I enjoyed your poem and I thought it would sound as amazing in English too and so I tried translating it; There are cousins who have just been commended cousin I heard you now have a girlfriend I wish you the best of luck wake up always in the morning sending her a message telling her you did not sleep you were thinking of her compose lies liken her to the stars, the sun or the moon tell her that in your mind she always comes first wipe her tears with both your hands whenever she was crying take her hand as if you are teaching her to count in case you are walking do not leave her behind they do not like being left behind she will test continuously cousin she will give you a colourful handbag in front of people cousin you must hold it when you meet a girl stiffen your head do not turn I say even if she is attractive... hold her hand when you meet with your friends when she is quiet as a girl do not call her ma’am when you get to her friends do not observe laugh only at her jokes then will you get along with her her friends will probably be fine, it will be amazing cousin you chose you chose settle...runaway from debates because females are set striking with words if it happens she annoys you do not raise your hand in case it is raised scratch your head with it or walk out the door go and cry cousin if it is that time of the month disappear and do not be a long way off be close because there are many things that she will long for that you know well that she does not eat cousin hurry a banana costs one rand I do not know how much stones cost there mothers if it happens she calls answer it when she did not close it I am saying closing it, thundering, how is it, raining, cold; come still smiling and say I’m here love do not be “nice” that much it is said that they hate there are lot of things indeed that she will do and that she will say to you that she did not think if that she is going with friends of hers that means you stay because things they will talk about there will amaze you cousin...with nothing also take your own way go drink if it happens you sneak do not sneak with a colleague you find a number do not write with a name you will be caught but know that what you are doing also she is doing maybe better cousin a person person of the female sex is not a thing to play she can leave you all afternoon quiet like; then wait for night at midnight(12) accuse you of a crime; once she catches you in the wrong she remains quiet as if she did not see then wait for you to forget maybe you are watching soccer chiefs- pirates then she asks who is... cousin you will be scared then there you will be scared you lose your balance/dizziness it pinch your armpit talk the thing straight then there you do not try to explain because it is up to her that she stays or leaves; you see if only she will refuse you will hear her cousin know if you are walking it will be like you are leaving/passing each other behind...if you hold her by the hand the hand as if they are moving away from each other the way that your answer the phone will never be the same. You will send a message in the morning and she will reply in the evening and you ask her what had happened, how and she answers she did not see it then she waits you make a small mistake to them all that you have made in the past then she refuse you; you see then cousin if she has refused you there is nothing that you can do; you can not do anything even when you cry sit down and forget about that intoxicates you will see with eyes of yesterday whenever the sunrises I am saying that cousin a person of the female sex treat her well treat her as an egg; hold her with warm hands not entered by the cold do not forget the day she was born but do not let her pull you by the head I am saying that cousin no no I hear fully that you now have a girlfriend I wish you luck
I enjoyed your poem and I thought it would sound as amazing in English too and so I tried translating it;
There are cousins who have just been commended
cousin I heard you now have a girlfriend I wish you the best of luck wake up always in the morning sending her a message telling her you did not sleep you were thinking of her compose lies liken her to the stars, the sun or the moon tell her that in your mind she always comes first wipe her tears with both your hands whenever she was crying take her hand as if you are teaching her to count in case you are walking do not leave her behind they do not like being left behind she will test continuously cousin she will give you a colourful handbag in front of people cousin you must hold it when you meet a girl stiffen your head do not turn I say even if she is attractive... hold her hand when you meet with your friends when she is quiet as a girl do not call her ma’am when you get to her friends do not observe laugh only at her jokes then will you get along with her her friends will probably be fine, it will be amazing cousin you chose you chose settle...runaway from debates because females are set striking with words if it happens she annoys you do not raise your hand in case it is raised scratch your head with it or walk out the door go and cry cousin if it is that time of the month disappear and do not be a long way off be close because there are many things that she will long for that you know well that she does not eat cousin hurry a banana costs one rand I do not know how much stones cost there mothers if it happens she calls answer it when she did not close it I am saying closing it, thundering, how is it, raining, cold; come still smiling and say I’m here love do not be “nice” that much it is said that they hate there are lot of things indeed that she will do and that she will say to you that she did not think if that she is going with friends of hers that means you stay because things they will talk about there will amaze you cousin...with nothing also take your own way go drink if it happens you sneak do not sneak with a colleague you find a number do not write with a name you will be caught but know that what you are doing also she is doing maybe better cousin a person person of the female sex is not a thing to play she can leave you all afternoon quiet like; then wait for night at midnight(12) accuse you of a crime; once she catches you in the wrong she remains quiet as if she did not see then wait for you to forget maybe you are watching soccer chiefs- pirates then she asks who is... cousin you will be scared then there you will be scared you lose your balance/dizziness it pinch your armpit talk the thing straight then there you do not try to explain because it is up to her that she stays or leaves; you see if only she will refuse you will hear her cousin know if you are walking it will be like you are leaving/passing each other behind...if you hold her by the hand the hand as if they are moving away from each other the way that your answer the phone will never be the same. You will send a message in the morning and she will reply in the evening and you ask her what had happened, how and she answers she did not see it then she waits you make a small mistake to them all that you have made in the past then she refuse you; you see then cousin if she has refused you there is nothing that you can do; you can not do anything even when you cry sit down and forget about that intoxicates you will see with eyes of yesterday whenever the sunrises I am saying that cousin a person of the female sex treat her well treat her as an egg; hold her with warm hands not entered by the cold do not forget the day she was born but do not let her pull you by the head I am saying that cousin no no I hear fully that you now have a girlfriend I wish you luck
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