Who writes these things? What red blooded viral man would hesitate to have relations with these gorgeous women? Whoever is riding this could you make it a little bit more believable?
This story advances too fast, and we never really get to know anybody, not even the main character. The story starts with humanity only having met a few alien races. While it's never clear how far in the future this takes place, it is implied it is a few centuries by context of "only a few alien races" having been met. Apparently the Vidiians have amazing medical knowledge, as our current medical knowledge is dismal compared to our technical knowledge. Projected into the future the gap will continue to become worse over time given the rate of real break-throughs. SPOILERS BELOW There is no sense of time during the story, the events seem to happen in rapid succession with no mention of time at all. It makes the story a bit of a jumbled mess. Then after a disastrous journey to unknown space, they land on a planet left behind by an ancient race of unknown aliens, then they are visited by another race of aliens, then another race of aliens, and then they are found by Human and VIdiian ships apparently looking for them. So, much is happening it is difficult to follow all the events, and since the characters are barely detailed, because most of them are only names, their relative relationships sometimes get lost in the narrative. It's far too ambitious a story, and none of the characters feel real.
No worries human life will be gone in under a century. Even faster now with dumbest environment killer and best friends with every environment killing companies president and corrupt cabinet in charge. Lucky if people make it 50 years
"spoilers" it's good and coherent till they hit the nexus planet thing. Then somehow the main character goes from being 100% human to 50/50 human and his wives species. And on top of it his cousin finds him in no where space. Like wtf is the writer thinking? The story is splitting in too many directions and the character development is just to short/too long and not there all at the same time like when did they go from learning about the original residence of the planet to building satellites with all of the technology from all of the species there? This story is just ADHD after they leave earth.
And the weird addition of Kira is just wow. His cousin eventually becomes his pregnant wife lol. And at one point Mira calls her husband Daddy. That was strange to say the least.
As I listen to the story unfolding in my ears, my mind begins comparing what is going on with the prophecy of “as the days of Noah were” rerunning continually. Good story otherwise.
Knowing my luck I'd end up with Rosie O'Donnell 😳
They are absolutely beautiful! Only a member of the alphabet community would refuse.
Who writes these things? What red blooded viral man would hesitate to have relations with these gorgeous women? Whoever is riding this could you make it a little bit more believable?
Need to find a reader that does not repeat things so many times and a writer that does not repeat him/herself so often
This is the most interesting one so far.
Don’t eat the government cheese
i wood like more of the story x88 ples
it seems to jump in the story, it gets faster and faster.
This story advances too fast, and we never really get to know anybody, not even the main character. The story starts with humanity only having met a few alien races. While it's never clear how far in the future this takes place, it is implied it is a few centuries by context of "only a few alien races" having been met. Apparently the Vidiians have amazing medical knowledge, as our current medical knowledge is dismal compared to our technical knowledge. Projected into the future the gap will continue to become worse over time given the rate of real break-throughs. SPOILERS BELOW
There is no sense of time during the story, the events seem to happen in rapid succession with no mention of time at all. It makes the story a bit of a jumbled mess. Then after a disastrous journey to unknown space, they land on a planet left behind by an ancient race of unknown aliens, then they are visited by another race of aliens, then another race of aliens, and then they are found by Human and VIdiian ships apparently looking for them. So, much is happening it is difficult to follow all the events, and since the characters are barely detailed, because most of them are only names, their relative relationships sometimes get lost in the narrative. It's far too ambitious a story, and none of the characters feel real.
No worries human life will be gone in under a century. Even faster now with dumbest environment killer and best friends with every environment killing companies president and corrupt cabinet in charge. Lucky if people make it 50 years
what a jerky boy...
"spoilers" it's good and coherent till they hit the nexus planet thing. Then somehow the main character goes from being 100% human to 50/50 human and his wives species. And on top of it his cousin finds him in no where space. Like wtf is the writer thinking? The story is splitting in too many directions and the character development is just to short/too long and not there all at the same time like when did they go from learning about the original residence of the planet to building satellites with all of the technology from all of the species there? This story is just ADHD after they leave earth.
And the weird addition of Kira is just wow. His cousin eventually becomes his pregnant wife lol. And at one point Mira calls her husband Daddy. That was strange to say the least.
The story is a word salad, it keeps repeating.
These stories are predictable weenie man clickbait with junk that bears NO relationship to ANY red blooded human men!
Narration is terrible.
What a stupid story
guy is a moron, 3 beautiful wives and government support why drag your feet?.
As I listen to the story unfolding in my ears, my mind begins comparing what is going on with the prophecy of “as the days of Noah were” rerunning continually.
Good story otherwise.