Nice plot. However, there were inconsistencies. Supposedly, "her father's genes" made her keep a cool head, but she acted in a rush to fire the secretary instead of waiting till she got the case resolved. Then, a "cold headed" person would have fired her for not warning Eva of her husband's cheating. Just small detail. Another detail, Leah despised Mateo but ends up marrying him. Ridiculous. You don't change 180 degrees after despising a person so, so much. Good ending though.
Watching from Auburn, PA. This was a very emotional story about Eva and Max AND Max’s infidelity (secret) and lover. But that’s not all. Max and his lover had been together for a long time, longer than his marriage to Eva. Max and his lover were responsible for Eva sudden illnesses AND unbeknownst to Eva or the police, they were responsible for her parents accident that resulted in their deaths and for slowly trying to poison Eva. The police were somehow on to them and arrested them just as Eva and her Fernando had discovered their schemes……. WONDERFUL, suspenseful and endearing story!
Eva's Mom is absolutely Gorgeous!!.. Classy, Gracious!!.. Aged Well!! Just Beautiful! Eva looks Just like her mom! Sadly, that 5 years aged her a LOT.. Hopefully, she gets to sorta relax now.. Stress is a wicked thing that does immense harm to a woman's face!!.. Bravo Eva!! Glad ya caught eh bastard!!
Always check your documents before signing anything. Ur husband might be a hook and by crook plus having a mistress on the side, better be prepared. Enjoyed your narrated story.
This man is so evil. He deserves life without parole. And for his evil mistress, she should only be released from prison when she's old and senile. I know it's only a story, but these things happen in real life.
I have tried to listen several stories yesterday and today .Their-voices are in Med .High speed . I am unable to listen to anymore until this problem is taken care of
Can't you people narrate a story without taking God's name? How many times will you desecrate His Name? Oh God Oh God Oh God.. Don't you have anything else to say? Please stop it. Why can't you say "Oh Gosh" instead!!!
Poor narrators on these stories. Where did they learn to read. So many problems noted thru out these stories that it would take forever to point them out.
From the beginning of the story, I knew Max's bad intentions and motives on their first date..that he was in a hurry to havr sex with Eva inside his car
Why is her father trying to marry her off. My dad tried to do the same thing to me. I told him if you like him so much, you marry him. The guy got mad, and left. I also told him you nor no one will choose who I marry. You don't have to live with him I do, so, I will choose whoever I marry.
I have tried to listen several stories yesterday and today .Their-voices are in Med .High speed . I am unable to listen to anymore until this problem is taken care of .
What a scoundrel for a husband, well he got his just dues and his mistress. Good they got caught
Nice plot. However, there were inconsistencies. Supposedly, "her father's genes" made her keep a cool head, but she acted in a rush to fire the secretary instead of waiting till she got the case resolved. Then, a "cold headed" person would have fired her for not warning Eva of her husband's cheating. Just small detail.
Another detail, Leah despised Mateo but ends up marrying him. Ridiculous. You don't change 180 degrees after despising a person so, so much.
Good ending though.
Such a great great 👍 story. Thank you 😊
I like these short stories. This was really exciting! Sad but still fun! ❤
Excellent story, thank you.
Enjoyed this intriguing story❤
Its her property, she can do whatever she wants in her own property.
Watching from Auburn, PA.
This was a very emotional story about Eva and Max AND Max’s infidelity (secret) and lover. But that’s not all. Max and his lover had been together for a long time, longer than his marriage to Eva. Max and his lover were responsible for Eva sudden illnesses AND unbeknownst to Eva or the police, they were responsible for her parents accident that resulted in their deaths and for slowly trying to poison Eva. The police were somehow on to them and arrested them just as Eva and her Fernando had discovered their schemes……. WONDERFUL, suspenseful and endearing story!
Eva's Mom is absolutely Gorgeous!!.. Classy, Gracious!!.. Aged Well!! Just Beautiful! Eva looks Just like her mom! Sadly, that 5 years aged her a LOT.. Hopefully, she gets to sorta relax now.. Stress is a wicked thing that does immense harm to a woman's face!!.. Bravo Eva!! Glad ya caught eh bastard!!
nice, Great story🥰
Always check your documents before signing anything. Ur husband might be a hook and by crook plus having a mistress on the side, better be prepared. Enjoyed your narrated story.
Hmmm she should have gone and found the secretary she fired and hired her back with a raise
This man is so evil. He deserves life without parole. And for his evil mistress, she should only be released from prison when she's old and senile. I know it's only a story, but these things happen in real life.
Absolutely! I have thought about writing a book myself! A trilogy! 😂
Something is not right about this guy. He wants her money not her he is up to no good.
I have tried to listen several stories yesterday and today .Their-voices are in Med .High speed .
I am unable to listen to anymore until this problem is taken care of
Adjust your speed then
His ass is going to prison and his mistress too.
When the cats away the mouse will play. He sending her sway so he can see the one he is realy in love with.
Nice and lesson filled story!!?
She is putting to much trust in her suposely husband.
Please get rid of the piano noise.🙉
Can't you people narrate a story without taking God's name? How many times will you desecrate His Name? Oh God Oh God Oh God.. Don't you have anything else to say? Please stop it. Why can't you say "Oh Gosh" instead!!!
And you are doing the same thing in your comments
Matthew 7:1-5
Check the computer
A lovely storey
Oooh qhat a smooth scoundrel
She shouldn't have fired the secretary. Anastasia was more evil than Max, and he was a throughly bad lot..
Evil husband
The narrator reads stiffly and has zero flow
They got his but, good,
Poor narrators on these stories. Where did they learn to read. So many problems noted thru out these stories that it would take forever to point them out.
From the beginning of the story, I knew Max's bad intentions and motives on their first date..that he was in a hurry to havr sex with Eva inside his car
Lost interest in the story because of the narrator.
The broken voice narrating was very off putting 😮
I cant stand this narrator.
Why is her father trying to marry her off. My dad tried to do the same thing to me. I told him if you like him so much, you marry him. The guy got mad, and left. I also told him you nor no one will choose who I marry. You don't have to live with him I do, so, I will choose whoever I marry.
It a bot
I have tried to listen several stories yesterday and today .Their-voices are in Med .High speed .
I am unable to listen to anymore until this problem is taken care of .
Adjust your own speed