A family sitting on the terrace... Youngest son: dad look it's a aeroplane ✈️ Elder son: no it's a bird 🐦 The eldest daughter who just read this ff: no its yn's self respect 😂
average ff's: jk- (after cursing,harassing,abusive,cold,disrespectful) i love you y/n more than my life will u live with me ??(he is a cold and rude hybrid vampire warewolf mafia king who is also a korea's no.1 ceo) y/n-i love u more than my life and yes i will marry you
Yn was so pathetic. Why show anger to ha Joon then ? It will be good if she gets back with a cheater too as she has no problem in people abusing her for no reason?
He had the chance to make a new start by letting her go after the reason behind his bad behavior towards her was revealed. He could have courted her, making her fall in love with him by respecting her wishes. Then it could have been a love-story. But now, he kept manipulating her, blackmailing her just bc he could. After all, she was a doormat with her ex, a doormat with JK at the beginning and stayed a doormat until the end. A few harsh words towards him doesnt make up her easy to manipulate character. Soo unromantic.
It's amazing but I feel y/n forget about her self respect. Jungkook did wrong when he understand he still blackmail her he could make her fall for him but no he force her. I love and enjoyed it just little disappointed by Jungkook. Thanks for this ff of yours. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I mean he could of looked into before tormenting her for 2 years ,but i suppose he found the truth after 2 years . I mean you know the treatemnt in the house was bad if y/n was getting bossed around by the maid like wow ,again he blackmailed her to stay using her parents he knows he did wrong and he loved her so he knew he was being selfish and the only way to make her stay was this way whether that was right is another question but now he has no brother or family member and wanted her besides him after knowing the truth .
just because of misunderstanding he trotured her for 2 years and here she just forgive him no one deserve this and i hate such people who make such weak female charachter this ff was disgusting and a disgrace to humanity
It wasn't his fault that he was told that his brother's death was because of yn and she didn't forgive him easily and she was planning to forgive him never but we can control love right? Think before speaking about someone's hard work creation 🙄
Girl shut up! Stop badmouthing someone’s hard work if it’s easy then write yours you can’t just get on your phone and say shit about someone’s work This is just fictional why so serious?🤷♀️💔
@@Bhavya-s3u i have all right to say my thoughts and no one can stop me what i am saying is what i observed and is the truth he says he is a mafia king then how can he can do such a big mistake making an innocent a culprit i know writing is not easy and i am here not badmouthing what i am saying is FACTS understood if not then keep on commenting it won't bother me i am not hating the author i am just criticizing the character because in my opinion he was wrong so where am i wrong?? i have all the rights to speak and i will
Fully wasted 27:42 minutes for this shitty story. Like seriously he tortured her for 2 years and she forgive him in 1 month. And even in the end also why y/n have to go to him seems like she is too desperate for him.
It was not his fault that he was told that he is a brother so that was because of yn and vine did not forgive him that easily and in fact she was planning to forgive him never but we can't control our love feeling right? Think before saying anything bad about someone's hard worked creation at least the author worked hard to make this FF she's at least doing hard work not like you who don't know what hard to work is and always complains about everyone's hardworked creations
@@Bhavya-s3u What do you mean by always complain about everyone's hardwork?? When did you see my negative comment on other videos. I barely do any comment on any video. Sometimes if i liked the ff then I also appreciate author's hardwork. And this is just my opinion about this ff not about author's hardwork. And did I say that your all ff are not good stop writing this and that blah blah blah. I just give my opinion on this. And if you don't like my comment then don't see.
Attention to everyone If someone wants to talk about Muslim then you should call them with their name Muslim,( be respectful to all ) this is the reminder for all mankind, thank you May Allah Bless you all!.
well it was a good one- but a little ahh how do I say- overdramatic- y/n didn't have self-respect that thing made me a little disappointed but overall was good can do better :)
Hey author i wasn't able to say you thank you after wishing me but as i had subscribed u already i got your channel So, thank you for wishing me you r the first youtuber and writer to wish me ❤ And about this ff just an another masterpiece just didn't liked the harassment a bit and why did you deleted that other ff....😢
Due to monetization issue I removed all videos but don't worry I will upload that video soon with some edits. And one good news is that my channel has become monetized
Fact no one here has listened her voice bcz we all read ff without music 😭😭💀
Author need to understand this, that we need romantic or matchting song with the pov's not the voice, cuz we read in our heads always😂
@@Sevendaysaweek7jk bro you all should get some knowledge, Many authors are putting voice in their fanfictions for monetizing their accounts to earn
Frr.. like I want some romantic or some music that's interesting so we can read the ff
She's can't understand😂@@Straykids.forever22
Same bro
Trust me massaging stomach can never give relief to period pain 😂
Yes It can give relief to woman with severe stomach pain in periods like me
I don't know because I never have stomach pain during periods
i agree with you 🥲
It might not happened to you . But I massage my stomach and gives me relief
Agree with u
Look at the sky it's airplane no it's bird no it's y/n self respect
Y would u say tht
A family sitting on the terrace...
Youngest son: dad look it's a aeroplane ✈️
Elder son: no it's a bird 🐦
The eldest daughter who just read this ff: no its yn's self respect 😂
average ff's:
jk- (after cursing,harassing,abusive,cold,disrespectful) i love you y/n more than my life will u live with me ??(he is a cold and rude hybrid vampire warewolf mafia king who is also a korea's no.1 ceo)
y/n-i love u more than my life and yes i will marry you
Lol 😂😂 spilling truth i see😂😂😂 1:36
😭😭😭😭😂😂🤣
😂😂😂😂 so true
Real
😂😂😂😂
Yn was so pathetic. Why show anger to ha Joon then ? It will be good if she gets back with a cheater too as she has no problem in people abusing her for no reason?
She had extreme problem with their abusing but she couldn't do anything because of her family think ATLEAST once before speaking 🙄
Indeed weak. Not looking for way out and solutions is weak. Only people with low iq or zero self-respect would endure this trashy treatment.
He had the chance to make a new start by letting her go after the reason behind his bad behavior towards her was revealed. He could have courted her, making her fall in love with him by respecting her wishes. Then it could have been a love-story. But now, he kept manipulating her, blackmailing her just bc he could. After all, she was a doormat with her ex, a doormat with JK at the beginning and stayed a doormat until the end. A few harsh words towards him doesnt make up her easy to manipulate character. Soo unromantic.
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No wants to hear your shitty opinion, go to hell b***h
@@IsHello-n7g i was going to write the same thing
Imagine getting slapped until someone tell you to stop 😭 lmao,the scene of the guards slapping the maid continuously is making me wheez 😭😂
Lol😂😂
22:59 the way i went from "Wow" 👏 to "WTF" 👁️👄👁️
😂😂😂same
Bro! How can she forgive him!? If this was a Wattpad ff than she would have tortured him instead of forgiveness
Don't know who spread the rumor that massaging stomach during cramps reduce pain
It really helps me alot girl don't say like that 😭
@@RidhiSharma13579 ok my lady as you now don't cry it's also my period days
Fan fiction 😢
It's amazing but I feel y/n forget about her self respect. Jungkook did wrong when he understand he still blackmail her he could make her fall for him but no he force her. I love and enjoyed it just little disappointed by Jungkook. Thanks for this ff of yours.
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
didn,t you hear LOVE IS BLIND
@@MEHAKGHAFAR-jl2fzSelf respect is more than love, hope you get an abusive partner
@@MEHAKGHAFAR-jl2fzit is not the people who get blinded by love are just dumb
I mean he could of looked into before tormenting her for 2 years ,but i suppose he found the truth after 2 years . I mean you know the treatemnt in the house was bad if y/n was getting bossed around by the maid like wow ,again he blackmailed her to stay using her parents he knows he did wrong and he loved her so he knew he was being selfish and the only way to make her stay was this way whether that was right is another question but now he has no brother or family member and wanted her besides him after knowing the truth .
just because of misunderstanding he trotured her for 2 years and here she just forgive him no one deserve this and i hate such people who make such weak female charachter this ff was disgusting and a disgrace to humanity
This was a request video so I made it
Okbaby
It wasn't his fault that he was told that his brother's death was because of yn and she didn't forgive him easily and she was planning to forgive him never but we can control love right? Think before speaking about someone's hard work creation 🙄
Girl shut up! Stop badmouthing someone’s hard work if it’s easy then write yours you can’t just get on your phone and say shit about someone’s work
This is just fictional why so serious?🤷♀️💔
@@Bhavya-s3u i have all right to say my thoughts and no one can stop me what i am saying is what i observed and is the truth he says he is a mafia king then how can he can do such a big mistake making an innocent a culprit i know writing is not easy
and i am here not badmouthing what i am saying is FACTS understood if not then keep on commenting it won't bother me i am not hating the author i am just criticizing the character because in my opinion he was wrong so where am i wrong?? i have all the rights to speak and i will
Fully wasted 27:42 minutes for this shitty story. Like seriously he tortured her for 2 years and she forgive him in 1 month. And even in the end also why y/n have to go to him seems like she is too desperate for him.
sorry if i wasted your time but this video was requested so i made it
@@tworld381it was great. Ignore the comments!!!!!
Right
It was not his fault that he was told that he is a brother so that was because of yn and vine did not forgive him that easily and in fact she was planning to forgive him never but we can't control our love feeling right? Think before saying anything bad about someone's hard worked creation at least the author worked hard to make this FF she's at least doing hard work not like you who don't know what hard to work is and always complains about everyone's hardworked creations
@@Bhavya-s3u What do you mean by always complain about everyone's hardwork?? When did you see my negative comment on other videos. I barely do any comment on any video. Sometimes if i liked the ff then I also appreciate author's hardwork. And this is just my opinion about this ff not about author's hardwork. And did I say that your all ff are not good stop writing this and that blah blah blah. I just give my opinion on this. And if you don't like my comment then don't see.
Your imagination is very dangerous 😂
Attention to everyone
If someone wants to talk about Muslim then you should call them with their name Muslim,( be respectful to all ) this is the reminder for all mankind, thank you May Allah Bless you all!.
No hate but I'd jk see he is like am i devil😂😂😂 but seriously ff is awesome waoooooóooooooooooooo❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
😂😂
He is not Devil he is my hero 😚❤️
Why jk harnessing?
I am really confuse
Is it a part of ypur any ff or one short?
Oneshot
@@tworld381 I see thanks😊
🤡...bro how tf she forgive him....dont u feel yn a woman is pathetic
Wow the story was great can't wait for next masterpieces thanks for the hard work
I will upload today
@@tworld381 excited
well it was a good one- but a little ahh how do I say- overdramatic- y/n didn't have self-respect that thing made me a little disappointed but overall was good can do better :)
Hey do you get monetised for your channel
Yes duh
Yall didn't came here after soso?
16:34 wasss funny 🤣
Disappointing story
You should have shown self respect towards YN in this FF, no one would have requested that you not show self respect towards her
No wonder why this story is called as pathetic....
Hey author i wasn't able to say you thank you after wishing me but as i had subscribed u already i got your channel
So, thank you for wishing me you r the first youtuber and writer to wish me ❤
And about this ff just an another masterpiece just didn't liked the harassment a bit and why did you deleted that other ff....😢
Due to monetization issue I removed all videos but don't worry I will upload that video soon with some edits. And one good news is that my channel has become monetized
Actually its not that bad just you shouldn't have added that 2 years harrasment thing
I also thought later but I had already made it so I did not change it
The robotic voice reading this put me off after the first sentence !
Waste of time and battery
So why are you here
Because I thought it was better like other authors fiction
So watch other authors fiction bcuz she did the hard work too
This ff is average because another ff i see in TH-cam they're good but in this ff very going so fast like you just skip toooo much like 2 years 😑😶
Why do i get emotional when someone fights and then love eachother......why ( fake crying)
It was nice ❤ 👍
Nice❤
Are u from Odisha?
yes but how did you know?
Demn I'm even from odisha....
@@tworld381 I guessed it from your accent actually
In odisha where?
Jharsuguda
Sorry to say this I don't like ur ff it's totally not cool. Yn forget her self respect.
ok you can read my other ff
The most boring ff i have ever read in my life
Soo why did you read this ff