As an Explorer of alternate timelines, I should inform the individuals who live in this timeline that although times are tough at the current moment, at least they don't live in a world where the Mongols literally conquered the world and America is a nomad Nation, now that sounds like a sick renegade studio movie idea if I ever heard one.
There's a lot of trains of thought along these lines But haven't heard about our country being nomadic Hey I'd like that. Better than gangs and random violence We wouldn't k lw about serial Killers cause they'd get away with it I can give ya a bunch of other ideas l
People of a hundred years ago had more self disciplined minds back then than most people of today. Our modern decline in mental ability can be blamed on computers and cell phones.
I still remember when I was a teenager wanting to write a sci fi post apocalyptic story, it was so bad😆 never finished it either, kudos to decent writers
No one becomes a decent writer without writing, so DO IT! Finish your story! Yeah, it probably won't be perfect (or even good), but it will be there! An experience! A proof that you CAN! And maybe a jumping point for more stories to come.
I find it really interesting that the writer put forward that the next big war after ww1 would be dismantling the American empire (was written in the late 20's).
Just a few gentle suggestions, if you are the one reading these. "They failed to secret the weapons" - secret is pronounced secret, not secrete. Secrete is something else ;-) Don't worry, lots of audiobook readers get it wrong. Heinous is not highness - but hay-nous. Then, would appreciate it, if you can make the male voices a little more male! haha For some reason when you read the guy shouted something it sounds like a girl. I really hate this book, but I gotta try make a certain number by the end of the year, so I'll be digging into more of what you have available. You have a good voice for reading, I hope you can refine things a little :)
Hey there! Thanks for the feedback! As a hybrid channel, this was one of our earliest works done by a digital narrator :) But the quality has vastly improved, thankfully!
As an Explorer of alternate timelines, I should inform the individuals who live in this timeline that although times are tough at the current moment, at least they don't live in a world where the Mongols literally conquered the world and America is a nomad Nation, now that sounds like a sick renegade studio movie idea if I ever heard one.
There's a lot of trains of thought along these lines
But haven't heard about our country being nomadic
Hey I'd like that.
Better than gangs and random violence
We wouldn't k lw about serial Killers cause they'd get away with it
I can give ya a bunch of other ideas l
Just wait a few more months. The Mongols are currently in charge
We are in the Apophis destroying earth 🌎 in 2036 timeline. Sad, but true.
This is my favorite story on this entire channel thus far. Simply amazing and to think it was written all the way back in 1928 is NUTS
People of a hundred years ago had more self disciplined minds back then than most people of today. Our modern decline in mental ability can be blamed on computers and cell phones.
Really enjoyed this story, thank you so much! Wonderful narration, too!
I still remember when I was a teenager wanting to write a sci fi post apocalyptic story, it was so bad😆 never finished it either, kudos to decent writers
Dude you could be a great writer i wish i could read you story
Perhpas you should give it a go again!
No one becomes a decent writer without writing, so DO IT! Finish your story! Yeah, it probably won't be perfect (or even good), but it will be there! An experience! A proof that you CAN! And maybe a jumping point for more stories to come.
@@iskra6264 thank you 😊
@@grimmrefertheJedi thank you too, I don’t think I saw your comment.
Wilma Deering??? Buck Rogers!!!
Mongolian airships are the coolest feature of the future.
Loved this one 👌🏻
Woohoo!
I knew something wasn't right i didnt got a notification
That's too bad man. Perhaps unsinstall, then reinstall the YT app
37:50 did Mr. Nowlan inadvertently design the gyrojet pistol a few decades early?
Perhaps!
I find it really interesting that the writer put forward that the next big war after ww1 would be dismantling the American empire (was written in the late 20's).
Ww2 was technically a continuation of ww1.
The big war after that, seems indeed to be working towards a dismantling of the US Empire.
Goodness me this is unusual but! Interesting
Very!
You remind me PE ROWE in your story telling😮
I still remember swiming when i had a tail.
Wow!
Just a few gentle suggestions, if you are the one reading these.
"They failed to secret the weapons" - secret is pronounced secret, not secrete. Secrete is something else ;-) Don't worry, lots of audiobook readers get it wrong.
Heinous is not highness - but hay-nous.
Then, would appreciate it, if you can make the male voices a little more male! haha For some reason when you read the guy shouted something it sounds like a girl.
I really hate this book, but I gotta try make a certain number by the end of the year, so I'll be digging into more of what you have available.
You have a good voice for reading, I hope you can refine things a little :)
Hey there! Thanks for the feedback! As a hybrid channel, this was one of our earliest works done by a digital narrator :) But the quality has vastly improved, thankfully!
Well the fall of the US is pretty much spot on!
And we're experiencing it in real-time lol
Is there more?!?
There's a sequel to this story that we may work on in the future :)
@@TheDarkCosmos1 if no may i get a link r something
This sounds like a similier story i created in my head but mine is the begging of human space faring
Curious!
@@TheDarkCosmos1 also first human/alien war
@Richard Strach i am thinking its gonna be more like a first contact situtaion
🤗💕💯
Karma is a B
It might have been a good story but that background music was so f****** annoying I'm not sticking around.
Thanks for trying to give it a listen
I'm glad it's not just me.
and
That writing is so ponderous I feel I'm jogging in wet concrete.
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sooo boring good for falling asleep however