Hey johnny! Thank you so much for the spotlight! I agree with all the points you said. I definately still have a lot to learn. This was my first ever submission and I have learned a lot in the process. I will also incoporate all this advise in my future projects, which I will surely send in as well! A shame you missed the preshow for the droptower, I guess I should have been clearer about how to start the sequence since it was a large part of the park and took a lot of effort. For anyone curious how this coaster was built: th-cam.com/play/PL5Sp8SNGKRMkkooLbI7ADalzLGkTQ6Cry.html and for anyone who wants to see what it looks like integrated INSIDE the mega park: th-cam.com/video/Huv2dv5E4GI/w-d-xo.html
Oh my God! This looks AMAZING! My favorite of all for now! It's a Mashup between Taron and Fly 😬 I'm just loving it! And the station of the coaster! Wow!
Having guests go through walls should be a big no-no. i understand that it allows to create some neat illusions, but I am pretty sure this is why Johnny and Sacros got so confused!
Hey I understand the confusion. The wall the guests are walking through is a moveable wall that opens up when you listen to the preshows (activated by the display sequencer on the left side of the door). I however was not clear enough and Johnny completely missed it which is why it looks like guests are walking through walls and closed doors
People seem really divided in the comments. I've heard Jonny say a few times that the contest entries are supposed to be like "themed areas that could go together as parts of one big park" which is literally what this is. On the other hand, there wasn't even an attempt at building an entrance which was a requirement of the contest rules. The coaster was a pretty nice layout, I agree there are too many floodlights and they're all just visible, they're not really embedded into anything. I quite liked the vivid gold lighting though, but the red and pink were a little strong... personal preference, I guess. And having people just walk through solid walls to reach the drop tower, I'm not at all surprised Jonny didn't find the queue. Last of all, was this even built for the contest? From the description it sounds like it was already done and the builder just saved it as a separate park file and submitted it. I thought the point was that you have to build the park from scratch within the contest time limit. Honestly felt more like a regular park spotlight than a contest submission, and even then it wouldn't be a complete park. So... some good build quality, definitely consider making that mine cart more of a feature in your megapark, but I agree with a lot of the criticism too. **EDIT:** OK I just checked the creator's channel and it was built from scratch as a new area of the megapark, but within the contest time. So that's all good!
Despite the problem areas, this area looks very good. Too bad that the second coaster was incomplete. I kinda imagine it going though all the areas almost like a sight seeing train. Maybe a little bit faster, but remain a steady pace.
I think you guys are being kind of harsh on this. It's a spectacular build. Granted, it doesn't have a park entrance as the rules stated, but it seems like you guys (not just Johnny and Syncros, but this whole comments section) are being too dismissive of it. I think for its one flaw (which we've seen a lot of people ignore in this contest so far), there's so much more that it has to offer. Obviously it's still competitive, which is why the team decided to feature it, yet you're all treating it as if it is the worst thing you've seen so far. That's a little unfair, guys. Should the creator have been so upfront about the fact that he didn't follow a rule? No. However, at least half of the parks that have been featured so far really have not had grand entrances either, and nobody has batted an eye.
There are a lot of grass plots that the coaster goes by, I think just some rocks, and bushes or trees and more interesting terrain paint would look great! That being said amazing buildings and awesome coaster! I love it
At 12:36 that room was going to an underground section of the park that you missed.....but then again if the creator had a sign or something to show what it was or where it was you probably would’ve found it
Great park and awesome architecture! I wish that the clock tower was a little taller because it was hard to appreciate. I also loved the observatory and I wish i could explore it too. Definitely add more mine trains. The reveals of the coaster are really nice. Lots of lights which i actually liked contrary to the mods. Definitely add more elevation changes.
I love the way that people not from the UK pronounce the ‘shire’ and ‘borough’ in our hometowns and countys. Here in place names ‘shire’ is pronounced like sheer and ‘borough’ is pronounced phonetically like buh-ra xx
I REALLY liked this park and its look and felt that the guys harped too much on what they didn't like while not mentioning much of what they liked (which is typical on this channel unless you get Web). Even without a 'Main Gate' the view from the spawn point was much better in this park than in others I have seen in this 'contest.' Sad part is, someone else could have done this park and Jonny would have been jizzing all over it (he def has his favorites)...
Im sorry but what kind of bullshit comment is this? I doubt he even knows or recognizes the names of 95% contest participants. You can make your point without ad hominem (look up what that means).
I've noticed lately and not just with this video some of your comments and feedback have been pretty harsh and coming across abit nasty.... People put hundreds of hours into there builds, and they expect some constructive criticism but not to be ripped apart like a naughty school child. I really used to enjoy watching these videos but some have become painful to watch due to the nature of the way there hard work be it not to your standards is literally pissed all over......
Weird, since every single criticism in this video was indeed quite constructive, so I'm not sure where you're getting a "nasty" or "naughty school child" vibe from or how they presumably "pissed all over" this park (or others, for that matter). I know there's presumably a whole generation of young folks who react to any kind of criticism quite differently than generations before them and you may or may not belong to that generation (which may or may not even exist, since I'm not one to generalize), but, personally, I feel everything on this channel is quite fair and balanced and Johnny et al *always* take the time to point out the good to excellent things in a creation, while also offering advice for improvements. It should also be noted that if you read the comments section on these videos, the creators themselves almost always post about their appreciation for the spotlight and the things that have been said about their parks, so.. maybe don't get offended on behalf of people who apparently aren't offended? Just sayin'.
Huh, really weird to hear you guys being all negative about this entry while it looks superb and definitely has its strong points. Feel like you could have been so much more constructive...
"Huh where are these people going?" Checks everywhere but where the people are going... Me: FFS!!!! THEY ARE WALKING THROUGH A BOOK SHELF GO BACK!!!!!!!!! Now I'll never know where they are goooiiiingggg!! :O lol
Good job, but unfinnished. It´s a pitty that the abilities shown as a builder doesn't reflect as a park planner. No entrance, no fully themed flat rides. This bracket has been till now only dissapointing.
It was from the beginning a little chaotic since I started without a clear layout and it most definitely shows. A thing to note is that Johnny missed the drop tower almost completely. It had two preshows for a storyline and the queue was exstensively themed. I was however so sleep deprived after handing it in I forgot to include this in the description. You can still check it out for yourself by downloading the park. A folder with all custom sounds and images is in the description of the steam workshop item.
Sad... themewise and buildingwise this would be my no 1 so far.... but it has not the required entrance, only the 2 flatrides... the whole space is only for the coaster, the pathing is a bit boring... i didn't like the lighting at all... really sad
If you heard the description they said this is eventually going to be part of a mega park. So the shortage of rides is understandable there's obviously going to be more when it's completely built but I have to agree with Jonny the lack of an entrance is really a let down
Thank you for your kind words! For a first submission I am just happy you like the buildings and the theming, now I just need to improve on the rest ;)
@@katerinakittycat3849 it is a competition and it has its rules... no matter what your personal plans may be... if the rules say: make a pleasing entry, and you refuse, you are out of the competition. Very simple...
@@itsokaytogame86 good that you see it like this. You have a high potential and if you would have made the entrance you would have good chances to win. I just want to be fair... i hope we will see other entry's of you
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12:26 That was supposed to be a part of the preshow for the Drop Tower. You completely missed on that.
Hey johnny! Thank you so much for the spotlight! I agree with all the points you said. I definately still have a lot to learn. This was my first ever submission and I have learned a lot in the process. I will also incoporate all this advise in my future projects, which I will surely send in as well! A shame you missed the preshow for the droptower, I guess I should have been clearer about how to start the sequence since it was a large part of the park and took a lot of effort. For anyone curious how this coaster was built: th-cam.com/play/PL5Sp8SNGKRMkkooLbI7ADalzLGkTQ6Cry.html and for anyone who wants to see what it looks like integrated INSIDE the mega park: th-cam.com/video/Huv2dv5E4GI/w-d-xo.html
Actually it looks good in your mega Park... still... i would change the lighting
Nothing wrong with this park. Looks great!!! I get it that its a contest though.
Your park looks amazing! I'm really impressed with your buildings, wish I had your level of skill!!
Oh my God! This looks AMAZING! My favorite of all for now! It's a Mashup between Taron and Fly 😬 I'm just loving it! And the station of the coaster! Wow!
Johnny follows people into a building: "What's going on in here? Where are these people going??"
Also Johnny: Leaves....
Having guests go through walls should be a big no-no. i understand that it allows to create some neat illusions, but I am pretty sure this is why Johnny and Sacros got so confused!
Hey I understand the confusion. The wall the guests are walking through is a moveable wall that opens up when you listen to the preshows (activated by the display sequencer on the left side of the door). I however was not clear enough and Johnny completely missed it which is why it looks like guests are walking through walls and closed doors
I saw this on steam and loved it! So glad you finally got to it! It's beautiful! So good! Sk many details and the coaster is so much fun!
People seem really divided in the comments. I've heard Jonny say a few times that the contest entries are supposed to be like "themed areas that could go together as parts of one big park" which is literally what this is. On the other hand, there wasn't even an attempt at building an entrance which was a requirement of the contest rules. The coaster was a pretty nice layout, I agree there are too many floodlights and they're all just visible, they're not really embedded into anything. I quite liked the vivid gold lighting though, but the red and pink were a little strong... personal preference, I guess. And having people just walk through solid walls to reach the drop tower, I'm not at all surprised Jonny didn't find the queue. Last of all, was this even built for the contest? From the description it sounds like it was already done and the builder just saved it as a separate park file and submitted it. I thought the point was that you have to build the park from scratch within the contest time limit. Honestly felt more like a regular park spotlight than a contest submission, and even then it wouldn't be a complete park. So... some good build quality, definitely consider making that mine cart more of a feature in your megapark, but I agree with a lot of the criticism too.
**EDIT:** OK I just checked the creator's channel and it was built from scratch as a new area of the megapark, but within the contest time. So that's all good!
so many building and street look so different it look like the park is 20 km long gj man
Really really cool park, wanna see more.
Despite the problem areas, this area looks very good. Too bad that the second coaster was incomplete. I kinda imagine it going though all the areas almost like a sight seeing train. Maybe a little bit faster, but remain a steady pace.
I think you guys are being kind of harsh on this. It's a spectacular build. Granted, it doesn't have a park entrance as the rules stated, but it seems like you guys (not just Johnny and Syncros, but this whole comments section) are being too dismissive of it. I think for its one flaw (which we've seen a lot of people ignore in this contest so far), there's so much more that it has to offer. Obviously it's still competitive, which is why the team decided to feature it, yet you're all treating it as if it is the worst thing you've seen so far. That's a little unfair, guys. Should the creator have been so upfront about the fact that he didn't follow a rule? No. However, at least half of the parks that have been featured so far really have not had grand entrances either, and nobody has batted an eye.
There are a lot of grass plots that the coaster goes by, I think just some rocks, and bushes or trees and more interesting terrain paint would look great! That being said amazing buildings and awesome coaster! I love it
The buildings and the glass stuff are awesome
At 12:36 that room was going to an underground section of the park that you missed.....but then again if the creator had a sign or something to show what it was or where it was you probably would’ve found it
Great park and awesome architecture! I wish that the clock tower was a little taller because it was hard to appreciate. I also loved the observatory and I wish i could explore it too. Definitely add more mine trains. The reveals of the coaster are really nice. Lots of lights which i actually liked contrary to the mods. Definitely add more elevation changes.
The buildings are awesome. All the Details are verry nice👍
I agree with to much lighting. Less is more in this case.
But great job in this Park.
There are sooo many details!!!!
I love the way that people not from the UK pronounce the ‘shire’ and ‘borough’ in our hometowns and countys. Here in place names ‘shire’ is pronounced like sheer and ‘borough’ is pronounced phonetically like buh-ra xx
I would say 'shire' is mostly pronounced 'shuh', I'm from Hampshire and we pronounce it 'Hampshuh'
eden moon You have a point 💞 For Hampshire that does sound right. I’m in Cambridgeshire so for us it’s mostly sheer 🙂💞 xx
Reminds me of the new area in Fantasialand
Impressive coaster.
I am confused. How do you get to the drop tower? Did you say there was something in the observatory?
I do realy like this park, and agree wit you're comments
Each land at Disneyland has an entrance sign. He could of made it and keep for the mega park.
I REALLY liked this park and its look and felt that the guys harped too much on what they didn't like while not mentioning much of what they liked (which is typical on this channel unless you get Web). Even without a 'Main Gate' the view from the spawn point was much better in this park than in others I have seen in this 'contest.' Sad part is, someone else could have done this park and Jonny would have been jizzing all over it (he def has his favorites)...
Im sorry but what kind of bullshit comment is this?
I doubt he even knows or recognizes the names of 95% contest participants.
You can make your point without ad hominem (look up what that means).
@@esbi7933 lmaoooo this is SUCH a pretentious comment with the entire "look up what that means" jesus
That lighting lol
Absolutely amazing build, but for me personally not a winner at all in this competition. "Just" a really well-decorated ride.
Nice uploading video.
This is PETFECT
I've noticed lately and not just with this video some of your comments and feedback have been pretty harsh and coming across abit nasty.... People put hundreds of hours into there builds, and they expect some constructive criticism but not to be ripped apart like a naughty school child. I really used to enjoy watching these videos but some have become painful to watch due to the nature of the way there hard work be it not to your standards is literally pissed all over......
Weird, since every single criticism in this video was indeed quite constructive, so I'm not sure where you're getting a "nasty" or "naughty school child" vibe from or how they presumably "pissed all over" this park (or others, for that matter). I know there's presumably a whole generation of young folks who react to any kind of criticism quite differently than generations before them and you may or may not belong to that generation (which may or may not even exist, since I'm not one to generalize), but, personally, I feel everything on this channel is quite fair and balanced and Johnny et al *always* take the time to point out the good to excellent things in a creation, while also offering advice for improvements.
It should also be noted that if you read the comments section on these videos, the creators themselves almost always post about their appreciation for the spotlight and the things that have been said about their parks, so.. maybe don't get offended on behalf of people who apparently aren't offended? Just sayin'.
Huh, really weird to hear you guys being all negative about this entry while it looks superb and definitely has its strong points. Feel like you could have been so much more constructive...
"Huh where are these people going?"
Checks everywhere but where the people are going...
Me: FFS!!!! THEY ARE WALKING THROUGH A BOOK SHELF GO BACK!!!!!!!!! Now I'll never know where they are goooiiiingggg!! :O lol
Winner..
Good job, but unfinnished. It´s a pitty that the abilities shown as a builder doesn't reflect as a park planner. No entrance, no fully themed flat rides. This bracket has been till now only dissapointing.
It was from the beginning a little chaotic since I started without a clear layout and it most definitely shows. A thing to note is that Johnny missed the drop tower almost completely. It had two preshows for a storyline and the queue was exstensively themed. I was however so sleep deprived after handing it in I forgot to include this in the description. You can still check it out for yourself by downloading the park. A folder with all custom sounds and images is in the description of the steam workshop item.
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LiNkEnShiReer 2:43
Sad... themewise and buildingwise this would be my no 1 so far.... but it has not the required entrance, only the 2 flatrides... the whole space is only for the coaster, the pathing is a bit boring... i didn't like the lighting at all... really sad
I agree
If you heard the description they said this is eventually going to be part of a mega park. So the shortage of rides is understandable there's obviously going to be more when it's completely built but I have to agree with Jonny the lack of an entrance is really a let down
Thank you for your kind words! For a first submission I am just happy you like the buildings and the theming, now I just need to improve on the rest ;)
@@katerinakittycat3849 it is a competition and it has its rules... no matter what your personal plans may be... if the rules say: make a pleasing entry, and you refuse, you are out of the competition. Very simple...
@@itsokaytogame86 good that you see it like this. You have a high potential and if you would have made the entrance you would have good chances to win. I just want to be fair... i hope we will see other entry's of you
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All you guys did was complain on this one especially by saying you didn’t even want to experience it again at night. Dramatic much? Jeeez. Relax.
you must not like criticism than?
unic0rnhunter naw fam
@@andrewrudygalindo2646 we said plenty of good things about it as well :)
They have to be a bit critical because this is a contest submission, not just a spotlight.
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