5 Tips to Get Band 7 in the IELTS Writing Exam - IELTS Writing Lesson

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  • @SureshKumar-kn7kj
    @SureshKumar-kn7kj 5 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    Hi Oli I learned some tricks from your video. I always suppose you are my best and favorite tutor because I improved my speaking skills instantly to watch your videos

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      @jayeshnagarkar7131 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      so u believe that you improved your English skills!!

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      @halimakhatoon4775 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@jayeshnagarkar7131 and I’m gonna

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    • @curtisharlem3000
      @curtisharlem3000 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Simon Hank Definitely, have been watching on InstaFlixxer for years myself :)

    • @manreet4463
      @manreet4463 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      My favourite teacher is also sir Oli 🤗🙂..i learn lot of things from him 😊as well as others teachers

  • @jennyl5454
    @jennyl5454 7 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I have watched hundreds of videos regarding ielts writing. I have been taking ielts for the last 6 months. All of which i scored 6.5 for writing,8.5 for speaking,7 for reading and 8.5 for listening. I was so frustrated until I found this video! I watched this 6 times before I had my 4th try and guess what?? I finally got 7.0 for writing. Keep doing videos Oli! They are very helpful!

  • @Indrazill
    @Indrazill 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you very much, Sir. This is very useful for me as an IELTS taker who's always stuck in 6.5 in Writing.
    Regards from Indonesia.

  • @liewchengyeh
    @liewchengyeh 6 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    if you listen carefully...
    while explaining PARAGRAPH section, the host also give a good example of using LINKING WORDS....

  • @AzharAli-ug2po
    @AzharAli-ug2po 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    you are simple remarkable i got in past 7 band writing but iam fascinated with your type of explanation and flow of process you been doing incredible

  • @mileycassandra8743
    @mileycassandra8743 7 ปีที่แล้ว +112

    I can't wait to watch the next lesson.I love your channel and hope you will make more useful video.😙😙😙

  • @angelilagria584
    @angelilagria584 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hi oli for 2weeks of watching you i learned a lot it may not high band but im proud i got 6 for the first try, thank you so much keep up!

  • @asdzqynuyt3620
    @asdzqynuyt3620 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    i just finished my ielts test,watching to this video is useful to me ,hope u give more details and even practice with me....

  • @rachelxjxjy1324
    @rachelxjxjy1324 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much Oil! This video is AMAZING!!!!!!! I've taken IELTS 3 times and never got a mark more than 6.5 in the writing component. After watching this video I suddenly realised why. Thank you!!!!

  • @annadaily
    @annadaily 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I am really stuck in writing at the moment. Thanks for the helpful video. I'll follow your advice.

  • @mrthushanth8936
    @mrthushanth8936 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Here I'm gonna say my personal experience. Whatever you do your focus is important and give maximum as you can. I worked hard for 21 days and got 7. It is possible and go with TH-cam videos and get to know the strategies. IELTS is based about how you use your skills. Good luck

    • @rogerjr.6588
      @rogerjr.6588 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks plonker

    • @kaisarmiyatov8395
      @kaisarmiyatov8395 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Good of you.

    • @dholiyadivya3483
      @dholiyadivya3483 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello...Have you got required bands in first attempt ??

    • @mrthushanth8936
      @mrthushanth8936 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dholiyadivya3483 Yah in my first attempt

    • @dholiyadivya3483
      @dholiyadivya3483 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@mrthushanth8936 good to know ... Thanks for reply

  • @nickpellatt
    @nickpellatt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great advice to check the public band description. If you want a band score, you really need to learn what that band score is!

  • @Maianhlai29
    @Maianhlai29 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much! I had been stucking at band 6.5 in IELTS Writing. Luckily, I came across your video 3 days before sitting the exam and finally, I got 7.0 in Writing and 7.5 overall

  • @krishnendhuchakra6358
    @krishnendhuchakra6358 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    By far,this is the one of the most relevant videos of IELTS i have ever seen .Thank you

  • @Think1401
    @Think1401 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thx master.
    Btw , your fluency ,pitch and intonation is awesome .

  • @keerthislife9417
    @keerthislife9417 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You gave a lot of information for achieving band 7 essay..Surely, I will be following these tips in my exam.

  • @berkerberki1
    @berkerberki1 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Writing has turned into a nightmare for me too. I took a pilot exam before I take the real test and my marks goes like this: Listening:8.5 Reading:7 Speaking:8 Writing: 6.5
    6.5 is good enough for me since my other marks makes my overall high enough for my purpose. But it still bothers me, I should not go bellow 6. This friday I'm having the real exam, we will see what happens.
    Really clear video by the way. Thank you!

  • @elnethio8625
    @elnethio8625 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Oli thanks for the lessons. I just got my eilts results and i scored band 7.5 overall with my least score being band 7 in writing and the highest score being 8.5 in listening. I got 7.5 in the other two modules. Once again thanks for the lessons here on youtube.

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's great news, nicely done! Keep up the good work and thanks for watching!

    • @suadmohammed2964
      @suadmohammed2964 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Well done great hard work for getting that band

  • @lwinthutun514
    @lwinthutun514 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got a Band 7 in IELTS Writing and Overall Band 7; thanks to Teacher Oli for his help and advice.
    I took online classes with my teacher and he gave me great guidance to achieve this during my preparation for my exam. He is professional, helpful and, one of the best teachers I have ever met. I do recommend Oxford Online English. 👍

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Congratulations, Iwinthu! We're so glad the lesson was helpful for you!

  • @soeaungsoeaung969
    @soeaungsoeaung969 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi oli I haven't had any experience about IELTS.You are my first teacher.but I can understand what you mean and I could do my english skill to improve because of your class.I will be watching your lesson .you are an outstanding eng teacher.🤓🤓🥰🤗

  • @sattawutwongwiangjunt1715
    @sattawutwongwiangjunt1715 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Thank you so much for this wonderful video that is extremely helpful. It seems there is no magic to make good score immediately. Practicing is a key for success.

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  7 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's true, Sattawut! Thanks for watching and glad you enjoyed it.

  • @bhavyatapanchal5338
    @bhavyatapanchal5338 7 ปีที่แล้ว +103

    Hey Oli... I got 7 in speaking... Ur tips were really helpful
    ..

    • @dilpreet3655
      @dilpreet3655 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      bhavya panchal please send your writing style.. I need please...

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  7 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Nice job, Bhavya! Glad the lesson was helpful for you.

    • @bhavyatapanchal5338
      @bhavyatapanchal5338 7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Oxford Online English. I took all ur lessons all were useful for the last moment tips..

    • @thecreeper3206
      @thecreeper3206 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      bhavya panchal can you teach me?

    • @bhavyatapanchal5338
      @bhavyatapanchal5338 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      The Creeper. Have a list of vocabulary for frequently asked questions.. Ask any friend to ask u part 1,2,3 questions just like mock test... It will develop ur confidence to approach.. Atleast 2 times a day... The question tht u can't answer just write it down and try to answer them

  • @kalolanachiketa5818
    @kalolanachiketa5818 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You are the best teacher i have ever seen.

  • @umidjonodilovich9377
    @umidjonodilovich9377 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is best video for taking IELTS exam

  • @TryHardPilot
    @TryHardPilot 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I only watched this this video before doing my 3rd ielts, 1st i got 6.5 in writing then 6 and then after the 3rd time got 7 in writing thanks to this video.

  • @BlackboardEnglish
    @BlackboardEnglish 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What a great video for IELTS students. Your tips are great. I will share your video with my students. A lot of students are always asking me this questions.

  • @somebody401
    @somebody401 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I’m with you about that band 6 is fine, but some careers need at least 7.5 for writing, so it’s an essential idea to give a lesson about how to get 7, or even 9; I will be looking for these lessons after watching this one, thanks.

  • @TechToTalkK
    @TechToTalkK 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you sir for your videos I got overall 7 bands, listening 8.5 , writing 7 , S&R 6..... thank you 🤗

    • @growwithme5784
      @growwithme5784 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      How you got in listening and writing please tell me some tips

    • @anamkamran2886
      @anamkamran2886 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Aman deep I need ur help

    • @anamkamran2886
      @anamkamran2886 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Plz share some tips

  • @zeeshanrashid9426
    @zeeshanrashid9426 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks a lot for sharing this valuable videos.Surprisingly, my approach towards IELST was like a 6 band student while my target is 7/7.5. This video has shared some good techniques to avoid common mistakes. Thanks again!

  • @ahmedeid2972
    @ahmedeid2972 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Great Video, Thanks a lot for sharing these important advises. my main problem with writing is that I don't like writing even in my own language. I usually become distracted with many ideas and lose tracks for what I want to say and I ended with wasting valuable time. it's a curse for me.

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      So glad you enjoyed the video, Ahmed! Yes, this is a common problem. Practice will help!

    • @ayanguray570
      @ayanguray570 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ahmed Abdelrahiem
      Your writing is well

  • @aileenkaur3475
    @aileenkaur3475 6 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    OMG I was unaware about all these useful tips. Thanku

  • @alfa6018
    @alfa6018 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you, I may take the IELTS exams next year. Your lessons are really helpful.

  • @ericyu4693
    @ericyu4693 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks a lot. This is a very impressive lesson and it helps us to understand what's the requirements for both BAND 6 and BAND7.

  • @charlottechen806
    @charlottechen806 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awsome,I'm taking IELTS tomorrow.Good luck.😊

  • @shuyixie5042
    @shuyixie5042 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It is always magic to me to write authentic English sentences,...

  • @chunnyfunny764
    @chunnyfunny764 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This video is really useful, I cant wait to watch your next video lesson, it is really helpful for me. Thank you so much Oxford online english

  • @jithinrajan7139
    @jithinrajan7139 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Ur videos are really practically applicable ❤

  • @omerali8602
    @omerali8602 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    one thing i observed in you is tht you explain in a brilliant manner very intresting video ..fan of you

  • @annguyenviet5863
    @annguyenviet5863 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    what a great video! Very clear about the differences between band 6 and 7 score. Thank you.

  • @naeemullah3702
    @naeemullah3702 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Exceptional ! your way of teaching is superb and more beneficial for us.

  • @prettycat748
    @prettycat748 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you Oli for all your lessons. They were very useful and understandable.

  • @Archturian8880
    @Archturian8880 7 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    I wanna cry when I accidentally saw this vdo. It likes a god's message hahaha. I got 6.0 band for 3 times of my exams.

  • @ademirgabardo6843
    @ademirgabardo6843 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I like this video, I found it very useful to understand the difference from band 6 to band 7. Cheers.

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      So glad it was useful for you, Ademir! Thanks for watching.

  • @sukoluhlemuwi5669
    @sukoluhlemuwi5669 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hello I am thrilled to air my views on this platform. Many thanks to your time and good heart for teaching us.

  • @mehedianas7467
    @mehedianas7467 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you sir Ali!!
    you are the greatest trainer for IELTS exam. I have been waiting for your new lessons. Thanks

  • @dhaliwalkiran3781
    @dhaliwalkiran3781 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It is very useful for me to get high band scores😊

  • @lucynguyen5366
    @lucynguyen5366 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have learned a lot of things i didn't know in the past. Thank you very much

  • @kashifkhurshid8442
    @kashifkhurshid8442 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    It would be great if you could share sample essay with band score, especially, which is in your video.

  • @goodlife-hb8cn
    @goodlife-hb8cn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    OMG. Where am i. Why i don't know about this channel.thx for u again.

  • @ravneetkaur4929
    @ravneetkaur4929 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i really liked the tips fr attaining 7 bands nd i got to know my mistakes dat fetched me 6 bands last time. hope to improve dis tym

  • @azammajeed4859
    @azammajeed4859 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    The way you perform all lecture 😍😍😍

  • @sunnygill5171
    @sunnygill5171 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hope so I will get good band score by using these tips

  • @LongTail8443
    @LongTail8443 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Exactly how l learn vocabulary,just a few words,But really learn them.

  • @radwafarouk2340
    @radwafarouk2340 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My devoted teacher with a golden tips..thanks a lot mr.oli

  • @chonkriyatuber7972
    @chonkriyatuber7972 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks sir this video is really effective bcos i used linking words without understanding the demand .

  • @gurpreetpanesar395
    @gurpreetpanesar395 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This video is really a great asset for any one who is looking for achieving a high score in IELTS.

  • @berkayertem5938
    @berkayertem5938 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    YOUR VIDEOS ARE REALLY REALLY HELPFUL!
    Thank you!

  • @SS-on3yk
    @SS-on3yk 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you oli,this is the best lesson i ever seen,very helpful.

  • @mariesol49
    @mariesol49 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    oohhhh,, this is the first time i watch you and your video is totally useful, the way you explain the points, give me confidence to get a successful exam,, (i feel so anxious, must confess..

  • @naimakh8851
    @naimakh8851 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir you've a fluent pronunciation and thanks for the useful advice

  • @gourav5862
    @gourav5862 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you for giving us such fruitful tips, hope it would help me to get desireable scores

  • @greenlife8514
    @greenlife8514 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Well done Mr. Oli/Ori. Your tutorial is excellent.

  • @hitomi-8867
    @hitomi-8867 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The lessons are really helpful, thanks mate!!!

  • @gurdialsinghsidhu3493
    @gurdialsinghsidhu3493 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    great way of teaching salute sir

  • @HiepPham-tl9og
    @HiepPham-tl9og 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    thank you so much Oli :D I leant a lot from this lesson. love your work, hope you well :D

  • @manpreetkaur-vf9ru
    @manpreetkaur-vf9ru 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Good job Oli . your ideas are osm . really

  • @gurmeetkaurvilkhu1798
    @gurmeetkaurvilkhu1798 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great Tips. Thanks Oli.

  • @jayanthigopinath6657
    @jayanthigopinath6657 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Amazing explanation. Positive and confident approach. Well done. Just clarify me ? In the question, it has mentioned “ your own experiences / own example? What exactly they meant? Is it necessary to give our own example? Like when I was studying .........bla bla

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi there. Yes, if you have examples from your own life that can enhance your response, you can use them. Hope this helps you!

  • @mohitmannan745
    @mohitmannan745 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanku so much...i find your key points really very useful...hope it helps me in my ielts exam...and i am trying harder for that with these tips.

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for watching, Kavita! Hopefully the tips do help you. We have other lessons to help you prepare for IELTS as well: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/free-ielts-preparation-lessons.

  • @kajukismis5378
    @kajukismis5378 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Oli,your videos are really amazing,although there are other teachers you are the best😘

  • @princedeepsingh1493
    @princedeepsingh1493 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Vvy nyc video😍thanku so muchh😍

  • @arturodiazleon5705
    @arturodiazleon5705 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank´s a lot because I thing that I have to study grammar and strength my performance ....

    • @zemo8857
      @zemo8857 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      arturo Díaz León "(thanks )a lot because I (think ) that I have to study grammar and (strengthen) my performance.

  • @Gustavo-lz5mi
    @Gustavo-lz5mi 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazing video! Thanks for these tips, they are very useful!

  • @leisaclaveria7552
    @leisaclaveria7552 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello oli have a great day..it is helpful to me,today I'm preparing IELTS exam for general actually I felt confusing honestly speaking because of this video step by step my mind was become clear.thamkz

  • @abab4684
    @abab4684 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow, this is the real video

  • @camillaalcini358
    @camillaalcini358 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Super helpful, thanks!!!

  • @dailyenglishconversationch374
    @dailyenglishconversationch374 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I love your Channel I'm looking forward to seeing your next video

  • @shaishtaafroze5475
    @shaishtaafroze5475 7 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    I got 9 in Reading, 8 in Speaking & 8 in Listening. But unfortunately I got only 6.5 in writing.
    I don't know how, though I wrote very well.It was my first attempt for IELTS GT
    can you please give me some special expert advise on this.

    • @augustochin6510
      @augustochin6510 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      shaishta afroze Could I talk with you in English by Facebook? Here is my Facebook page ugetme711@gmail.com . Thank you very much if you could contact me and I will appreciate what you would you to me!

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Shaishta. We have a few good lessons to help you more with this here: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/?s=writing. If you want individual help we also have some great teachers who specialize in IELTS. You can find that information here: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/about-our-online-english-teachers.

    • @iqbalthind1160
      @iqbalthind1160 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      shaishta afroze. Hlo dear can you plz tell me about reading tips how I get 6.5

    • @poochyboi
      @poochyboi 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      shaishta afroze Cus ielts is a scam. I got 8s and 9s for the other component and 6.5 in writing. This is a common trend that happens too often many of which are native English speakers.

    • @pramodbhatia1685
      @pramodbhatia1685 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      same withe me listening 8.5,reading 9,writing 6.5 and speaking 8

  • @hakimanh4283
    @hakimanh4283 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Oli, I love your channel and I really love all your videos, They are every useful to students

  • @soalihafatima4266
    @soalihafatima4266 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Excellent explanation! Please make more videos like these ,specially how to write essay on different types of q's at writing task 2 of ielts academic!

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you enjoyed the lesson! These videos might help you: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/free-ielts-preparation-lessons.

  • @xurshedxaitov5038
    @xurshedxaitov5038 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    very very useful advice you are the best teacher i think

  • @sriharinakerakanti2193
    @sriharinakerakanti2193 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your speaking very fluently

  • @doddadoddy7983
    @doddadoddy7983 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    thanks for your advice and your effort

  • @bsalmhr7929
    @bsalmhr7929 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i really like this video.i find this very informative.i hope it'll be helpful for me in my coming days.thanks a lot.

  • @madinaomarkulova3831
    @madinaomarkulova3831 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have Ielts exam today.
    And i am watching this video

  • @annaagustin4955
    @annaagustin4955 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I'm planning to get EILTs hope to get new materials

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Good luck with your preparation. We have some helpful tools: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/free-ielts-preparation-lessons.

    • @nguyenhanh3685
      @nguyenhanh3685 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Oxfordonlineenglish1 thanks a lot

  • @harpinderkaurmirzewalia8849
    @harpinderkaurmirzewalia8849 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I hope i'll achieve 7 band with these ideas

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    @bunnyroy3373 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Traffic jams in urban areas lead to severe health issues such as lung cancer, asthma, and other respiratory diseases. In general, this affects people’s quality of life, including dissatisfaction of people regarding living their life in order. The solution to these problems is fast and comfortable public transportation.
    To begin with, traffic congestion contributes significantly to adverse health issues. The major cause of traffic congestion is the enormous counting of the moving vehicles on the roads so that people have to wait more hours during rush hours. As a result, vehicles emit large amounts of chemical gases such as carbon dioxide and monoxide, which are the main cause of air pollution and degrade air quality. Therefore, asthma is not an uncommon disease among people. For instance, my cousin's brother has to go to Delhi for his further studies, although he did not have any health problems in his village before going to Delhi, now he is facing respiratory issues for 2 years. Therefore, he said to his parents,” he will come back as soon as possible.
    Similarly, traffic jams affect people’s quality of life. The quality of life is perceived satisfaction of people regarding living their life in order so that increasing dissatisfaction among people is caused by traffic congestion. To exemplify, people get more frustrated and annoyed, whenever they are stuck in traffic jams during the day. Thus, it not only disrupts the people’s daily routines but also their lifestyles. Consequently, people face problems like wastage of time, when they spent more hours on the roads and they have to delay to reach their destinations such as workplace, meetings, and activities. For example, I recently missed my government exam because of a traffic jam, which I had to face in Ludhiana city where my exam venue was, the exam was conducted by government officials.
    Furthermore, to eradicate this problem government should take a concrete step. This step can be for the condition of public transportation as public transportation is time-consuming and uncomfortable. People have to travel by their vehicle when the public transportation does not match their expectations. Government should promote public transportation by making it fast and comfortable. For example, in Delhi, the traffic congestion has improved after launching the metro. Everybody prefers to go by this now because it is not only providing fast and comfortable services but also giving air conditioning service.
    In conclusion, traffic congestion in towns not only increases acute health issues, and lung cancer but also influences people’s quality of life. I explain in the above paragraphs that I certainly agree with this notion. The solution to this issue can be removed by promoting public transportation

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for watching and sharing your practice response. Here are a few suggestions to help:
      1) There may be a better way to phrase: '...including dissatisfaction of people regarding living their life in order,' as it is a bit confusing as it is written now.
      2) 'The major cause of traffic congestion is the enormous number of moving vehicles...' not, 'counting.'
      3) This is also confusing as written and it is not a complete sentence: '...regarding living their life in order so that increasing dissatisfaction among people is caused by traffic congestion...'
      Hope that helps!

  • @vishal6612
    @vishal6612 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much for giving useful tips. I really get to know through your video that where I was lagging.

  • @goodorbabmemories
    @goodorbabmemories 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    yes. I need 7 for writing.

  • @princechopra5020
    @princechopra5020 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello oli. Your way of teaching is great and please make a video on general part one ielts tests as well. Thanks

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi there, we have a lesson on that here: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ielts-writing-task-1-general.

    • @princechopra5020
      @princechopra5020 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Oxfordonlineenglish1 i am much obliged

  • @GurpreetSingh-tw7ih
    @GurpreetSingh-tw7ih 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    you are such a nice teacher.... i just found your channel yesterday ...this video is very helpful and will watch all the videos i need the most.... i got 6 last time and 5.5 in reading....6 in all other modules.... it's very difficult for me to get good score in reading... i am really very bad in reading and it always make me irritate to concentrate after my weak performance.... i am already 25 and have exam after 2 months... your videos give me a hope to start it again...btw you are very handsome.... i was staring at you throughout the video..... :-D

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you enjoyed the lesson! We have some other IELTS lessons to help with reading: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/?s=ielts+reading.

    • @GurpreetSingh-tw7ih
      @GurpreetSingh-tw7ih 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      thanku very much.... :-)

  • @mogahedalzaiem3790
    @mogahedalzaiem3790 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I'd like to thank you for helping me , it is very important and useful information.
    thank a lot

  • @somebody401
    @somebody401 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This video is so helpful

  • @yunha27
    @yunha27 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you very much for this video :)

  • @claudiatong1107
    @claudiatong1107 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for this lovely video.

  • @liveforyourhappiness
    @liveforyourhappiness 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Good dealing. My test is on 26 August . I ask Allah to help me. I am a candidate for Khebrat 2.

  • @desertrose4597
    @desertrose4597 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You're awesome! Thanks a lot for the useful lesson

  • @4546-u5y
    @4546-u5y 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you& Where do I need to write my opinion? I'm talking about that which is "discuss both views and give your opinion". In conclusion? Or I can write a separate paragraph?

    • @Oxfordonlineenglish1
      @Oxfordonlineenglish1  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Corbon, your opinion will be its own body paragraph, sometimes two if you have supporting ideas.

  • @anxnhv1261
    @anxnhv1261 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    very useful, I like this video very much.