Very good. If you want to publish this score I would add dynamics and refine the phrasing/articulation. I also tend to think that however much I relish your playing style, this particular piece might benefit from a slightly lighter clarinet approach. I might not necessarily be so crazy about flaxen hair myself, but clearly there is a Degas-like tenderness and fragility implied. This calls for almost blurry brush work. That's why the flute was more prominent in Fin de Siècle French music and the clarinet in Viennese. But the clarinet can be shaded without being turned into a travesty (as some French clarinettists do).
Very good. If you want to publish this score I would add dynamics and refine the phrasing/articulation. I also tend to think that however much I relish your playing style, this particular piece might benefit from a slightly lighter clarinet approach. I might not necessarily be so crazy about flaxen hair myself, but clearly there is a Degas-like tenderness and fragility implied. This calls for almost blurry brush work. That's why the flute was more prominent in Fin de Siècle French music and the clarinet in Viennese. But the clarinet can be shaded without being turned into a travesty (as some French clarinettists do).
Molto bello, qualche anno fa lo ha suonato anche Andreas Ottensamer!👍