Wow such an intense moment towards the end. Although I would have liked a bit of a spitfire Tae after Jungkook screamed at him and hurt his feelings instead of a wounded Tae breaking down and just crying for what Jungkook said to him. Still nice story.
You r using hard words and explain a lot instead of their moments and explain their emotion instead add more conversations with simple words and don't write simple stories maybe it feels boring . I am just trying to tell u what I thought don't take me wrong
U r right i just feel bored bcz of hard words and u also dont write their moments just explaning unnecessary topics with hard word i hope u understand dont take us wrong plz use simple words 💜💜
Wow such an intense moment towards the end. Although I would have liked a bit of a spitfire Tae after Jungkook screamed at him and hurt his feelings instead of a wounded Tae breaking down and just crying for what Jungkook said to him. Still nice story.
Awesome Awesome Awesome!! TAEKOOK TOGETHER LOVE FOREVER 💜🐻🐰💜
You r using hard words and explain a lot instead of their moments and explain their emotion instead add more conversations with simple words and don't write simple stories maybe it feels boring . I am just trying to tell u what I thought don't take me wrong
U r right i just feel bored bcz of hard words and u also dont write their moments just explaning unnecessary topics with hard word i hope u understand dont take us wrong plz use simple words 💜💜
Agree with u as a reader we need more conversations than always expalin what happening
It was so cute😘😘 n awesum😍😍 luv it👌👌 thnk u❤❤
Cute❤❤❤❤
Thank you❤
Nice story! For me. ! Keep going.
Liked this story, well done
I’m fourth 😊
Beautiful story
I’m third please author pin me 🥺😊
LOL AUTHOR U R TOO FUNNY😭😭
Ok👍👍unnie 💜
@@international.bunnyboy hheheeee 😁😁😁
@@taekookartsybabeauthor you are so savage 😎 and funny 🤭
By the way I’m 9th 😂🤣
Im 6th
Am I first ?😮
Please use understandable english words its a bit difficult to understand 😅
I’m 9th🎉💜
I am second 😊
All this grammar you are using is making most of your stories meaningless reduce it please 🙏
Please use understandable english words its a bit difficult to understand 😅