This is really beautiful, especially with the addition of that sound that appears at the beginning and end of the song. I think it fits very well as a touhou theme (specifically a stage 5 theme). The only thing I think doesn't quite fit in the touhou style is what comes after 1:45 (maybe I think that's just because of the instrument used).
![[東方風自作曲] 東方諷曄巻 ～ Wall Separating the Stage and Audience. (試作)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/TDw6CRsM_hE/mqdefault.jpg)
![[東方風自作曲] 東方諷曄巻 ～ Wall Separating the Stage and Audience. (試作)](/img/tr.png)
![[東方風自作曲] 美しき深淵のエディフィス](/img/n.gif)
練習と言うには余りにもクオリティが高すぎて泣いちゃいます
5面辺りで流れてほしい
なんで毎回ここまで神なんだ…!?
面白い構成ですね。ただ、イントロで鳴っているシンセの音（慟哭の音）が少し大きいのではないかという意見があります。同時に、ストリングスのソロが演奏されている部分は、かなり空虚に聞こえます。シンセのパッドやストリングスで周波数帯域を埋めてみてはいかがでしょうか。最後のギターも、8分音符をまっすぐに弾いているような、面白みのないリズムで、音色も良くありませんでした。
まだまだ改善の余地があると思いますので、今後のご活躍を期待しています。
四面辺りで流れてそう(小並感)
Ah.. using bag pipe swell I see.
I kinda wish you had piano arps in the violin section because it feel extremely empty there
格ゲー版でいいから携わって欲しい
This is really beautiful, especially with the addition of that sound that appears at the beginning and end of the song. I think it fits very well as a touhou theme (specifically a stage 5 theme). The only thing I think doesn't quite fit in the touhou style is what comes after 1:45 (maybe I think that's just because of the instrument used).
Did you compose this? It’s beautiful.
Are you also a furry? XD
Yes! This composed by me.
I'm furry too :)