The verbiage of your story doesn't even make sense. Random sentences that doesn't apply ti your story and some out of sequence. You need to hire someone to proof read your script.
This is a perfect example of a good story that was horribly presented. Mr JK Tells a Story, either do better or admit that you are incapable of the process of overseeing the successful presentation of a story. But..... you get credit for the hits.
Yeah, verbage, but that's the style in many of these conservative current "Mills and Bloom" style utterences. So long as the tradition-loving partner out lasts the cheater all is well. Not a true reflection of present day practices
Your ability to build a compelling world is truly remarkable-it felt so vivid and immersive.
Tough crowd, this is an old story that has been told by much better AI. The funniest Thanksgiving ever
That's funny that Melissa seeks out the worst of marriage counselors
Who ever wrote this or edited it really needs to do it again. It's way to hard to follow with all name changes.
Travis handled it very immaturely.
Unbelievable
Travis is so dumb that he doesn't know that Melissa is in love with him
The story is often confusing (too many mistakes).
Karma is a bytch
that was some thanksgiving.
The verbiage of your story doesn't even make sense. Random sentences that doesn't apply ti your story and some out of sequence. You need to hire someone to proof read your script.
wow. this is so bad i could not listen for even 30 seconds.
me too, I'm outa here.
Horrible
Dumb!
You need to fix the text on this story, and have this read by a real voice.
Just stupid
This is a perfect example of a good story that was horribly presented. Mr JK Tells a Story, either do better or admit that you are incapable of the process of overseeing the successful presentation of a story. But..... you get credit for the hits.
Way too long and totally stupid..
Yeah, verbage, but that's the style in many of these conservative current "Mills and Bloom" style utterences.
So long as the tradition-loving partner out lasts the cheater all is well.
Not a true reflection of present day practices
Very hard to follow, all the disjointed and not making any sense.
Horrendous mangling of one of the funniest stories