WOW, All i can say is WOW. And Im a 13 year Navy vet. And my job required that i be in the know of a ton of infidelity. I knew guys who were married to strippers, buy me drink girls, topless bartenders, and more. I knew female sailors who made more money winning multiple wet t-shirt contests a week than they made as 2nd class POs (with single BAQ, VHA, & BAS). Hell, i knew an E3 who drove around in a new vet because his wife was the number 1 stripper in SC at the time and was also in vids if you get me. With all of that, ive never seen one this bad. Oh, and i was stationed in Coronado for 2 years before they sent me back to Little Creek (thank god). So i know those strip clubs out there. But on to the story itself. To the writer and narrator. Great job. Time line was spot on. You didnt confuse yourself or the story (something i see often with stories on here.) There was emotion, not only in the story but, in the imagination you pulled from the listener. Narration was batter than most. Only heard 1 mispronounciation, i believe. And the breathing was for the most part, spot on. This story was presented better, overall, than most on here. Great job. I definitely cant wait to listen to more from this site.
lol. "who would have thought marring a topless waitress in a bar would turn out like this", how else did you expect it to turn out. I thought about that in the beginning of the story before I knew what happened, he mad a very bad choice in the beginning. At least the kids are his.
jesus christ the twist was awesome
thank you OP! ❤️😎👍👌
That last line says it all...lol. Good story. Thanks!
WOW, All i can say is WOW. And Im a 13 year Navy vet. And my job required that i be in the know of a ton of infidelity. I knew guys who were married to strippers, buy me drink girls, topless bartenders, and more. I knew female sailors who made more money winning multiple wet t-shirt contests a week than they made as 2nd class POs (with single BAQ, VHA, & BAS). Hell, i knew an E3 who drove around in a new vet because his wife was the number 1 stripper in SC at the time and was also in vids if you get me. With all of that, ive never seen one this bad. Oh, and i was stationed in Coronado for 2 years before they sent me back to Little Creek (thank god). So i know those strip clubs out there.
But on to the story itself. To the writer and narrator. Great job. Time line was spot on. You didnt confuse yourself or the story (something i see often with stories on here.) There was emotion, not only in the story but, in the imagination you pulled from the listener. Narration was batter than most. Only heard 1 mispronounciation, i believe. And the breathing was for the most part, spot on. This story was presented better, overall, than most on here. Great job. I definitely cant wait to listen to more from this site.
You get what you buy.
lol. "who would have thought marring a topless waitress in a bar would turn out like this", how else did you expect it to turn out. I thought about that in the beginning of the story before I knew what happened, he mad a very bad choice in the beginning. At least the kids are his.