebration.
@@bosnagames0180 thank you
Thanks for narrating this dope series and ya what if issei was the son of great red would be dope too
I'm glad u like it!! Thank you
This was the best one yet and I hope there is more to come
Possibly
Love this series so much, sorry I’m late just got out of class
Me to bro lamo this was scheduled
@@SpartanicArtzDxD yea, classes suck
U should do more of these there are a few good storys out there and u would love them to
U got it
YES IT FANALY CAM OUT
👍👍👍😁
;)
This is number 1out of 4 story's that I've listened to
I'm glad u loved it
love your narration spartanicartz. Btw worlds end harem premiers today fron 8:30 dc time on crunchyroll premium.
Some say its eechie much like dxd or better
Edit: Worlds end harem was pushed back after the airing of episode 1 and will start streaming and airing again in jan 2022
Thank u man and bet
Damn this is an amazing series and I loved it. I hope you make more and great series like this one.
Will do!
bro I love this series. And keep up the good work
Thank you!
I remembered that you said that you were going to upload the final part on Monday, but I forgotten about the time gap between America and South Africa
So I waited like a little bitch only realizing afterwards it's still Sunday there by you
Damn I'm a greedy glutton for your content
Lmao im gald u enjoy it so much
this was a awesome series dude / all hail empire issei you are awesome and you too / issei is my favourite character
Thanks and he is for me as well
Yeah my top 3 fav series you made it sound amazing hope you do more like this🎃
Thank you and will do!
Yes yes yes he's finally back 😁😁😁
:)
You need to do more of this series. I need more of it I'm addicted 😃
;)
I hope you continue doing this with other histories (thank you for this series) cheers from brazil
Np tysm for the support!
Anpal so proud of you man. Ggs. Discord soon? Lol :) -CountryChamp
Yea sure and tysm
Goddam!! i’m not ready
Rip
loved the series amazing
Tysm man all credits to the author
Can't wait for the what if issei was smart
;)
if it is posible can you continue what if issei was betreyed if and when another part of the story is added this is so cool and i think i am speeking in everybody's behalf when i say that we want to see the end of the story.
I did watch what if issei was son of great red and i want to see it continue so i hope that you can make videos about it, it will be much better if you are making video about it because i enjoy much more to listen to you and you make werry good voice when you read story so it is even more fun to listen to it and i would be happy if you made such a story it is so good
and as i see more people admire akeno more then rias and story what if issey was son of great red is sort of serceling around that and it was fun i cann't emagine how much better it would be if you present it
I appreciate it man. I will definitely continue the story if he comes out with another chapter don't worry!
thank you, your videos make so much people happy because they are fun to watch, i personaly didn't ever hear such a voice when someuan was reading a story i enjoy every moment of your videos you are the best🤩🤩🤩
and when is next video coming out
Damnnn bro I loved this I watched part 1 to 8 in one go
;)
This needs to be an anime. 😂 with you as isse
🤣
I love this man I mean it can’t wait to see what’s next
:)
Can you make a what if Issei was betrayed and got recarnatied as a slime please read the lightnovel he is able destroy 10000 universes
Yesssir possible
I loved this story and I hope the creator can manage to draw it but I really love it 10/10
Facts bro
What's the odds of that I requested this thanks brooo👍👍👍
;)
Man love these I hope you can do more in the future
Yes
do what if issei was the son of great red
I will put a pole up but I got u
Considering the quality of this finishing I'd definitely be down for this as that's unfinished too the fight with riser never happened
Thank you what next 🙂
It depends....
This story was Awesome
;)
I loved the series just a little bit disappointed that it ended so abruptly.
Me to sorry
Upon further notice I love you and I love the series keep it up and yes we lost the football game
No homo
Seattle Seahawks lmao im repping the cardinals but good luck to y’all if thats who you were talking about
@@roytheviewer4893 no i’m not in the nfl but I would like to
Rip the Seahawks man lmao
We need to get that author to finish this story
Facts!
Nooooo!! Dame it I NEED MORE!!!! lol good stuff 👏 👌
;))) yesssir
Please this week so please try to do Naruto and high School DxD part 7 at least an hour please try this week it's been two months wrong
I think the next video you should make on what will happen in High school DxD season 5 but remember don't give to many spoiler.
Lmao that will be hard jkjk
There is still undiscovered skill which is hatem. Also I have an idea to end the story, so here is a simple script: chapter 25: unexpected ending. So the war was overly matched to issei. And he knew he was gonna win this war *then continue with some war detail here*. Anyways I would like to go over some last chapter details: after winning agains 2 of the factions, there were only the devils left. There was a fight between issei and cersex, issei was approximatly out of energy, that's some of his team desides to go agains him. Doughnaseek and other members and the faction's spy desides to join the fight. Each one of them was using all of his power to get down issei. It was a disaster they were like tearing him apart
Suddenly issei falls to the ground powerless. Cersex get what ever energy left of him and made a power sphere and pointed it into issei. That's when rias stood up and screamed: ISSEI. The ball was shot and rias flew to issei with the speed of light, and proceed to hug him. "Why are you doing this" issei said. Rias responded with "I am sorry for everything... hope this can make you forgive me for everything I did... I love you" then she push issei out of the way."RIAS" Issei screamed before the sphere hit rias. Issei eyes attention were where rias laying on the ground after she got blown in the air by the sphere. Issei felt his dragon sense that he felt to the girls, but this one was diffrent, it was a complex between a lot of emotions like rag, anger, love and regret. Suddenly he scream "YOU'RE GONNA PAY CERSEX" and he unleash his monster. You can continue with the story from here if you can, I dont have a lot in mind.
Now this is good but I would exchange Rias for somebody like Raynare one of his partners in the story because Rias is a trader. And that would kind of mess up the whole entire point of Issei being betrayed but it's a cool start i will start on the story soon enough. But this gives me good ideas and a awesome start thank you!