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  • @christopherstikeleather3427
    @christopherstikeleather3427 4 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    Boy that was Emotional but it was so well written, it really pulled me in.

  • @vansshareddy2037
    @vansshareddy2037 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I was literally crying when Ginny and Harry talked to each other and the story is good and I am happy that there are no spelling mistakes

  • @myyklmax
    @myyklmax 4 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    Ginny never got over learned that she, and what Harry heard her say, was the main reason he never returned. Ginny ultimately revealed this truth to her family, though Ron was still angry; but not as much at Harry as himself was for realizing what a terrible friend he was for Harry.
    Hermione broke up with Ron, completed her last year at Hogwarts, and spent much of her time looking for her parents in Australia. She was the first to ask for Harry forgiveness for doubting their friendship and failing the be there when he really needed someone.

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Nice idea, but I probably won't do another episode

    • @aahaankaria3351
      @aahaankaria3351 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@harrypotterfanficforever9827 please do another one ❤️❤️

    • @SabaKhan-zp5of
      @SabaKhan-zp5of 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@harrypotterfanficforever9827 i dont think u read the books but good story

    • @egwsubscriptions3360
      @egwsubscriptions3360 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      My idea for the ending (I’m a Garry fan btw)
      Starting from when Ginny and Hermoine apperate to Harry’s house:
      Ginny knocks on the door, Harry opens it. “Ginny.” Said Harry. “I’m so sorry for everything! I was just mad cause you didn’t come back when you promised you would. I don’t blame you for Fred’s death and I hope you can forgive me.” Ginny said tearing up. Harry stood there looking at her not saying anything. Finally he hugs her hard and says “I forgive you Ginny.” They step back from each other. “You need to come back! Ron is… well he’s still mad at you… like really mad. But I think it’s only because you haven’t come back yet! He needs to see that you still care!” Said Ginny. “I’ll come back, but I don’t think things will go back to normal.” Said Harry.
      They return to the burrow together and Ron was surprised to see Harry. There was a lot of yelling but they eventually made peace, but things won’t go back to normal at least, not for awhile.
      They all attend together Hogwarts although it’s still awkward. Harry kinda forgot about Anna so decided to send her a letter explaining everything including the owl and the sudden disappearance. He got a reply which really surprised him, the letter from Anna was long and confusing only because Anna was probably confused too. He was happy that that was now cleared up cause he had been feeling guilty about leaving even if Anna thought he was mad.
      Ginny and Harry got back together, Hermoine and Ron however broke up for awhile but eventually got back together. They finished their year and Harry was training to be an auror, Ginny spending the summer with Harry when she could and Hermoine and Ron spent time with Ginny when she wasn’t with Harry.
      The rest of their lives were… well complicated but it all worked out…
      Eventually.
      That’s my ending! Sorry if I missed spelled anything or didn’t have the best writing! It’s late where I am. I really liked the video! Great job!

  • @sawsan8280
    @sawsan8280 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    This is great, i love the concept :) I can’t wait to see what happens

  • @jiapatel3392
    @jiapatel3392 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    I can’t IMAGINE them not being together happy as they used to be or ARE

  • @avamason8788
    @avamason8788 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    Omg that was so emotional but I loved it so much

  • @potterhead4life270
    @potterhead4life270 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I still haven't finished it and I know it will be great!

  • @69severussnape
    @69severussnape 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is the best fan fiction story to ever exist! Tysm for this!

  • @dollybear2809
    @dollybear2809 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Honestly I nearly cried, this is so emotional

  • @surekhakathare5472
    @surekhakathare5472 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I almost got tears in my eyes after reading this story

  • @clarajosy613
    @clarajosy613 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Pretty good,detailed but I wasnt too happy with the way it turned out but the effort is definitely showing and it counts

  • @sugoree2711
    @sugoree2711 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This girl is what i imagine delphi looking at some point if they ever do a movie i wish to god they dont 😂

  • @potterhead4life270
    @potterhead4life270 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This was a great fanfiction, with a great plot. I really enjoyed watching it

  • @akankshasharma2897
    @akankshasharma2897 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!! IT BROKE MY HEART INTO BILLION PEICEA😫😫

  • @salmaal-shaghnobi4910
    @salmaal-shaghnobi4910 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I loved it! It was one of the best fanfictions out there in my opinion

  • @ginnyweasly9190
    @ginnyweasly9190 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I wish it was longer tho because it was SO FICKIN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @cwrals
    @cwrals 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was incredibly awesome!

  • @razor75250
    @razor75250 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Please do another one!!!! Anna is witch from America!!! Harry gets a job as an auror, narrues Anna and has a happy blessed life!!!

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I am not sure if I'll make another one, because a lot of people didn't like it

    • @razor75250
      @razor75250 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@harrypotterfanficforever9827 those people are idiots!!!...it was awesone!!!.. too many wankers today can't handle real world reality!!!

  • @ThatOneNerd2
    @ThatOneNerd2 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I cried

  • @johnstewart6640
    @johnstewart6640 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I loved it and it was awesome and I can’t wait for the next episode

  • @avnimahajan_2011
    @avnimahajan_2011 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I was on the verge of tears but couldn't cry coz I am sitting with family.... So😭😭😭...It was splendid, just what I needed...I loved it❣❣nd I wish u would do more of this kind. Hope u r well👍👍

  • @SA1NT53
    @SA1NT53 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I hope we can find a sequel sometime down the way!

  • @xxcriminalwolfiexx5492
    @xxcriminalwolfiexx5492 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    the first part i dont belive they would hav blamed him

  • @mikajane9551
    @mikajane9551 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It's not his fault though his harry potter the boy who lived the boy who can save other wizard and witches lives if it weren't for harry then they wouldn't have won the war and if it weren't for harry they would totally suffer and its not his fault he didn't choose that path he was chosen to be in that path even though if he'll surrender himself to Lord voldemort do they think he will stop? No it will only make him feel powerful that no one is finally there to stop him.... harry made a right choice it's just they were blinded by the pain that they felt when Fred died... Even cedric, professor dumbledore, Snape and other who didn't live didn't regret being dead because they died so harry can live and harry didn't waste their sacrifice by killing voldemort and there is no reason for them to get mad at him because even harry didn't want to be in that situation... I just feel bad for him he didn't even feel having a real family with he's parents and even he's relatives mistreated him🥺

  • @rbzliketodraw5583
    @rbzliketodraw5583 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    God it was sooo emotional but it was absolutely amazing. U are an amazing writer. Love your channel

  • @tiamahraya7506
    @tiamahraya7506 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm crying a lot

  • @alectolovegood531
    @alectolovegood531 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can you try to make a series called minister hands his position to harry potter? Haha

  • @jeffreygregoire9239
    @jeffreygregoire9239 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Are you gonna do another one?

  • @Guyoza
    @Guyoza 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    hello im that one person who made the fan art for one of your videos.

  • @seaweedbrainatthedamsnackbar
    @seaweedbrainatthedamsnackbar 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Its been a really long time since the first one so maybe a part 2?

  • @tiffanyuviase361
    @tiffanyuviase361 ปีที่แล้ว

    are you going to make another

  • @jiapatel3392
    @jiapatel3392 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I am literally crying 😭
    So can anybody tell me what’s going to happen in the end coz I think my T-shirt is going to be all wet
    Pls

  • @vorry7120
    @vorry7120 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Underrated character

  • @happyharry9860
    @happyharry9860 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What happened to weasleys then did harry became their frnds again??

  • @penguin22
    @penguin22 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    um the elder wand should be more powerful than that and if he put protective enchantments around the house how did the owl get in and how did they apparate in

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      If you are talking about ginny and Hermione, They apparated outside of the house, then walked in. And the owl can come, in the books, sirius and lily talked to each other using owls, and they were using the Fidelius charm

  • @Moony_2620
    @Moony_2620 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    whats the song at 29:40 I want to listen to it

  • @dantefr
    @dantefr 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    30:31 pause, put on 0.25, and keep rewinding until you notice. XD

  • @myyklmax
    @myyklmax 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I greatly enjoyed reading this fanfiction story. I do wish that Harry could have worked things out and restored his friendship with Hermione. She needs his friendship just a much as he needs hers.

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you
      At the end, he did restore his friendship with the Weasley's, but it wasn't close to being like the one they had before. It says that in the end

  • @deadman9944
    @deadman9944 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Bro I remember when I was like 8 and I would read this but for harry x ginny. Omg why does this still exist. So much nustalga

    • @Delete240
      @Delete240 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What are you going on about? This video came out 4 month ago😂

    • @deadman9944
      @deadman9944 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Delete240 no back when this came out in 2012 bro

  • @madisonhennessy7385
    @madisonhennessy7385 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think i might cry

  • @jasrajbudigam9945
    @jasrajbudigam9945 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    great fanic

  • @elijahduncan9538
    @elijahduncan9538 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey what's the background songs name

  • @yuuna_flower9625
    @yuuna_flower9625 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    *One* Deatheater vs. Harry Potter.
    Deatheater: Sounds, fair. Isn't as if he defeated my master.

  • @jiapatel3392
    @jiapatel3392 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    THANK GOD THERE IS A HAPPY ENDING

  • @kaushikghosh7441
    @kaushikghosh7441 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Could you make a tutorial on how to make these fanfiction videos?

  • @Okay_____
    @Okay_____ 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    43:27 Hanna or Hannalise shippers go crazy

  • @mahimodi9140
    @mahimodi9140 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Omg im crying

  • @ananyaraikar3207
    @ananyaraikar3207 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    what song is this???

  • @sharayagoyal9340
    @sharayagoyal9340 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What is the name of the song?? I have heard it in many background videos but I still don't know the name.

  • @eloisecole3103
    @eloisecole3103 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is great is there going to another one?

  • @vrindatewary6598
    @vrindatewary6598 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The plot was nice. Ngl I was hoping that Anna would drop a surprise bomb that she is a witch lol. From America maybe but yeah. I would have liked if you developed a bit more on their relationship but that's fine. Nice story :)

  • @kennedynevarez2787
    @kennedynevarez2787 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want more of this🥺❤️

  • @madhudoss2168
    @madhudoss2168 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What happens next please upload part 2

  • @benjaminrauch4867
    @benjaminrauch4867 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How should I say hermione will be the first how is going to try be best friends with him again and it going to be good but sadly there's no part 2

  • @abdulraqa5533
    @abdulraqa5533 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My rooms' flooded.....can't go on.........

  • @Hal-um1qc
    @Hal-um1qc 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Omg that was soo sad but #Hinny has to stay together that can't be the end of them 2 they were made for each other if there was more to this vid then hinny would have got bk together harry would have forgiven everyone then live a happy life with his girlfriend and his best friends in the burrow

  • @rakshitajha3069
    @rakshitajha3069 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    14.18 in the last part didn't he break the elder wand

  • @sawsan8280
    @sawsan8280 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was spectacular

  • @a-j12312
    @a-j12312 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Not my personal favourite fanfic but that’s just my opinion but loved the consecration and hard work 😓 you put into it

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you :) and thanks for being honest

    • @a-j12312
      @a-j12312 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@harrypotterfanficforever9827 no problem 😉 I always try to be respectful when sharing my honest opinion

    • @lakshyaagarwal2023
      @lakshyaagarwal2023 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@a-j12312 :( U DISRESPECTFUL CREATURE

  • @Moony_2620
    @Moony_2620 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    is potters return over? ive been waiting for the next episode

  • @sykonoherokasula8307
    @sykonoherokasula8307 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    When is the next episode

  • @The.foodiesss
    @The.foodiesss 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Me be like..: yah yah..he must have given himself to voldemort so that later the whole world with die with them

  • @potterhead7110
    @potterhead7110 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi when ur doing episode 61 i am sooo exited plsss i hope u do it tomorow i remeber when u told me that ur soo busy cos we spoken on youtube but i am really exited cos i really really love them

  • @razor75250
    @razor75250 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Him hurt ginny anymore?? He hurt ginny by leaving, she hurt him by her outburst of words!!!... do now they are even!!!!!!!

  • @miketrucker8186
    @miketrucker8186 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    well hope he get unbroken

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I don't think he'll be normal again, but things started to get better

    • @miketrucker8186
      @miketrucker8186 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@harrypotterfanficforever9827 and this isnt a hinny ship i take it or i should wait

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      No it's not hinny, and there probably won't be another episode

  • @tarab1140
    @tarab1140 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can you write a sequel plz

  • @alexandriabumio1338
    @alexandriabumio1338 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I HATE THIS SEIRES. Harry and Ginny never get back together, Harry has a new life, and there’s no romance. HINNY IS MEANT TO BE

  • @delecourfamily6332
    @delecourfamily6332 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was nice but I wish you could have added in some things more like him being friends with the Weasleys. I'm not sure that I liked how Harry and Anna came together because I'm more of a Hinny fan, but overall it was good.

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you, in the end it says he restored his friendship with the Weasley's, and I tried doing something other than hinny

  • @matthewbaxter4670
    @matthewbaxter4670 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What actually happened to Harry & Anna. Did they get married & have kids

  • @Top2not2.
    @Top2not2. 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can Harry please please please please please song mercy on me when he gets hogwarts

  • @sereinysengsok5361
    @sereinysengsok5361 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Does harry tell her that he is a wizard

  • @thelestrangelair
    @thelestrangelair 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Nicelydone.
    Bella L

  • @teaganhughston9070
    @teaganhughston9070 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It’s a bit incoherent but still pretty good

  • @vtyxtech6844
    @vtyxtech6844 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice

  • @lilbirdy5244
    @lilbirdy5244 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Should've made this a series

  • @Top2not2.
    @Top2not2. 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hurry up and make a new one I like this series

  • @sakhi2329
    @sakhi2329 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yah about this quite liked the plot but I was kinda disappointed with rons coldness and harry getting over ginny

    • @harrypotterfanficforever9827
      @harrypotterfanficforever9827  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I don't believe Ron would act like this, but this is a what if fanfiction. Also if someone said stuff like what ginny said behind my back I wouldn't even befriend them, in my opinion harry was kinda forced to get over her

    • @sakhi2329
      @sakhi2329 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ya I agree and im usually not picky at all but when it comes to harry and ships I only like hinny. For other characters like hermoine or Ron its fine but ya

  • @libbyirwin6886
    @libbyirwin6886 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What was the song?

  • @alectolovegood531
    @alectolovegood531 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ginny weasley, harry potter killed voldemort just to be happy with you and have great kids. Now your just hating on him, very sure that if harry didnt love ginny, harry would have just let voldemort kill him.

  • @a_owls7216
    @a_owls7216 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    19:26 You can't apparate in or out of Hogwarts...

  • @booklovers755
    @booklovers755 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Awsome

  • @yuuna_flower9625
    @yuuna_flower9625 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    A bit sus that he just let's her walk into his bedroom the first time she's in the house- *Whatever.*

  • @maximusoats2166
    @maximusoats2166 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    do it agai i love

  • @rachelfawley1220
    @rachelfawley1220 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    MAKE A PART 2

  • @jessicareed9521
    @jessicareed9521 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I found them

  • @lakshyaagarwal2023
    @lakshyaagarwal2023 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    1000 i found

  • @sureshnimmithi8631
    @sureshnimmithi8631 ปีที่แล้ว

    Plz pry 2

  • @egwsubscriptions3360
    @egwsubscriptions3360 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I really like it but, the ending is hard. I’m a Garry fan so I’m not a fan of the ending with Anna and Harry. I’m sorry! Hope there’s no hard feelings! It’s really good you should be proud.

  • @HalaAJ-xs5sy
    @HalaAJ-xs5sy 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi

  • @vesnabradaricmrsic4234
    @vesnabradaricmrsic4234 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Books bwtter movied ok

  • @ethannicoll9784
    @ethannicoll9784 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    IDK know what to put I like it but I dislike at the same time Idk what to put

  • @theweenest33
    @theweenest33 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This content is great, but the music really killed it for me. I kept wondering if it would stop and it never did. 😔 Music with no lyrics is better for when you are reading.