Save Your Tears. P2: "Consequences" (Marichat. Adrienette. LadyNoir) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfiction

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  • Part 2: Consequences - The morning after her confession to Adrien, Marinette with the help Alya is coming to terms with her emotions and preparing for the party... not fully ready for new revelations...
    Part 1: Save Your Tears - Exhausted from an early morning akuma battle and another rejection off his Lady, Adrien is surprised by Marinette's suddenly declaration of her feelings for him. Confused, he gave the wrong response and now he needed to find a way to put it right and heal both their hearts...
    Based on the lyrics in the song "Consequences" By Camila Cabello . Lyrics in Bold.
    Massive thank you to Lilly5 on Tumblr for the use of the art in the thumbnail. Go and send some love: / lilly5
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  • @milenadpadua
    @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    The anger in Chat's voice as she tried to apologize went crashing into my heart, I'm not okay

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    I love it!! I love how Cat finally was able to express how he was feeling (even though it's still Marinette behind the mask) I wonder what Marinette will do in her civilian knowing that her kitty is Adrien, would she push him away. Will Cat discover Ladybug is Marinette, will Adrien and Marinette end up together. Super excited for part 3!!

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      You know how they used to do those voice overs at the end of a cartoon episode??? I totally read this comment in that voice 😂
      "Find out in the next episode of ...... " I can't for the life of me remember what cartoon it was though... but I distinctly remember the voice 😂😂

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@eleishadolbey6889 lol 😆

    • @boo5143
      @boo5143 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@eleishadolbey6889 I was thinking the same thing 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@boo5143 it's really bugging me that I can't remember what show it's from 😂
      I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought it though lol

    • @samanthacristinaburgosmera4160
      @samanthacristinaburgosmera4160 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I still don't get it gow did she find out about his identidy

  • @milenadpadua
    @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What a hurtful half-reveal. I can't even imagine how he will react to the truth

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I have goosebumps after that ending!!! Omg!!! So many emotions in this one!!!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Wow, thank you!! 😊 Glad you enjoyed it so much.

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous he really let rip at the end there... didn't hold back what so ever!
      I can't wait to find out how she reacts to this new information!
      Their team work is going to be off until this is resolved 😳

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I can’t wait to see what this holds!!! The last one left off on such a cliffhanger!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      😏😏😏 = 🤯

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Are you saying this will blow my mind? Or that the anticipation is killer? Huh, trying to be playful in words is hard

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Will-mk5pj lol you tell me.... 😏

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I guess I will when it goes live

  • @avatimpson3252
    @avatimpson3252 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Absolutely beautiful, it pounds my heart with emotion, to think I told myself I was gonna stop binging Miraculous Fan Fiction, and then I get a bomb like that. It's perfect and painful all in one, thank you, but AAAARGGGHH, look what you've done to me!

  • @KGCHOK
    @KGCHOK 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    this series cuts deep. SO EMOTIONAL!!

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    The emotion in that one!! That alone was amazing, the ending though! Amazing!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you... yeah it was alot and setting up for part 3!! 😬 just you wait!! 😉

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Oh… I feel bad for Cat… Ladybug/Marinette is gonna break his heart… again…

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I can't tell at this point if this one is going to be a happy ending or not 😳
      I feel like Will is right and poor Buttercup is going to get heart broken again.... 💔

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 When he finally finds love in Marinette as Cat… she reveals that she’s ladybug and knows who he is. He did try to make up! But Marinette refused to let him try and then an Akuma appeared. Which would explain his annoyance then anger at Ladybug. Causing her realization…

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Will-mk5pj yup.... I think they'll both jave some soul searching to do.... this one won't be an easy fix 😢

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Noooooo, I need part 3 now!!!! 😭😭😭💔 She knows!!!! Dang, i didn't think this would hurt me like this 😂💔 I love it

  • @stephaniebeitko9579
    @stephaniebeitko9579 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I- I have no words for how much this made me feel. Both parts to this- I absolutely adore the angst of this. The fact they have no idea what they are to each other- ahhhhh! I need the next part!!! I love this so much and your narration voice!!

  • @kitabootforever
    @kitabootforever 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Whew the drama, honey!! I love these stories! I'm a glutton for punishment!

  • @juliaannabobrek
    @juliaannabobrek 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I WAS CRYING SO HARD AT THE END😭like literally my tears are going down my face, that is so so sad😭 I cant wait till i see next part

  • @laney_bug
    @laney_bug 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    WE NEED A PART TWO ( omg I can’t handle what just happen I’m so obsessed with this how did I live my life without this omg this was probably your best Work! The emotion, the feelings the words I can’t and I thought if I could tell her was good! It’s fantastic!!! )

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      There already is a part 3 to this Set fire to the rain but there is a season 2 in the works for this series with just as much emotion! 😉💗 And thank you for your kind words, so glad you are enjoying it! 😃

  • @avatimpson3252
    @avatimpson3252 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    OH PLEASE NO! THAT'S ALL?! Please don't do this to me I beg of you! That hits me right in the feels, I doubt I'm going to be able to sleep tonight.

  • @Princess-yj7ko
    @Princess-yj7ko 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Until tomorrow?!?! Oh I’m going to die waiting but then come back to life just to see it

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Trust me, it will be worth coming back to life for 😉💖 plus 38mins long!!

    • @Princess-yj7ko
      @Princess-yj7ko 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Oh my… I love you thanks for all of that (If you can’t tell I love Marichat)

  • @tyrannusguillory3423
    @tyrannusguillory3423 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    OMG!!!!! part 3 is going to be amazing, and yes you are the queen of cliff hangers!

  • @starfirelovesrobi101
    @starfirelovesrobi101 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Oh boy need a part 3 please

  • @megandavis3873
    @megandavis3873 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That was amazing, and so so sad.

  • @wolvewhite3504
    @wolvewhite3504 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    One of my favouries song and also Marichat, can this day get better?

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Oh my it was amazing 😻 so many emotions I feeling listening too this

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can’t wait to read next story

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    A very great story and can’t wait to read the next chapter

  • @refereesanchez2161
    @refereesanchez2161 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    this series so far is just as great as when i listened to 'lemonade & vanilla' which is another mlb fanfic. these two parts made me feel some good emotions and i respect you for doing that cant wait for part 3 and all that comes after.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm a big fan of Lemonade and Vanilla by Lyradaisical so that is high praise so thank you. Hope you enjoy part 3. 😊

    • @refereesanchez2161
      @refereesanchez2161 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous listening to it right now I like how you used 'gingersnaps' so random but fits so well❤️❤️

  • @ashthegreat1371
    @ashthegreat1371 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    OMFG how have I not watched this yet I'm going to RN

  • @pranatidereddy3770
    @pranatidereddy3770 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This needs a part 3 🥺

  • @scoobydooshrimp4063
    @scoobydooshrimp4063 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    The countdown is making me want to die 😭

  • @depressoespresso5904
    @depressoespresso5904 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    woah one of the worst ways to find out the identities

  • @nanditapandya5765
    @nanditapandya5765 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Holy Camembert!!!! Love it 😻😻
    Can't wait for next part❤
    What emotions are going to be brewing in the next part?? 😩😩

  • @scoobydooshrimp4063
    @scoobydooshrimp4063 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Holy crap the cliff hanger oh crap 😭

  • @scoobydooshrimp4063
    @scoobydooshrimp4063 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    OMG IM EARLY IM SO READY TO LISTEN TO THIS

  • @nikisha1791
    @nikisha1791 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! Simply wow! 😮

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! What kisses! What a mess! I can't wait!

  • @brillonsloup
    @brillonsloup 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    No I can’t take another misunderstanding between Adrien and Marinette this is Triangle of Love all over again. My heart can’t take this for a second time only this time Luka isn’t there to pick up the pieces of her broken heart. Why must you pull my heartstrings like this again…😭 Now I’m ugly crying again…I need to know what happens next.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Aww I'm sorry, the next and final part comes out on Friday. 💖

    • @brillonsloup
      @brillonsloup 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I’m glad that Triangle of Love finishes on Friday I’ve been waiting for the next part; but now I’m emotionally invested in this series and so many questions that need answered. I wonder what Marinette is going to do with this new found information that her kitty that she now loves is actually the boy who broke her heart in the first place. Is she going to distant herself from Chat like she has to Adrien? Can’t wait for the next part.

  • @milenadpadua
    @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Since we're talking about Camila Cabello's songs, have you ever noticed how "Dream of You" is a song that could be easily Marinette/Ladybug talking about Adrien to someone?? Except the "bad dancer" parter but literally just it

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for the recommendation, thats a cool song. It's funny, as I was searching for the song on TH-cam, I put in dreaming of you by Selena which is also a sweet song that would work! Lol so yeah, thanks for both 😆👍 I'll have a think of a song around this, keep you posted. 😉

    • @milenadpadua
      @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lol same vibe, I will search for this one, sounds good too

    • @milenadpadua
      @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm Back!! And It's 'bout Camilla again 🙈 I was listening to "bad kind of butterflies" and the first part made me imagine a Ladynoir Interaction "come here and sit next to me" I imagine they hanging at the Eiffel Tower, and then Chat says to LB "what do I do if I love You and want somebody else?" Cof cof Mari. And then the second part of the song is more Adrinette like Adrien saying to Marinette "I know I said we were friends, and when I said that I meant it. But somewhere between now and then it became more than just a friendship" 😶 ... I've listen to this album so many times before and now I'm like 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@milenadpadua That's great suggestion, I love it and check out the song and whole album. And yeah sorry, once you enjoy lyrical, then a few suggestion and then music doesn't seem to sounds again. 😉 😬💖

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sigh....
    My prev mind can't stop.....
    They're "DOING IT"....Isn't it.....

  • @milenadpadua
    @milenadpadua 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    "It didn't sound like him" yeah... maybe because you told him first girl... as LB, I gess I could say it sound like you 🤨

  • @ladynettenoir7149
    @ladynettenoir7149 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Amazing ✨

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Between this story then Sweet treats and kisses...I take the Sweet series. for it not "Sweetness" for It was a wholesome experience

  • @Aisha-ss2ih
    @Aisha-ss2ih 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Done please make all of your stories this long please 🥺😥

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It really depends on the story and time, as it takes a while to write a chapter to that time scale. I do write long and I'm not sure how the others writers short. But I personally prefer listening to longer stories so I completely understand where you are coming from. 😉

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous we appreciate all the time and effort you put in!! ❤❤

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 ☺🥰 Thank you

  • @bolboros.gabriela
    @bolboros.gabriela 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Maybe it's just an illusion but is the middle part reused? I'm pretty sure I've heard it before🤔 maybe in part 1? not like I mind but I'm just curious
    Anyway Thank you for this story ~❤️ can't wait for the next part ❣️

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That part is told from Marinettes point of view, giving insight of how she could switch from Adrien to Cat but yes, there is a bit of over lapping at that point. 🙂 so glad you enjoyed the story and part 3 will come out this time next week. 😉

  • @SkywalkersRage
    @SkywalkersRage 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    YES MARATHON TN WE RIDE AT DAWN

  • @zackbell2403
    @zackbell2403 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Holy ball this kinda remind me of the song by Taylor Swift I think it’s called Loving he was red or it might just be red

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah, it does a bit... I hadn't realised, that's cool. Consequences is more orchestral and slower but you can't beat a bit of Swift! 😀

    • @zackbell2403
      @zackbell2403 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Sooooo true

  • @SkywalkersRage
    @SkywalkersRage 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    AY LESS GOO

  • @kartikchandrade6635
    @kartikchandrade6635 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think all have to show catnoir much less smart,brave..than ladybug

  • @shelbysnellen725
    @shelbysnellen725 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How did you write this? I DESIRE to write!!!!!!!!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It takes practise but anyone can write, especially if you have a passion for the craft. I have found over the years, the more you write, the better you learn your own style, how to edit and building up your confidence. I wish you all the best with your writing. 😉🤞

  • @miraculousbugcat8345
    @miraculousbugcat8345 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    girl can you pls tell me where do you write these stories pls tell me the app name

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey, thank you for your question: I plot and write all my stories using word program but you can use any computer, tablet or phone document program, then edit and publish them with my own narration on TH-cam, they aren't published anywhere else to read or listen to.
      I don't use an app to write on, just on a regular word document.
      I hope that answers your question? 😊

    • @miraculousbugcat8345
      @miraculousbugcat8345 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous what I am asking is this where do you edit it how you make the video what do you mean by own youtube narration

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@miraculousbugcat8345 Ok, I understand. I use Canva Pro to transfer my written story into a compatible size and format onto slides. I narrate the stories separately and edit the sound using Audiotonic. I edit the slides and sound together using a video program called Animotic, creating a MP4 for youtube. Does that help? 🙂

  • @kitetenjo6283
    @kitetenjo6283 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I can't see part 3 someone tell me what happened

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    So seen you said in some of the video that at time you just can't writing.
    How many part?

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      At the moment I am planning on 3 parts to this story before the more sweeter stories for February 🙂

  • @Dances_in_the_kitchen
    @Dances_in_the_kitchen 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    💖🐞🐾💕✨

  • @belindamoreno868
    @belindamoreno868 ปีที่แล้ว

    Jajajaja 💙😂❤🎉🧁